1. I'd like to hear more hit sounds especially in Easy, Normal and Final.
2. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.
3. Preview Point is different for "Faust" and "Hard".

1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain -1.
2. 00:18:712 (1,1,1) - I don't like how these sliders are over each other, It looks really messy. Here's a suggestion.
3. 00:27:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is no consistent in this pattern, You need to keep spacing consistent if the notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, Fix spacing between (5)&(6).
4. 00:39:379 (X) - I was spacing a circle here, consider adding it to suit the drums.
5. 01:22:712 (1,2) - Sliders are over each other, You need to avoid things like that specially on Easy. Try this instead, It's not perfect but you get the point.
6. 01:48:379 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy imo. I highly suggest to replace it with a slider.
7. 01:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not following the rhythm correctly, select them all and move them 1/2 backward.
8. The end point of this diff is too random, I suggest to finish the diff here: 02:21:379 -

1. 00:40:379 (1) - This slider is not following the main rhythm correctly so it doesn't sound good, Something like this sounds much better.
2. 01:09:379 (1) - Perhaps finish at the end of this spinner ?
3. 01:19:379 (2) - This slider starts too early, If you listen carefully the rhythm you are trying to follow starts here: 01:20:045 - So you should try this. Plus that spacing you were using it's a bit mean for Normal :3
4. 01:28:379 (1) - This New Combo doesn't seem necessary, It looks like you are about to start a New Combo spam, I suggest to remove it.
5. Except for those "out of rhythm" things I pointed out everything seems pretty nice in this diff.

1. The Combo Colours seem to bright for the wallpaper (It gets even brighter during kiai D:) Try these ones.
2. Ok no major problems here.

1. 00:26:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't like this stream is too confusing. I suggest to remove that repeating slider and add more circles OR add more repeating sliders after that one.
2. 00:48:712 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The New Combo spam makes the jumps even harder to play because it adds confusion, I suggest to get rid the New Combo Spam.
3. 02:13:712 (6,7) - This anti jump killed the flow completely, I suggest to use normal spacing or stack the notes.
4. 02:42:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh these patterns, I'm not sure if that is Ok even for Insane, because It seems really hard to read even for "Insane Players" (I've tested it with other player Rank #400~) mainly because the jumps are too exaggerated and the spacing is completely inconsistent. I highly suggest to make it a bit easier to read.
5. 03:20:045 (8) - Using Red Lines (Uninherited sections) to change slider speed is unrankable, with no exceptions.

1. 1 unsnapped object.
2. Really Hard, But No Major problems
3. Is this Ok for rankings ?

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.

-kevincela- wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Something that caught my attention is that Normal uses Slider Speed: 1.80 and Hard uses Slider Speed: 1.60, That's really odd and illogical, The only way to fix that is to re-map any of the diffs but I guess that's not happening, So just try to be careful with guest diffs next time.

If you see,my hard and normal have different bpms,and Normal's bpm is lower than my hard,so i think it's all right.Anyway,later i'm going to fix all in my diff.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Lizzehb's Easy

1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain -1. kay.
2. 00:18:712 (1,1,1) - I don't like how these sliders are over each other, It looks really messy. Here's a suggestion. okay~
3. 00:27:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing is no consistent in this pattern, You need to keep spacing consistent if the notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, Fix spacing between (5)&(6). Fixed.
4. 00:39:379 (X) - I was spacing a circle here, consider adding it to suit the drums.added
5. 01:22:712 (1,2) - Sliders are over each other, You need to avoid things like that specially on Easy. Try this instead, It's not perfect but you get the point.done
6. 01:48:379 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy imo. I highly suggest to replace it with a slider.Changed
7. 01:54:379 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not following the rhythm correctly, select them all and move them 1/2 backward. done
8. The end point of this diff is too random, I suggest to finish the diff here: 02:21:379 -

mkay~

winber1 wrote:

Lizzehb's Easy

00:10:712(3) - I'm not an expert on combos, but it might work better adding a new combo here done
00:13:379(5) - ^ done
00:18:712(1,1) - make more symmetrical? done
00:41:379(1,2) - move up one grid done
01:54:379(1,2,3,4) - snap these on the white ticks. the red ticks don't make much sense done
02:21:379(x) - add note
02:22:379(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move 1 red tick forward. then readjust the new combo at 02:32:045 accordingly
02:48:045 - end the song here. it makes more sense to me.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

General
The maps lack in hitsound too much for my taste.
Try to make all maps end in the same place, except for Final of course. The place where Easy ends seems perfect to me.

Final
Ignored because for Approval

Faust
00:10:373 (9,10,11,12) - looks it it comes directly after the slider, but there's a small break inbetween... erm. I dunno.

Hard
Fine

Normal
Geh, boring grid mod.
00:42:712 (4) - 1 grid down
01:20:045 (3) - 3 grids left
01:57:045 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up, 1 right

Easy
00:18:712 (1) - 1,5x spacing? rotate 00:17:379 (4) - a little bit upwards to even the spacing out.
00:21:379 (1) - and not it's too low D: nubs will click the next slider right away.
00:42:712 (1) - too close
01:25:379 (1) - end this at 01:28:045
01:32:045 (1) - remove NC
01:46:712 (2,3,4) - too close
01:48:045 (5) - ^
01:54:045 (1) - too far

1. 37:373 (1) - Why the new combo? I'd remove it xD
2. 41:206 (1) - Ok, maybe a new combo pattern here would look better, it's a real mess in the following seconds, imo. Try removing this new combo, and adding it to the current (3). Then, add a new combo on the new (5) - a slider -, and repeat this pattern repeteadly. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
3. 43:706 (2) - Nazi, but this isn't correctly stacked under the end of (1).
4. 1:32:039 ~ 1:33:039 - Ugh, this is too confusing for my brain. I couldn't understand it while playing. I feel like it doesn't flow correctly. I believe that when you can't tell which circle comes after which, something is wrong. Try checking this.
5. 2:18:798 (SP) - First, start the spinner here (on the blue line) Second, I like how the finish sounds on the spinner. Consider using it.

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Thank you.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Thank you.

Thank you but no Kudosu? :<

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I can only download Faust and Final for some reason o.o

[Final]
So awesome orz

[Faust]
00:10:373 (9) - looks like it'd begin an immediate stream, but it's for approval, so it's probably intentional
01:22:706 (1) - yeah, probably is intentional

so awesome


woo

James2250 wrote:

kevincela's Hard:
Apart from hitsounds these difficulty looks pretty clean
01:13:379 (5) - lower from HP Bar? Done.

Gezoda wrote:

[Final]

03:09:295 (2,3) - Those are on the same tick orz
James found it too.

[Faust]

00:08:039 (1) - It is not snapped, it's 2ms late.
00:59:706 (4,5,6) - This will look better if it starts on the same (x;y) as
00:59:373 (3).

For some reason I have only Final and Faust too :<
(It happened one time with my own map orz)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Easy
00:18:712 (1) - 1,5x spacing? rotate 00:17:379 (4) - a little bit upwards to even the spacing out. Done~
00:21:379 (1) - and not it's too low D: nubs will click the next slider right away. Done~
00:42:712 (1) - too close Done~
01:25:379 (1) - end this at 01:28:045 Done~
01:32:045 (1) - remove NC Done~
01:46:712 (2,3,4) - too close Done~
01:48:045 (5) - ^ Done~
01:54:045 (1) - too far Done~

James2250 wrote:

My first BAT mod, let's go!
lizzenhb's Easy:
-Some more of the patterns could be aligned to make it look neater while playing but I will assume most of them aren't meant to be
-Only this difficulty with tick rate 2? Needs more ticks on the sliders since I can't put notes there. It sounds okay to the beat of the song. But I will change if it's unrankable.
00:13:379 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern Done~
00:15:379 (1) - remove new combo Done~
00:33:045 (4,7) - stack? Done~
01:03:379 (3,5) - align these? Done~
01:17:379 (3) - new combo Done~
01:32:045 (1) - remove new combo Done~
01:52:712 (3,4) - align? Done~

Thank you.

Hushu wrote:

Normal:
Ehh, I don't know what other opinion is on this, but I think the combo placment is quite weird e.g...
0:10:712 - This is where the new combo should start, not on beat after and at 11:379.
0:12:712 - because the ending should normally bring a new combo but can't because it is a slider, repeat 4th slider and place a note 1/2 and 1/1 later~ Then start combo at 13:379 and remove that of note after.
0:15:712 - Make this circle and add circle 1/2 later, new combo it instead of nc after 7.
0:24:045 - about 3 combos after are only combos of 3. so start nc here not on note after
0:29:379 - There just has to be a new combo here~

Is not good that ending of a true combo and start of a new one are linked by a slider each time, so, if you would like to fix that in your diffs? It can possibly stay as it is, is your beatmap in the end and people seem to like it AND im not a pro so this might be not the right mod~ Good luck~

SPOILER

21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : il BG è enorme D:
21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 1,55MB
21.42 <Firo_Prochainezo> : E' .png lol
21.42 <Card_N'FoRcE> : puoi farlo jpg intorno al mezzo mega massimo? non ne vale la pena sennò
21.42 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Lo faccio .jpg?
21.43 <Card_N'FoRcE> : poi mi diceva cesc che la Final ha un preview point diverso
21.43 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si, e' vero. Fammela cambiare.
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : alla kevincela manca il BG lol
21.44 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Che strano, avevo fatto fullsubmit.
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : effettivamente non c'è
21.44 <Card_N'FoRcE> : nella cartella ho solo il BG.png
21.45 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oh una cosa, mi dicono che la canzone è 07th expansion, perché la tua è "dai"?
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Perche' l'artista E' dai.
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non 07th Expansion.
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : quindi le altre ranked
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : hanno artista errato?
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Sono sbagliate lol
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si esatto.
21.46 <Card_N'FoRcE> : un po' come se mettevo Namco Sound Team su Lode Stone, insomma
21.46 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Come tutte le canzoni Touhou.
21.47 <Card_N'FoRcE> : cioè?
21.47 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Le canzoni Touhou hanno l'artista errato.
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : IOSYS non e' un gruppo, e' un gruppo che rilascia canzoni
21.48 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ma intendi quelle originali che usano ZUN?
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : ma non vuol dire che sono sue
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : No sto parlando dei arrange.
21.48 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ma comunque.
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non pensavo che dava problemi il BG
21.48 <Firo_Prochainezo> : visto che non c'e' SB
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : intendi il fatto che è png e pesa 1,5MB?
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si esatto.
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Pensavo che non fosse tanto di problema
21.49 <Firo_Prochainezo> : visto che e' l'unica immagine nella beatmap
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : beh, dai, è davvero tanto
21.49 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non sono così pignolo, però è davvero un mega intero sprecato
21.50 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ok, allora lo cambio.
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : [Normal] 00:39:379 (1) - oooooooh come sono sicuro che ti romperanno le scatole!
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : sinceramente, considerando che
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo spinner non è troppo corto e c'è il buco prima
21.51 <Card_N'FoRcE> : per me non ci sono problemi
21.52 <Card_N'FoRcE> : però mi pare corretto dirtelo
21.52 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene.
21.54 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Cambiato BG. Si vede, percaso?
21.54 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non adesso, devo riscaricare tutto
21.54 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo faccio appena finiamo
21.54 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene.
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : [Normal] 01:22:045 - aggiungi beat?
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : mi suona molto naturale
21.55 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lo metterei sotto l'1
21.56 <Card_N'FoRcE> : se lo aggiungi, rimuovi la nuova combo a 01:22:379 (1) - e mettila a 01:22:712 (2) -
21.56 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Fatto.
21.57 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ok, passo alla Final
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oddio
21.58 <Firo_Prochainezo> : ?
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : le nuove combo come le hai messe?
21.58 <Firo_Prochainezo> : In che senso?
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : i primi 15 secondi circa
21.58 <Card_N'FoRcE> : secondo me le nuove combo sono distribuite molto male D:
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : anzi
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : rivedendole
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : credo di aver capito la logica
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : però
21.59 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:09:379 (6) - anche qui allora
22.00 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:28:128 (16) - errore, questa non esiste nella musica, quindi cancella
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:30:045 (3,4) - come mai la variazione di spacing? Non vedo cose simili nei dintorni
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:32:712 (8) - nuova combo
22.01 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Non lo so, mi piace quel stile di spacing. :<
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : il punto è
22.01 <Card_N'FoRcE> : che è isolato
22.02 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non so, vedere cose così che non sono male ma isolate mi lascia una cosa di incompletezza
22.03 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:39:545 (4) - si è resnappato sul 1/12 (che non esiste O_O), correggi allungandolo sull' 1/8
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:41:045 (1,2,3) - un'altra cosa isolata, questo antispacing
22.04 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Avevo in mente di cambiare quello slider in un altra roba, comunque :3 quindi puoi anche ignorarlo.
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oh ok
22.04 <Card_N'FoRcE> : oppure nota dimenticata in 00:41:212 - ?
22.05 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Aggiunta.
22.06 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:48:545 - anche qui, nota? Queste tue interruzioni sembrano troppo casuali e isolateeee ;_;
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 00:50:045 (1) - questo lo ho trovato leggibile però C:
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:02:212 (4,5) - oh rieccolo
22.07 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm, 30 secondi di distacco
22.08 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non so, secondo me isolarli così disabitua il giocatore portandolo su tutto un altro ritmo di gioco
22.08 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Ecco fatto, aggiunta un'altra nota.
22.09 <Firo_Prochainezo> : http://puu.sh/16mu
22.09 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Va bene cosi'?
22.09 <Card_N'FoRcE> : sì
22.10 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tanto poi ricontrollo tutto quando aggiorni anche le guest
22.10 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:07:212 (1,2,3,4) - uhm, nuova combo sul 3, almeno. Altrimenti è davvero difficile capire che succede, mi ci è voluto un po'
22.11 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Hai ragione, e' troppo difficile da capire. Meglio che lo rifaccio.
22.12 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:45:212 (6,7,8) - non errore, ma un po' bruttina la disposizione, secondo me. Centrare il 7 tra 6 e 8 sarebbe meglio
22.12 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:47:379 - nota mancante?
22.13 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:53:962 (3) - 1/4 prima, per forza xD
22.14 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 01:59:379 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ricorda l'effetto torre di pisa: forse sarebbe meglio spostare un po' verso giù-destra
22.14 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:14:045 (9,1) - yeeeee il 3° xD
22.15 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Si, l'ho sistemata prima che tu lo notassi lol
22.15 <Card_N'FoRcE> : lol
22.15 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:14:545 - nota sollo la fine dello slider? pensavo ci fosse prima di notare che era mancante
22.16 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:34:962 (5,6) - LOLWHYYYYYY
22.17 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:45:045 (2) - togli una ripetizione e aggiungi una nota a 02:45:379 - che sarà la nuova 1 dello stream, poi
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:46:212 (10) - starebbe meglio al posto di 02:46:045 (8) -
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e con una nuova combo
22.18 <Card_N'FoRcE> : poi correggi lo stream rimettendo i beat assenti, togli la combo da 02:46:545 (1) - e mettila a 02:46:712 (3) -
22.19 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:47:962 (8) - tolgi il finish, aggiungi un beat a 02:48:045 - e metti il Finish lì
22.19 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e con questo lo stream è corretto
22.20 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Avevo in mente di rifare questo stream, mi sembra troppo disordinato >_<;
22.20 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Era solamente che nessuno l'aveva notato allora pensavo che non dava cosi' tanto problema come pensavo io.
22.20 <Card_N'FoRcE> : per gli stream ci vuole una certa logica
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : solo che un sacco di gente non ci bada >_>
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tipo spesso è ideale fare quegli slider che rimbalzano all'inizio della stanza (sulla tacca bianca alta)
22.21 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Sto cercando di imparare gli stream alla Mystearica e un pochino ci sto riuscendo, ma questo era solamente un brutto esempio.
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : che sono moooolto intuitivi e al 95% seguono di sicuro qualcosa di buono
22.21 <Card_N'FoRcE> : uhm
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : non conosco molto le mappe della Myst, quindi non so dirti
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:55:254 - non ti passeranno MAI questo beat silenziato
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : se proprio non vuoi che si senta
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : metti almeno una tacchetta di volume
22.22 <Card_N'FoRcE> : ma comunque lo trovo davvero strambo anche io
22.23 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 02:57:879 (2,3,4) - omg what xD
22.23 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Cosa, beat silenziato?
22.23 <Firo_Prochainezo> : Che strano lol.
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : 03:20:129 (1) - tecnicamente dovresti finirlo a 03:21:379 -
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e per la Final è tutto
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : tu correggi, intanto finisco i modding
22.24 <Card_N'FoRcE> : e posto

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:46:712 (2,3,4) - why the sudden change in spacing? °°
   02:17:379 (2,3,4) - kinda weird change of rhythm between 2 and 3, make a slider for these two instead?

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Wow I'm impressed. Simple diff yet so fitting and fun to play, great job!
   Really fun for me with HardRock :3

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Faust's what? xD
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Can you please check for streams like 01:03:212 (3,4,5)? While playing i noticed the tiny difference of spacing between the beats that make the stream, and it's a real pity to see something like this when the streams have a really nice flow rhythm-wise
   02:18:795 (1) - make this end at 02:21:379 ?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Lizzehb's Easy:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:46:712 (2,3,4) - why the sudden change in spacing? °° Orz, didn't see that. Changed.
   02:17:379 (2,3,4) - kinda weird change of rhythm between 2 and 3, make a slider for these two instead? That does look/sound strange! Changed.

• 01:30:045 (14) - new combo? You change the pattern to a new one with an increasing spacing and it will also fix the combo going up to 17 :3

• 00:18:712 (5,6) - really weird. How about this? (7 is stacked under 6):
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:128 (16) - i remember i told you that this should be removed :<
  00:35:212 (1) - remove new combo o_o
  01:45:379 (7) - why didn't you move this as i told you? I don't see any reason to keep it like that, unless you can give me one :<
  01:51:045 (7,8,9,10,11) - kinda bad looking
  02:28:712 (1) - 02:56:712 (1) - remove new combo?
  03:02:295 (5,1) - 03:04:045 (1,2,3,4) - 03:05:045 (1,2,3,4) - ???
  03:13:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - unintuitive
  03:20:129 (7,8,9) - same as 00:28:128 (16), i don't hear anything they can follow...

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Final]
00:26:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) WHAT IS THIS
WHAT IS THIS???
WHAAAT IIIS THIIIS??????
WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS?
WHAT IS THIS?????????????????

Faust wrote:

Bump because bored.

HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY

dkun wrote:

I love you both. Have my children.

starstarstar

E-Hooker wrote:

Tsk, why hasn't anybody come back to look at this map?
I am disappointed.

1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   No hitsounds D:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:10:045 (8,9) - kinda confusing, it may seem a 1/4 instead of a 1/2
   01:49:295 - not having a beat here is REALLY cruel and confusing.
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:24:045 (5,6) - there's not way to read this as a 1/2 due to the previous patterns.