大丈夫,萌大奶Sandpig wrote:
Ying's Normal
感觉这是个easy，估计是为了压星，我觉得NORMAL还是稍微难一点好._. EASY可以再做
还有一个问题是感觉太vocal了，缺乏节奏感。像这种01:20:159 (1,2) 单独拿两根红线押vocal的感觉太2了 x.x
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ying's Normal
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
star~☆ 
Topic Starter
fix :3ZLOdeuka wrote:
ying's Normal
fine ~
Hard
fine
Insane
00:10:443 (2) - better to start here spinner
I do not know what the problem here? need ranked, perfect map
S T A R ~
ying's Normal
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
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Star~
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
____________________________
Star~
Topic Starter
fixDragonSparta wrote:
ying's Normal
00:17:773 (1) - This note is not properly under previous note
Hard
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
01:40:273 (1) - Add finish
02:13:170 (6) - ^
02:24:079 (1) - ^
02:45:968 (X) - Why is kiai time here? It should be at 02:46:409
You should map the whole thing in this diff
Insane
This diff is really hard to differencate between the jumps and the 1/1 notes
00:56:125 (1) - Add finish
01:30:216 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a symmetrical diamond pattern
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Star~
o hi~
I can't find anything wrong here, and I'm not in a mood to Nazi this.
So here's a star.
I can't find anything wrong here, and I'm not in a mood to Nazi this.
So here's a star.
[General]
I think offset is little bit off, but not much. ignore this if your sure about your offset.
(using 25% helps you)]
and there are some circles could be nazi-moded (which means it's not so important but it could be better)
but I won't do that here.
And good!
[ying's Normal]
00:17:773 (1) stack this properly. disable grid snap and use x0.0 distance snap
00:38:398(3) This overlapping with next (2) doesnt look good for me. well, it's not strongly suggested tho,
02:55:443 (4) this overlapped with next (1) ^
[Hard]
Nice mapping! but I think sliders overlapping each other or circle overlapping slider confuses the player.
it's good as is, but you might consider about it.
[Insane]
I liked this map!
[Overall]
good map, star of course!
I think offset is little bit off, but not much. ignore this if your sure about your offset.
(using 25% helps you)]
and there are some circles could be nazi-moded (which means it's not so important but it could be better)
but I won't do that here.
And good!
[ying's Normal]
00:17:773 (1) stack this properly. disable grid snap and use x0.0 distance snap
00:38:398(3) This overlapping with next (2) doesnt look good for me. well, it's not strongly suggested tho,
02:55:443 (4) this overlapped with next (1) ^
[Hard]
Nice mapping! but I think sliders overlapping each other or circle overlapping slider confuses the player.
it's good as is, but you might consider about it.
[Insane]
I liked this map!
[Overall]
good map, star of course!
fix some,thanks
Hard
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧...
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧...
Topic Starter
fix:3soulfear wrote:
Hard
02:56:807 (1) - 建議砍掉SLIDER的第4拍 放NOTE
Insane
01:14:534 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
01:15:045 (3) - NEW COMBO
很不錯的圖
順便吐槽這歌改編得原曲都聽不出了(其實高潮還是勉強聽得出)
繼續吐槽...BG那紅白是偽娘吧... 是貧乳ww
nice map 
I love this song =D
baka makes it better
star !!
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my poor English lol
baka makes it better
star !!
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my poor English lol
General:
It would be nice if you add 2 more KIAI mods First KIAI mod from 00:12:318 till 00:34:136. And the second KIAI mod from 02:24:079 till 02:33:625
Important thing! - you KIAI mod doesn't start at the same moment on all difficulties. So make it the same on all difficulties!
ying's normal:
00:46:920 - delete a circle here
can't say anything bad about this difficulty just a little advice - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders,for examle this - 02:09:079. And you have a lot of such sliders. Maybe it is better to change them a little? And to add more symmetry
02:47:943 - this slider doesn't look good too :/
Hard:
can't say anything bad about this difficulty too. I will just say again - I don't like the shape of your sliders on this difficulty too. This,for example - 02:21:863
02:22:375 - 02:23:909 - these sliders are non-rhytmical. Better to put them away and put there some circles instead of these sliders.
Insane:
01:29:363 - delete this circle. And move your slider left,and make it longer. Your slider has to start in : 01:29:363 and it has to end in : 01:30:216
03:07:034 - I think this spinner has to end in : 03:08:057. If you will change it,then put a circle in: 03:08:227
Anyway,nice song Star!
It would be nice if you add 2 more KIAI mods
First KIAI mod from 00:12:318 till 00:34:136. And the second KIAI mod from 02:24:079 till 02:33:625Important thing! - you KIAI mod doesn't start at the same moment on all difficulties. So make it the same on all difficulties!
ying's normal:
00:46:920 - delete a circle here
can't say anything bad about this difficulty just a little advice - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders,for examle this - 02:09:079. And you have a lot of such sliders. Maybe it is better to change them a little? And to add more symmetry
02:47:943 - this slider doesn't look good too :/
Hard:
can't say anything bad about this difficulty too. I will just say again - I don't like the shape of your sliders on this difficulty too. This,for example - 02:21:863
02:22:375 - 02:23:909 - these sliders are non-rhytmical. Better to put them away and put there some circles instead of these sliders.
Insane:
01:29:363 - delete this circle. And move your slider left,and make it longer. Your slider has to start in : 01:29:363 and it has to end in : 01:30:216
03:07:034 - I think this spinner has to end in : 03:08:057. If you will change it,then put a circle in: 03:08:227
Anyway,nice song
Star!Hi )
My suggestions
Ying's Normal:
Nothing found.
Hard:
Nothing found^^
Insane:
02:19:091 (4,1) maybe 1 grid down?
Great job, good luck on getting this beatmap ranked:)) Don't feed me kudosu
Star:)
)My suggestions
Ying's Normal:
Nothing found.
Hard:
Nothing found^^
Insane:
02:19:091 (4,1) maybe 1 grid down?
Great job, good luck on getting this beatmap ranked:)) Don't feed me kudosu
Star:)
mod by request
[ying's Normal]
01:45:216,02:51:352 - 玩起来叠得太突出，Stack Leniency减1~2格?
[Hard]
AR+1?
[Insane]
00:55:613(3) - 既然这部分whistle都压拍打音也把这两个音压掉吧
01:54:079(1) - 换成静音 or soft音?
可以考虑放多点finish音
很不错了，收集多点梗吧
[ying's Normal]
01:45:216,02:51:352 - 玩起来叠得太突出，Stack Leniency减1~2格?
[Hard]
AR+1?
[Insane]
00:55:613(3) - 既然这部分whistle都压拍打音也把这两个音压掉吧
01:54:079(1) - 换成静音 or soft音?
可以考虑放多点finish音
很不错了，收集多点梗吧
everything seem good to me, so that I can't mod
I can only give you star and pink one wishing you good luck
I can only give you star and pink one wishing you good luck
[general]
any timing section which changes the sound of HITTABLE notes must be at least 1/4 beat before said note. your diffs (not ying's) don't have it. so please fix
[insane]
00:16:750 (2,3,4,1) - make spacing even
00:47:261 (4,5) - snap the end of 4's timing to a 1/3 tick, not 1/4
00:51:352 (3,1) - same but with 3
[hard]
ok
[ying's normal]
ok
star
any timing section which changes the sound of HITTABLE notes must be at least 1/4 beat before said note. your diffs (not ying's) don't have it. so please fix
[insane]
00:16:750 (2,3,4,1) - make spacing even
00:47:261 (4,5) - snap the end of 4's timing to a 1/3 tick, not 1/4
00:51:352 (3,1) - same but with 3
[hard]
ok
[ying's normal]
ok
star
Giorgos wrote:
ying's normal:
00:46:920 - delete a circle hereno
can't say anything bad about this difficulty just a little advice - I don't like the shape of some of your sliders,for examle this - 02:09:079. And you have a lot of such sliders. Maybe it is better to change them a little? And to add more symmetry
02:47:943 - this slider doesn't look good too :/
no change.um.I think these sliders are fine
lazySamiPale wrote:
[ying's Normal]
01:45:216,02:51:352 - 玩起来叠得太突出，Stack Leniency减1~2格?fixed
hard
03:12:488 (1) - remove new combo
03:12:318 (4) - add new combo
03:14:023 (3) - new combo
Insane
01:50:670 (1) - 這個去掉NEW COMBO
01:50:841 (2) - 建議刪掉這個NOTE
然後3和4像這麼放
3加NEW COMBO
4加FINISH
03:12:488 (1) - remove new combo
03:12:318 (4) - add new combo
03:14:023 (3) - new combo
Insane
01:50:670 (1) - 這個去掉NEW COMBO
01:50:841 (2) - 建議刪掉這個NOTE
然後3和4像這麼放
3加NEW COMBO
4加FINISH
star~
offset : 883
As per your request:
[General]
What a beautiful rendition of this song. <3
[Hard]
02:03:966 (1) - Remove new combo
All looks good. Just adjust to yaya's offset and call me back!
[General]
What a beautiful rendition of this song. <3
[Hard]
02:03:966 (1) - Remove new combo
All looks good. Just adjust to yaya's offset and call me back!
Resnapped the last kiai on Insane and Hard.
:U
:U
everything looks good
ranked
ranked
恭喜<3
bakabaka @_@
this map is pure awesome ><
BAKA你神了------
baka又一张rank了的说0.0
恭喜~~
恭喜~~
baka rank神速~