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COOL&CREATE - Reverie

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-saku-
112 posts
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Topic Starter
-saku-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月13日 at 12:53:54

Artist: COOL&CREATE
Title: Reverie
Source: Touhou
Tags: beatmario Remiria Scarlet C&C Patchouli frost-b-spec
BPM: 188
Filesize: 20472kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. fbs's Easy (0.65 stars, 76 notes)
  2. Hard (4.5 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 701 notes)
  4. Normal (3.27 stars, 189 notes)
  5. Patche (5 stars, 587 notes)
Download: COOL&CREATE - Reverie
Download: COOL&CREATE - Reverie (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st UPLOAD Beatmap.
plz Mod&BAT/MAT this map.
I'm mapping noob><; need advice
The new difficulty of Easy was able to be done, and DL it again, plz.

fbs's Easy:frost-b-spec ~finish plz mod
Nomal :-saku- ~finish plz mod
Hard :-saku- ~finish plz mod
Patche:Patchouli ~finish plz mod
Lunatic:-saku- ~finish plz mod

sry, I'm poor English.
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KagomeKagome
28 posts
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KagomeKagome
8-)
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
subje san thank you star^^
loli_milk
423 posts
Joined May 2010
loli_milk
ganba ;)
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
loli_milk san star arigatou gozaimasu!
kusakabe001
171 posts
Joined June 2009
kusakabe001
☆~ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
kusakabesa-n! star arigatoooo!
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
:oops: :shock:
また難易度が揃ったらmodしにきます<3
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
suzully san star thx desu!
naught
68 posts
Joined September 2009
naught
:)
Patchouli
824 posts
Joined July 2009
Patchouli
IRC Modding and Guest Diff making>.<
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paimanlol
11 posts
Joined October 2010
paimanlol
nice map! :lol:
K o h a k u
233 posts
Joined August 2009
K o h a k u
8-)
AYAPAN
36 posts
Joined October 2010
AYAPAN
♥なのじゃ～★
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
:)
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
naught
paiman
K o h a k u
AYAPAN
h3k1ru

Thank you star~><;
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
modです ;)
SPOILER
[General]
  1. offsetを変えたあとに緑線の位置を変更し忘れているので変更してください。
[Lunatic]
Rescaleし忘れているorRescaleでおかしくなっているスライダーが多々あるので修正が必要です。
  1. 00:04:684 (10) - スライダーのRescaleがされていません。以降は省きます。
  2. 00:04:923 (11) - こちらにnewcomboを入れて00:05:003 (1)のnewcomboを取り除いた方が見やすいかな？と思います。
  3. 00:09:631 (8) - ややスペーシングに戸惑うかもしれません。ただ、Lunaticなので許容範囲だと思います。
  4. 00:12:104 (3,4,5,6,7) - (7)を取り除くかもうひとつ(8)を加えたほうが自然な連打になると思います。
  5. 00:18:886 (5) - 少し遠すぎるかもしれません。
  6. 00:26:545 (1,2,3,4) - スペーシングを揃えるか、徐々に縮めるのならもっと思い切ってやってしまった方が良いと思います。
  7. 00:34:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングのバランスを整えた方が良いと思います。
  8. 00:40:588 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 00:53:673 (1) - 始点は00:53:514で、終点は00:55:588だと思います。
  10. 01:21:439 (10) - これを取り除いてスピナーの始点をここに合わせた方が良いと思います。
  11. 01:31:652 (5) - ^ 同じく取り除いて(6)の始点をここに合わせた方が良いと思います。
  12. 01:50:960 (1) - 01:50:801 (3)と少し近いので、直前の連打とここからの単発のリズムで迷ってしまいそうです。
  13. 01:52:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングを揃えた方が良さそうです。
  14. 02:08:673 (1,2) - 1/16拍子ずつ短くした方がリズムに合っています。
  15. 02:15:056 (1,2) - ^ もしかしたら、00:04:684 (10)や他のスライダーと同様にRescaleがおかしくなっているのかも。
  16. 02:38:514~02:55:588 - breaktimeが長すぎるかもしれません。だいたい20秒以上となると長すぎだと判断されるようです。
  17. 03:08:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングを揃えた方が良さそうです。
  18. 03:36:758 (5) - ^ 01:21:439 (10)
  19. 03:36:918 (1) - KIAI TIMEの終わりをこのスピナーの終わりに移動させた方が良さそうです。
[Hard]
Rescaleし忘れているorRescaleでおかしくなっているスライダーが多々あるので修正が必要です。
  1. 00:25:629 (1,2,3) - Resnapできていません。
  2. 01:13:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 徐々に広がるスペーシングに少し違和感があるかもしれません。
  3. 01:16:972 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 01:18:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - Resnapできていません。
  5. 01:44:418 (1,2,3,4) - 少しボーカルとずれていて違和感があります。
  6. 01:50:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^01:13:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
  7. 01:57:184 (1) - 前のスライダーと少し近すぎる気がします。
  8. 02:15:056 (1) - ボーカルに合わせた音がないのが気になるので、↓のようにしてはどうでしょうか。
  9. 02:19:844 (1) - ^
  10. 02:34:844 (1) - スピナーの終点を02:38:035にしてみてはどうでしょうか。
[Patche]
KIAI TIMEを設定してください。
  1. 01:51:120 (2) - スライダーとかぶって少し見づらいかもしれません。
  2. 03:05:322 (2) - 03:05:482に移動させた方がリズムに合っているかもしれません。もしくは03:04:843 (1)のスライダーを前2つのと同じ長さにした方が。
初めてとは思えない楽しい譜面だと思いますヽ(・ω・`)ﾉ
残りの製作もファイトー！ ;)
ratstar
37 posts
Joined January 2010
ratstar
good. ^^)ﾉ~☆
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-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
ratさん☆ありがとおおお！
suzullyさんMod助かります><；

たぶんお二人がプレイされたのは全部直す前だと思います。
いろいろ直してUPしたのでまたよろです～!!
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
good map~

star~ :)

☆Pending map☆
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24599
ise77777
80 posts
Joined June 2010
ise77777
rankedまでｶﾞﾝﾊﾞｯﾃ><
star :)
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
がむさんiseさんお星様ありがとうです！
後は音付け、がんばりまっす！
Lalarun
314 posts
Joined October 2009
Lalarun
(◔౪◔ )
LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
The video isn't working on my end.

Hard
00:17:928 (4) - Move this beat 2 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).
00:18:248 (5) - Move this beat 2 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).
00:20:162 (5,1) - Make a slider that starts where 5 is and ends where the 1 is.
01:48:407 (4) - Move this beat 6 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).
02:14:099 - Remove this break.

Patche
No problems found.

Lunatic
02:31:014 (5,6,7) - I can't tell if this is faster than the rest of the combo. so put a new combo at 5.
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
Good!
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
thanks for LesTrucsRose Mod!

00:17:928 (4) - Move this beat 2 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).-sry,It doesn't apply.
00:18:248 (5) - Move this beat 2 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).-too.
00:20:162 (5,1) - Make a slider that starts where 5 is and ends where the 1 is.- It apply.
01:48:407 (4) - Move this beat 6 gridspaces to the left (gridlevel 4).-It doesn't apply.
02:14:099 - Remove this break. -It apply.


02:31:014 (5,6,7) - I can't tell if this is faster than the rest of the combo. so put a new combo at 5. -It apply. bat, I cant understand "I can't tell if this is faster than the rest of the combo."

Lalarun
LuPiiTa
Thanks for star!
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frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx request!!

[Lunatic]
0.04.045(7,8) - 1grid right(lvl4)
0.33.248(3) - 1grid down(lvl4)
0.36.120(2) - ^
0.38.354(3) - 1grid up(lvl4)
1.35.322(1) - 1grid right?(lvl4)

[Patche]
3.04.045(2) - spacing(x0.0)

[Hard]
Resnap all note.
0.31.492(3) - spacing
1.32.290(4) - 3grid up(lvl4)

[Normal]
1.28.460(3) - 1grid right and up(lvl3)
1.29.418(2,3) - 1grid left and down(lvl3)
1.30.854(2) - spacing(x0.0)
1.41.865(4) - ^

あと、Easy作らせて頂きます！

+star
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
dekita!

あと、modじゃないけど追加で
delete osb file!

Download: COOL&CREATE - Reverie (-saku-) [fbs's Easy].osu
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
Thank you for Mod and star!!

[Lunatic]
0.04.045(7,8) - 1grid right(lvl4)- It apply.
0.33.248(3) - 1grid down(lvl4)- too.
0.36.120(2) - ^- ^
0.38.354(3) - 1grid up(lvl4)- ^
1.35.322(1) - 1grid right?(lvl4)- It does on purpose so.

[Patche]
3.04.045(2) - spacing(x0.0)- Remap.

[Hard]
Resnap all note.- It apply
0.31.492(3) - spacingt- too.
1.32.290(4) - 3grid up(lvl4)- ^

[Normal]
1.28.460(3) - 1grid right and up(lvl3)- It apply.
1.29.418(2,3) - 1grid left and down(lvl3)- ^
1.30.854(2) - spacing(x0.0)- ^
1.41.865(4) - ^- ^

Easyのほうよろしくです！
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-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
ってもうできてた！lol
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
Mod待ってます！
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello! Just here for some suggestions... :D

SPOILER
[fbs's Easy]
00:09:950 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:13:779.
00:49:524 (1) - Remove "clap" at the end of this slider and replace it with "finish".
01:12:503 (4) - Move this slider 3 grids downwards.
01:15:056 (1) - Move this hit circle 7 grids downwards.
01:16:412 (2) - Place this hit circle to the center. (1 grid upward and 6 grids to the right.)

[Normal]
00:03:290 (1) - Move this slider 1 grid to the left.
00:11:067 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:131 (4) - Put a "clap" on this hit circle.
00:52:077 (1) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow of this slider.
01:36:120 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:673 (1) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow of this slider.
02:32:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try making a new formation for these hit circles. (example: making a star formation or something.)

[Hard]
00:55:907 (1) - Put a "finish" on this spinner.
01:09:152 (2,4) - Put a "clap" on these hit circles.
01:11:705 (2,4) - ^
01:14:258 (2,4,6) - ^
Hehehe sorry about the nazi's. Anyway, it's a nice map! so I gave a star for this. :)
-saku-
112 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
-saku-
Kirino_Kousaka Thanks for star & Mod!

SPOILER
[fbs's Easy]
00:09:950 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:13:779.
00:49:524 (1) - Remove "clap" at the end of this slider and replace it with "finish".
01:12:503 (4) - Move this slider 3 grids downwards.
01:15:056 (1) - Move this hit circle 7 grids downwards.
01:16:412 (2) - Place this hit circle to the center. (1 grid upward and 6 grids to the right.)
It tells it.

[Normal]
00:03:290 (1) - Move this slider 1 grid to the left.- It aplly
00:11:067 (1) - Remove new combo.- ^
00:32:131 (4) - Put a "clap" on this hit circle.- ^
00:52:077 (1) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow of this slider.- ^
01:36:120 (1) - Remove new combo.- ^
02:08:673 (1) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow of this slider.-^
02:32:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try making a new formation for these hit circles. (example: making a star formation or something.)- This formation has already made the star.


[Hard]
00:55:907 (1) - Put a "finish" on this spinner.- It aplly.
01:09:152 (2,4) - Put a "clap" on these hit circles.- ^
01:11:705 (2,4) - ^- ^
01:14:258 (2,4,6) - ^- ^
se-sukeEila
114 posts
Joined May 2010
se-sukeEila
Yeahヽ(´ω`)ﾉ☆
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
ふぁいとー！
Hakeru
2,360 posts
Joined May 2010
Hakeru
どもーサクーたんｗ

[fb's easy]
01:23:992 (1) - move this note to x:256 y:312
01:32:928 (1) -
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:10:428 (2) - new combo
01:11:226 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL + H
02:34:843 (5) - move this note to x:368 y:104
00:38:673 (4) - move 2 grid up

[Hard]
overall , you need to fix some spacing ..

[Patche]
Nicely done .

[Lunatic]
00:12:343 (1) - new combo
00:12:503 (1) - new combo
00:26:705 (2) - move this note to x:208 y:100
01:45:854 (3,4,5) - do not stack this note with the slider
03:27:662 (3) - move this note to x:88 y:304
make sure to add and fix some hitsounds :D


Nice map :D

star :D
gowww
429 posts
Joined June 2009
gowww
fight!!! 8-)
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
SPOILER
[General]
- Please change the video name to all english and full submit again otherwise maybe only Japanese OS can open the osz file successfully. D:

- Please try offset 1025(+11ms for current)? I feel this maybe better xD. You can try and decide whether you change it or not.
But if you want to change it then please change offset of all diffs and don't forgot to resnap all notes and align all green lines to +11ms.

- The background image's max limit is 1024*768, please reduce all bgs to under or equal this limit.

- Please add guest diff mapper's name to tag of all diffs.

- Please change [Patche]'s leadin to 1 second or change all diff's leadin expect [Patche] to 2 seconds.


[Normal]
- Approach rate-1~-2 and hp drain +1~+2?

[Hard]
- There are more than 3 slider speeds in this diff, hmm although it's no problem during play... so decide on you for delete one speed or not.
- overall difficulty+2? since [Normal]'s oad is 3 but this is 2. D:

[Patche]
- overall difficulty-1~2? since Lunatic's oad is also only 6 and Luatic's max score is highest. :o

[Lunatic]
- There are more than 3 slider speeds in this diff, hmm although it's no problem during play... so decide on you for delete one speed or not.
- 00:01:014 - Please delete this green line, use red line to substitute this then ok.

Hmm ok that's all xD
star~ :P
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[fbs's Easy]
00:09:950 (1) - This spinner should end at 00:13:779. no
00:49:524 (1) - Remove "clap" at the end of this slider and replace it with "finish". add finish
01:12:503 (4) - Move this slider 3 grids downwards. no
01:15:056 (1) - Move this hit circle 7 grids downwards. no
01:16:412 (2) - Place this hit circle to the center. (1 grid upward and 6 grids to the right.) no

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

[fb's easy]
01:23:992 (1) - move this note to x:256 y:312 no
01:32:928 (1) - ok
thx~ :)

Download: COOL&CREATE - Reverie (-saku-) [fbs's Easy].osu
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