winber1 wrote:

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PARUPARU!

01:16:453(5) - a little unexpected. I'd rather have the small spacings come first, then maybe have this large spacing happen.fixed.Also for 1:20.145(5)
01:33:068(1) - remove new combo? OK :3
01:40:453(1) - ^ ^
01:47:837(1) - ^ ^

Normal

The song difficulties settings seem a little high for normal :S decrease AR-1 OD-1

01:27:991(4,5,6,7,8,8,10) - possibly make a shape out of these notes? Done like this
01:40:453(4) - start slider 1/2 beat later but end in same place Done~ Hmm... I think deviding it is better(a circle and a slider) ?
02:13:453(spinners) - maybe use finish instead of clap Done~

Spacing and everything seem fine and readable. hitsounds sound fine too.
Nice song. Thanks^^

Star~

Thanks for modding and ☆

Revengexsoyah wrote:

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onLY SUGGESTIONS d:

~Normal~

- down the "circle size" ? :S Done:3

very fine D: I'm glad to hear it^o^


~PARUPARU!~

00:19:453 : finishDone
00:26:837 : ^Done
00:34:222 : ^Done
00:41:606 : ^ because 0:42.068(1) 0:42.530(2) are finish ..I think it is weird...(Sorry I don't know how to express >_<"""Waiting for others' advices...)
01:36:530 : clap?Done
02:02:837 : FINISHDone
02:24:991 : ^Done


VERY VERY GOOD :d
I LIKEEE ^^
star for dedication
good luck

Thx for modding and star

ZLOdeuka wrote:

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[General]

Offset ~ 1 017

resnap all notes and correct Kiai time Change

Why are images not jpg format? jpg instead~

Preview Point 01:29:632 Done

Kiai Mod

I do not like where he is

he has started here 01:29:632 and finish 01:59:171 Change

[Storyboard]

it would be better if the picture will appear immediately. Done

[Normal]

01:28:017 (5) - new comboDone

01:30:555 (2) - ^Done

01:37:940 (2) - ^Done

01:40:478 (4) - ^Done

01:45:324 (2) - ^Done

01:52:709 (2) - ^Done

[PARUPARU!]

00:33:068 (6) - new comboDone

00:40:453 (6) - ^Done

00:42:991 (3) - ^Done

00:44:837 (11) - ^Done

00:45:299 (1) - delete new comboDone

01:02:145 (6) - new comboDone

01:27:991 (5) - ^Done

01:34:222 (5) - ^Done

01:48:991 (5) - ^Done

nice star~ THX for modding and star^^

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

SPOILER

Don't worry, you didn't break any rules I'm glad to hear it

General
The offset seems weird to me, I don't hear anything where it's right now, but it still seems to work. Oh well. Change offset to 1017

PARUPARU
Your hitsound are... weird to me, especially the claps. I can't really hear a rythm out of them. There isn't really any kinda of sound in the song which sounds similar to the clap, it's more like a bass drum. Try to find a fitting custom hitsound? I will find :3
00:00:760 - add note? as it's the first beat Done
00:42:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I hate this kinda pattern because I never manage to read it D: no need to change it though >_<
00:44:837 (11) - add NC Done
00:45:299 (1) - remove NC Done
lol@ the break :O showing us even the cover of the CD. Just make for fun
01:14:376 (8) - move to 01:14:260 Done
01:14:606 - add noteDone
01:36:991 (1) - replace whistle with finishDone
01:51:760 (1) - ^Done
01:58:453 - add noteDone
01:59:145 - ^Done
I don't like those 2 spinners in the Kiai. Maybe remove them and map them instead? Hmm...I don't like 0 spinner map Whatever...At least move the kiai time that ZLOdeuka said ... hope you can accept the reason
02:27:991 - add noteDone
02:28:453 - ^Done

Normal
Increase circle size by 1? Done. But OD+1...because I think score is too low for circle+1 only.
00:18:530 (5) - add 1 repeatDone
00:25:914 (5) - ^Done
00:34:222 - add noteDone
00:41:606 - ^Done
01:02:145 (6,7,8,9) - spread them out? It's kinda confusing. Of course:3
01:14:376 (8) - move to 01:14:260 Done
01:14:606 - add noteDone
02:01:914 (5) - add repeatDone
02:10:222 - add noteDone
bleh, the spinners again.>_<""sorry
02:17:606 - add noteDone
02:24:068 (6) - add repeatDone
02:25:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is kinda hard... replace with 2 repeating sliders?Change into 2 repeating sliders (1,2,3,4) and 2 circle for(5)<<I think it is better...waiting for others' opinion.
02:28:222 (2) - remove finishDone


Good luck with your map~ Thanks Also thx for your modding and star
star'd

1. The mp3 must be between 128 and 192Kbits/s
2. album pic.jpg doesn't really fit imo, you should add border effect on it.
3. Tags are different on Normal and Paruparu, they must be the same. EastNewSound tag must be removed because it's the artist already.
4. Offset seems late. Try offset 990 (don't forget to resnap all notes)

1. 00:36:990 (5) - Make it finish under (2)?http://puu.sh/ZkS
2. 01:14:605 (9) - Stack it over 01:14:836 (1) - ?

1. Grid size 2 is really a bad idea imo, even more fore an hard/insane :<
2. 00:20:836 (3,4) - This slider shouldn't be under the circle :< try to make something like this? http://puu.sh/Zls
3. 00:23:143 (1) - I would be sad if I play a tag game and have this lol you should remove it.
4. 01:49:220 (3,5) - Move those slider so they don't touch each other, you should make them parallel.
5. 01:54:528 (7) - Move it a little to the left so it doesn't touch the slider?
6. 02:07:913 (3,4) - Reshape the slider a little so it's not under (3) ?
7. 02:09:297 (8,9) - move (9) 2 grid up (with grid lvl3) so they don't touch each other?
8. 02:15:297 (2,3) - Should reshape here too.
9. 02:24:989 (9) - Move it on the grid to the left (grid lvl3) so it's symmetric http://puu.sh/Zm4
10. 02:27:989 (2,3) - Huge spacing and then 02:28:451 (4,5) - Little spacing. It's hard to hit the (5) because of this, you should make a better spacing here, this one is too weird.

footix31 wrote:

SPOILER

[General]

1. The mp3 must be between 128 and 192Kbits/s Format
2. album pic.jpg doesn't really fit imo, you should add border effect on it. border effect ??:?
3. Tags are different on Normal and Paruparu, they must be the same. EastNewSound tag must be removed because it's the artist already. Done
4. Offset seems late. Try offset 990 (don't forget to resnap all notes)

Done~the offset is better...I think

[Normal]

1. 00:36:990 (5) - Make it finish under (2)?http://puu.sh/ZkS Done
2. 01:14:605 (9) - Stack it over 01:14:836 (1) - ?

Done

[PARUPARU!]

1. Grid size 2 is really a bad idea imo, even more fore an hard/insane :< Oh ...I use grid2 to check my SB's site ...exactly I use grid3 to map
2. 00:20:836 (3,4) - This slider shouldn't be under the circle :< try to make something like this? http://puu.sh/Zls Do my best...
3. 00:23:143 (1) - I would be sad if I play a tag game and have this lol you should remove it. Consider...wait for others modding then decide...
4. 01:49:220 (3,5) - Move those slider so they don't touch each other, you should make them parallel.Done
5. 01:54:528 (7) - Move it a little to the left so it doesn't touch the slider?Done
6. 02:07:913 (3,4) - Reshape the slider a little so it's not under (3) ?Done
7. 02:09:297 (8,9) - move (9) 2 grid up (with grid lvl3) so they don't touch each other? Changr the site instead
8. 02:15:297 (2,3) - Should reshape here too.OK,reshape
9. 02:24:989 (9) - Move it on the grid to the left (grid lvl3) so it's symmetric http://puu.sh/Zm4Done
10. 02:27:989 (2,3) - Huge spacing and then 02:28:451 (4,5) - Little spacing. It's hard to hit the (5) because of this, you should make a better spacing here, this one is too weird.

remap here>_<

I don't really like the look of the map but it's still fun to play and I like the music. Here is a star~ Thx for modding and star' ˇ '

TraceTheKriken wrote:

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[normal]
Change offset to same as in [PARUPARU] diff -> 990 Done~

[PARUPARU]
00:18:413 (6) Remove this one
00:32:951 (5,1) Fix Distance Spacing
00:42:066 - 00:44:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ^
01:16:220 - 01:18:297 (4,5,6,7,8) ^
01:19:913 - 01:21:990 (4,5,6,7,8) ^
01:27:990 - 01:29:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
01:31:682 (5) Move Slider to 01:31:797 and remove reverse arrow
01:39:066 (5) Remove this one
01:46:451 (5) ^
01:49:105 (2) ^
01:53:836 (5) Move Slider to 01:53:951 and remove reverse arrow
01:55:220 (1) Remove Reverse Arrow and move end of the slider at 01:55:451
01:56:374 (3) Remove Reverse Arrow and move end of the slider at 01:56:605
01:57:297 (1) Remove Reverse Arrow and move end of the slider at 01:57:528
01:57:759 (2) Remove Reverse Arrow and move end of the slider at 01:57:990
01:57:066 - 01:58:913 (1,2,3,4,5) Fix Discance Spacing
02:25:451 - 02:28:797 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) ^

There should be all.

Hmm...I want to make some jump and rhythm... So I consider yours advise... But I will fix if someone also picks the mistake which you picks

Thx for spending times to mod my map and star

Zelos wrote:

SPOILER

Your offset is off.

Set to 980 and resnap. Done~

Dont forget to kudosu. Of course

344,92,117328,6,0,B|380:116,2,35,0|8|0
160,92,117790,2,0,B|124:116,2,35,0|8|0
360,176,118251,1,0
252,280,118482,1,0
140,176,118713,1,8

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

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Normal

lead-in给去掉。。用不上 去除了' - '

HDR 左移 1或2 -1
AR 左移 1 Done
OD 左移 1Done

00:33:980(6) - 这个finish删除掉，或者放后面那个circle上？ 放後面的circle
00:41:364(6) - 同上？ ^
00:42:749(4) - 删了clap,或clap和这个circle都删掉 刪除掉circle
00:44:364(7) - 去掉finish Done
02:05:636(5) - ^ Done
02:10:021(6) - ^？ Done
02:17:405(5) - ^？ Done
02:18:097(1) - 用finish？ Done

PARUPARU!

不好。。。我改了offset才之后mod的 。。
要时间对不上也因该差的不多的。。

HDR 左移 1 Done

00:33:097(1) - 这个跳相对之前的3x spacing来说，这个显的大了些，缩短些好点，之后那个2x 就比这个好多了 修改成2x了...
00:43:943(5) - 加个NC？我觉得有些看不太清。。Done
01:22:713(2) - 这个虽然看着间距大，但是比较好点，但稍微移动下位置
上移动2格子（lv4） 左移动2格子（lv4） Done
01:23:174(3) - 要是上面移动了。。这个左移动一个（lv4） Done
01:28:943(5) - NC? Done
01:29:174(6) - 移动到和（4）重叠，这个地方感觉有些难识别，这个图整体不属于难图，所以这个地方没必要弄的很难识别 抱歉...這邊保留>_<""有其他modder也指正這個地方的話我會修改的
01:57:328~01:58:713 - 活生生的骗pc啊。。虽然在slider velocity仅1.4的情况下，这些跳的都不算大，
但这个和整体好像脱节了。。跳 的话，不用改这么大间距。。
所以试试这个

时间可能有些问题。。平移下就行了

344,92,117328,6,0,B|380:116,2,35,0|8|0
160,92,117790,2,0,B|124:116,2,35,0|8|0
360,176,118251,1,0
252,280,118482,1,0
140,176,118713,1,8

Done~~

最后结尾那跳也略显大了，用2.0~3就够了。。3.5,3.6略大了些感觉。。 保留


另外。。OFFSET我是觉得不太准了。。 試了前面幾位的offset...還是改成ZLOdeuka的1017

starrr

Vass_Bass wrote:

SPOILER

Hi :) hello

General
audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. Fix it Done
"album pic" remove it from SB it will be better maybe remove it if someone also offer it>.<

Normal
00:25:940 (5) - remove one returning Consider...>_<
01:02:170 (1) - new combo Done~
01:13:247 (1) - ^ Done~
01:40:709 (2) - ugly slider, do it symmetrical Done by frost-b-spec who said
02:01:940 (5) - remove one returning Consider
02:24:093 (6) - ^ ^

PARUPARU!
don't like BG in this diff maybe try to findChanged~
Objects sounds good, but the location of it is ugly. Try to do it beautiful I will :3
Sta

r

frost-b-spec wrote:

SPOILER

request modding~

[Normal]
1.04.247(2) - slider reverse : 4grid up(lvl4) Done~
1.26.401(2) - spacing(use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap)Done~
1.40.824(2) - 1st point is ok,2nd point:x252 y356,3rd point:x284 y288Done~
2.09.324(5) - spacing(use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap)Done~


[PARUPARU!]
1.08.401(3) - spacing(use x0.0 spacing and off grid snap)Done~
1.12.093(2) - ^Done~
1.57.324(1~5) - isn't snapped...resnap all noteDone . Changed offset then fixing the notes by notepead before .So I forget to resnap in game >__<" sorry

+Star~

Neko_Ray wrote:

aaaa... neko-mod! :3 Howwww... cute neko! :3

General
I think the green is too bright compared to others. Make it darker

Normal
01:14:863 (1): If you make it more... circular? Done~ Change the shape

Insane
00:23:170 (1): Delete new comboDone~
00:30:555 (1): ^sameDone~
02:06:555 (1): ^Done~

paru paru~

star~

eveless wrote:

[PARUPARU!]
00:33:786 (4) - 这里可以往左下移一点 盡量讓(3)(4)垂直了>_<
00:41:170 (4) - 稍微移动一点让145看起来是等距的 Done
00:44:632 (4) - 没对上前面的 Done
01:59:170 (6) - 这个位置放的不太好o.o...应该间距更大一点 因为你前面1/2的间距也是这样 会让人意识不到这是1/1 位置改到對上01:58:247 (3)

[Normal]
OD-2或者3 AR-1Done

挺不错的

Selee wrote:

Mp3 ._.
丢进文件夹后Full upload
http://puu.sh/13HN

0...0我音樂沒弄好嗎(大驚

取代了

明天来mod ._.

八路八路~~
8嚕~8嚕~(?

IceBeam wrote:

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[Normal]
Source: TouHou? Change to Touhou. Done
Also,Lead-In is different to PARUPARU! difficulty's,fix it. It start on 00:13:940 . the space time is enough and I think it doesn't need Lead-In?

01:07:478 (1) - Finish. Done
01:14:863 (1) - ^ Done
01:22:247 (1) - ^ Done

Could you reduce volume a little? It's too loud to me. Of Course :3 volume -2.0

[PARUPARU!]
00:15:786 (9) - Finish? Done
01:07:478 (1) - ^ Done
01:14:863 (1) - ^ Done
01:22:247 (1) - ^ Done
01:29:632 (1) - ^ Done
01:44:401 (1) - ^ Done
01:55:247 (1,2,3,4) - Distance between (1) & (2) is the same to (3) & (4),but (4) is much closer on timeline.So,if you still want to keep this patten,then you need to point out a new combo at 01:56:401 (3) to show that you use another distance. add new combo that you said^^
01:59:170 (6) - Honestly,same,it'd be better if you place it in some better place,but if you want to keep it here,then start new combo from 01:59:170 (6),and remove from 01:59:632 (1). ^

Nice maps,but I'm not sure if Normal is easy enough,maybe you need to make an easier difficulty. I try to make normal easier...but it still has 3.30star...I will consider to make it^^
Star.

Kite wrote:

lookin good
(Offset 1.037 ~ 1.039 though)

Gcode2 wrote:

Trying to mod ;_;
NORMAL
No problems found



PARUPARU!
00:22:729 (9,10) - New combo to show jump
00:30:113 (9,10) - ^
00:37:960 (1) - Dunno if its important (nothing broken), should you remove the combo?
01:16:960 (6,7,8) - New combo to show jump(s)
01:20:652 (6,7,8) - ^
02:06:113 (9,10) - ^

other than that i see nothing wrong

• Artist: I'm not about this..but is it supposed to be the vocal, Tsubaki?
  
  Tags: Add "Chireiden Subterranean Animism" and "Green-Eyed Jealousy" (original songs) also "crouka" for arrangement?

• 01:16:267 (2) - Clap?
  01:16:960 (4) - Also clap at 1st reverse?
  01:33:344 (2) - Finish?
  01:35:190 (3) - Finish end instead of clap?
  01:36:575 (4) - Clap?
  01:48:113 (2) - Finish?
  01:56:421 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked
  02:10:267 (7) - Finish?
  02:17:652 (6) - ^
  02:25:478 (1) - If you want to follow vocal here..you'd better remove 1 reverse and add a note at 02:26:170..

• 00:15:209 (4) - Clap
  00:22:132 (7) - Remove clap?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Artist: I'm not about this..but is it supposed to be the vocal, Tsubaki? ya...But I think EastNewSound is fit to title at least tsubaki is in tag also I like her voice
  
  Tags: Add "Chireiden Subterranean Animism" and "Green-Eyed Jealousy" (original songs) also "crouka" for arrangement?

Of course

[Normal]

堆叠有些多.. "

• 01:16:267 (2) - Clap? Done
  01:16:960 (4) - Also clap at 1st reverse? Done
  01:33:344 (2) - Finish? Done
  01:35:190 (3) - Finish end instead of clap? Done
  01:36:575 (4) - Clap? Done
  01:48:113 (2) - Finish? Done
  01:56:421 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked overlay it
  02:10:267 (7) - Finish? Done
  02:17:652 (6) - ^ Done
  02:25:478 (1) - If you want to follow vocal here..you'd better remove 1 reverse and add a note at 02:26:170..

Done

[Hard]

• 00:15:209 (4) - Clap Done
  00:22:132 (7) - Remove clap?

Done

总体觉得音效/排版比较乱...挑不出什么重要问题就是了... 正在學習其他mapper的排版>_<

之前收过kds了..这贴就不用给了 不小心點下去了XDD""

wmfchris wrote:

grid = grid lv4

[PARUPARU!]
00:06:113 (4) - left 1 grid Done~
00:07:729 (9) - sound inconsistancy. Put clap like last combo (ending of (9) + clap, (1) remove clap Changed
00:13:960 (1) - down 1 grid Done~
00:20:412 (2) - down 2 grids It looks like down 1grid only under distance snap...whatever...down 2 in advance
00:35:190 (2) - left 1 grid Done~
01:36:460 (6) - remove clap Done~
02:27:575 (6) - not sure...NC here and remove NC on next (1)? Chaged.I think it's fitter when playing tag coop

[Normal]
00:35:190 (2) - stack on (5)? Done~
pretty good Thanks^^

-> Room for improvement about the consistancy of hitsound :3

star~

Leorda wrote:

Ni hao

General
1) Please crop the SB elements pleasecut them
2) You need a default custom number (default-0, default-comma, etc.) Otherwise, when the player using a default custom number, they thought that numbers are missing OK Add ,also thx the knowledge~
3) You didn't realize that comboburst are cut off? http://puu.sh/150a Ouch...the canvas I open is not enough
I will fix it in few days x_x
4) Rename the comboburst to "comboburst", since there is no comboburst more than one
OK
Normal
AR +1 <- Looks comfortable or the diff will be uncomfortable Done

00:13:960 (1) - Actually, I don't like spinner that has been silenced. I want to hear spinner D:! OK :3 del the time point 00:15:806 & 00:16:267 within
00:33:806 (6,7) - Remove (7) and add 1 repeating slider at (6) Done
00:41:190 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:02:190 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, this is little inappropriate for normal diff Make some change
01:41:652 (3,4,5,6) - Move to X:200 and Y:236. Look upper-right to know what I mean (Nazi) in fact, I don't know your means>_<""
02:18:113 (1) - Feel odd for me. Why don't you remove this spinner and re-mapped?re-map :3

PARUPARU!
00:04:729 (2) - Low volume seems doesn't belong here.....
00:07:960 (1,2) - ^[/color] ^

PaluPalu! Palupalu for modding and star~

Hushu wrote:

Hii

Normal:
0:23:652 - You should switch around notes for a slider more. e.g 0:31:037 (1,2) could be a slider and the repeat at 0:32:652 dosn't have to be there, there can be a circle where it ends instead. Also, I think it is very important to have no more than 4 repeats of same sequance, so I'd like you to use my idea only for green sequance at 0:31:037 and yellow sequence at 0:38:421, so it not so boring~
Good idea Changed~
Also, I think paru paru (0:40:729, 033:344 etc.) should be one circle/repeat less as paru has only 2 syllables (pa and ru) its not pa-ru-u.
just want to make some change :p
0:43:729 - don't repeat, add a circle where the repeat would end. Done~
1:14:652 - Remove to make the melody be more of a flow this part, as here it kinda changes ^^~Done~
1:31:027 - Don't repeat, add a circle where the repeat would end, do same with the rest of there sequences or some of them (as for 4 repeats of same sequence) I think it doesn't fit...maybe remove a repeat and add two notes instead , but I think it is a little hard for normal ... so sorry I change nothing here

As for Paruparu!, I did not found anything except for some different sounds of same melody (paru-paru thingi) recheck if all sound more or less alike in beat placing on same places etc. That does not mean one paru paru can't have more beats than the other paru paru, it just means that you have to put beats where you've put in the other paru paru chourses for a definite. recheck :3

Hope you understand English, sorry if you don't this isn't a big problem :3
Star as the beatmap seems to be worked hard upon~ Thanks^^also thx for your modding~

heatwave95 wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:575 (5) - reduce 1 repeat. No change...Sorry Hope You can forgive
00:23:190 (6) - add a note ~ Done~
00:25:960 (5) - reduce 1 repeat. also no change ...
01:07:960 (2) - spacing~ Done :3
01:37:960 (2,3) - do like this please :3 http://puu.sh/16CB *I'm following the rhythm ~ Done:3
01:45:344 (1,2) - same ~ ^ ^
02:01:960 (5) - reduce one repeat also no change ...
02:24:113 (6) - ^ ^

[Paruparu]
nice :3 Thanks

Go Go a0178042 >>actually I want to change my name because I don't know some signs are allowed when I registered lol
Star from me :3 ~* Thx for modding and star ' ˇ ' receive the kd

madaoB wrote:

（<ゝω・）~☆ Star