Verdisphena wrote:

Hard :

00:32:684 (4) - Add a note? - nah
00:51:540 - Lol - Rofl you said Lol ;D
00:55:397 (3) - Add a note? - nah
00:58:683 (1) - Spacing - k
00:58:969 (2) - ^ - k
00:59:254 (3) - ^ - k
00:59:540 (4) - ^ - k
00:59:826 (5) - ^ - k
01:22:967 (4) - Add a note? - nah
01:27:540 (4) - ^ - nah

Normal :

01:01:262 (3) - Add a note - uhm... no

Easy :

00:58:683 (1) - Remove new combo - k
01:41:683 (1) - ^ - nah
01:47:826 (1) - ^ - nah
01:52:683 (1) - ^ - k

artpiggo wrote:

็Hard

00 42 969 remove new combo nah
01 44 397 ^ nah

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:26:111 (2) - make it longer by 1/2 (next white tick) nah
00:29:254 (3) - make it longer by 3/2 (next 2 white) nah
00:33:826 (3) - make it longer by 1/2 (next white) nah
00:33:826 (3) - ^(next red) nah
00:38:397 (4) - ^(next red) nah
01:24:112 (3) - make it longer by 1/2 (next white tick) nah

-no other thing found

rofl for the dolphin

1. Hum, there is a wallpaper exactly the same as your background, only without the "Click here to play" box. Why not use it?
2. It is not important but I think it's bothersome to have a thread title different than the real title. You or me could fix it.

1. I felt offset was better as 4,098, although I might be a bit rusty. Either way, it is still a big difference and not many people have checked it, so I suggest you to recheck it.

1. The storyboard looks a little primitive... although I won't complain.

1. I don't really like this beatmap... it's pretty sloppy and not consistent. Of course, as far as rankability goes it's fine, but there is a hell lot of room to improve. The inconsistent patterns on this is what make think like this; it's as if you only were blurting out random sliders in random directions. If only you could say you'd remap this, it would be great, but I doubt you'll do that since everyone aims for a rank today.
   
   That said, if you're not going to remap...

1. Overall, it has a fairly better flow, although that doesn't mean it makes it a better beatmap... it basically follows the same pattern as easy, which isn't good.

1. This one is more polished and clean, although the rhythm is iffy at times and it could be a bit more creative. Not bad though.

1. This difficulty looks like it's trying too hard to be hard... and it follows the same 'quality pattern' as the Easy and Normal difficulties. There are too many unnecessary and 'extra' beats that don't fit at all. Really, if you can't create a good hard difficulty you should not try to do one; you don't need a Hard/Insane difficulty for your beatmap. If you think about the score before the beatmap, there's something wrong.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Hum, there is a wallpaper exactly the same as your background, only without the "Click here to play" box. Why not use it? -k
2. It is not important but I think it's bothersome to have a thread title different than the real title. You or me could fix it.-kk will fix it

[Timing]

1. I felt offset was better as 4,098, although I might be a bit rusty. Either way, it is still a big difference and not many people have checked it, so I suggest you to recheck it. -hmm... offset feels and looks ok to me :/

[Storyboarding]

1. The storyboard looks a little primitive... although I won't complain. -it's because the map is old and there was a time i havent played osu! much, but i still want this ranked

{Easy}

1. I don't really like this beatmap... it's pretty sloppy and not consistent. Of course, as far as rankability goes it's fine, but there is a hell lot of room to improve. The inconsistent patterns on this is what make think like this; it's as if you only were blurting out random sliders in random directions. If only you could say you'd remap this, it would be great, but I doubt you'll do that since everyone aims for a rank today.
   
   That said, if you're not going to remap... -well normally i make my maps a lot more sexier, and i dont only want it ranked, i want people to enjoy it. And i think its not THAT bad and you can look at my other maps, they are a lot better. So i hope its ok to you that i dont want to remap the entire thing :/

01:38:669 (3,1,2) - These don't follow the lyrics very well, I suggest you to recheck them. -sry but i think its ok

This is what stood out the most to me, mostly. If I wanted to though, I could tell you many more things (without being necessarily nazi); I just think a remap would fit better.

{Normal}

1. Overall, it has a fairly better flow, although that doesn't mean it makes it a better beatmap... it basically follows the same pattern as easy, which isn't good.

00:45:112 (1) - This is something that struck me as specially odd. You could change this slider around to make it sound better. -looks ok :V

{Hard}

1. This difficulty looks like it's trying too hard to be hard... and it follows the same 'quality pattern' as the Easy and Normal difficulties. There are too many unnecessary and 'extra' beats that don't fit at all. Really, if you can't create a good hard difficulty you should not try to do one; you don't need a Hard/Insane difficulty for your beatmap. If you think about the score before the beatmap, there's something wrong.

01:04:112 (5) - This actually should be 1/4 before. -i dont understand q.q
02:03:540 (5) - Same as above. -^ D:

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I know you will probably hate me for doing all this but before saying anything, reflex about what I just said and think about the situation. Would you really choose over the rank before a good-quality map? Do not forget that a rank doesn't really mean anything; this is just a game after all. -i dont hate you <3

If interested in making a beatmap better, you can take a look at this thread.-don't need it ^^ my other beamapt are a lot better imo

I will keep an eye on this map, don't worry. You can also hit me up if you have any questions or want me to look at this again. -well thank you but if this map rly is so bad i dont rly want to remap it <.<