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Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Vers

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月19日 at 23:22:42

Artist: Satoru Kousaki
Title: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version)
Source: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu
Tags: melancholy sos dan nagato yuki asahina mikuru koizumi itsuki kyon
BPM: 126
Filesize: 18832kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Haruhi's Melancholy (4.93 stars, 237 notes)
  2. Itsuki's Magaare (4.37 stars, 166 notes)
  3. Mikuru's Relaxing Time (2.24 stars, 95 notes)
  4. YUKI.N.exe (5 stars, 329 notes)
Download: Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version)
Download: Satoru Kousaki - Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu (Galge Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd map.
plz download it with the video if possible > < thx!
老實說這張做到我吐血
Last edited by JauiPlaY , edited 21 times in total.
miss_dior
miss_dior
;)
star
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
团长团长团长团长团长团长团长团长团长
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
star@@
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Gomo Psivarh
:D

[Haruhi's Melancholy]

1'25''206 (6,8)这两个好像重叠了?

GOOD!
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
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spinner-circle.png考虑要不要换个，转着头晕- -
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relaxing time

0:13:777（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
0:29:015（2）同上
0:30:920（4）new combo?
0:36:634（2）减少repeat……不容易读出来
0:41:872（1）去掉new combo?
0:42:825（2）new combo？
01:04:253（1）不和前面的123重叠？
01:09:015（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
01:13:777（2）new combo?
01:15:682（3）new combo?
01:24:253（3）减少repeat……不容易读出来
——————
body shop
0:12:349（1,2,3）关掉GD重新排下
0:21:396（4）new combo?
0:31:396（3）new combo?
0:35:206（5）new combo?
0:42:349（1）没重叠好
0:42:587（2）关掉GD重新排下
0:48:063（6）new combo?
0:52:825（3）new combo?
0:58:063（4）关掉GD重新排下
01:02:349（5）new combo?
01:15:444（4）new combo?
——————
melancholy
0:12:825（8）new combo?
0:16:158（9）去掉repeat然后加一个circle在0:16:634
0:26:991（7）重叠在6上面？
0:50:920（1,2）感觉有点不合节奏
0:52:825（3）new combo?
01:08:061（1）不对称，重新画下
——————
exe
这个难度中用点形状比较好看的slider代替单调的弧线会好一些

0:29:730（4,5,6）如果不重叠的话，稍微错开一些
0:31:634（5）new combo?
0:38:063（6）new combo?
0:38:301（1）去掉new combo?
0:51:634（1）去掉new combo?
0:52:349（1）去掉new combo?
0:53:777（2）用1/8节奏的同样长度的repeat听起来会不会更好一点？

后面没做完，做完了我再来看看LOL
wanhyrzh
376 posts
Joined December 2009
wanhyrzh
fight. 8-)
Kamina
101 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamina
Haruhi :)
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
ohi >u<

General
Not really sure about this, but shouldn't the source be "Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuutsu" only? (without chan, I mean)

Mikuru's Relaxing
00:57:110 (2) - hmm add some shape to this slider, like this http://puu.sh/S0P
01:17:349 - instead of this break, add a spinner here (which starts at 01:17:587 and finishes at 01:19:015)

YUKI.N.exe
Approach Rate is too high imo. -1 tick?

That's all. Nice map ^.^
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
I don't see any problems with this map, it plays very well. ~Star
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
我的建议:

[General]


  • Source 是不是应该是 Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu
    对齐一下spinner-circle.png的中心 有点偏了
    建议所有难度最后的转盘都静音掉
    Combo分得有点乱
    最后的Kiai Time在01:34:730停止
    另外视频底下的字幕为什么是简体中文的…
[Mikuru's Relaxing Time]
这个难度里有许多无规律的Whistle 我建议还是把Whistle都加在重音上比较好

  • 00:14:730 (3,1,2,3): 建议Clap只加在1和3上就好了 要不听起来有点乱 其他难度也是
    00:15:206 (1,2,3): Clap和Whistle加在一起感觉不太好 建议去掉Whistle 把它们都加在重音上 与Clap错开
    01:25:206 (3,1,2,3): 同前面
[Itsuki's Magaare]

这个难度要是作为Normal的话有点偏难


[Haruhi's Melancholy]

没什么要说的


[YUKI.N.exe]

这个难度只是有些跳有些突然 幅度有点大 有点让人措手不急哈


不错的图 找不出太多问题 只是Hitsound还要有所改进

☆ STAR ☆
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Mikuru's Relaxing Time: Fine

Itsuki's Magaare: Fine

Haruhi's Melancholy:

01:09:968 (6) - New combo?

YUKI.N.exe:

00:16:158 (1,2,3) - 1 appears out due to stacking...move it right a bit
00:38:301 (1) - Too close to (6), but I think it plays fine anyway

Awesome map. :) *stars*
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
star~
Nice map!
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
YUKI.N.exe
00:19:253 (4) - remove clap
00:49:968 (9,10,11) - sounds bad. Try this :
SPOILER
If you agree, then add clap to the start of (10).
01:01:277 (4) - remove note
01:01:753 (7) - remove note

Other diffs are fine for me. Star
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
General:
Hello
Very cool spinner design :)
Kiai lags at beginning for a lot of Osu! players. Any chance of only one Kiai or making second and third Kiai one Kiai?

Easy:
Very nice...
1:17:587 - Add a note, finish sound.
Breaks shouldn't be so short. Remove?

Itsuki's Magaare:
0:39:015 - Some other hitsound.
1:15:682 - Louder hitsounds
1:27:944 - Possibly a note here

Haruhi's Melancholy
0:16:158 - Half way shorter. Louder hitsounds
1:11:515 - Add a note. Louder hitsounds

YUKI.N.exe
0:37:944 - I don't think this note should exist.
0:39:134 - Add a note, louder hitsounds
0:50:563 - 1/4 earlier or later.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Source: Suzumiya Haruhi-chan no Yuuutsu

Mikuru's Relaxing Time

00:29:015(2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:33:301(3) - ^
00:36:634(6) - ^
00:40:444(2) - remove whistle
00:40:920(3) - add whsitle at the beginning
00:40:920(3) - remove sliderwhistle


Suggestions

00:14:730 (4) - add whistle,remove clap
00:15:682(2) - remove clap

Itsuki's Magaare

What is that?
ITs normal?...if so,i thinik that it should be a little hell for players

Suggestions

01:28:063(x) - add a circle with whistle
01:28:777(4) - del
01:29:968(x) - add a circle with whistle
01:30:682(3) - del

Haruhi's Melancholy

fine

YUKI.N.exe

01:20:325(5) - do not make (5) overlap with (7)

starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

忘记说了。。
skin里缺少了一个spinner-approachcircle
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

网速无能下不了video抱歉。

[General]
难度分布尴尬。第二难度远远超过了第一难度 （为数不少的1/4，跳，等等）。建议补难度
这mp3是本来就这样吗。。。结尾好突兀。。。
复制粘贴不吐你槽了……

[Mikuru...]
两个短break可以都删了。
01:02:825 (1,2,3) - 或许会建议你换个折返slider，毕竟叠的有点多。
01:17:587 - 加音
这个难度的水平不错。

[Itsuki...]
00:30:325 (2) - tick消音掉，这个tick不在音上。
00:43:301 (5) - 感觉上好像该往下点。。？
00:49:968 (6) - 开头和折返去掉whistle

[Haruhi...]
00:30:325 (3) - tick消音掉，这个tick不在音上。
00:50:920 (1,2) - 无关的扯一句。。。饿姐看到这个会开心吧。。。
01:03:063 (4,5) - 个人意见是移动感不要停。
01:16:634 (5) - finish?（可以降点音量）

[YUKI...]
为啥大写。。。
00:31:039 (2) - 就节奏上来讲这个挪前1/4怎样？
00:49:968 (9) - 这个尾clap换到10上。
00:53:777 (2) - 头+finish？
01:17:587 (1) - 这一串试下xxooxxooxoxox？（x=whistle, o=normal）
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Title: 涼宮ハルヒちゃんの憂鬱ギャルゲー版 自行翻译到罗马音吧 ;w; 改完标题记得清理一下.osb再上传、
  2. 这么严重的削波没问题么 这绝对影响身体健康了 OTL 换个好点的音源吧
  3. http://www.rayfile.com/zh-cn/files/da88fbf5-a01f-11de-b57f-0014221b798a/2ca2a849/ 自行转换成192kbps 测offset/timing集体平移什么的就不多说了 还有video offset +_+
  4. 少个spinner-approachcircle.png
[YUKI.N.EXE]:
  1. 00:14:730 (1,1,1,1) - FINISH, 前三个clap移除
  2. 00:16:277 (2,3) - clap
  3. 00:39:730 (2,3,4,5) - 不如老实叠起来
  4. 00:43:539 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  5. 01:34:730 (T) - 加note或者上一个slider加折返... 这里放个finish spinner从01:34:849起结束点不变
  6. 01:34:730 (1) - 好诡异的结末...好的 绝对得换mp3了
[Haruhi's Melancholy]:
  1. 00:14:730 (6) - new combo
  2. 00:14:730 (3) - 全finish 最后留个clap其他移除
  3. 01:01:277 (4) - 移除
  4. 01:34:253 (8) - 加折返 最后放finish spinner延后开始
[Itsuki's Magaare]:
  1. AR+1
  2. 00:14:730 (6,7,8,9) - clap换finish 最后一个起始加finish+clap
  3. 00:41:396 (4) - new combo
  4. 00:47:349 (2,3,4,5) - 一个Normal向diff里有2连...换slider
  5. 00:49:253 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  6. 01:09:968 (5,6,7) - 保持之前的spacing
  7. 01:21:158 (4) - 关grid snap调整下
[Mikuru's Relaxing Time]:
  1. 00:13:777 (3,1,2,3) - ...你懂的 和其他难度同
  2. 01:05:682 (3) - 关grid snap调整下
star
yexiang_old
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Joined February 2011
yexiang_old
:D
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Mikuru's Relaxing Time
HP Drain Rate, Overall Diff and Approach Rate +1

Itsuki Magaare
01:28:063 - Add a note
01:29:968 - ^

Haruhi's Melancholy
Descrease the slider tick rate to 0.5
00:22:691 (7) - This slider's white tick sounds awful
00:30:325 (3) - ^

YUKI.N.exe
Fine~
The slider velocity is too high though
____________________________________
Star~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Sorry for late :?

[Mikuru's Relaxing Time]
00:21:396 (1) remove new combo
00:22:349 (4) new combo
00:50:444 (1) remove new combo
01:17:587 (n) hmm unnecessary this break imo , add something?
example:
[attachment=0:d0fe8]1.jpg[/attachment:d0fe8]
01:31:872 (1) remove new combo

[Itsuki's Magaare]
Other modders are pointing out that all I want to say.

[Haruhi's Melancholy]
00:12:825 (8) new combo
00:13:539 (1) remove new combo

[YUKI.N.EXE]
fine
The slider velocity is too high though XD

overall , nice map!
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[YUKI.N.exe]
00:15:206 (1) - remove clap?
00:50:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - should be 4 in a group, so NC for every 4 notes, not 3

[Haruhi's]
00:37:349 (8) - left+up 1 grid

I don't find other problem, nice map, star~
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
[General]
mp3 seems to of a bad quality. Consider replacing it with a better one.

01:36:634 - this timing section. How about muting it completely on all diffs? Player will hear the dings of every 1000 he gets, but he won't hear the finish since the music stops and I think that it's not needed.

Map itself looks good, everything looks fine to me.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Overall:
Oh I beg you to please change the mp3.
Here's one I encoded for you --> http://www.mediafire.com/?pv2q598p63wd1p0
For offset I find 9083. (You may have a better one.)

If you decide to change the mp3 please do so!
Or if not, please reply too.
I'll continue modding until then.

PS. Do NOT give kudosu yet.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
把新的mp3档改成原来名字扔进去 然后所有的section都offset+137ms (new offset: 7248)

存档然后打开每个.osu 找到以下行

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"02.avi"

把Video后面的0改成137

你说的什么游戏内音效什么的完全不清楚什么意思 +_+ 这歌根本不用切

以及之后看完一条mod之后改完上传之后再给kds 最好再在回帖里说明下那里有改动哪里没有哪里不明白 一般的modder都会做recheck

这帖子不用给kds了
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