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ZUN - Hartmann's Youkai Girl

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Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年2月27日 at 17:42:44

Artist: ZUN
Title: Hartmann's Youkai Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: Koishi Komeiji TH11 Subterranean Animism Weiren Nivalis
BPM: 166.2
Filesize: 4679kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Harvisp (4.91 stars, 322 notes)
  2. Ipvarsh (5 stars, 469 notes)
  3. Nivalis (4.38 stars, 195 notes)
  4. wEiren (2.8 stars, 131 notes)
Download: ZUN - Hartmann's Youkai Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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東方地霊殿EX面 古明地こいしのテーマ「ハルトマンの妖怪少女」
Komeiji Koishi's theme in extra stage of Touhou 11: Subterranean Animism

STAFF
[wEiren] --- Weiren
[Nivalis] --- Nivalis
[Harvisp], [Ipvarsh], SB --- Gomo Psivarh
Special thanks to all modders...and YOU!
Last edited by Gomo Psivarh , edited 80 times in total.
gto461013
gto461013
great :D
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
SPOILER

去尼玛的水果不难
less than 2miss are PRO :?
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Timing:

Time Signature | BPM | Offset
    7/4     | 166.20 |  186 
    7/4     | 166.00 |  10,299 
    4/4     | 168.00 |  20,439  
    7/4     | 158.50 |  31,883 
    7/4     | 161.25 |  39,832 
    7/4     | 166.50 |  42,428
    7/4     | 167.00 |  52,512
    4/4     | 168.00 |  62,571 
    4/4     | 162.00 |  72,571
    4/4     | 163.00 |  85,904
    4/4     | 165.00 |  97,683
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
:D
Lost Magic
23 posts
Joined January 2010
Lost Magic
开了Nofail玩了这图觉得我也该试着做个TAG。。。。嘛，沙包只能拜拜神触
SPOILER
啥时做个曲奇都只能D的图这游戏就太平了。。。开玩笑的
rustbell
483 posts
Joined January 2010
rustbell

Lybydose wrote:

Timing:

Time Signature | BPM | Offset
    7/4     | 166.20 |  186 
    7/4     | 166.00 |  10,299 
    4/4     | 168.00 |  20,439  
    7/4     | 158.50 |  31,883 
    7/4     | 161.25 |  39,832 
    7/4     | 166.50 |  42,428
    7/4     | 167.00 |  52,512
    4/4     | 168.00 |  62,571 
    4/4     | 162.00 |  72,571
    4/4     | 163.00 |  85,904
    4/4     | 165.00 |  97,683
PROOOOOOOOO

star btw.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
:3...搞毛你怎么也做东方...
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
技术宅……
nante
248 posts
Joined December 2009
nante
[General]
Cut mp3 file.

[Neriew]
Approach rate and Overall difficulty +1
00:23:117 (5,1,1,1) - unstack, it's too hard for the easiest diff
01:31:701 (1) - start it either on white or red thick. Personally I'd add a note 01:31:609 (6) and moved slider to 01:31:793 (1)
01:53:683 (3,4,5,6,1) - place it better, it doesn't look nice

[Impvarsh]
00:44:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - It may be cuz I'm not a good player, but there's just no way I can read this


nice, star
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
神SB
SIRIRU可能会表示压力很大
Kochiya Sanae
179 posts
Joined June 2010
Kochiya Sanae
弹幕.. :?
这SC超难啊
Shiranui Okami
23 posts
Joined July 2010
Shiranui Okami
star

osu玩的是快乐
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
神弹幕X_X
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
[General]
Map whole song, or crop unused part.

also

For all difficulties turn on epilepsy warning



[Ipvrash]

01:44:410 (7) - 1 Grid Left / 2 Grids up

01:45:682 (4,5,6,7) - See spoilerbox

SPOILER

Star for a good mapset.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod request via in-game PM

[Ipvarsh]
-> Almost of the entire song is mapped in 1.5... Why not just use (2.00*1.5) = 3.00 slider velocity instead xD
00:30:438 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate them a bit to beautify the map?
SPOILER
Also those current sliders' end doesn't perfectly stacked in the center.
00:56:643 (11,12) - One grid up? Also (12)'s curve is ugly, perhaps create something like this:
SPOILER
01:12:571 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:30:438

[Harvisp]
00:02:532 (7,1) - Change into 1/4 repeating slider maybe? (also apply to next patterns like this)
00:55:564 (3) - Curve this encircling (2)?
01:06:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So hard to read o.o

[weireN]
-> Due to the song's weird timing, maybe increase approach rate? Current approach rate is so confusing to read xD
-> Why stack leniency is different with other diffs?
00:12:829 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack maybe? Looks weird in play mode xD
00:23:296 (1,1,1) - I personally didn't like the new combo spam here, but you don't have to change it.
00:56:104 (1) - 1 grid down?
01:06:142 (1,1,1,1) - Another new combo spam, but this is much better than the previous one.
01:36:946 (3) - Copy-paste from (1), flip horizontal, and press Ctrl+R (Reverse Selection)
01:55:137 (1,2) - So hard to tell there's delay between these two notes...

Mostly suggestions, I can't find anything truly wrong.
Star! (:

Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
Thanks for modding :)

To nante:
done.

To Xeno32:
01:44:410 (7) - 1 Grid Left / 2 Grids up
done
01:45:682 (4,5,6,7) - See spoilerbox
I think it's better not change it :(

Nivalis wrote:

-> Almost of the entire song is mapped in 1.5... Why not just use (2.00*1.5) = 3.00 slider velocity instead xD
When I realized it I have already completed the map... And change the slider velocity will slightly change the length of some slider :(
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Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
By Mod Request:


General
Add epilepsy warning?
Shorten the mp3.

[Ipvarsh]
00:11:564 (10) - new combo
00:14:094 (10) - ^
00:16:624 (9) - ^
00:43:689 (8) - ^
00:46:211 (8) - ^
00:48:734 (8) - ^
00:51:256 (8) - ^
00:58:799 (9) - ^
00:59:877 (15) - spacing
01:01:314 (7) - new combo (there was another formation like this but i forgot to put it in the mod)


Star..!!
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
weireN
01:51:501 (3) - Remove whistle and add finish
01:53:683 (3) - New combo

Harvisp
01:47:510 (6,7,8) - Move this further from (5)
02:00:288 (5) - Adding a spinner with a finish here would be better to me
Not Much Errors but it is hard to differ the rhythm from the blue notes and the red notes because there are jumps with 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes.

Ipvarsh
Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty -1
00:19:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too confusing. Place 1,2,3,4,5 in one place and 6,7,8,9,10 somewhere nearer to 1,2,3,4,5
01:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here ^
This beatmap is way too overmapped :?
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artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Hard
00 42 968 maybe be this pattern

00 45 671

00 48 283 same^
00 50 806 ^
01 01 134 new combo here

normal is no problem
star!
Kyonko Hizara
2,855 posts
Joined August 2010
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

-- Red Time line in 00:39:832 seems use less.. Delete it.

weiren:

01:11:142 (1,3) : Add Finish

Harvisp:

01:44:046 (x) : Add note in the place of (1)

Ipvarsh:

-- According to my background information, we should make Green time lines in the Red time lines.. (Not sure)

01:55:046 (5) : Consider deleting..

Nice ^^
Star~
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
Ipvarsh
00:19:696 (6) - new combo
01:01:853 (6) - new combo
01:08:106 (5) - new combo
01:08:285 (1) - 去掉new combo
01:08:999 (5) - new combo
01:10:428 (5) - new combo
01:31:609 (8) - ^
01:31:793 (1) - 你懂的
01:40:046 (4) - new combo...
01:40:592 (1) - 去掉new combo
01:45:682 (4) - new combo...
01:54:773 (4,5,1) - 這是什麽...SPACE= = 建議你去掉5
你可以考慮AR+1 會變得非常鬼畜 打起來嘛...看個人了 我覺得AR9還行...至少按你這排列 讀起來方便些
Harvisp
AR+2...不是每個人都開HR的 還是調到合適的AR吧
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
General:
You don't need the timing selection at 00:39:832 because there's nothing there until the new timing selection.
00:31:883 may however be needed for the spinnder.
I'm not sure.. It could be good to have the timing selections there if you're listening to the beat and following the rhythm from the menu screen. Other than that. I find it useless.

Cut the mp3 at 02:11:137 and make it fade out from 02:01:319 to 02:11:137

Use a black background behind your own background and storyboard.

Amazing work with the storyboard! BRAVO! :D

weireN:
Pretty much perfect. There's nothing I see that I would like you to change.

Harvisp:
Finishes at:
  • 00:00:186
    00:02:713
    00:05:240
    00:07:767
    00:10:299
    00:12:829
    00:15:359
    00:17:889
    00:20:439
    00:29:010
    00:30:438
    00:42:428
    00:44:950
    00:47:473
    00:49:995
    00:52:512
    00:55:026
    00:57:541
    01:00:056
    01:02:571
    01:11:142
    01:12:571
    01:13:311
    01:36:946
    01:37:683
    01:42:046
    01:47:137
    01:49:319
    01:52:228
    01:52:955
    01:53:683
    01:54:046
    01:54:410
    01:55:137
    01:58:046
    01:58:592
    01:59:319
    01:59:501
    01:59:864
    02:00:228
There might be some missing or some too many at one place. But I'm sure you notice that yourself.
That's about it for that difficulty. It's pretty perfect for my eyes and ears. :D

Ipvarsh:
OH YEAH! This looks awesome! :D
Make it so it rarely stacks. I don't like the 3D shape of the beatmap. So making it flat would make it look a lot cooler. :D

It doesn't seem like you are using finishes as much as I would like so just take the finishes above and place them exactly like the last diff.

Good luck getting this ranked, I can't wait to play it again! :D
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Kawachino Yumi
47 posts
Joined September 2008
Kawachino Yumi
SB看得晕乎乎的..
Muscipular
64 posts
Joined February 2010
Muscipular
神弹幕
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
后面兩個難度看得我眼花繚亂@_@我還是只對偉人的難度提些建議好了

這張圖間距稍顯小,如果只是circle什麼的倒還好說,但碰到例如00:16:082(2,3)這種地方就會顯得很擠
如果可能的話,調整一下這些地方
00:23:117(5,1) - 新人很可能會因為這個1分的
01:05:249(4,5) - 遮了點
01:34:738(1,2) - ^
01:41:137(4,5,6) - ^
01:44:955(3,4,5,1) - 把這幾個東西展開點吧
嘛...都僅僅是些建議
另外這個圖算normal還是easy?這個最簡單的難度在很多新人看來肯定還是很難很難很難的

另外SB太高端了...犀利擼看到都要自愧不如了._.

so
star~
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
Thanks for mod and stars :)

To chamelepeace710:
new combos set.

To DragonSparta:
some are fixed. However I think Ipvarsh is ok.

To artpiggo:
That pattern sounds weird :( I won't change it. New combo done.

To sonnyc:
done.

To soulfear:
done. H还是不加2了...不然HR基本没法打...

To theowest:
some finishes are add. use a black background will waste the SB load so it's may not a good idea.
BTW using rarely stacks makes the map weird. :(

To JauiPlaY:
done.
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
Harvisp
AR+2 不能接受就+1吧 nomod 轻松点 hr后不太难.

P.S. 那NB的SB真的让我SB了

;) star.
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Hello there!! :)

Harvisp:
Mm... everything is done well except for the fact that there is not a single beat in this song on a blue snap. I seen why you've done that this way thou... so I'll leave it at that.

Ipvarsh:
- The only thing which I don't like (but like above, it is probably okay anyways) that after the break before the Kiai Time you fallowed background beat of the song which you havn't really fallowed before, and this only starts to happen during the 4th Combo, I think it's quite confusing. It does seem like a relax time before kiai but I take that oddly as there was a break a few seconds ago. No one will probably poke at this thou.
- Most of the design is fine, but there are many straight sliders. Those should not accour especially in Kiai Time. eg. 1:53:683, do like 4 wobbly ones, half shorter, like in Nivalis's second spoiler going from center and then reverse. Yet yes, I did read that you won't change it so again just talking to my self!


Star! Sorry, I was not helpful and that I am sure of, but the map is already very fine! Star! Good luck!
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Gomo Psivarh
TY for mod :)

DarkRingSystem wrote:

Harvisp
AR+2 不能接受就+1吧 nomod 轻松点 hr后不太难.
AR+1. :D

Hushu wrote:

Ipvarsh:
- The only thing which I don't like (but like above, it is probably okay anyways) that after the break before the Kiai Time you fallowed background beat of the song which you havn't really fallowed before, and this only starts to happen during the 4th Combo, I think it's quite confusing. It does seem like a relax time before kiai but I take that oddly as there was a break a few seconds ago. No one will probably poke at this thou.
Sorry due to my poor eng, I don't get it :(
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
weireN:
00:18:973 - add a circle here
01:05:785 - delete a circle here?
01:38:410 - add a circle

Harvisp:
Can't say anything about it :) Nice SB by the way :)

Ipvarsh:
Why did you use here 'beat snap divisor' on - 1/8?
00:10:886 - 00:11:247 - I think it will be better to chnage this moment,because it doesn't look good :/
00:13:416 - 00:13:777 - better to change it too
00:15:901 - 00:16:308 - ^
01:43:183 - 01:43:546 - ^
01:48:955 - 01:49:319 - ^
01:58:455 - these 3 circles don't look good. Better to put them in other position
01:59:183 - 01:59:501 - Change this moment too
Crazy difficulty,by the way xD

Star!
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