6/10. While it's nice, poems only remind me of the horrors that is my high school English classes, and the mountains of Carol Ann Duffy stuff I had to analyse...
A little standard for a vent in your signature. bbcode is visible for some reason and doesn't seem to work as it was intended to in the old site. it's alright, though.
Try to find better ways to compress and condense what you mean to say in just a few lines of words, as mine was done. I mean-- you don't have to do it the way I did it, but... I dunno. I like short poems with some meaning to them.
ot: 6.5/10. better than nothing, but if you were gonna put a gif, at least some gfx could have helped. pretty sure there's some yt vids on gfx editing if you don't know how.