James2250 wrote:

Saten-san's Hard:
00:19:299 (1) - sounds odd where it ends at the moment to me

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
Slight overuse of finish and the hitsounds could use some work in general but that isn't my strong point Going to fix this as time moves along
OD + 1 as it doesn't need to be the lowest, I also suggest hp -1
00:03:950 (1,2,3,4) - continue whistle pattern?
00:06:741 (1) - extend to red tick
00:14:415 (2) - add whistle
00:25:578 (2) - ^
01:01:857 (4) - add note

Normal:
01:13:020 (5,6,7) - I wouldn't use all finishes here, they don't fit
Otherwise seems fine

Saten-san's Hard:
00:19:299 (1) - sounds odd where it ends at the moment to me

Insane:
00:03:427 (3) - add note?
00:30:636 (1) - start at 00:30:462
00:41:974 (3,4) - don't have a jump here, it doesn't fit the song enough and will confuse players
00:48:950 (5,6) - ^
00:52:090 (3,1) - spread out more
00:53:485 (7,1) - ^
01:11:276 (3,4) - don't have jump here

Not bad
Have a star~

Lunah wrote:

hai there

Insane

00:52:613 (2) - 1 grid right
00:52:787 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same

Really nice, goodluck on rank



(btw i think i'm going to watch this anime :-D)

chamelepeace710 wrote:

When i was looking at the beatmap, i found myself looking at the video instead of the beats..... Haha, me..

By mod request:

Normal
00:33:253 (3) - 1 grid down

Insane
00:03:950 (1) - 1 grid down
00:26:799 (7) - whistle nope
00:42:846 (8) - clap? nope again

meh, a little nazi and optional...... eh, either way, you get a star!

IceBeam wrote:

[Hard]
00:22:090 (1) - Finish. added
00:33:253 (5) - ^ kinda

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:33:253 (2) - Finish.
01:09:880 - Clap?

[Normal]
00:33:253 (3) - Finish.
00:56:973 - ^

[Hard]
00:22:090 (1) - Finish.
00:33:253 (5) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:927 (5) - Finish?
00:33:253 (5) - ^
00:45:811 (3) - ^
00:56:974 (3) - ^

Nice map.
Star~

SapphireGhost wrote:

Keep all the breaks the same? But other than that, star. I liked the flow, but the approach rate/circle size was tricky on Insane

ziin wrote:

sorry for my last mod, I'll be better this time. What you talking about :O loved that mod just hard to understand....I should really finish that map though >w<

[easy]
good
[normal]
00:36:043 (1-3) I don't think there's ever a good reason to stack sliders like this. Fixed
[hard]
good
[insane]
00:37:962 (4) if double time sliders are manageable, I think they're fun and somewhere in here would be a good place to put them. Seems fine as it is now
00:42:497 (6) clap on next beat Done
the whole map could be a little more spread out, but I understand that requires too much work. Should have seen it before >w<

[general]
can you get a better video? the one you currently have is stretched to oblivion (720x480=3:2, ideally you want 16:9). I'd be happy to make you one if you're no good at video, or tell you how I usually do it.
Since I'm pretty lazy you mind doing it :/
star~
good map

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Saten-san's Hard]
So insane XD Lol, I suspected it
HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -1
Circle Size -1 ?

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Hi.

[Easy]
Overall Difficulty +1 (or +2?)
Approach Rate +1
00:01:160 (1,2,3) - Too many repetition of this pattern (beat, beat, slider). I suggest to try something else in some parts.
01:11:973 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I suggest to redone this because it's a bit plain. Main word is suggestion, keeping it as it is
Here is an example:

SPOILER

[img]http://i52.tinypic.com/25pmgap.jpg

[/img]


[Normal]
00:38:834 (1) - Spacing.


[Saten-san's Hard]
So insane XD
HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -1
Circle Size -1 ?


[Insane]
Nothing to state.

Nice beatmap
Star~

mekadon wrote:

[Drah]
00:26:799 (9) - 0.5x but whatever feels kinda unnecessary though

Haneii wrote:

~General~
01:10:927 - end kiai time here in all difficulties (right now its a couple of ms off) A bit picky aren't we


~Don't be shy! hokorshiku....er, i mean, Twinkle twinkle little star~

Haneii wrote:

~General~
01:10:927 - end kiai time here in all difficulties (right now its a couple of ms off)
@Weezy if you're changing it, change in on mine too :3

~Saten-san's Hard~
00:10:927 (1) - finish
00:22:090 (1) - ^
00:33:253 (5) - ^ ( remove the finish at the end of the slider)


~Don't be shy! hokorshiku....er, i mean, Twinkle twinkle little star~

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz

[Saten-san's Hard]
00:11:799 (4) - New Combo

H-boy wrote:

Saten-san's Hard

00:03:776(6) - del
if you del the note which is placed at 00:03:776,
then,00:03:950

SPOILER

^Alright then~
01:00:985(8) - move to next white line(01:01:160) I think it would be confusing

H-boy wrote:

tags :use lowercase letter is better
Im writing "Saten-san" the proper way

Easy
nice~

01:13:718(1) - move 1 grid down(lv3)

Normal
nice~

suggestions
00:07:787(x) - add a slider(start at 00:07:787 finish at 00:07:962)
00:14:590(x) - add a circle
00:50:694(2) - remove clap and add a whistle hitsound
01:00:636(x) - add a circle
Stuff for normal, not done

Insane

00:03:340(2) - remove clap

star

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+8 done
countdown is enabled in Satan-san's Hard, i guess you should disable it? disabled :3

[Saten-San's Hard]
AR+1/+2 plz. and maybe HP-1 OD+1 AR+1 OD+1 but HPD stays
00:44:241 (2) - change to a reversed 1/2 slider? (fit the vocal better) done
00:54:881 (3,4,5,6) - stack 3&4, 5&6 is better than current back and forth notes. ok
01:08:834 (4) - remove, then add a note at 01:09:183 added a note at 01:09:183 but didn't remove the (4)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+8
countdown is enabled in Satan-san's Hard, i guess you should disable it?
Done

[Easy]
00:41:625 (1) - end 1/1 earlier?
01:01:857 (4) - in a Easy i suggest not to stack it ... maybe a triangle with 2's end & 3?
Done

[Normal]
00:06:741 (5) - finish at the end?
00:34:648 (5,6) - use a slider instead? since the vocal in 5 is a long one.
00:45:113 (1,2) - switch whistle? Nope
00:56:276 (1) - whistle at the beginning?
01:09:532 (4) - 1 grid right nazi.

Done


[Insane]
a feeling about the whole diff : some of the places should be add more notes to fill the blank... it's Insane, and you don't need to follow the vocal all the time. example: 00:12:846 (6,1).
00:48:776 (4,5,6,7) - nazi.Done
00:51:043 (5) - ^ Nope
00:52:962 (4,6) - remove clap
try to use more patterns next time, not bad though._.

Xeno32 wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:939 (4,5,6) - ( stack on 00:28:369 (2) - ) Nope
00:36:741 (3) - Two grids left.
00:46:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Up one grid =p Nope
00:50:520 (2,3,4) - Add claps. Nope
00:56:974 (3) - 1 Grid right
01:10:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - down 1 grid Changed it something different

01:10:753 (6,1) - Also, retarded spacing, broke my combo here. < Keep it difficulty consistent please. if you gonna use retarded spacing, do so from the start to end, NOT just the end. If you catch my drift Plus its damn annoying breaking combo's at end of the song, due to bad mapping.
HaHaHa I'm am NOT changing this, if you can't do it tough luck, seems fine to me and no one else said anything about it too.

00:13:543 (4,1) - This was still readable and fun to play. but above, isn't. Please fix this.

[Normal]
00:54:191 (1,1) - Really hard for an normal. No it isn't, had something like that on my ranked map

[Easy]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49531

Try this maybe. A little less confusing. ( Just nitpicking here ) Nope

Star for a good mapset.

Mianki wrote:

Saten's Hard:

00:22:447 (2-8) Looks a bit ugly pattern. Move (5,6) 1 grid up and right, then (7) 2 grids right, then (8) 3 grids right and 1 up?

• Because you have a video, I suggest to disable the letterbox during break. (Seems that only in [Insane] it is disabled...)
  
  Offset: +5ms
  
  Timing of [Insane] is different from other diffs.

• 00:03:958 (1) - Whistle?

• 00:02:912 (4) - whistle?
  00:26:807 (5) - Finish end?
  00:30:644 (1) - Finish or slienced end?
  00:38:493 (4) - Clap?
  00:41:633 (1) - Finish for the vocal end?
  00:50:702 (2) - Remove clap?
  00:52:447 (2,4) - Clap?
  00:54:191 (1) - Finish?

• 00:37:970 (4) - Clap end instead of whistle?
  00:53:493 (5) - Clap end?
  00:55:412 (6) - Finish instead of clap?
  01:01:516 (1) - Finish begin?
  01:07:447 (1) - ^
  01:13:464 (1) - Silence or fade this spinner?

• 00:35:694 (7) - Intentional no clap? But I really feel better to have a clap here...
  00:37:962 (4) - Clap end?
  00:53:978 (X) - add a note here for vocal?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Because you have a video, I suggest to disable the letterbox during break. (Seems that only in [Insane] it is disabled...)
  
  Offset: +5ms Maybe +4, but I'll see what Weezy thinks :3
  
  [Saten-san's Hard]
  
  Hmm, reduce the volume of normal-hitsound part for 10%? The claps sound a little bit loud to me... If you say so..
  
  [list:e6d98]00:37:970 (4) - Clap end instead of whistle?
  00:53:493 (5) - Clap end? was half against it but I'll go with it
  00:55:412 (6) - Finish instead of clap? done
  01:01:516 (1) - Finish begin? done
  01:07:447 (1) - ^ ^
  01:13:464 (1) - Silence or fade this spinner? It's already

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Because you have a video, I suggest to disable the letterbox during break. (Seems that only in [Insane] it is disabled...) Done
  
  Offset: +5ms Changed it soo much time I'm not touching it anymore >w< and whats 5ms gonna do :/
  
  Timing of [Insane] is different from other diffs.

Opps forgot to fix

Sigh, I can't help much since you've received so many mods...Just some suggestions~

[Easy]

• 00:03:958 (1) - Whistle?

[Normal]

• 00:02:912 (4) - whistle?
  00:26:807 (5) - Finish end?
  00:30:644 (1) - Finish or slienced end?
  00:38:493 (4) - Clap?
  00:41:633 (1) - Finish for the vocal end?
  00:50:702 (2) - Remove clap?
  00:52:447 (2,4) - Clap?
  00:54:191 (1) - Finish?

[Insane]

• 00:35:694 (7) - Intentional no clap? But I really feel better to have a clap here...
  00:37:962 (4) - Clap end?
  00:53:978 (X) - add a note here for vocal?

Star~

Saten-san wrote:

it seems like the changes I made from Selee's mod is gone >.<

00:53:493 (5) - Clap end?
00:55:412 (6) - Finish instead of clap?
01:01:516 (1) - Finish begin?
01:07:447 (1) - ^

ziin wrote:

Sorry for the delay in video.

http://www.mediafire.com/?d4f8ihbzqgjsr1r

the source file I got was being really stupid, so I had to do some things I'm not proud of. However the end result is much better than I expected. Apparently lossy transformations don't really have that much affect on videos if you are going to resize it later. Hope you enjoy. There's a 7 MB (what I think all osu videos should be at or around) and 9.5 MB (bitrate 1027, same as yours) file.

Weezy wrote:

ziin wrote:

I had to do some things I'm not proud of

theowest wrote:

oh btw.. you made me very horny because of this beatmap.. x''D I'm gonna start watching it!

theowest wrote:

[General]
Very good!

In Easy, Normal and Insane you use this pattern:

SPOILER

It's how we all start off making our beatmaps really. Most first beatmaps looks like that. But when we get better and learn more, they start to look more like this: (Sorry if I'm wrong.. I just wanna help make it look better y'know.)

SPOILER

It's a pattern you all should be following, it's fun, creative and cool!

[Easy]
Looks okay really. Nothing I would like you to change except the placing of the beats and how they look like. Place them like above.

Normal

Same as easy. Nothing I would like you to change except the placing of the beats and how they look like. Place them like above.

[Saten San's Hard]

Does a great job by following this new cooler pattern. As you can see it look a lot more creative and professional.

[Insane]

Just like all the others. Do what I've told you on the easy and normal diff. Do it! And then you'll start being happy!
For insane you should be having grid level 5. It's best for being most precise.
It does however look very good and promising in insane. Great work!

Please ask me any questions if you have any!

Star~!

oh btw.. you made me very horny because of this beatmap.. x''D I'm gonna start watching it!

>_> emm nope pattern is fine thats all to your preference and this is suppose to be how I want it to look (saten-san for her diff) not what you want.
there is no such thing as to making it "professional"

Saten-san wrote:

theowest wrote:

oh btw.. you made me very horny because of this beatmap.. x''D I'm gonna start watching it!

LOL wut?

YGOkid8 wrote:

IRC modded

leaving comments and stuff

1) saten-san's diff, i would've liked to see not purely mapped to vocals :/
2) didn't mod insane

Weezy wrote:

-found something really bad in the video so gonna changed that >w<

Weezy wrote:

theowest wrote:

[General]
Very good!

In Easy, Normal and Insane you use this pattern:

SPOILER

It's how we all start off making our beatmaps really. Most first beatmaps looks like that. But when we get better and learn more, they start to look more like this: (Sorry if I'm wrong.. I just wanna help make it look better y'know.)

SPOILER

It's a pattern you all should be following, it's fun, creative and cool!

[Easy]
Looks okay really. Nothing I would like you to change except the placing of the beats and how they look like. Place them like above.

Normal

Same as easy. Nothing I would like you to change except the placing of the beats and how they look like. Place them like above.

[Saten San's Hard]

Does a great job by following this new cooler pattern. As you can see it look a lot more creative and professional.

[Insane]

Just like all the others. Do what I've told you on the easy and normal diff. Do it! And then you'll start being happy!
For insane you should be having grid level 5. It's best for being most precise.
It does however look very good and promising in insane. Great work!

Please ask me any questions if you have any!

Star~!

oh btw.. you made me very horny because of this beatmap.. x''D I'm gonna start watching it!

>_> emm nope pattern is fine thats all to your preference and this is suppose to be how I want it to look (saten-san for her diff) not what you want.
there is no such thing as to making it "professional"

ziin wrote:

I think the patterns in insane are fine. I guess I'm not good enough to understand what's boring. This has changed a little since I last modded.

[insane]
00:10:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - HOLY FUCKBALLS. this is outrageously hard compared to the rest of the song. 1.5 spacing or something?
Fixed
00:14:423 (1) - I miss this almost every time because it's a jump on a beat which isn't in the lyrics. I honestly don't even feel the jump here.
Fixed
00:17:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess I should be thankful only the beginning is batshit insane hard/confusing.
I can get these 3 if I practice enough, but I don't think I should have to when the rest of the song isn't this crazy.
00:45:121 (1,2,3) and 00:56:284 (1,2,3) - if you keep the 3 before this, make later jumps like here harder. 1.37x is child's play to 2.0-2.3x
In general, I think a 1.5 spacing for the jumps would be a lot more manageable. Or just make them harder and make the beginning easier.
What :/

[easy/normal]
he has a bit of a point here, but so do you. If they are good maps for CTB (I imagine you would know) then it's even more of a reason to keep them the way they are.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Saten-san
AR +1
Plays better for me this way. If you say so..
00:48:609 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda weird arrangement... Yeah, now when you say it, it does look kinda weird >.< Fixed
Nothin' else to say here.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

o hi~

here goes a useless mod. 'cus I can't really find anything wrong.

Insane
00:27:679 (1,1,2,3) - center is OK, but I'd stack 00:27:679 (1) - under the start of 00:26:807 (8) - and align the other beats to that.
00:28:028 (1) - remove NC?
00:37:795 (3,4) - don't like the overlap
Done all for Insane

Normal
Boring.

Boring but fine

Easy
This is a really easy Easy. Can need MUCH more notes.
00:05:702
00:14:074
00:18:261
and so on etc.
Notes were there but it was deemed to hard for an Easy so nope

The star is for Insane and Hard. Not for Easy + Normal.

vincerio wrote:

hello~
[General]

don't forget .OSB file and then do full-submitting
Tag : opening
open .osu in notepad...
audio lead-in: 1000(now 1004 in all diff)
Done

[Easy]
00:30:644 - break like this is not good... turn it into spinner or something... Done

[Normal]
00:03:261(5,6) - seperate (6) from slider end Nope
00:59:772(3) - a bit weird(follow vocal but broke ur own rhythm)?xD how about end slider at 01:00:121 (white tick) and then make it repeat once ( you can continue you pattern of hitsound with this one)
Done

[Insane] add finish hitsound on really heavy beat note...( the way you do... some of them did not ) or change it in to soft-finish hitsound ... sounds better...
00:36:051(1,2,3,4) - bad jump here... keep them with the same distance spacing (1->2 =/= 3->4) -> bad
Fixed
01:03:958 - start at 01:03:871 Nope


nice~
good luck~

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Easy]

AR -1 Making it -1 makes it even more plain :S

00:19:656 - A break here? A break is here :S

Plain. But it's an Easy so... Nothing to worry.

[Normal]

00:19:307 - A break here? Again a break is here :S

0,7x is a little bit slow for a slider speed in a Normal. How 'bout increase 0,2x? Been said before, im not changing now


[Saten-san's Hard]

For an Insane, is fair good. Not for a Hard.
I can pass and I suck so seems fine to me (looks a saten-san)



[Insane]

00:08:319 (3) - Odd...
00:09:540 (1,2,3) - ^
Emm nope
---------------------------------------------------------

Fair good. Take a star.

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Saten-san's Hard]

For an Insane, is fair good. Not for a Hard. I dunno what to say but it seems fine to me >.<

AR -1 I just increased it with +1
SliderSpeed -0,3x (After that, you'll have to check the distance snapping of ALL notes and the slider lengths)

After all, the Insane use 1,40x of slider speed.

winber1 wrote:

Saten-san's Hard

01:13:464 - delete 4 of the five green timing sections
i have nothing else to say. nice level.

1. tags: Hikasa Youko Satou Satomi Yahagi Sayori

1. 00:10:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - crazy spacing, keep x1.0 plz
2. 00:27:679 (1,1) - 1 grid up

1. AR 8 is preferred
2. 01:05:005 (T) - 1 note here?
3. 01:07:098 (T) - ^
4. 01:13:464 (1) - suggest the same ending way as other diffs, I mean 1 note at 01:13:726 with finish.

1. slidertickrate = 1.0

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. tags: Hikasa Youko Satou Satomi Yahagi Sayori

[Insane]:

1. 00:10:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - crazy spacing, keep x1.0 plz
2. 00:27:679 (1,1) - 1 grid up

[Easy]:

1. slidertickrate = 1.0

that's it :3

Colin Hou wrote:

[Saten-san's Hard]:

1. AR 8 is preferred this is the last time I change it :3
2. 01:05:005 (T) - 1 note here? kay~
3. 01:07:098 (T) - ^ done :3
4. 01:13:464 (1) - suggest the same ending way as other diffs, I mean 1 note at 01:13:726 with finish. If you say so

orioncomet wrote:

[Insane]
00:28:551 (3,4,5) - -A-! fix spacing a bit please.. hard to read >_<!

nice song ^_^!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Saten-san's Hard]

Normal hitsounds volume is really too quiet. Increase the vole of them, please.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

00:30:819 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an Easy.

[Normal]

00:03:609 (6,1) - Not a fan of this little jump, I suggest to replace correctly.

[Saten-san's Hard]

Normal hitsounds volume is really too quiet. Increase the volume of them, please.

[Insane]

Fix the Audio Lead-In through the file txt to 1000 like the other difficulties.

00:34:656 (5,6) - Incosistent spacing.
01:06:749 (7) - Stack it correctly under (6).

Pretty nice.

Krisom wrote:

Genera
·Nothing to poke at

Easy-
AR -1 maybe...
00:30:819 - Remove this break, the warning arrows appears before the break even starts.

Normal-
AR, HP and OD -1? This is because this diff's settings are quite similar to Saten's Hard
00:08:144 - This break is kinda, uuuh, anticlimatic? Add a spinner or a long slider.

Saten's-
00:33:261 (5) - Finish at the start of this slider?
This diff was really good.

Insane-
00:10:935 (5,1) - God this spacing, please consider reducing it
00:29:423 (3) - Can you move this slider to another place?it's body is hidden under 00:28:551 (3,4,5)'s splashes.

Won't pop, but doing these changes would be great to imporve the mapset's quality, specially the break at Easy (I was about to pop over that...). If you decide to apply any changes call me and I'll come back and rebubble.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:33:958 (4,5,6) - Respace them correctly, that's no good for a Normal to be like that. o_o I don't even know how that happened...

[Insane]

00:29:947 (4,5,6) - Move them far apart from 00:29:423 (3).

Yeah, I'll rank this when you fix.