[General]
I can't find the pics that you use in storybard in the beatmap folder (that is w14_1024.jpg, BG.jpg, 1024D.jpg and w13_1024D.jpg)
Boring Story
Nothing to state.
[Story]
00:14:451 (1,2,3) - This doesn't make sense to me. I cannot associate it to any part of the song.
00:24:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here.
00:33:911 (1) - Start at 00:34:114 - and remove 1 repeat.
[History]
00:00:060 (1) - Remove 1 repeat.
00:06:546 (7,8) - I suggest to stack.
00:13:843 (1) - Please spacing (and remember to fix 00:14:046 (2) - after that)
00:30:465 (2) - I suggest to remove it, sounds better. After that fix spacing of 00:29:654 (1) (to do that move it 7 grid left and 8 grid up (grid level 3))
[Myth]
I'm not so skilled to mod this, btw I think that there are too slow slider.
Fix and I'll star it 
EDIT: Starred
I can't find the pics that you use in storybard in the beatmap folder (that is w14_1024.jpg, BG.jpg, 1024D.jpg and w13_1024D.jpg)
Boring Story
Nothing to state.
[Story]
00:14:451 (1,2,3) - This doesn't make sense to me. I cannot associate it to any part of the song.
00:24:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here.
00:33:911 (1) - Start at 00:34:114 - and remove 1 repeat.
[History]
00:00:060 (1) - Remove 1 repeat.
00:06:546 (7,8) - I suggest to stack.
00:13:843 (1) - Please spacing (and remember to fix 00:14:046 (2) - after that)
00:30:465 (2) - I suggest to remove it, sounds better. After that fix spacing of 00:29:654 (1) (to do that move it 7 grid left and 8 grid up (grid level 3))
[Myth]
I'm not so skilled to mod this, btw I think that there are too slow slider.

EDIT: Starred
