KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
Offset : 60

[Boring Story]
HP drain rate +1
Approach rate +2
Overall difficulty +1
00:11:005 - Map this break, your map is 00:47sec long, so you must map this part
00:19:924 (1) - Unsilence this reverse and remove the finish
00:22:762 (1) - The beginning of this slider is hidded by the previous slider, it's bad in an easy diff
00:46:681 - Romove this unused timing section
00:45:059 (1) - End this spinner at 00:47:087

[Story]
00:10:183 (x) - Add note ?

[History]
00:02:480 (7) - New combo
00:09:777 (1) - You should remove 2 reverse on this slider
00:13:831 (8) - New combo
00:15:858 (16) - New combo, and why the spacing has changed here ? °°
00:19:102 (8) - New combo
00:22:750 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
00:23:561 (1) - Begin this spinner 3/4 earlier and end it at the same spo it was
00:39:169 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier and end it at 00:40:183

[b][Myth]
Ok, it's a lolrofl diff xD So, just one suggestion.
00:38:966 (1) - Reduce by 1/1

Good luck~

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) source應該是FairyLand，而非tag才是吧? (這首歌來自童話的話，就應該填在source..)
2) story的BPM和其他的不一樣，請統一佢地..

[Boring Story]
00:16:276 取消呢個finish, 跟住係00:16:681 (3) 加finish?
00:28:843 (2) - 如果可以ge話，佢唔被(1)遮住會好睇d
00:41:804 改變音量or 轉hit style ge綠線(timing point) 唔可以同hitcircle重疊，所以請將綠線移前少少(最少1/8格, 正常就移前1/4~1格吧)
00:45:668 (1) - 如果跟返速度，呢個spinner應該係00:45:870開始.

[Story]
話說BPM果到記得轉返148... 然後按 TIMING -> RESNAP ALL NOTES , 跟住自己check返有冇hitobject係timeline上移左位，如有，手動拉返佢地,.
00:06:203 呢度連續4個finish實在好刺耳，而且落得有d不合.. 如果想保留ge話，或者首先將佢地音量降低，然後 取消00:06:305果個，係00:05:998果到加返 (同樣低音量， 純粹因為音樂係咁打.... 雖然我唔多鐘意呢種打法.)
00:09:587 (4) - 呢下突然間係咁靜ge環境到，整成堆finish... 好容易引起反感... 如果仲想保留ge話，或者降低音量先，然後取消00:09:8912果個finish?
00:22:762 (1) - 音量突然加得太高，再加上連條slider都有whistle聲有d怪. 或者降少少音量，然後取消slider whistle, 跟住係尾果到加返whistle?
00:42:627 (1) - 如果唔被前面果個遮住+對稱會好睇d.
00:45:972 (1) - ^

[History]
作為hard.. Approach rate 減1吧~?
00:12:019 (4,5,6,7) - 我沙包， 覺得呢段有點難閱讀....有d花
00:19:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 老實說，呢段有點濫用finish，而且呢段又冇乜令人覺得要人用finish果種氣勢...濫用finish實在係刺耳，會令人反感的 (拍肩
00:22:762 (1) - 降低音量? 取消00:22:965果個finish? (但咁短時間內用咁多finish其實唔多好.)
00:23:472 (1) - 係00:27:627終結
00:31:884 (1) - 如果唔被遮住會好睇d.
00:35:938 (4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣是花到有d難閱讀，有d唔開胃.
00:40:397 這個break很殘忍，我未休息就叫我準備了 囧

[Myth]
00:00:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這星形可以排得再對稱一點. (整左之後，用ctrl+h / ctrl+j check佢對唔對稱)
00:09:789 (1,2,3,4) - ....降低音量? 呢段實在太突然......
00:12:222 (5) - new combo
00:12:728 (1) - 取消new combo
00:13:032 (2) - new combo
00:13:539 (5) - 話說呢個note因為無位而偏斜(扭曲 囧)ge話... 你不如將呢段個pattern重新設計? 唔一定要水平發展，可以先向右下，再向右上，再右下之類... 唔好攪到有一個因無位而咁突兀
00:35:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以排得對稱 / 更星形一點 ，如果因為想貼之前00:34:114果個星而再整粒星...咁唔該整埋00:34:114果粒星，果粒都可以整到更對稱的 (拍肩
00:36:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 也可以更對稱
00:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - .... 每個六角可以更六角形... 如果呢d排成形狀ge話，整得有d扭曲，會令人很不爽的 (拍肩) 。 所以一係就整好呢d形狀，一係就唔好用呢種pattern了.
00:44:046 (8) - new combo
00:45:059 (13) - new combo
00:45:870 (15) - 冇必要飛到咁高吧 囧
00:46:782 (2,3,4) - 既然音樂唔強調，你d hitsound又近乎靜音... 咁呢3個note有咩存在需要呢~? 或者del左佢地?
00:47:087 (2) - 延長，係00:47:289果到終結。

加油了 (拍肩
搵多d中頻的modder吧，佢地d 意見唔錯的~

RockeDon wrote:

uii, I've made a taiko.
if you want, put it to your map pack

wmfchris wrote:

呢首始終唔夠長有D危……

[Taiko]
The middle part is seriously overmapped, especially for those long streams (and I don't even hear any drum sound during long streams)
and there's one rbrrrrb in the beginning, I think the drum sound is somdhow like rrbrrrb so please correct this.

For other short streams, I think it's good enough :/ Why this smiley? ;P

recheck: [Myth]
幾好

都係果句 SB令人不安 我差D打左去廣管局投訴(大誤

anyway加油吧。

wmfchris wrote:

呢首始終唔夠長有D危……

[Taiko]
The middle part is seriously overmapped, especially for those long streams (and I don't even hear any drum sound during long streams)
and there's one rbrrrrb in the beginning, I think the drum sound is somdhow like rrbrrrb so please correct this.

For other short streams, I think it's good enough :/

recheck: [Myth]
幾好

都係果句 SB令人不安 我差D打左去廣管局投訴(大誤

anyway加油吧。

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
I can't find the pics that you use in storybard in the beatmap folder (that is w14_1024.jpg, BG.jpg, 1024D.jpg and w13_1024D.jpg)

Boring Story
Nothing to state.

[Story]
00:14:451 (1,2,3) - This doesn't make sense to me. I cannot associate it to any part of the song.
00:24:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here.
00:33:911 (1) - Start at 00:34:114 - and remove 1 repeat.

[History]
00:00:060 (1) - Remove 1 repeat.
00:06:546 (7,8) - I suggest to stack.
00:13:843 (1) - Please spacing (and remember to fix 00:14:046 (2) - after that)
00:30:465 (2) - I suggest to remove it, sounds better. After that fix spacing of 00:29:654 (1) (to do that move it 7 grid left and 8 grid up (grid level 3))

[Myth]
I'm not so skilled to mod this, btw I think that there are too slow slider.

Fix and I'll star it

lkp wrote:

哇你真係做O.o
長d丫ma~首歌冇咁短架應該~
star for fairyland***

wmfchris wrote:

香港成班童話撚……
我自重

1. RockeDon加到所有难度的Tags里

1. 00:00:060 (T) - 绿线删掉 然后把红线改成soft
2. 00:09:587 (T) - 无用section 删掉
3. 00:24:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 意义不明...和音乐不合

1. 00:46:782 (1) - 建议全部难度都改成00:47:087结束 那么这个难度请把spinner换成一个note Myth难度可以不动

1. 00:00:060 (T) - 绿线删掉 音量在红线上改
2. 00:07:041 (T) - 同一时间点有三根绿线 - -
3. 00:24:587 (4) - 不建议这样 你可以把减速去掉让它多折返两次 如果执意减速那么请new combo
4. 00:43:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 遮挡导致几乎没法读出来

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. RockeDon加到所有难度的Tags里

[Story]:

1. 00:00:060 (T) - 绿线删掉 然后把红线改成soft
2. 00:09:587 (T) - 无用section 删掉
3. 00:24:587 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 意义不明...和音乐不合

[History]:

1. 00:46:782 (1) - 建议全部难度都改成00:47:087结束 那么这个难度请把spinner换成一个note Myth难度可以不动

[Myth]:

1. 00:00:060 (T) - 绿线删掉 音量在红线上改
2. 00:07:041 (T) - 同一时间点有三根绿线 - -
3. 00:24:587 (4) - 不建议这样 你可以把减速去掉让它多折返两次 如果执意减速那么请new combo
4. 00:43:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 遮挡导致几乎没法读出来

star~

• ● delete .osb file & full submission.
  ● very short song... orz

• ● 00:15:059 - http://puu.sh/GP4 & end at 00:16:276
  ● 00:27:627 (1,2,3) - 00:32:897 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - near?
  ● 00:38:978 (1) - 1grid up

• ● 00:12:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
  ● 00:20:735 (2,3) - near
  ● 00:21:951 (4,1) - ^ & (1) remove new combo
  ● 00:23:573 (1,2) - far
  ● 00:25:600 (5,6) - near
  ● 00:34:114 (1,2) - far & (2,3) near

• ● 00:09:789 (1,1) - near
  ● 00:13:235 (7) - http://puu.sh/GPr

Muya wrote:

hi

General

• ● delete .osb file & full submission.
  ● very short song... orz

Boring Story

• ● 00:15:059 - http://puu.sh/GP4 & end at 00:16:276
  ● 00:27:627 (1,2,3) - 00:32:897 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - near?
  ● 00:38:978 (1) - 1grid up

Story

• ● 00:12:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
  ● 00:20:735 (2,3) - near
  ● 00:21:951 (4,1) - ^ & (1) remove new combo
  ● 00:23:573 (1,2) - far
  ● 00:25:600 (5,6) - near
  ● 00:34:114 (1,2) - far & (2,3) near

History

• ● 00:09:789 (1,1) - near
  ● 00:13:235 (7) - http://puu.sh/GPr

Myth
Very hard


+ star~

aesopl19193 wrote:

[Myth]
00:11:614 - 這裡開始間距太少很難讀
00:24:587 (1) - 聽不出這裡變慢速的理由
00:30:465 (1) - 跟前面的(7) 重疊吧
00:34:924 (2) - This jump is HENTAI
對不起, 這太難了,小沙包不懂得mod...

[History]
Overall Difficulty +5
HP Drain +2
00:06:951 (Timing) - 增加音量吧, 沒聲的NOTE打起來很怪
00:32:492 (4,5) - finish?

[Story]
Overall Difficulty +1
HP Drain -1
00:01:432 (1) - whistle at start and the end only
00:34:722 (2) - delete it and
00:34:114 (1) - add 1 return
00:42:627 (1) - no new combo
00:46:475 (1) - delete it
00:45:870 - start spinner here, end at 00:47:695

[Boring Story]
00:04:924 (1) - no new combo
00:06:546 (1) - no new combo
00:12:627 (1) - ....不知道該說什麼好...
00:15:059 這裡開始我建議像前面一樣地MAP, 而且音樂很短, 不用加Break

現在先這樣

IceBeam wrote:

[Boring Story]
00:00:465 - Finish?
00:06:951 (1) - ^
00:19:924 (1) - ^
00:32:897 (1) - ^

[Story]
00:00:465 - Finish.
00:06:951 (1) - ^
00:19:924 - ^

[History]
00:00:465 - Finish?
00:06:141 (6,7,8,1) - Stack it properly.
00:06:951 (1) - Finish?

[Myth]
Silenced beats don't fit.
AR is way too high.

Star~

climbb65588 wrote:

[Taiko]

Overmap.
You should map it with the rhythm of music.

Yes, I know it match up with the music, but it's too difficult.
Don't make it difficult for difficult.

Just that.

RockeDon wrote:

climbb65588 wrote:

[Taiko]

Overmap.
You should map it with the rhythm of music.

Yes, I know it match up with the music, but it's too difficult.
Don't make it difficult for difficult.

Just that.

yeah but the song is only 00:47 minutes long, so I think it's good when the whole song is mapped!
But ok, I'll fix it!

[Shalon] wrote:

[General]

* Make the whole map's offset is exactly same 20000 in notepad.

[Boring Story]

00:37:569 - make it slider ? (end it at 00:37:772 )

[Story]

00:10:407 (1) - silience it
00:29:461 (1) - ^

[History]

cool map, but notes are pretty focused on center. how about use the largest circle size?

[RockeDon's Fairy Taiko]

Technically, the whole song patterns are fine.
Many notes are not fit in the song's beats.
Well, In my view, I think this song's taiko map didn't have any object to mapped hard.

OnosakiHito wrote:

SPOILER

[RockeDon's Fairy Taiko]

Technically, the whole song patterns are fine.
Many notes are not fit in the song's beats.
Well, In my view, I think this song's taiko map didn't have any object to mapped hard.^ Damit meint er das die Map nicht hart zu mappen ist. Zu leicht aufgebaut dafür.
What do you mean with it? No stream? Don't understand this, sorry!

Requested Mod:
[Taiko]
- Delete the kiai times and make just one from 32:907 to 37:772. Normaly there are no short kiai times in Taiko.
- delete 08 583 (1) - There is no sound at this time. Maybe it's better to put a slider from 08:380 to 09:394.
- 10:610 (3) - delete and put a slider or spinner in it. Or follow the background sounds.
- 19:934 to 22:367, fill this part?
- 27:840 - add kat
- 28:448 (1,2,1) - change to kkddkkd k ?
- 29:664 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - delete them and change to kk kd kk d kkd dd kd dk kk k fits better to the background sound.

If you have some question ask me in IRC.^^

Good luck with the project~[/quote]

thx, helps a lot. I'll fix it tomorrow! ^^

wmfchris wrote:

What : O
remapped again?!?

lol

00:19:326 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) instead off stream I think single notes (with some finishes) sounds better

other's would be fine

no need to kd this post.

Vikon wrote:

[Boring S]
00:12:637 (1) - 這樣怪的形狀，沒問題嗎 囧
00:34:934 (2) - 作為easy黎講，呢個hitcircle有d陰人 囧，或者將其取消，係00:34:124 (1)到加多個reverse?
00:37:569 (6) - 唔被遮住會好睇d
00:41:826 將呢條綠線移前少少，e.g. 移至00:41:624 (用作改變音量 / sample set的綠線唔可以用hitcircle重疊，避免因誤打所造成的不必要誤差)
00:47:097 呢條都移前少少安全d... 雖然呢條唔係必要.

[Story]
00:46:691 (1) - 綠線移前

[History]
00:03:313 (3) - 不被(1)遮住會好睇d
00:06:151 (6,7,8,1) - 有點難閱讀，建議重排

[Myth]
Overall Difficulty 同 Approach Rate各減2? (最少這樣看起來無咁鬼畜
00:22:772 (1) - 不被(7)遮住會好睇d
00:27:434 (6) - 不被(4)遮住會好睇d
00:30:475 (1) - 點解唯一得呢個slider係左邊凸左出黎? 而00:31:286 (3,5)呢d slider又冇凸? 可唔可以打返呢個slider入去?
00:37:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 如果冇呢段疾走會好D (拍肩
00:09:777 我見你offset有變過，所以綠線有偏差，如果可以ge話，將呢條用作kiai的綠線放正返係00:09:799 (1) 上面
00:16:872 放前d呢條綠線,e.g. 放在00:16:792
00:20:026 kiai綠線移去00:20:036
00:35:938 kiai綠線移去00:35:948
00:37:762 kiai移去00:37:772..
00:40:407 綠線移前,e.g. 去00:40:306
00:41:816 kiai移去41:826...


hitsound方面無乜大問題，最少聽得舒服。
老實說，如果myth無咁變態地難的話，這map要rank應該不太難 (拍肩
加油了，good luck~

gdeath wrote:

No main issue can be picked up.

/me shoots star.

kanpakyin wrote:

Get a Random Mod~
========================
BluE=Suggestion Only
ReD=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in Blod

[General]
Offset should be 46... I think(Plz Read my mod before you change the offset)

[Boring Story]
Please consistency the hitsound..it's chaos
00:10:610(2)-whistle at the end of the slider
00:10:015(1)-Seriously,It will make players confused...I think you should Replace it
00:12:637(1)-Nazi here...The slider is quite ugly..
00:15:069(2)-Remove whistle
00:16:691(1)-Remove New combo
00:17:502(1)-Draw it straight
00:18:313(2)-1 grid up
00:29:259(3)-hairlike spacing mistake.Better to fix this
00:30:475(x)Why here has a break?Continue to map here

[Story]
Please consistency the hitsound..it's chaos
Snap all green line
00:00:070(x)-It's a bit loud
00:05:340(8~3)The arrangement is quite chaos
00:09:597(4)-Feel weird if you use 1/4 here
00:12:637(1~6)Sorry to say this...but I want to said it is a bad arrange...Try to think about the arrangement before you put the notes
00:20:745(2~5)-hate this pattern..well..feel free to ignore this

[History]
AR+2
Circle +1
00:02:097(6)-2 grid left(LV3)
00:04:124(1~8)-Feel bad of this pattern
00:10:610(1)-New combo
00:17:907(3~7)-Wow..Sudden stream
00:28:042(1~)-It is difficult to read and confused!!
00:29:664(1.2)-Remove Finish..Noisy sound

[RockeDon's Fairy Taiko]
Yeah~1FC

SPOILER

You konw K=blue notes D=red notes right?
Change the CV to 1.4/1.5...Taiko mapper usually use CV1.4
00:05:137(1.2)-kk
00:13:448(2)-Start from here until 0:17:502..check your pattern it doesn't fit the music a lot :/
00:26:522(1)-Remove this note...Feel a bit weird of this note
00:47:097(1)-No need x2BPM here


[Myth]

SPOILER

對晤住...我真係mod晤到呢個diff...首先.你要知道一張map並晤係只要開住distance snap就得..仲要有優良的排列先得.就用你呢個diff為例子..CV set到2.4晤係晤得..但係要make sanse..到最後仲要x1.5. 囧..
又例如00:00:880(1~)-呢到.咁ge JUMP會被人話係random jump..因為確實冇jump的需要
For Now..我會建議你..晤好咁急mapping先...玩多D OSU..睇下d Rank map係點map..然後re-map一次
mapper方面..一下幾個mapper的圖係晤錯:
alace
S i S u R u
DJpop
osuplayer111..好了...係咁多..加油

Good luck

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Boring Story]
00:34:124 (1) - remove 1 repeat (sounds better to me)

[Story]
00:03:313 (5) - New Combo
00:37:772 - add circle and start slider at 00:38:988

[History]
00:36:759 (6) - New Combo
00:46:488 (1) - Remove New Combo

[Myth]
Nothing


Nice map ^^
just found some small things ;D
have a star

ok,fixed,thanks for your mdding,however,about remapping diff-myth,i don't think it should be remap.
Different mapper have different style(My English is poor orz.._
I would read their map,also,i will do my best.But "myth" is my style,i think i will not remap it...

H-boy wrote:

post时地址可是没给啊- -

我从你的两个图里选择这个mod了

tags推荐用小写

FairyLand

00:12:637(1) - 换个形状？像图中那样弄成半圆？
[attachment=1:9d65a]1.png[/attachment:9d65a]
00:19:934(1) - 做的更对称些
[attachment=0:9d65a]2.png[/attachment:9d65a]
00:28:853(2) - move 1 grid left(lv4)

Story

00:38:988(1) - make symmetric

History

00:22:772(1) - 连续数个finish要慎用。。这个不怎么好（也许只是个人感觉）
00:32:705(5) - move 1 grid down(lv3)

Myth

恩

star

H-boy wrote:

。。我失误。。
多发了一个post

恩 就是说 没什么可说的了。。

2star

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
Stack Leniency是不让设到0.2这么低的（禁止拉到最左），除非你有足够好的理由，但我似乎觉得不一定要0.2？(至少History以下难度无意义？）
这个我觉得有人说下比较好，印象中，1分以下长度的歌是不让rank的，不确定这规则现在是否仍然有效，祝你好运了。

[Boring Story]
00:09:799 (1) - remove whistle?
00:15:070 (2) - 希望把sliderwhistle消掉，噪声太大。（即直接点slider加finish造成滑动音改变，没有特殊原因（比如[Story]00:45:070 (1) - 可以做滑动噪音）最好不要。这个问题比较多，我应该查不全或者不太可能列全，希望自己复查一遍= =）
00:31:083 (1) - 一个1/2 slider 折返一次应该可以满足了，Easy不要出1/4会比较好。

[Story]
00:07:772 (2,3) - 就用一个折返slider不好吗，这样很挤的感觉
00:20:340 (1,2) - 这里还是往上一格对正吧。。。偏的有点不太好
00:27:232 (7) - sliderwhistle

[History]
00:44:867 (1,2) - 这里你前面在这两个重音点用了circle，这里保持连贯会比较好？

[Rochedon's Fairy Taiko]
fine.

[Myth]
slider tick rate:1或2。3的话让那些1/2 slider又难看又难听
00:28:042 (1,2) - 如果是希望对称的话，这两个没对到位上
难度有些过分。但是一些想法不错。

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]
- sadly enough a 45 seconds map is not allowed again, you can confirm this with a MAT/BAT if you want, I'll still mod this of course
- no kiai time in 3 easier diff?

[Boring Story]
00:12:232 (3,1) - avoid using stack in the easy diff, noobs are pretty bad at it
00:19:934 (1,1) - ^
00:31:083 (1) - make this into a single slider that end in 00:31:387
00:45:880 (1) - it's better if you don't silent the end, maybe add finish in it

[Story]
00:12:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't really follow anything imo, maybe make it into something like this http://puu.sh/KGu
00:32:907 (x) - add a similar repeating slider as in 00:34:124 (1)
00:46:691 (1,2) - add the volume for this section please

[History]
00:28:042 (1) - add a timing section in this notes with 60% or 70% volume
00:47:097 (1) - yes this sounds better

[Myth]
wow
decrease tick rate to 1 just like in other diff?
00:29:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda random, but maybe it's just me

As I said above, under 1 minute map is not allowed anymore, maybe you can search if there any longer version for this song?
~star

Colin Hou wrote:

why post in my queue again? I've modded this before :S

1. tags: RockDon, not rockdon (picky though)

1. 00:11:015 (1) - cancel new combo
2. 00:29:259 (3) - add a reverse

1. things don't stack at all in this diff, but i tried every single stack leniency, they do not work for 00:44:461 (2,1,2,1,2,3) :S, maybe you should do something on 00:45:475 (2) I personlly think the current situation is fine, but need further discusion.

1. 00:06:759 (10,11,12,1) - 1 is stacked to another notes, so move 00:07:164 (2,3,4) these notes 2 grids down and right. you should also adjust the placement of the following notes.
2. AR 8 is enough imo

nold_1702 wrote:

lkp wrote:

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