chamelepeace710 wrote:

ahhhhh.... so beautiful....

Hard
00:48:596 (6) add new combo
00:50:246 (1) remove combo
00:51:296 (4) add new combo
00:52:946 (1) remove combo
00:53:696 (3) add combo
01:07:796 (6) add combo
01:09:446 (1) remove combo
01:10:196 (2) add combo
02:53:396 (7) add combo
03:19:196 (1) remove combo
03:20:096 (2) add combo

great job....... and star!

edit: almost forgot, take a look at the storyboard in the taiko diff. if you really have to, change the Beatmap By Backstep to Taiko Map By Wmf.

Sumea wrote:

I liked the hard difficulty.
Had nice fast pace to it but was not hard to follow - I did miss a few initially but it is more for own mistake, I think by now the map if pretty much spot on!

Enjoy to see more Haru songs in osu!.

James2250 wrote:

-You have an empty osb file in your folder, delete it ok.
-Include a hit circle approach circle from the template skin in your folder ok.
-Kiai time needs to start and end at the same places on Easy/Normal/Hardok.
-Looking at your spinner around the center it seems to move around alot, do you intend for this? (otherwise fix) I intend it,I don't change it.
-Maybe make the spinner approach circle a darker blue so it is easier to see? ok.
-Change "Thank for playing" to "Thanks for playing" Now I don't have photoshop.if I have freetime,I'll fix.
-Your sb load goes over 5 for certain parts of the map (for more than a few seconds) try and lower this if possible
-Combo burst 0 and 1 looks better flipped horizontally in my opinion
-A few of the combo bursts could have some some transparency (look at them carefully) example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29218

Easy:
00:57:596 (2) - might not be good for an easy (alot of repeats)
01:13:196 (4,5,1) - align?
01:15:596 (2,3) - might not be good for an easy
01:47:996 (4) - add note?
01:52:796 (3) - ^
01:57:596 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:796 (4,5,1) - make sure spacing stays equal
03:16:196 (3) - could be slightly more symmetrical
03:35:996 (2,4) - align
04:22:196 (1,3) - ^

Normal:
00:41:396 (1) - could be slightly more symmetrical
00:41:396 (1,3) - align these two and put 00:43:196 (2) in the middle of them
01:10:196 (2,3,4,5,1) - align both sides of this?
02:01:796 (7,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
03:04:496 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a nicer pattern?
03:22:196 (2) - could be slightly more symmetrical (go though and check all of these..nazi though)
03:42:296 (6,1) - would look better centered on the curve

Hard:
Kind of low stats for a Hard (I suggest +1 to HP/OD/AR)
03:30:596 - add break here
03:35:996 (8,1) - stacking is off

Taiko:
01:11:096 (181,182,183) - don't have a finish at the end here
Only error I see
Thanks for a lot suggestion all note fixed.
Maps are looking nice but I don't think you are quite ready for bubble yet

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Revived!!

cheukhin1985 wrote:

yay it's revived!!!!! <3
i luv this beatmap~

Teta wrote:

Remove "Instrumental" from tags, since it's already in the title.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

But what's "viotex" in the tags? °° Album.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

What's this map doing still here °°

I see lots of improvements since the first time i had a look at the map, I'm glad
I'd like to instabubble because everything is enjoyable, but:

Unsnapped notes on taiko ;~;
Also, about Taiko's storyboard: maybe you can end the mapper's name's storyboard when the map ends? It's not that useful to have it until the end of the song.

Everything else is fine, so call me back as soon as you fix it and i'll bubble.

But what's "viotex" in the tags? °°

EDIT: oh and a kudosu star because this map impressed me, even if it won't raise the priority that much.

Thanks a lot Card'NForce
Now I studying in school when I come back to home I'll fix it.
Kudosu award!

Seems like we're finally done with fixing this beauty :3

Bubble~

regenz wrote:

Take this for your high effort of mapper. My pink star.

Gratz

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hello! "thank for playing.png" isn't being used in the storyboard.
If you could fix that and fix the sentence (should be... "Thanks for playing")
Other than that, I don't see anything else wrong with this map set. I'd be happy to rank it once that's fixed.

Edit : please bubble and rank again. (unbubble when I updated.)

regenz wrote:

เรื่องนี้สอนให้รู้ว่าการได้ฟองแล้วทำการอัพเดทแมปด้วยกรณีใดก็ตาม ฟองแตกนะจ๊ะ
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Mafiamaster wrote:

Great!

Ranked. Awesome map set and SB btw.

chamelepeace710 wrote:

It's about time!!!! Great Job!!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hooray~
finally ranked
Congratz backstep

indyinyou wrote:

ยินดีด้วย ~ แร้งแล้ว

dNextGen wrote:

10/10

nice song and relaxing map

Xgor wrote:

Sorry for being such a bother but... Shouldn't this have Natsukage (Instrumental) as the title
Makes little sense that two maps with the same song has different titles...
(Yes I know that Natsukage = Summer Shadow in English but it's still pretty weird.)

regenz wrote:

ยินดีด้วย จบคลาสแล้ว !!

No more things to teach you please help newbie how makking a map also.

ซึ๊ง ศิษย์ตูแร้งแล้ว คนที่2แล้วเ้ห้ย

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Natsukage means Summer Shadow (afaik)

Oops nevermind, i didn't read all of the post :X

Anyway, grats on your first rank, backstep ^^

backstep wrote:

regenz wrote:

ยินดีด้วย จบคลาสแล้ว !!

No more things to teach you please help newbie how makking a map also.

ซึ๊ง ศิษย์ตูแร้งแล้ว คนที่2แล้วเ้ห้ย

Rank ตั้งแต่เที่ยงละ - -

กะจะบอกแต่ดันไม่ออนเอ็ม

ปล. เกลียด Hacker ว่ะ แมร่งให้แร้งค์โวทน่าถีบมาก 1/10,4/10,5/10 งี้อ่ะ
PS.I hate hacker when vote my beatmap (exsample. 1/10,4/10,5/10 )