banvi wrote:

赤は絶対、青は直した方がいい、黒はただの意見

General
Timing線（スピード、音量が変わるもの）はなるべく譜面と重ねないようにセッティングした方がいいみたい（MAT,BATにも言われたことあるので）
たとえばパチェさんハードの03:33:734 はこんな感じにずらす

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kiaiの始め終わりは重ねておｋ（このmapにkiaiないけど）

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00:04:401 (1,1) ここの間が短すぎる；；なのでこうした方がいいかと

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00:08:401 (10) new combo
00:12:401 (4) ^
01:27:067 (1) 個人差だと思うけど01:29:734 (白線)で終わった方が私は好き
01:38:401 (1) remove new combo
01:52:401 (1) remove silder whistle??
02:40:401 (6) new combo
02:47:567 (1) remove new combo
03:35:068 (1) >01:27:067 (1)と同様
nice!!

GJ&GL

banvi wrote:

赤は絶対、青は直した方がいい、黒はただの意見

General
Timing線（スピード、音量が変わるもの）はなるべく譜面と重ねないようにセッティングした方がいいみたい（MAT,BATにも言われたことあるので）
たとえばパチェさんハードの03:33:734 はこんな感じにずらす

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kiaiの始め終わりは重ねておｋ（このmapにkiaiないけど）

Insane
00:37:734 (1) remove new combo
00:52:068 (1) remove new combo & 00:52:401 (2) new combo
02:52:401 (5) new combo
03:34:068 (3) 1 grid right
nice!!

GJ&GL

banvi wrote:

Normal
Timing直して～～～fixed!
00:03:069 (4) new combofixed!
00:59:088 (1) remove new combo & 01:00:421 (2) new combofixed!
01:19:094 (1) remove new combofixed!
01:40:435 (5) new combo & 01:41:102 (1) remove new combofixed!
01:43:769 (3) new combofixed!
01:47:104 (1) remove new combo & 01:48:437 (2) new combofixed!
01:53:772 (8) new combo & 01:55:106 (1) remove new combofixed!
02:19:114 (1) normalにしては短すぎる&突然なspinner、外して02:19:114 にnote置いた方がいいと思います～fixed!

[Patchouli's Hard]
* A bit hard for a Hard diff, 'cuz silder velocity too fast?
00:31:067 (1) - change it to something like this for not hidden?

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orioncomet wrote:

[General]
* dark blue and dark purple combo colors are hard to see, change them to something lighter [such as Yellow and Blue sky, etc] oh yeah, much better now
* make sure your preview point all diffs are the same--fixed
* remove "Rita" from tags--fixed
* add "loli_milk Patchouli" to tag--fixed
* Song Setup > Storyboarding > Enable "Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)" It's just suggestion though--fixed

[loli_milk's Normal]
* This diff could be Easy x-x--fixed

[Patchouli's Hard]
* A bit hard for a Hard diff, 'cuz silder velocity too fast?--fixed
00:31:067 (1) - change it to something like this for not hidden?--fixed

[Insane]
* this diff used more 3 silder speed changes, I'd suggest you to change some 0.8x to 0.9x would be better--fixed

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00:17:068 (4) - new combo, more easy to read for jump--fixed
01:10:068 (6) - new combo--fixed
01:21:234 (6) - ^--fixed
01:26:401 (4) - ^--fixed
01:32:067 (6) - ^--fixed
02:24:901 (4) - ^--fixed
02:25:401 (4) - ^--fixed
02:33:734 (8) - ^--fixed
02:35:567 (4) - ^--fixed
02:41:068 (4) - ^--fixed
03:15:401 (6) - ^--fixed
03:34:401 (4) - ^--fixed

James2250 wrote:

You could cut some unnecessary transparency off of some of the lyrics but it isn't too bad
Do you need a "White" in sb folder and outside of sb folder?--fixed

Easy:
High AR for an Easy, -1/-2--fixed
00:12:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add hitsounds?--fixed
02:02:401 (4) - add clap to the start?--fixed

Hard:
Looks nice, but should be called Insane, its too hard for a Hard --Changed diff Hard => Insane
00:59:401 (6) - almost hidden repeat, might want to move it just in case--fixed

Insane:
More than 3 unique slider speeds isn't recommended --I see. It will take care from next time.
Looks nice

*star*

orioncomet wrote:

[loli_milk's Easy]
02:42:405 (1) - [suggestion] end this spinner at 02:45:571 or 02:44:571 sound better--fixed
look good~

[Patchouli's Inasne]
- change combo color to same as other diff? combo color on this diff is hard to see though.--fixed
01:18:071 (1) - snap this silder's repeat and last silder at white tick--fixed
02:56:072 (4) - fix this plz, pretty much hidden silder under silder XD!--fixed
03:34:988 (1) - [suggestion] end this spinner at 03:38:905? sound better to me--fixed

[Insane]
03:23:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part feel like miss hitsound, maybe add sound clap at 2 4 5.--fixed
03:24:405 (1) - add sound finish at begin of silder--fixed
03:35:072 (1) - [suggestion] end this spinner at 03:38:905? sound better to me--fixed

abalee wrote:

use silenced sildertick isn't a good idea I think :/--Fixed!

normal:
00:27:738 (9) - a clap in the middle?--Fixed!
00:43:071 (1) - finish?--Fixed!

insane:
more than three slider speeds change is unrankable, try to change it.--Fixed!

abalee wrote:

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1. eq4.png

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Storyboard~
- Delete the following unused files (Remember to Full Submit after changing this):

1. eq4.png

- Half of the lyrics images have a lot of unused transparency, please crop them.

~ 00:-02:-344 - BGEffect3 moves to the left for a short time, so when it dissapears at 00:12:405 the background behind it looks off-placed. Don't move it? Or is this on purpose?
~ 00:49:738 - [Suggestion] Make that double pulse again to follow the finishes?
~ 00:55:405 - Missing pulse?
~ 00:58:071 - Same as above.
~ 01:14:432 - These pulses are different then in the other 2 choruses, could you fix them?
~ 02:04:405 - [Suggestion] Make that double pulse again to follow the finishes? (Might want to add 3 here too)
~ 02:10:071 - Missing pulse?
~ 02:12:738 - Same as above.

Not going to pop, but consider to make these changes whenever the next BAT checks this? :3

Take a *star* Insane is fun

Alace wrote:

SB is gone
mapset is good
bubbled

Roddie wrote:

Hi



It seems "Inasne" is spelled wrong.

Sorry to burst your bubble. ._.

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
Your Kiai sections aren't on white ticks, is that intended? Because it looks ugly to be honest :<

Patchouli's Insane:
00:13:405 (3) - Doesn't stack correctly below (2)
00:46:238 (3) - ^
00:55:072 (8) - ^
00:57:738 (1) - ^
01:09:905 (5,6) - None of them stack correctly :B
01:16:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:40:655 (2,3) - Doesn't stack correctly below (1)
02:12:321 (7,8) - ^
02:34:071 (5) - ^
02:50:738 (3) - ^
03:19:905 (3,4,5) - ^

Very neat mapset.

Larto wrote:

Kiai:
Your Kiai sections aren't on white ticks, is that intended? Because it looks ugly to be honest :<--fixed!

Very neat mapset.