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Unused video sitting inside the folder. You'll need to fix that. (this is probably a bug for me, download your map from the osu! website and see if there's still a video)
The hitsounds are also barely audible! Increase it to 65% or 70% volume average.easyThis is easy difficulty, you shouldn't have distance snapping problems:
Also the AIMod box shows unsnapped Kiai time, fix those too
I noticed you use 50% and 55% volume to emphasize some sounds in the song, which is fine, but 55% is barely of a difference. Try 65% or 70% whenever you need to emphasize something.
00:18:404 (4,5) - Blanket is off slightly, just move (4) up a grid unit
00:20:742 (2,3) - ^, move (3) down a grid unit
00:39:443 (5,6) - ^, move (6) closer to (5)
00:43:729 (2) - What sound does this slider end emphasize? The slider started on a drum sound and should end on a drum sound at 00:44:118
00:45:677 (4) - Add NC, the combo lasts too long.
00:49:573 (2) - This slider should repeat once to emphasize the drums again.
00:50:158 (3) - This slider shouldn't start on a red tick, it sounds really awkward especially since the slider is quite long. Move it to the next white tick and shorten the slider end.
00:51:521 (4) - This slider ending on a red tick also sounds awkward since it skips an obvious drum sound in the song. Move the slider end to 00:51:910 and add a circle at 00:52:300 to emphasize the changing chords in the song.
00:52:690 (5) - Add NC, the combo lasts too long. If you used the suggestion above ^ add NC to 00:52:300 instead.
00:53:859 (6,7) - Blanket is off, move (7) down and left a grid unit
01:12:560 - Dosn't really make sense to quiet this section down, the music didn't exactly quiet down either.
01:23:469 (4,5,6,7) - This entire combo doesn't need a finish hitsound. Consider using the default drum hitsound instead.
01:26:586 - Kiai time probably didn't end yet, the song still sounds like its in the highlight portion. End Kiai time at 01:35:936 instead (you can have breaks in Kiai time)
01:41:781 (1,2) - Blanket is off, move (2) to the right a unit
01:49:184 (2) - You mostly likely don't need the middle anchor. Just move the other two adjacent anchors further away from the slider to produce the same result.
01:52:301 (5,6) - Blanket is off, move (6) up a unit
02:07:495 (1,2) - (1) touching (2) looks a bit uncomfortable, move the two anchors on (2) further away to create a "blanket."
02:19:963 (2,3) - Blanket is off, middle anchor should be further away from (2)
02:21:521 (4) - Again, you mostly likely don't need the middle anchor. Move the other two adjacent anchors further away from the slider.
02:45:677 (8,1) - Blanket is off, move (1) down a unit (you may need to disable distance snapping)
02:49:184 (3,4,5,6) - This combo doesn't need finish hitsounds too. You can replace them with the default drum hitsound.
02:52:300 - Hitsounds are barely audible, which is in most cases, unrankable. 30% volume is fine.
02:58:534 - Don't use 5% volume differences! Try 40% volume here.
03:00:093 (2) - This slider is awkwardly placed, it's not that obvious what sounds you're trying to emphasize with it. This rhythm should work better:
03:01:651 - Kiai time is about to start, you should use many inherited timing points that gradually raise the hitsound volume until it reaches 60%, the volume when Kiai time begins.
03:23:469 (1) - Lengthen this slider so that it repeats on the next red tick. This emphasizes the vocals and the drums at the same time.
normal00:16:262 (6) - Add NC here and remove NC at 00:17:236 (1).
00:19:378 - Follow this rhythm and NC below:
There is a drum and finish sound at 00:19:573 that deserves a NC. This is where I have NCed in the screenshot. Also at 00:19:378, I added a circle to emphasize the vocals in the song as well.
00:33:015 (1) - Remove NC from here and add NC at 00:33:404 (2). JiU starts singing before the next big white tick, so she sings on an upbeat, which generally means that you shouldn't NC yet.
00:36:132 (1) - ^, add NC at 00:36:521 (2)
00:38:080 (1) - Add NC here and change it to a slider that lasts to 00:38:664 since you did the exact same thing at 00:36:521 (1).
00:38:858 - Add a circle here if you remove the slider that ends here, just to add in JiU's vocals.
00:45:482 (1) - Remove NC here and add it on 00:45:872 (2). It's the upbeat thing again
00:48:404 (1,2) - ^, add NC at 00:48:989 (3).
00:47:430 (4,1,2) - Blanket is off, move (1,2) up and to the right a unit
00:52:106 (4) - Yoohyeon holds the note until 00:52:690, so end the slider there. Also add NC here as well.
01:02:430 (2,3) - I think this would be better off as a single repeat slider, since the vocals here are all the same pitch, and it would be better to associate it all with one slider.
01:04:963 (2,3) - ^
01:16:651 (1,2,3) - Why not curve these more so that they almost blanket? Just for appeal.
01:26:196 - You should add another slider here that ends at 01:26:586. Siyeon's vocals change pitch at 01:26:196 and end at 01:26:586, perhaps you'd like to emphasize that.
01:26:586 - Kiai time probably didn't end yet, the song still sounds like its in the highlight portion. End Kiai time at 01:35:936 instead (you can have breaks in Kiai time)
01:35:158 (1,2,3) - Curve these so they almost blanket for appeal.
01:38:664 (1) - Remove NC here and add it on 01:39:054 (2). #upbeatlivesmatter
01:41:586 (1,2) - ^, add NC to 01:42:171 (3).
01:43:340 (1,2) - ^, add NC to 01:43:729 (3).
01:44:703 (1,2) - ^, add NC to 01:45:288 (3).
01:45:871 - Add a circle here, you've missed a really important part of the vocals here.
01:50:158 (5,6) - Since you're emphasizing the vocal reverb here, I think a single repeat slider would emphasize this a lot better.
01:50:936 (1) - Remove NC here and add it to 01:51:132 (2). You should probably add an object at 01:51:326 to account for the upbeat.
01:51:132 (2) - You mixed fast vocals with a slow drum in this slider, which sounds slightly awkward. A rhythm like this should sound better:
This rhythm also makes sure that 01:51:911 (3) can start without sounding like it's missing a beat.
01:53:859 (1,2) - Remove NC and add NC to 01:54:443 (3) for the upbeat.
01:59:314 (4) - Move the slider end to x:328 y:328. This makes a little secret blanket with 02:00:093 (5).
02:06:911 (1) - You probably don't need the middle anchor. Move the two adjacent anchors further away from the slider for the same result.
02:25:806 (1) - ^
02:41:976 (1) - I actually lost my combo here while testplaying because I was expecting the slider to start on the drums, not the vocals. Change this rhythm to prevent other players from doing the same thing. A single repeat slider starting at 02:41:781 would be fine.
02:52:300 - The hitsounds are barely audible. Use 30% volume instead.
02:58:534 - Don't use 5% volume differences! Try 40% volume here.
03:11:002 (2,3) - Blanket is off, move (3) up a grid unit
OK, you map to the vocals way too much. Keep a balance between the drums and the vocals, so that you can keep a variety throughout the entire song. Still, good luck with your map!
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