Displacement
To start with, I wouldn't recommend this so to start mapping with. It's not the most suited song for a beginner. The map itself it over-mapped too. A lot of the notes in the song aren't emphasized by notes correctly. Either by no notes there or unintuitive spacing.
The OD is not high enough to suit the map, I'd put something along the lines of 7-9
CS 5 for this kind of map isn't ideal imo. I'd have something like 4-4.5
A higher AR would be more ideal. AR9.3?
00:01:335 (2) - Should be two triples instead of 5 notes
00:02:001 (1,2,3) - Same^
There's a lot of examples of this in your map, where the rhythms don't match up. Maybe go over areas you're unsure of at a lower speed, i.e. 50% and properly listen? I'm not going to point out all examples of this
00:13:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - The 1/2 jump is almost the same spacing as the triple. One of the main problems with the map is intuitive spacing. Make sure you make the rhythm obvious using spacing.
The jumps in your map need to be more thought out. They're too random right now
00:34:668 (1,2,3,4) - For jumpstreams, you need to make a NC.
00:37:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - I understand the idea, a infinity stream, however, I think it could be executed better. Try using the create polygon tool located in the compose bar at the top in order to create smooth flow and curves to streams
00:58:835 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of gimmicky mapping is really hard to pull off effectively. I would hold off on such patterns until you have more experience.
The OD is not high enough to suit the map, I'd put something along the lines of 7-9
CS 5 for this kind of map isn't ideal imo. I'd have something like 4-4.5
A higher AR would be more ideal. AR9.3?
00:01:335 (2) - Should be two triples instead of 5 notes
00:02:001 (1,2,3) - Same^
There's a lot of examples of this in your map, where the rhythms don't match up. Maybe go over areas you're unsure of at a lower speed, i.e. 50% and properly listen? I'm not going to point out all examples of this
00:13:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - The 1/2 jump is almost the same spacing as the triple. One of the main problems with the map is intuitive spacing. Make sure you make the rhythm obvious using spacing.
The jumps in your map need to be more thought out. They're too random right now
00:34:668 (1,2,3,4) - For jumpstreams, you need to make a NC.
00:37:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - I understand the idea, a infinity stream, however, I think it could be executed better. Try using the create polygon tool located in the compose bar at the top in order to create smooth flow and curves to streams
00:58:835 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of gimmicky mapping is really hard to pull off effectively. I would hold off on such patterns until you have more experience.
The ideas are there, they just need more experience and skill to pull off. Keep at it!