Hi! From my NM queue
Uh, so this song is pretty slow and the star ratings are pretty low but i'll do my best and since it's pretty short i'll check all diffs
I'm still pretty new to modding so my wording/phrasing might not be ideal and can sound harsh but it's not intentional
[Beginner]
_ The difficulty settings aren't really appropriate appropriate for an Easy, you should probably use CS:3, reduce the AR and bump the OD to 2
_ This difficulty has not a single circle? I think you should try to add some (I'll try to point out a few places where you could use circles)
_ You should map the last part of the song to make consistent endings through out the whole set
_ 00:11:927 (1) - Remove NC? You NC'd every measure before this one is unnecessary
_ 00:13:465 (1) - You could remove the reverse arrows here and use 2 circles as it's just a repetition of the same sound (http://puu.sh/rv3ac/fc8f29fd33.jpg)
_ 00:19:619 (1,1,1) - same reasonning ^ also don't forget to nc consistently if you do that
I'm not going to point out every single place where a circle could work but yeah there are a lot of places where you could add some but keep in mind this is an easy diff so don't abuse them either, try to find a balance
_ 00:39:619 (1) - Unnecessary NC, same reasonning as above
[MH's Normal]
_ I think you can put the ar down to 5
_ This is the only diff in the set that has kiais, either remove them or add them in other diffs but make them consistent
_ 00:06:158 (4) - This slider start isn't mapped to something strong (yeah there's the piano but still) and it's a bit awkward when playing try this rhythm, i move 4 to the previous white tick and added a circle on 00:07:311 - so now every strong beat is clickable and feels more natural
_ 00:15:388 (4) - Be careful with offbeats sliders especially in this song since white ticks are much stronger than red ticks, avoid making your sliders start on red ticks. You could fix this by swapping 00:15:004 (3,4) - those on the timeline and of course readjust the distances
_ 00:16:158 (5) - you're missing the downbeat 00:16:542 - here, this is where the slider or circle should be starting, as in make this clickable
_ 00:17:696 (2,3,1,2,3) - Same reasonning, those sliders end on strong beats
_ 00:23:081 (1) - I can't really tell what is this mapped to (is it the piano?) it's a bit ambiguous. Also when making fancier slider shapes it's better to have a perfect balance better Slider start/red anchor and red anchor/slider end and it would look better if you made the second curve blanket 00:24:619 (2) - . So something like this . And of course rearrange that at your taste/style that's just an example.
_ 00:28:850 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid SV changes when mapping normals, 1.00x is fine here
_ 00:38:850 (3,4,5,6,1) - same as before, just delete 00:38:850 (3) - and move this entire selection 00:39:234 (4,5,6,1) - to the white tick before
[MH's Hyper]
_ Uh so i saw before starting the mod that MH posted his diff and i wasn't sure if it was the updated version so i just took the code and will mod what he linked in the post above mine
_ 00:07:504 (1) - You can't (except for very rare cases) start sliders on blue ticks (try something like this? http://puu.sh/rv4Fz/9db07aee23.jpg )
_ 00:15:965 (6) - ^ for an alternative, i think 2 circles here 00:16:158 - and here 00:16:542 - work fine
_ 00:19:234 (5,6) - eh i guess this is ok but i would suggest to add a circle 00:20:388 - here
_ 00:24:234 (6) - Make this slider end on the white tick before and then add a note 00:25:196 - here
_ 00:30:581 (2,3) - Same as before try this ? starting from here 00:30:388 -
_ 00:34:811 (6,7) - Inconsistent distance with the rest of the pattern
_ 00:36:158 (3) - Move this on the red tick before
So yeah this pretty much repeats for the rest of the map, you need to be careful when using blue ticks, a note isolated placed on a blue tick can sound very off if it hasn't something strong in the song to support it.
[Collab Fountain]
_ 00:05:004 (5,1) - add some repeats to those sliders http://puu.sh/rv5nj/60b5c5eabf.jpg
_ 00:27:311 (1,1) - unnecessary NCs
_ 00:42:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should turn these into 2 reverse sliders, this is pretty long pattern on its own and i feel like using sliders here would give a bigger emphasis to 00:44:234 (1) - this since it's a lot stronger
_ 01:00:004 (8) - Not sure of what you're following with this, try to make it more obvious
_ 01:00:965 (9) - This spacing is really inconsistent with the rest of the map, try to make it closer to the object between this
_ 01:02:696 - You could add a note here and start the spinner on the blue tick right after it, that's fine
Alright i hope it helped a little, good luck with your map
Uh, so this song is pretty slow and the star ratings are pretty low but i'll do my best and since it's pretty short i'll check all diffs
I'm still pretty new to modding so my wording/phrasing might not be ideal and can sound harsh but it's not intentional
[Beginner]
_ The difficulty settings aren't really appropriate appropriate for an Easy, you should probably use CS:3, reduce the AR and bump the OD to 2
_ This difficulty has not a single circle? I think you should try to add some (I'll try to point out a few places where you could use circles)
_ You should map the last part of the song to make consistent endings through out the whole set
_ 00:11:927 (1) - Remove NC? You NC'd every measure before this one is unnecessary
_ 00:13:465 (1) - You could remove the reverse arrows here and use 2 circles as it's just a repetition of the same sound (http://puu.sh/rv3ac/fc8f29fd33.jpg)
_ 00:19:619 (1,1,1) - same reasonning ^ also don't forget to nc consistently if you do that
I'm not going to point out every single place where a circle could work but yeah there are a lot of places where you could add some but keep in mind this is an easy diff so don't abuse them either, try to find a balance
_ 00:39:619 (1) - Unnecessary NC, same reasonning as above
[MH's Normal]
_ I think you can put the ar down to 5
_ This is the only diff in the set that has kiais, either remove them or add them in other diffs but make them consistent
_ 00:06:158 (4) - This slider start isn't mapped to something strong (yeah there's the piano but still) and it's a bit awkward when playing try this rhythm, i move 4 to the previous white tick and added a circle on 00:07:311 - so now every strong beat is clickable and feels more natural
_ 00:15:388 (4) - Be careful with offbeats sliders especially in this song since white ticks are much stronger than red ticks, avoid making your sliders start on red ticks. You could fix this by swapping 00:15:004 (3,4) - those on the timeline and of course readjust the distances
_ 00:16:158 (5) - you're missing the downbeat 00:16:542 - here, this is where the slider or circle should be starting, as in make this clickable
_ 00:17:696 (2,3,1,2,3) - Same reasonning, those sliders end on strong beats
_ 00:23:081 (1) - I can't really tell what is this mapped to (is it the piano?) it's a bit ambiguous. Also when making fancier slider shapes it's better to have a perfect balance better Slider start/red anchor and red anchor/slider end and it would look better if you made the second curve blanket 00:24:619 (2) - . So something like this . And of course rearrange that at your taste/style that's just an example.
_ 00:28:850 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid SV changes when mapping normals, 1.00x is fine here
_ 00:38:850 (3,4,5,6,1) - same as before, just delete 00:38:850 (3) - and move this entire selection 00:39:234 (4,5,6,1) - to the white tick before
[MH's Hyper]
_ Uh so i saw before starting the mod that MH posted his diff and i wasn't sure if it was the updated version so i just took the code and will mod what he linked in the post above mine
_ 00:07:504 (1) - You can't (except for very rare cases) start sliders on blue ticks (try something like this? http://puu.sh/rv4Fz/9db07aee23.jpg )
_ 00:15:965 (6) - ^ for an alternative, i think 2 circles here 00:16:158 - and here 00:16:542 - work fine
_ 00:19:234 (5,6) - eh i guess this is ok but i would suggest to add a circle 00:20:388 - here
_ 00:24:234 (6) - Make this slider end on the white tick before and then add a note 00:25:196 - here
_ 00:30:581 (2,3) - Same as before try this ? starting from here 00:30:388 -
_ 00:34:811 (6,7) - Inconsistent distance with the rest of the pattern
_ 00:36:158 (3) - Move this on the red tick before
So yeah this pretty much repeats for the rest of the map, you need to be careful when using blue ticks, a note isolated placed on a blue tick can sound very off if it hasn't something strong in the song to support it.
[Collab Fountain]
_ 00:05:004 (5,1) - add some repeats to those sliders http://puu.sh/rv5nj/60b5c5eabf.jpg
_ 00:27:311 (1,1) - unnecessary NCs
_ 00:42:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should turn these into 2 reverse sliders, this is pretty long pattern on its own and i feel like using sliders here would give a bigger emphasis to 00:44:234 (1) - this since it's a lot stronger
_ 01:00:004 (8) - Not sure of what you're following with this, try to make it more obvious
_ 01:00:965 (9) - This spacing is really inconsistent with the rest of the map, try to make it closer to the object between this
_ 01:02:696 - You could add a note here and start the spinner on the blue tick right after it, that's fine
Alright i hope it helped a little, good luck with your map