[Normal]
Seems all good.
[Final]
00:10:545 (11,12,13,14,15) - It's pretty hard to tell that this is a quindruplet because of how the notes are placed (11 apart from the rest, 15 stacked on top of 14). Spread them equally? or just stack them on top of each other.
00:12:545 (2) - Move this closer to (3,4,5). Make sure it touches at least the border of those notes.
00:45:879 (7,8,1) - Move these closer to each other since it's a single stream.
01:53:879 (4,5,6,7) - Too close to 3.
02:27:212 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move 5 closer to 4 or move the other notes to make the spacings consistent.
02:35:045 (6) - Rotate it and move it closer to 5.
03:15:879 (1,2,3) - This is pretty much impossible to hit :/ It'd be playable in CtB and Taiko but in Osu it's highly unlikely that someone can accurately move 1/4 beat that quickly(180bpm).
03:17:045 (7,8,9) - Move these farther from 6.
03:18:045 (3,4) - Too far from each other too, stack them on top of each other.
[Faust]
00:10:039 (8) - It looks like this slider is a part of the stream (9,10,11,12,1) because of how there's no spacing difference between 8 9 and 10 yet they're quite different in terms of timing(1/2 beat between 8 and 9, 1/4 between 9 and 10 and same for the rest of the stream). I suggest stacking (9,10,11,12,1) right on the slider end of (8). Or just move it farther so that there's a noticeable difference.
00:32:539 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Here I think you can simply add a new combo on (6),(8) and (10) instead of re-arranging them. Or just use a few repeat sliders.
00:40:373 (2) - Stick this onto 1's slider end?
00:57:873 (4,5,6) - Move these farther from 00:57:373 (1,2,3), cause as it is now it looks like this is one single stream instead of 2 triplet hits.
01:01:956 (4,5) - Stack these on top of 3? or move 4 in between 5 and 3.
01:20:039 (1) - Stack this on top of (14)? Or move it farther. It looks like it's part of the previous stream.
01:22:706 (1) - Same issue here.
01:24:039 (5,6,7,8) - Stack 6 and 7 on 8?
01:44:539 (1,2,3) - Stack these on top of eachother? Look like a triplet hit as it is.
01:55:039 (4) - Stick this onto to 3's slider end?
01:55:706 (8) - Stick this onto to 7s slider end?, away from 01:55:873 (1,2,3).
02:10:706 (1) - Move this to make it part of the previous stream
02:17:206 (7) - Stack this onto 02:17:373 (1)?
1/2 beat inconsistencies are totally fine in Insane diffs imo so I didn't point out of any of those. But the distance between 1/4 streams have to be consistent and intuitive otherwise it's really hard to time them properly.
For example, it's very likely that someone messes up on this stream by hitting it too early due to how it's placed after 8:
Than something like below. Notice there's a big difference in term of spacing because of the beat timing change.(1/2 beat between 8 and 9 so the spacing should be larger compared to 9 10 11 12 etc.
Stacking the notes who have the same beat timing can fix some of the spacing issues, but it's better to spread them so that they'll be easier to read.
Pretty challenging map, would love to see how it turns out after fixing the spacing issues. Some of these inconsistencies were probably made on purpose, and I understand if you leave those cases untouched.
Feel free to ask me for a re-check anytime. Good luck.
and excuse me for the long
Nazi post x:
