Ayyri wrote:

00:23:971 (103) - Change to k. Same pitch as 00:24:329 (105) - Actually the pitch of this syllable is slightly lower than 105 (might barely be a semitone?)

Ayyri wrote:

00:17:538 (22) - Change to k. Same pitch as 00:17:181 (20) - the original pattern that was wanted to be played is kdddk to follow the rhythm of the song instead of the vocal
00:19:683 (33) - Change to k. Same pitch as 00:20:040 (35) - not a bad idea since this pattern was supposed to follow the vocal this time :p

xtrem3x wrote:

Aze's Muzukashii

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  00:07:887 - if follow vocal sound in this note is better change to K. why not
  00:09:317 - Same ^ ^

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my laziness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

weird song .-.

Aze's Muzukashii

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  00:07:887 - if follow vocal sound in this note is better change to K.
  00:09:317 - Same ^

Gezo Oni

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  00:10:389 - This note have low vocal sound ... change to d?

Plaudible wrote:

NM from my queue! (^-^)/
You already have quite a few mods and I'm a newbie mapper so I probably won't have much... but here's what I got anyways.
t/462483
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Collab Normal
00:01:454 (3,4,5,6) - Space 6 properly so it's equidistant from 4 and 5 as 3 is with 4 and 5. done
00:09:675 (1) - I'd raise the slider end a bit, the stagger feels a bit too big.
00:10:389 (3) - ^ changed distance spacing to 0.9.

KIWI
00:03:777 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe vertically line up 1,4 and 2,3? Would certainly look and flow nicer. done
00:05:028 (4,1) - Increase spacing done

Wish I had more to say, sorry :c this meme is pretty top danks though. GL ranking!~ ^_^

Plaudible wrote:

Batt's Easy
Honestly I have almost nothing to say here... :/
GJ on the blankets and flow! Thanks ! *-*
Maybe consider changes on the stacking of notes like:
00:15:750 (1,3)
00:18:967 (2,4) I like how it improve the flow so... Maybe I'll try to change it later if it's needed to rank
But honestly I can't really find anything wrong on this diff.

Thank you !

Nozhomi wrote:

Btw tu ne peux pas avoir KIWI en diffname parce que celle de Ameyy est la plus dure, donc rename KIWI -> Extra et celle d'Ameyy en Ameyy's KIWI.

NyarkoO wrote:

I love kiwi.
Too bad I'm alergic to it ;w;

Awesome map tho!
Really nice :O

Neoskylove wrote:

request from Ovoui

[Normal]
00:05:028 (2,3) - how about this? Yeah, that's better, changed

[Insane]
00:09:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this is antijump idk
00:26:652 (1,2,3,4,5) - over jump. nerfed it

Good luck

Neoskylove wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:955 (2,4) - Is this stack okay? I think this is dangerous, Could you avoid them? The approach circle of 4 appear way after the player has to click on 2, therefore I think it's good :'D But I keep it in mind if it's noticed again
00:05:385 (4,2) - ^ Same
Good Thanks !

Collab Normal

Neoskylove wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:597 (5) - Check DS changed the whole part
00:25:025 (1) - ^ ^
00:26:097 (3,4) - ^ ^
Not bad, But you should check DS.

Battquif wrote:

00:16:811 (2,3) - J'aurai plus vu une patern comme celle-ci : http://puu.sh/qgt1Z/48b3b35022.jpg Si tu veux absolument mapper le "c'est possible avec", même si ça me semble de trop par rappord au reste de la map... niveau difficulté c'est un peu trop oui ^^
00:19:311 (6,7,8,1) - blup ? Faut changer ça ça passera beaucoup mieux avec une note appuyer sur les gros ticks blanc, parce que là, ça s'enchaine pas du tout vu que tu sors d'une parti majoritèrement en 1/2 :/ j'ai tout changé
00:26:811 (4,5) - Le flow se dirige vers le bas, dans une normal, c'est mieux de le suivre un minimum Tu peux toujours mettre un angle de 30° ou un triangle mais là c'est du hard J'aurai fais comme ça pour une normal : http://puu.sh/qgsSt/41174f1643.jpg (J'ai fais les chose bien hein ???!!!) ^ ( tu fais les choses trop bien pour moi )
00:28:597 (1) - Faut finir sur le "pok" nan ?? les règles de ranking impose au moins 30 secondes de drain, on est obligé tant qu'elle sont là D:


Faut faire attention avec les changement de DS, il faut qu'ils soient justifiés en Normal. Pour les enchainement de slider 1/2 à 0.70* je suis d'accord, mais il faudrait garder la majorité des DS à 1.0*, c'est la plus utilisé ici.
00:22:525 (4,5,6) - Je comprend pas trop l'utilisation des drums ici :/ pour suivre le vocal :p

Neoskylove wrote:

request from Ovoui

[Hard]
00:00:025 (1,2) - spacing is too low, so many beople could be confused about reading. The song hasn't really started at this moment, so the player can read this easily
00:02:884 (2,3) - It's too high spacing, too. This rhythm don't need to stress. don't make jump with them. If we don't "boost" star rating, there will be too much difference between Insanes and Hard.
00:07:530 (4,5) - It's not too important, It's just blanket miss. Could you fix them? fixed
00:13:070 - I want this is clickable, How about make this? woops dead puush
00:19:682 (1,4) - this overlap looks a little bit messt. Could you avoid them? I don't know how to fix this without changing the map too much.
00:22:363 (6,2) - ^ fixed
00:28:618 (1) - why this is end at 00:30:025 - ? end at 00:30:047 - . It's better. fixed.

Good luck