G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

NM from my Queue~
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so please don't take critism as offense, thanks~ c:

General

● Nice use of combo colours~

Normal

● 00:47:208 (1) - I don't really like the slider >.< Spiced up the slider here
● 00:59:875 (6,1) - That blanket could be improved~ I think my blanket here is fine
● Solid and nice difficulty! Thanks

Hard

● 00:03:208 (3,5) - That blanket can be improved. This one is fine
● 00:14:875 (1) - X140 Y135 for perfect stack.
● 00:17:208 (4) - X343 Y337 for perfect stack.
● 00:28:875 (1) - X432 Y195 ^
● 00:32:541 (3,4) - How about switching these? If you'd switch them, it'd look better, because you can't see the reverse slider next to the long slider. I did something else instead



● 00:41:875 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket. Fixed
● 00:57:208 (5) - How about letting the kick slider moving from the left side, instead from above? I think the current slider already works great



● 00:58:541 (2) - X163 Y38 for perfect stack.
● 01:19:541 (2) - Moving the third slider node to X280 Y96 would make the slider shape more smooth~

hmm? All the stacks are already perfectly stacked or atleast thats what I see on my screen.

That's it with my mod. Good luck ranking your map! c:

Thanks for the mod!! Updated

1. Kiai time for both difficulties are different. If one of them were GD, that is fine, but since both of them were made by you, you must keep it the same. I would follow Hard's kiai time, it fits with the song much more. Pretty sure this is unrankable.

1. 00:01:875 (1,3) - Both of these sliders should be straight for aesthetics.
2. 00:04:875 (1,2,3) - If you are trying to move to the right, at least rotate (2) more to blanket (3), that will look better, and the flow will be smoother.
3. 00:07:208 (1,2,4,5) - Follow the previous rhythm, use sliders instead of circles.
4. 00:07:208 - 00:07:541 - Unsnapped timing points
5. 00:10:541 (2,3,4,5,6) - Follow the previous rhythm, use more sliders than circles.
6. 00:11:208 (4,5,6,1) - (1) appears few millisecs after (4) is played, and the previous flow is suggesting the players to move towards (1). Rearrange the pattern so that this can be avoided. This, most of the time confuses beginners.
7. 00:14:875 (5,1,2) - Flow is bit awkward here, consider moving it this way :
   
   
8. 00:17:541 (1) - Why is this going back where (1) and (2) was? You wouldn't want to break the flow Easy/Normal.
9. 00:20:208 (2) - Try to make this slider point in the midpoint between (1) and (3).
10. 00:20:875 (3,4,5,6) - Either make 2 of these a slider, I would recommend (3) and (4).
11. 00:30:875 (6,1,2) - Something similar like above, beginners will move towards (2) since the flow is suggesting them to go that way.
12. 00:35:875 (1,2,3) - In a pattern like this, you should keep all sliders' shape the same. So (1) should be a straight slider instead of a curved one.
13. 00:53:875 (3,4,1) - ^^
14. 00:57:208 (1,2) - I would make these a slider, then remove NC on (1). Instead I will toggle NC on 00:57:875 (3) - .
15. 01:05:208 (4,5) - Turn these into a slider and make it blanket (3), it will create a nice flow.
16. 01:09:875 (1,1,1) - You don't need to toggle NC on all these.

1. This difficulty in general, breaks flow with no specific reason. Check over these, most of them are unnecessary.
2. And there are jumps when there is no strong beat of any sort. Its ok if you are trying to make patterns off that, but some of them don't really make sense to me.
3. 00:06:208 (8,9) - Why a jump? No strong beat is present here, remove the jump.
4. 00:09:208 (4,5) - Would keep the same distance here.
5. 00:14:875 (1) - Remove NC, you don't need this.
6. 00:17:208 (4) - You don't need to stack this under (3).
7. 00:17:541 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 00:21:875 (3,1) - I still wouldn't cut off the flow here, and at least make a perfect triangle, move (1) to x=88 y=260.
9. 00:22:541 (1) - Remove NC
10. 00:25:875 (2,3) - Don't make a jump if the space is 1/4 beat or lesser, remove the jump.
11. 00:26:541 (4,5) - ^^
12. 00:28:875 (1) - Remove NC. NC should instead go here : 00:28:541 (8) -
13. 00:28:541 (8,1,1) - This flow itself looks really weird. Can't really give suggestions on this though.
14. 00:31:041 (5,1) - Again, don't make jump when there is 1/4 beat space or less.
15. 00:32:208 (2,3,4,5) - Unnecessarily breaking off the flow here again, I would do this :
    
    
16. 00:48:208 (2,3,4) - ^^
17. 00:59:541 (4,5,6) - Notes like this previously weren't stacked. You could choose to unstack these, or stack the previous similar notes.
18. 01:04:875 (4,5) - Why would you go backwards? You could try to make a triangle instead.
19. 01:09:208 (2,3,4) - Since you used 1/4 sliders for triplets up to now, why not do it here too?
20. 01:09:875 (5,6,7,8) - Doubles are way too hard for Hard difficulties, make these a 1/4 slider.
21. 01:14:208 (1) - Why an NC here? I would just remove NC for both 01:13:875 (1,1) - .
22. 01:11:208 (10,1) - NCs on downbeats, remove NC on (1) and place it on (10).

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hey there~ Request as made in my queue.

1. Unrankable issues
2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it.
3. Just small suggestions/nazi :/

[General]

1. Kiai time for both difficulties are different. If one of them were GD, that is fine, but since both of them were made by you, you must keep it the same. I would follow Hard's kiai time, it fits with the song much more. Pretty sure this is unrankable. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:01:875 (1,3) - Both of these sliders should be straight for aesthetics. Fixed
2. 00:04:875 (1,2,3) - If you are trying to move to the right, at least rotate (2) more to blanket (3), that will look better, and the flow will be smoother.
3. 00:07:208 (1,2,4,5) - Follow the previous rhythm, use sliders instead of circles. Fixed
4. 00:07:208 - 00:07:541 - Unsnapped timing points Fixed
5. 00:10:541 (2,3,4,5,6) - Follow the previous rhythm, use more sliders than circles. Fixed
6. 00:11:208 (4,5,6,1) - (1) appears few millisecs after (4) is played, and the previous flow is suggesting the players to move towards (1). Rearrange the pattern so that this can be avoided. This, most of the time confuses beginners. Fixed
7. 00:14:875 (5,1,2) - Flow is bit awkward here, consider moving it this way :
   Did something similar
   
8. 00:17:541 (1) - Why is this going back where (1) and (2) was? You wouldn't want to break the flow Easy/Normal. Fixed
9. 00:20:208 (2) - Try to make this slider point in the midpoint between (1) and (3). Fixed
10. 00:20:875 (3,4,5,6) - Either make 2 of these a slider, I would recommend (3) and (4). Fixed
11. 00:30:875 (6,1,2) - Something similar like above, beginners will move towards (2) since the flow is suggesting them to go that way. Fixed
12. 00:35:875 (1,2,3) - In a pattern like this, you should keep all sliders' shape the same. So (1) should be a straight slider instead of a curved one.
13. 00:53:875 (3,4,1) - ^^
14. 00:57:208 (1,2) - I would make these a slider, then remove NC on (1). Instead I will toggle NC on 00:57:875 (3) - .
15. 01:05:208 (4,5) - Turn these into a slider and make it blanket (3), it will create a nice flow. Fixed
16. 01:09:875 (1,1,1) - You don't need to toggle NC on all these.

[Hard]

1. This difficulty in general, breaks flow with no specific reason. Check over these, most of them are unnecessary.
2. And there are jumps when there is no strong beat of any sort. Its ok if you are trying to make patterns off that, but some of them don't really make sense to me.
3. 00:06:208 (8,9) - Why a jump? No strong beat is present here, remove the jump. Fixed
4. 00:09:208 (4,5) - Would keep the same distance here.
5. 00:14:875 (1) - Remove NC, you don't need this.
6. 00:17:208 (4) - You don't need to stack this under (3).
7. 00:17:541 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 00:21:875 (3,1) - I still wouldn't cut off the flow here, and at least make a perfect triangle, move (1) to x=88 y=260. Did something similar
9. 00:22:541 (1) - Remove NC
10. 00:25:875 (2,3) - Don't make a jump if the space is 1/4 beat or lesser, remove the jump. Fixed
11. 00:26:541 (4,5) - ^^
12. 00:28:875 (1) - Remove NC. NC should instead go here : 00:28:541 (8) - Fixed
13. 00:28:541 (8,1,1) - This flow itself looks really weird. Can't really give suggestions on this though.
14. 00:31:041 (5,1) - Again, don't make jump when there is 1/4 beat space or less.
15. 00:32:208 (2,3,4,5) - Unnecessarily breaking off the flow here again, I would do this : Did something similar
    
    
16. 00:48:208 (2,3,4) - ^^
17. 00:59:541 (4,5,6) - Notes like this previously weren't stacked. You could choose to unstack these, or stack the previous similar notes. Fixed
18. 01:04:875 (4,5) - Why would you go backwards? You could try to make a triangle instead.
19. 01:09:208 (2,3,4) - Since you used 1/4 sliders for triplets up to now, why not do it here too?
20. 01:09:875 (5,6,7,8) - Doubles are way too hard for Hard difficulties, make these a 1/4 slider. Fixed
21. 01:14:208 (1) - Why an NC here? I would just remove NC for both 01:13:875 (1,1) - .
22. 01:11:208 (10,1) - NCs on downbeats, remove NC on (1) and place it on (10).

Overall, I feel that the flow can be improved, there is lots of possibilities for that.
GL! Thanks! Stuff with no comment I did not change. Some of the NCs you said to change are to emphasize distinct syllables. Some of those jumps you told me to change are just stacks?? lol.

Thanks for the detailed mod, greatly appreciate it! Updated

GabCM wrote:

As requested in my modding queue, here I am!

[General]

1. The map would fit even more on the song if you set the timing offset to 1830, instead of 1854. Otherwise, it's well done.

[Normal]

1. 00:41:854 (1,1) - Something should be done about those two consecutive spinners. I would either replace the first one with a pattern of circles/sliders, or remove the second one and make it a small break time segment. Removed second spinner and made a break
2. 00:47:187 (1,4,1,2,3,4,1,3,1,4,3,5,6,3,4,1,3,4,1,4,5,3) - The ending point of the sliders in the Kiai time aren't snapped properly to the beat, even if I set the beat map divisor to 1/16. To fix, you should extend these sliders, even a little little bit, until they reach their desired snapped ending points. For example, this slider... I copy pasted my timing points from hard and it looks like I forgot to fix it.
   
   
   
   ...doesn't end at any beat snapping point. I would make it like this instead.
   
   
   
   This applies to all of the sliders I've selected. The other ones in that difficulty are fine.

Otherwise, that difficulty was fun to play! Good work, and keep going! Aha, thanks!

[Hard]

• The distance between some object seems inconsistent. For example, 00:07:187 (1,2,3,4,5) these circles aren't distanced consistently for being half-beats. Overall, sometimes the objects feel too close to each other, and at other times, they feel too far from each other. I fixed the jumps so its more equal.

1. 00:44:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There are distance and positionning issues for the objects right here. For such a velocity, these are placed too far away from each other, and in non-intuitive positions. I would position those objects differently. Right here is the climax point of the song and plus hards have more leniency towards DS so a pattern like is allowed and does the fit song well.

Your map has potential. Keep going, and good luck!

Histoire wrote:

from my queue

Yoru no Kuni

[General]

1. source should be "GANGSTA." <-- with the . source: http://www.funimation.com/shows/gangsta/home Fixed
2. Combo colour 2 is tad too to dark, consider changing colour I think its okay as it is rn
3. Soft HS all the way? Yep

[Normal]

1. Consider switching to CS3 Makes it too similar to hard
2. 00:41:854 (1,1) - both spinners are too short Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:11:187 (3) - offscreen It looks like it in editor but it actually isn't
2. 00:46:187 - missing notes? Intended to be empty

good luck for rank! Hopefully it will get ranked soon!

New mp3 and updated, thanks for the mods!

[ Ernasis ] wrote:

Right here is the climax point of the song and plus hards have more leniency towards DS so a pattern like is allowed and does the fit song well.

buhei wrote:

from my queue

General

1. The Timing of your map is Totally wrong. The offset Should be 1850. Also Remeber to adjust the preview time after you change the offset.

I don't think there is anything wrong with the current offset and I tried yours and it was wayy off.

P.S. Fix your offset first, then check the mod below please.

Normal

1. 00:09:183 (5) - Delete the whistle on SLIDER BODY
2. 00:23:183 (1) - ^
3. 00:33:850 (1) - ^
4. 00:52:516 (1) - ^
5. 00:57:850 (3) - 01:03:183 (1) - 01:12:516 (4,6) - ^
6. 01:11:183 (1) - 01:11:850 - 01:12:183 (3) - add whistles
7. 00:14:183 (4) - Considering 24clap, change it into a slider and add a clap to the tail.
8. 00:17:183 - add a note or a slider.

Maybe you had a old version of this map but all the points listed above are incorrect. The points that you told me to take off whistle don't even have whistle. lol.

Hard

1. 00:05:183 - Missed clap here fixed
2. 00:20:350 (6) - pay attention to your spacing I don't see anything wrong with spacing
3. 00:21:516 (2) - add whistle done
4. 00:53:516 (2) - you wrongly added whistle to this slider body, making the soundeffect noisy no whistle here in the first place
5. 01:19:516 (2) - ^ theres not even a slider nor whistle here
6. 01:21:183 (4,5) - add whistle ok

Dromadan wrote:

Hey, i hope this can help.

Hard

00:13:321 Make a pattern with this: http://puu.sh/jEL1i/0e4b8ad4cd.jpg It feels much better! Sure
00:15:487 http://puu.sh/jEM9H/a3a71be0f9.jpg Try this as well
00:18:154 http://puu.sh/jEMgU/2748ea0096.jpg Doesn't feel good ^
00:23:821 Just add a note between those two sliders Sure

Normal

00:15:821 This feels unnatural. Remove the reverse arrow and make the slider as long as the third slider or replace the second slider with two notes. It already fits the song and flows well so no change
00:41:821 I'd extend this spinner up to 00:44:487 and remove the break, adding some more notes until 00:46:487 No change

I wish you good luck with the map

1. 00:07:154 (1) - I don't think having this at 5% volume this is even rankable, nonetheless it sounds really weird silent, have it at 25% like everything else (applies to hard diff)
2. 00:14:487 and 00:15:154 - Don't skip these white ticks. Just make 00:14:154 (4,1) - these 1/2 sliders
3. 00:15:821 (2) - Why is there a reverse here? Nothing is on the blue tick, but there's one 00:16:487 (3) -
4. 00:17:821 - Don't skip this either
5. 00:20:154 (1) - This 1/4 reverse I sort of understand since the guitar is slightly more audible here, but you skipped it here 00:21:321 so I suggest leaving this as a 1/2. (Some) of these 1/4 reverses you're doing should really only be used when there's a clear note like the vocals at 00:24:154 (3) - . It's just a normal diff after all, no need to map something you can barely barely hear
6. 00:25:821 (1) - Definitely no need for a reverse here, 1/2 plays better
7. 00:29:821 (4) - ^
8. 00:30:821 (6) - This plays pretty bad starting on the red tick. The strong held vocal starts on the white tick (well technically the blue but... basically where this ends) so it's better to start this on that beat.
9. 00:33:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This whole rhythm is really weird because you map the vocals with the starting slider, and then you map the generic background drum beat even though the vocals deserve to be highlighted here. You can fix it by deleting 2 3 or 4 and starting the following sliders on the red ticks.
10. 00:37:821 (4,3) - Minor overlap but easily fixed by a ctrl+H on 00:39:154 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 00:39:154 (2,3) - Swap these, the stronger beat where the slider should start is at 2's position
12. 00:41:821 (1) - This spinner is a bit short and you can follow the vocal (for the most part) and end it at 00:44:487 instead, it also removes this unnecessary break
13. 00:47:154 - You don't place any finishes from here until the end of the map unlike in your hard difficulty, please do
14. 00:50:154 (2) - I think this is a little better as 2 notes since there's actually two syllables, and to remove this 1/2 spam in this part
15. 01:09:821 (1,1) - These NC aren't needed

1. 00:04:487 (6) - NC? You start a new one every measure for the most part, except here
2. 00:11:154 (3) - This goes into the hit error bar, but idk if that matters
3. 00:14:821 (1,1) - Make these 1/2 sliders like you did with 00:22:821 (2) - so you don't miss the start of the next measure
4. 00:22:821 (2) - Add finish on end
5. 00:43:154 (3,4,5) - Emphasis here is a bit weird, big spacing from 3->4 but then smaller from 4->5 doesn't make sense, it should be the other way around
6. 00:43:821 (5,6,1) - Here too ^
7. 00:44:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty hard pattern for this star rating, consider something else (mostly the 1/4 jumps between 3-4-5)
8. 00:56:821 - Place a note here, quite a strong bass drum you miss
9. 01:08:487 (1) - ctrl+J makes this flow a bit better

Synpoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:154 (1) - I don't think having this at 5% volume this is even rankable, nonetheless it sounds really weird silent, have it at 25% like everything else (applies to hard diff) Changed to 15%
2. 00:14:487 and 00:15:154 - Don't skip these white ticks. Just make 00:14:154 (4,1) - these 1/2 sliders Fixed
3. 00:15:821 (2) - Why is there a reverse here? Nothing is on the blue tick, but there's one 00:16:487 (3) - Fixed
4. 00:17:821 - Don't skip this either Fixed
5. 00:20:154 (1) - This 1/4 reverse I sort of understand since the guitar is slightly more audible here, but you skipped it here 00:21:321 so I suggest leaving this as a 1/2. (Some) of these 1/4 reverses you're doing should really only be used when there's a clear note like the vocals at 00:24:154 (3) - . It's just a normal diff after all, no need to map something you can barely barely hear Fixed
6. 00:25:821 (1) - Definitely no need for a reverse here, 1/2 plays better
7. 00:29:821 (4) - ^ Didnt change this since I think the double 1/4 repetition follows better
8. 00:30:821 (6) - This plays pretty bad starting on the red tick. The strong held vocal starts on the white tick (well technically the blue but... basically where this ends) so it's better to start this on that beat. Fixed
9. 00:33:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This whole rhythm is really weird because you map the vocals with the starting slider, and then you map the generic background drum beat even though the vocals deserve to be highlighted here. You can fix it by deleting 2 3 or 4 and starting the following sliders on the red ticks. Fixed
10. 00:37:821 (4,3) - Minor overlap but easily fixed by a ctrl+H on 00:39:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed
11. 00:39:154 (2,3) - Swap these, the stronger beat where the slider should start is at 2's position Fixed
12. 00:41:821 (1) - This spinner is a bit short and you can follow the vocal (for the most part) and end it at 00:44:487 instead, it also removes this unnecessary break Made 2 spinners instead
13. 00:47:154 - You don't place any finishes from here until the end of the map unlike in your hard difficulty, please do Fixed
14. 00:50:154 (2) - I think this is a little better as 2 notes since there's actually two syllables, and to remove this 1/2 spam in this part Fixed
15. 01:09:821 (1,1) - These NC aren't needed Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:04:487 (6) - NC? You start a new one every measure for the most part, except here Fixed
2. 00:11:154 (3) - This goes into the hit error bar, but idk if that matters Doesn't really matter as long its not offmap
3. 00:14:821 (1,1) - Make these 1/2 sliders like you did with 00:22:821 (2) - so you don't miss the start of the next measure Fixed
4. 00:22:821 (2) - Add finish on end Fixed
5. 00:43:154 (3,4,5) - Emphasis here is a bit weird, big spacing from 3->4 but then smaller from 4->5 doesn't make sense, it should be the other way around Fixed
6. 00:43:821 (5,6,1) - Here too ^ Fixed
7. 00:44:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty hard pattern for this star rating, consider something else (mostly the 1/4 jumps between 3-4-5) For now, no change since I feel its really important to emphasize this part
8. 00:56:821 - Place a note here, quite a strong bass drum you miss Fixed
9. 01:08:487 (1) - ctrl+J makes this flow a bit better Did something similar

Gl, nice song.

Thanks for the great mod! Updated.

[ Ernasis ] wrote:

Maybe you had a old version of this map but all the points listed above are incorrect. The points that you told me to take off whistle don't even have whistle. lol.

buhei wrote:

[ Ernasis ] wrote:

Maybe you had a old version of this map but all the points listed above are incorrect. The points that you told me to take off whistle don't even have whistle. lol.

all the points were depended on the offset 1850

maybe you changed mp3 after i downloaded it. 1821 was totally wrong yesterday when i checked it. but after i dowanloaded your map again i find 1821 is correct now. so if you did change mp3 please write it into creator's words.

1. No problems here

• Picture

1. Dimensions: Good
2. Conflict with combos: Maybe it could do with a little colour on the combos as it does blend in with the bg
3. Conflict with SB: N/A

• Audio

1. Bitrate: 192kbps. It's good
2. Amplification: Fine
3. Conflict with hitsounds: None

1. Fine

1. x: 452 y:344
2. x:472 y:308
3. x:464 y:252

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