Fripside is the best <3
This mapset was well mapped so some difficulties might have very little to the mod.
General00:30:371 - The inherited point here can be quieter than it is now. 40% or 50% would be good.
KantanSuggestions:
00:44:343 (47) - Change to
k. This sounds better imo.
01:27:083 (108) - This vocals here sound the same as 01:13:932 (88). I think it's better to change to
d.
01:30:371 (113,114) - Same thing here, the vocals sound the same as 01:17:220 (93,94), so change to
K.
Optional:
00:09:001 (5) - I think this hit should have a finisher; it sounds pretty similar to the previous two hits. Same thing at 00:15:576 (15). Furthermore, I hear the pitch of the instrumentals of the pitch go up slightly so it's definitely possible to change them to
K's too. Just something to consider.
00:43:110 - Adding a
K here like in the Muzukashii sounds good too. You probably won't do this, but if you do, do it for the Futsuu too.
01:50:919 (142) - I thought this small portion where there's nothing between the hit and spinner is slightly boring. Instead you could change it to a SLIDER (finisher) that goes up to 01:52:152.
FutsuuSuggestions:
00:36:535 - This doesn't really matter, but you had a
k here in the Kantan. Moving hit 66 would to here might be a better choice.
00:13:316 (16) - This hit should be moved to 00:13:727, since it fits more perfectly with the vocals, if that's what you're trying to match it with. Looking at the kiai time, it looks like it's intentional so you can probably ignore.
00:51:535 (95) - Similar to the previous one, this hit should be move to 00:51:946, since it fits more perfectly with the vocals. This one should definitely be changed.
01:44:138 (226) - Since you did a precise job on matching all the hits in the last section to match the instrumentals, I think you should remove this hit.
Optional:
00:45:782 (83) - This hit doesn't sound too good here. When I listened to it, I expected there to be another hit after this, but it leaves the player hanging in a sense. I think it should be removed. You could even add a
d at 00:46:398 (probably not though).
MuzukashiiSuggestions:
00:22:562 (52,53,54) - Changing hit 52 to
k sounds better to me.
00:49:891 (130) - This hit isn't necessary. Remove if you want to.
01:15:576 (214,215) - Switch the colours of these hits, and see if it sounds better. I like it better. Same thing with hits 262 and 263, 286 and 287.
01:20:508 (232,233,234,235,236,238,239,240,241,242) - These two five note rhythms sound the same as the other three, so I don't really understand why you changed the pattern only here. Doesn't really matter though.
OniSuggestions:
00:27:802 - Add a hit here, your choice of colour and remove the finisher on hit 60 so that it accommodates to that. I think it'd sound better by matching with the instrumental, and it's a rhythm fitting for an Oni.
01:37:768 (368,369,370,371,372) - I think it would sound wonderful if there were finishers on these hits.
Optional:
01:09:515 (230) - This hit can be removed. This seems a bit as if you're trying to put in too many hits.
Inner OniSuggestions:
00:05:405 (11) - In this section, you seem pretty focused on matching the hits with the vocals, so I think you should remove this hit. Same with hit 20, and 29.
00:37:254 (190) - I don't hear anything here that supports this hit. Remove this hit. Same with hit 198. Hit 204 and 211 are fine as is.
Optional:
01:50:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This steam is definitely fine, but I think making it the same pattern on the Oni emphasizes the end of the song, and the strong instrumentals in the background
Sorry I was late to mod this
Really good map. The Oni and Inner Oni were both fun to play and listen to. Good luck on rank