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Krisom

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Krisom 2010-09-03T23:54:09+00:00

Hello Hello

General-
02:40:432 - Add a Kiai Time timing section here to be consistent with 01:15:099's one.
Sometimes, the pulsation on the SB is likem, really intense, though I'm not sure if it needs an epilepsy warning. I'd suggest making it softer :3

Easy-
01:28:432 (1) - Is this slider really worth a new combo?
01:36:432 (1) - Add a finish at the start
02:20:932 (2) - This is too hard for an Easy. Specially considering that you've followed the beat for the entire song. Also, as it is stacked, it's much harder to tell that it is a 1/4 note
02:23:599 (2) - ^
02:32:432 (1) - Is this slider really worth a new combo?
02:40:099 (2,1) - Not stacked correctly under (1)'s end. You may want to fix this by moving them away or stacking them manually.
03:15:099 (1) - Is this slider really worth a new combo?
Good~

Normal-
Approach Speed -2/-3?
01:08:099 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly under (1)'s end. You may want to fix this by moving them away or stacking them manually.
01:25:432 (1) - Why the new combo? There's not even a jumo here to back it up :v
03:01:765 (1) - Add a finish at the start
03:10:432 (1) - Is this slider really worth a new combo?
03:20:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it likethis?

Hard-
03:22:432 (4,1) - If you'll add a new combo, it should be at (4), not at (1) (though I'd remove the new combo)
This seems good. Also, I know I've seen these sliders somewhere before =P! Good job!

~

Cirno

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Cirno 2010-09-04T05:32:09+00:00

D:第一页的帖子标题怎么是春哥…

Anyway,have a kdstar

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-04T05:52:06+00:00

Cirno wrote:
D:第一页的帖子标题怎么是春哥…

Anyway,have a kdstar

这个图最早是春哥，后来给换掉了
thank you for the kdstar

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-04T07:22:44+00:00

Finished thanks
The sliders is from your diff in Hatsune Miku & Kagamine Rin - Colorful x Melody ^^

P.S:I havn't found photo yet

Astom

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Astom 2010-09-04T17:47:34+00:00

Fine to me

Here a BG u need resize it if u use it
http://www.skallen.net/s_images/gallery/Wallpapers/Yui%20Makino/yui_makino_headphones_1680x1050.jpg

Starred :>

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-05T09:46:23+00:00

Wow~nice pic!Thank you!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-05T10:05:07+00:00

Changed the BG

Arusha Shuna

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Arusha Shuna 2010-09-06T07:43:58+00:00

Request Accepted
Sorry for the delay

General
make the pulsing BG in the beginning of the 1st kiai less intense?
Hard
you can ignore the add a note mods if it's because scoring issue
00:44:432 (5,6) - i don't like this
01:40:099 (6) - spacing issue
02:46:099 (3) - ^
02:46:766 (x) - add a note?
02:57:932 (x) - ^
03:12:266 (x) - ^

not bad
STAR!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-06T10:03:56+00:00

Finished,thanks

Faust

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Faust 2010-09-06T20:36:48+00:00

Well. Thank God it was a waste of modding time.
I assumed you wanted a double-check/triple-check of sorts. As far as I'm concerned, the mapset is pretty much ready. I don't think my input will make the map anymore better than it is more than only to conform it to my likings. I'm quite happy with it, have a star.

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-09T11:43:38+00:00

sorry i have mo time to deal with this coz i have to study everyday,so i couldn't use my pc
may will be free after 9.20
also thank for your modding

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-09-11T13:56:13+00:00

oops

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-09-13T03:10:22+00:00

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. =x

[General]
*I expected a single kiai fountain on 03:33:766. (:
*The spinner spin/point noises are a bit loud and don't fit the song... If you could add silent .wav sounds for these or silence (or even just lower the volume) for the spinners in each difficulty, I think they would sound much better.
*Offset feels a bit late. Try something like 21,759 and resnap on all difficulties, please.
*"beatmap" covering up Yui's name in the intro is a bit strange. Also,

[Easy]
02:34:766 (1) - Hmmmm maybe start this on the white tick and shorten?
02:58:266 (3) - This and 02:59:599 (3) are the only blue tick notes in the entire map, so they're a bit unexpected. How about using some more sliders here to make it a bis easier?

[Normal]
*Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Approach Rate are all a bit high for a Normal. They're only a tick or two under Hard's settings, so how about lowering each of these a little bit?
02:38:265 (1) - Even though this is Normal, I think that this is the only single blue-tick note you used (so again, it's a bit unexpected). How about ending the spinner a white tick early, and then place a beat at 02:37:766?

[Hard]
01:22:599 (1) - It's really hard to see that this is a slider due to the hitbursts (100/300's) from the previous notes.
02:06:099 (6) - ^
02:10:932 (1) - ^
02:55:765 (10,1) - spacing? o-o;
03:33:765 (7) - perhaps make this a new combo (like in Normal)?
*I was worried about many of the overlapping notes such as 01:23:432 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11), but I didn't seem to have any trouble reading patterns like these when playing, so I suppose it's okay.
*A bit easy for 13M points... It looks like lowering either the drain or the overall difficulty one tick will lower the score to 10M, so I highly recommend doing that.

Great job!
Great job!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-21T03:07:53+00:00

Sorry for the delay of kd><
I came home before 5 mins yet - -10+ days for the school life and I have no time to use PC

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-09-21T03:09:37+00:00

Weiren wrote:
Sorry for the delay of kd><
I came home before 5 mins yet - -10+ days for the school life and I have no time to use PC

Don't worry about it <3

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-21T09:46:51+00:00

Done^^

Soaprman

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Soaprman 2010-09-28T23:31:00+00:00

No mistakes found while playing. I've never been a big fan of storyboarded claps but I have to admit that they work pretty well here! Hard was really fun to play, too.

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-09-30T14:19:36+00:00

lol
Thanks~

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2010-10-02T13:26:43+00:00

原来你还会做正常向的歌啊``````

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-03T02:18:33+00:00

wuliang wrote:
原来你还会做正常向的歌啊``````

- -春哥那个不是正常向么

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-05T18:47:03+00:00

[General]
* seriously change your avatar

[Easy]
03:15:092 (2) - I feel it's a bit hidden, can you make it to be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29305 >__<

[Normal]
* set preview point to same as other diffs x-x/
* silder velocity a bit high orz
* T______T dont know if you can please lower star rating of this diff a bit, i feel bad with ~~baka~~ star rating ;w;
[lower something like 'HP Drain Rate' and 'Overall Difficulty']
01:40:092 (3,4,5) - change them to silder, look easier then 1/4
02:25:425 (3,4,5) - ^
02:43:425 (2,3,4) - ^
02:54:092 (2,3,4) - ^
03:05:425 (3,4,1) - ^

Hard was fun ~ and other diffs are nice, and and cute song ><!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-05T18:50:22+00:00

OK I will fix it in daytime^^Time to bed now
Also thank for your modding=ω=
lol I ' ve changed my avatar- -

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-05T19:48:21+00:00

Weiren wrote:
lol I ' ve changed my avatar- -

Should I bite you.. Orz..

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-06T02:25:33+00:00

All fixed but with out the slider velocity lol
Fix them means rebuilding this beatmap and remod

orioncomet wrote:
Should I bite you.. Orz..

：D

Ice coffee

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Ice coffee 2010-10-06T12:09:08+00:00

fuwafuwa star

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-06T12:09:58+00:00

thanks

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-16T08:40:17+00:00

SB effects changed a little so that won't rush players.

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-10-23T03:45:37+00:00

~~我想领走一个Insane guest diff= =请问可以吗?~~

Ask for guest diff in IRC.

Last edited by Curisu 2010-10-23T03:48:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-23T03:46:34+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
我想领走一个Insane guest diff= =请问可以吗?

欢迎啊BOY♂~

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-10-23T11:13:57+00:00

Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa (Weiren) [yznoob].osu

lol,3分钟送1700万分其实是坟
~~这Insane简单到爆(误~~

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-23T12:05:28+00:00

Add yangzd88's diff and make a little changes on SB sprit

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-10-24T07:38:07+00:00

[yangzd88's insane] spacing varies a lot in the beginning (0.76x ~ 0.85x)
0:21:258 (5,6,7) down 1 grid

[hard]
0:47:425 (10) up+left 1 grid?
2:21:259 (1,2,3,4) Fix this uneven spacing without grid snap? ._.

nice map, star

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-10-24T11:47:08+00:00

Thank you wmf~
Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa (Weiren) [yangzd88's Insane].osu

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-25T02:21:33+00:00

Thank you~~sir♂~~
I will fix it on weekend...I'm on campus now lol

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-10-29T12:06:09+00:00

Fixed.

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-11-06T09:33:58+00:00

我了个去叫了好几个modder结果全部被54

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-11-06T19:02:28+00:00

Added yangzd88 in Tags

Zelos

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Zelos 2010-11-10T01:44:50+00:00

i thank you for posting in my queue but i saw no issues.

Nice solid map. Great job.

Star.

Get this bubbled and stuff soon.

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-11-12T13:24:23+00:00

Thank you~

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2010-11-20T09:26:05+00:00

Hitsounds in Hard was fixed.

JauiPlaY

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JauiPlaY 2011-01-10T11:21:43+00:00

你好

我是擼過的沙包
一些建議,希望對你有幫助吧

GENERAL
歌不錯呢

EASY
大體上沒什么問題,不過:
01:25:759(1), 01:28:425(2) - 這兩個SLIDER都可以再圓一點

NORMAL
01:36:425(2) - 從這里開始到01:39:092(2)就比較讓新人糾結了……雖然這樣遮也不是不可以,但最好還是換個方式吧
02:38:759(2) - 移到02:38:592

HARD
01:06:758(1) - 既然和EASY的情況類似,最好把SPINNER的長度也統一了
02:51:092(1) - 這個SLIDER可以更對稱一些
03:14:425(2) - ^

yangzd88's insane
OK
萌妹果然花了不少心血在這

其實這張圖基本上沒什麼東西可以MOD了,但要說可以修改的地方其實還不少
比如SLIDER的形狀,CIRCLE之間的距離和位置等
很多地方稍微有點粗糙,如果肯花時間去修改的話,還能增色很多
祝你早日把這張圖RANK掉吧~

SO
STAR!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-10T12:10:58+00:00

THX~我看看去~
萌妹（噗）

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-10T14:00:11+00:00

黑历史(满头黑线

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-10T14:14:15+00:00

唔嚯，いい黑历史

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-10T14:18:18+00:00

@JPY 这个diff量产送分而已(slap
@猥人没神马好改的..黑历史也不想说神马(伸出爪子抓基片鸭

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-10T14:33:15+00:00

放假了时间多= =过几天把里面有些slider重新画下就好

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2011-01-11T00:08:41+00:00

Wow this map is so old o_o I'll give you a full mod then~

~General~
- As far as I know, spinnerbonus2 isn't used for anything on a beatmap. Please delete it and remember to Full Submit after doing it.
- yangdz's diff has a different offset than your diffs, use this one (9759ms) on all diffs, please.
- Easy uses 1 Tickrate, Normal uses 2 Tickrate, Hard uses 0,5 Tickrate and Insane uses 2 Tickrate. It's recommended to use one tickrate for all diffs, so think about this~

~Storyboard~
- There's no real problem with it, but I think that wr.png should move a bit faster. This is just a suggestion though, there's no need to change it if you want it like that :3
- yzd.png appears so suddenly (one of the corners is on the playfield when it appears), move it a bit back? x3

01:57:092 - Do you mind to scale down this line? If looks a bit weird being that close to the edges of the screen...
02:08:258 - Move this line away from the edge of the screen?
02:10:925 - Same as above.
02:15:258 - Do you mind to scale down this line? If looks a bit weird being that close to the edges of the screen...
02:23:842 - This line doesn't fade properly! Also scale it down a bit?
02:26:508 - Same as above, scale it down?

~Easy~
No problems here!!

~Normal~
01:36:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This looks pretty messy, although it's distance snapped correctly. Maybe make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47550

~Hard~
No problems here!!

~yangzd88's Insane~
- 17m max score is definitely too high. Using 1 tickrate it decreases to around 14m, it's still a bit high, but more acceptable I guess xP
- I really think the huge spacings and jumps are unnecessary... =(
- I think you should use the claps at the chorus on the next white tick (01:15:758 (4) - 01:17:092 - 01:18:425 (3) and following), it sounds way better imo.

00:41:258 (5,6) - These jumps are pretty unintuitive ;x;
01:07:092 (5) - New Combo here to mark the jump.
01:59:092 (3) - This slowdown is so unexpected and it breaks the flow completely >_< I think you should change it for something different...
02:18:425 (5) - New Combo here to mark the jumps.
02:19:592 (4) - Hmm no slowdown here?
02:36:425 (5) - New Combo here to mark the jump.
02:39:425 (1,2,3,1) - This is too extreme imo D:

Lovely song and pretty nice map, though I think Insane it's a bit overmapped with all these jumps >x<
Call me back for a recheck~ :3
*star*

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-11T00:23:11+00:00

LOL
Thank you for such a great job~

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-12T00:24:55+00:00

Fix sth..

Can't change tick to 1 cause use slider tick hitsounds

Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa (Weiren) [yangzd88's Insane].osu

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-14T14:46:00+00:00

Fixed~

indyinyou

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indyinyou 2011-01-16T05:51:46+00:00

star ~

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-16T18:42:11+00:00

indyinyou wrote:
star ~

Thanks~

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2011-01-16T18:57:40+00:00

IT'S FUWA FUWA TIME~.

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2011-01-17T00:01:28+00:00

Re-check time!!

~General~
- The tickrates are the same on the diffs. Maybe you should change all to 2 because yangdz said he doesn't want to change it on his diff. The change from 0.5 on Hard to 2 on Insane is weird for sure xP

~Storyboard~
- I like the new effect for the names x3

02:23:842 - This line doesn't fade properly! You should probably make the fade again, but it won't be so hard xP

~Easy~
01:25:759 (1,2) - Are these sliders new? I don't remember seeing them before (if they were I'm just blind ._.). Just wanted to say that they're lovely <3

~Insane~
- I still think 17m max score is too high, but you don't seem to want to change it, so I can just suggest making this diff approved instead of ranked. Do you mind this?

01:07:092 (5) - Make this a New Combo if you're going to keep the jump here, please. (And remove the new combo at 01:07:758 (1))
02:36:425 (5) - Make this a New Combo if you're going to keep the jump here, please.

That's all! Fix these and I'll probably bubble this~
Also don't kudosu this, I'm basically saying things I already said xD

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-17T06:37:15+00:00

THX~Going to fix it

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2011-01-23T00:32:08+00:00

I'm wait your bili baoqingtian

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-23T06:52:07+00:00

wuliang wrote:
I'm wait your bili baoqingtian

LOL已经坑了，这个完成了叫老师挖出来吧

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-24T06:14:55+00:00

Fixed

Beuchi-chan wrote:
~Storyboard~
- I like the new effect for the names x3

~Easy~
01:25:759 (1,2) - Are these sliders new? I don't remember seeing them before (if they were I'm just blind ._.). Just wanted to say that they're lovely <3

vivicat

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vivicat 2011-01-26T02:11:33+00:00

★ミ

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2011-01-26T15:27:15+00:00

Let's see...

I'm not really sure about if 17m max score is really rankable or not, I've asked some people and there are different opinions.

So... since all I can do is bubble this, I'm going ahead because the map it's ready in my opinion. Let's see if we can get a general opinion about it before getting it ranked/approved D:

BUBBLED!!

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-01-26T15:29:19+00:00

Beuchi-chan wrote:
Let's see...

I'm not really sure about if 17m max score is really rankable or not, I've asked some people and there are different opinions.

So... since all I can do is bubble this, I'm going ahead because the map it's ready in my opinion. Let's see if we can get a general opinion about it before getting it ranked/approved D:

BUBBLED!!

LOL Thank you~

LKs

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LKs 2011-01-26T15:42:59+00:00

我擦..
想给星发现我是TM第一个星惊疑之下去首页看
一看还下个路口见的mod..

可惜我没KD了要不然有始有终
ranked

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-01-26T15:47:14+00:00

LKs wrote:
我擦..
想给星发现我是TM第一个星惊疑之下去首页看
一看还下个路口见的mod..
可惜我没KD了要不然有始有终
ranked

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-27T03:36:58+00:00

lol waiting 4 another bat

Weiren wrote:
LKs wrote:
我擦..
想给星发现我是TM第一个星惊疑之下去首页看
一看还下个路口见的mod..
可惜我没KD了要不然有始有终
ranked

额

Derekku

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Derekku 2011-01-27T22:31:22+00:00

Bold: Unrankable/Important things.
Normal: Mostly suggestions.

[General]
*The offset isn't on the downbeat of the measure. Use 11092 instead.
*yzd.png - Does this really need to have "ass" in it? :v
*The SB'd names would look much better if they faded out a bit slower instead of just disappearing suddenly.

[Easy]
00:27:092 (1,2) - Did you intend to have claps on the sliderticks here?
00:43:092 (1) - I advise against using multiple-repeating sliders like this in Easy. They can be a bit unpredictable as to when they end.
01:47:092 - Expected the spinner/kiai to end here like it does on the other diffs. Although actually, the spinner is a bit long, so how about adding a couple of sliders and just starting the spinner at 01:44:425 like it does in Normal?
02:29:759 (1,2,3) - The stacking looks weird when played in test mode. Maybe try unstacking (2) and put it below like this: http://puu.sh/O5k (Don't worry, it won't be off-screen when you play)
02:38:758 (1,1) - Again, the repeating slider (and overlap) may be a bit confusing. Perhaps try something else?
03:12:425 - Kiai should start here.

[Normal]
*//Background and Video events
0,-666,"yui1.png" Any reason why this is -666 instead of 0? o3o
01:47:092 - Expected the spinner/kiai to end here like it does on the other diffs.
02:37:758 (1,2) - Perhaps unstack these so that (2) is more visible?

[Hard]
00:50:592 (1,2,3) - Stacking looks really bad here. Delete 2/3 and remake them and/or try a lower stack leniency: http://puu.sh/Oa6
01:06:759 - Expected a note here.
01:07:092 (1) - shorten to the blue tick?
01:23:425 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The overlap is a bit confusing here. I really recommend making one of these notes (preferably 7 or 9) a new combo.
02:01:092 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above, but I guess 6 could be the new combo.
02:32:092 (1) - shorten to the blue tick?
02:52:092 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Similar new combo suggestion.
03:04:758 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - new combo 6?

[yangzd88's Insane]
*The bpm should be the same as the other diffs (i.e. 90). Halve the bpm to 90 and then double all of your inherited sections (that is, change 0.5x sections to 1x and 1x to 2x). If you want your tick rate back, then you'll also need to double that to 4. However, having tick rate FOUR show tell you that your tick rate is too high and that perhaps you should just tick with 2. If you went with 2, and got rid of a few jumps in this diff, then it could go for ranking. However, at its current state...
*Both the score and the combo are too high for this to be ranked. It looks like yang has already said it was okay to put this for approval, so I suppose we'll go that route?
01:59:092 (3) - This 0.5x slider really doesn't make any sense and is just a combo-breaking trap. Please remove it.
02:21:258 (12,1) - How about angling 12 differently so that these two don't overlap?
02:37:758 (1) - I think this would sound much better if you ended it at 02:38:925.
02:47:592 (6,7,8,1) - stacking is screwed up here. Stack these differently.
03:02:092 (2) - I really suggest not having this at the bottom-left corner of the screen. It's partially hidden under the combo counter and is hard to see after the large jumps beforehand.

MisakaMikoto

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MisakaMikoto 2011-01-28T03:56:42+00:00

萌妹 -w-
猥人头像急需自重...

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-01-28T09:20:57+00:00

railgunX wrote:
萌妹 -w-
猥人头像急需自重...

~~大家自重才是真的自重~~

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-28T09:21:47+00:00

大家自豪才是真的自豪

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-01-28T09:23:01+00:00

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-01-28T10:28:27+00:00

Waiting for yzd's fix

（appで大丈夫か?

MisakaMikoto

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MisakaMikoto 2011-01-28T14:38:42+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
大家自豪才是真的自豪

那个贴吧...

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-02-13T02:52:49+00:00

萌妹快点啊- -

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-02-13T11:08:07+00:00

如签名 afe中

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-02-13T11:34:39+00:00

嗯，我等你，无论多久我也会等下去的（这基情四射的话是怎么回事！

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-02-17T04:35:37+00:00

萌妹我先去找mod了- -等你FIX好了我再加上去

Derekku

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Derekku 2011-03-04T02:18:54+00:00

My apologies for not remodding this sooner. Everything looks fine now, but I'm really disappointed that the guest difficulty was removed. There were only a few things to fix, and I hate to see it removed for seemingly no reason at all. I'd sooner fix the problems myself than let the diff be excluded. It was really nice, so let me know what you'd like to do so I can rebubble or remod.

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-03-04T06:40:21+00:00

Derekku wrote:
My apologies for not remodding this sooner. Everything looks fine now, but I'm really disappointed that the guest difficulty was removed. There were only a few things to fix, and I hate to see it removed for seemingly no reason at all. I'd sooner fix the problems myself than let the diff be excluded. It was really nice, so let me know what you'd like to do so I can rebubble or remod.

Thank you for your reply.But I can't keep track of yangzd88 now...She is a middle school student I know and couldn't online every day.

Though she has told me to delete her GD,I see eye to eye to you that it is not advisable to delete this GD~

I really don't know how to do for the next step..I had to ask her.

Derekku

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Derekku 2011-03-04T07:24:22+00:00

Yeah, definitely try getting in touch with her again. I really hate to see the difficulty go to waste after so much work and being so close to a bubble. I'll try PMing her as well.

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-03-12T13:28:17+00:00

1.I'm not a girl!
2.Plan to remap it lol

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-03-18T13:23:26+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
1.I'm not a girl!
2.Plan to remap it lol

Nice
Waiting for this~

1on_old

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1on_old 2011-04-26T07:38:28+00:00

Waiting for this map!!

Derekku

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Derekku 2011-06-19T02:08:11+00:00

Soooo... anything?

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-09-02T06:49:40+00:00

Resurrected
Remake SB later
Add yangzd88's diff

SPOILER

Your message is too short.

Last edited by EnakoRin 2011-09-02T09:58:35+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-09-02T09:49:51+00:00

rofl

EnakoRin

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EnakoRin 2011-09-03T12:45:59+00:00

REMADE SB

Tired
OK waiting for mod~
Your message is too short.

Kotone

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Kotone 2011-09-10T19:24:25+00:00

久等了,take♂my♂mod
nazi
General
因為萌妹的diff我建議你加個靜音nomal-sliderslide2.wav

Easy
00:49:758 (3) - whistle maybe
00:53:758 (1) - ^頭
01:07:092 (1) - 這spinner是用來偷懶的對吧
01:20:425 (1) - whistle
01:33:759 (1) - 頭whistle
01:34:092 - 這tick音真心不好聽,如果你想雙clap可以加在01:35:425 (2)
02:21:759 (1) - 頭whistle
02:45:758 (1) - whistle
02:59:092 (2) - 折返&尾whistle如何
03:24:425 (3) - 折返whistle

Normal
00:55:425 (4,5) - 4,5 Ctrl+R比較順手
01:15:092 - kiai time部分可以加多點whistle
02:39:425 (3) - whistle

Hard
還是可以加多點whistle
01:00:258 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可以換個排法嗎我很討厭這樣的
01:47:092 (1) - 這個不要疊着,無視spacing隨意擺另外newcombo
02:24:092 (1) - 又偷懶
03:25:758 (1) - 頭whistle
03:33:758 (1) - 不要疊無視spacing隨意擺

萌妹的特別
為什么不是yznoob's moe
有些地方感覺沒出來啊
說過了因為有些soft normal切換很吵建議加個靜音nomal-sliderslide2.wav
00:21:425 - Volume13%吧 20也略吵
我覺得00:32:591 - 00:53:591有點過分了感覺這段太難跟音樂不配什么的
01:12:925 (4) - finish如何
01:14:091 (5) - whistle
01:14:758 - 再大聲點
01:43:424 (6) - 不要完全疊着
01:46:758 (1) - 我感覺用2個circle取代較好
02:08:091 - .
02:59:925 (1) - NC yeah
03:05:758 (7,1) - 不要這樣擺

都是神mapper 給跪了

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-09-12T11:34:46+00:00

karenying wrote:
萌妹的特別
為什么不是yznoob's moe Cause u r much more moe than me❤~
有些地方感覺沒出來啊 ?
說過了因為有些soft normal切換很吵建議加個靜音nomal-sliderslide2.wav 目指猥人
00:21:425 - Volume13%吧 20也略吵 stress 我故意凸出鼓点的
我覺得00:32:591 - 00:53:591有點過分了感覺這段太難跟音樂不配什么的 ...真的吗
01:12:925 (4) - finish如何 ok
01:14:091 (5) - whistle 恩
01:14:758 - 再大聲點 +到65
01:43:424 (6) - 不要完全疊着 ok
01:46:758 (1) - 我感覺用2個circle取代較好 ..好的
02:08:091 - . .?
02:59:925 (1) - NC yeah ..忘了
03:05:758 (7,1) - 不要這樣擺 ok
都是神mapper 給跪了 猥人是我不是= =

Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa (Weiren) [yznoob's special].osu

tutuhaha

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tutuhaha 2011-09-12T23:04:25+00:00

过来凑个热闹
到时候我尝试mod
哎呀神mapper谦虚毛人家不好找茬的咩╮(￣▽￣")╭~~（你奏凯

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-09-15T04:42:06+00:00

All Fixed
Board index » Beatmaps » Pending Beatmaps » Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa

KayeSara

KayeSara 2011-09-15T15:37:16+00:00

伟人虽好哲♂学不过选歌曲还是蛮不错，很正常啊
Sorry for too late
Baka Modding~
Time for ignorable modding~All of them just a suggestion.

[General]

Add Display storyboard in front of combo fire in each diffulty.

[Easy]

03:03:092 (3) - 为了保持节奏一致，这个slider到03:03:425截止吧
如果改了上面看这个吧，不然忽视
1. 03:04:425 (4) - 先删掉
2. 03:04:092 - 加个note
3. 03:04:425 - 加个回旋的slider到03:05:092然后返回到03:05:758
4. 03:06:092 - 加note
5. 03:06:425 - ^

Perfect

[Normal]

00:49:758 (5,1) - 当然节奏什么都没错，只是因为结尾和开头踩在蓝线上和前面的白线起头白线结尾对比有点lag，就是会很容易按快和按掉，当然不算什么大问题。
如果赞同我上面说法可以这样改改
1. 00:49:758 (5) - 从三连剪成一个来回的slider，也就是到00:50:092截止
2. 00:50:425 - 加note
3. 00:50:592 (1) - 移到00:50:758 不过后面的00:51:092 (2) - 删掉

很难再找出问题了，渣mod= =，上述都是nazi

[Hard]

Stack Leniency: 7
01:05:092 (2) - 重叠在01:05:258 (3)的开始吧？
01:33:092 (6) - ^
02:58:425 (7) - ^
03:25:592 (3) - ^
03:31:092 (4) - 可以不用重叠了，感觉节奏很连贯的的

这难度我觉得最新颖就是停顿感了，很喜欢这种，上述的hard的mod也是一样的保持你原来的停顿感，不过我更喜欢在前面停顿，个人觉得更有连贯性。又是一堆nazi。。。再次废掉

[yznoob's special]
首先说对这个diff很喜欢，这种流畅的图真的很不错，不过后面有点偏难部分就有点没曲线性了，多半自己水平不够吧。

Stack Leniency: 7
00:23:924 (9) - 这个prev1.35X~1.4X的距离玩着有感觉，然后next的间距还是在1.8X~1.9X吧
00:39:091 (5) - 向左下移动一些，有流畅感
01:13:591 (4) - 移动到01:13:925然后在01:13:591添加一个note重叠在01:13:425 (3) 上，去掉01:14:091 (5) 就像hard难度的停顿感，超舒服><

后面的suggestion纯粹就是nazi也不说了，不过后面突然有点变难了

Good Luck~

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-10-04T08:59:07+00:00

萌妹求不要偷懒赶快FIX

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-10-04T13:59:13+00:00

.

Download: Makino Yui - Fuwafuwa (Weiren) [yznoob's special].osu

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-10-06T02:53:12+00:00

时间久了我都忘了哪些FIX哪些SKIP了- -

Selee

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Selee 2011-11-01T00:55:02+00:00

都快2012了还不快点 D:

我这曲子都放fav大半年了.....

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-11-08T04:56:33+00:00

Selee wrote:
都快2012了还不快点 D:

我这曲子都放fav大半年了.....

最近忙死了sorry= =

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2011-11-19T05:40:52+00:00

（果断寒假再来弄这个图了

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-11-19T07:36:21+00:00

Weiren wrote:
（果断寒假再来弄这个图了

.....

Derekku

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Derekku 2012-01-24T03:04:38+00:00

I'm glad to be remodding this after it's been nearly a year! <3 this song~

[General]
*For some reason, only the Easy and Hard difficulties are included when downloading this beatmap... Try a full submit to see if that fixes this!
*I see that you have a silent spinnerbonus.wav, but what about spinnerspin? It sounds kind of awkward to have the silent bonus, so perhaps just remove that and use an inherited section to silence spinners (or lower their volume) instead.
*Easy/Normal use pink/blue/green combo colors but Hard/Insane use pink/blue/yellow? This isn't a problem, but I thought it was interesting and want to make sure it's intentional! o3o

[Easy]
01:25:759 (1,2) - I love interestingly-shaped sliders like these~
02:03:092 (1,2,1,2) - Should really try to avoid overlapping notes/sliders like this in an Easy, but I suppose they're obvious and visible enough in this case!
02:38:758 (1,1) - I suggest not stacking these; especially since there's 1/1 between sliders and 01:12:425 (1,2) was 1/2 between sliders.
03:02:758 (2,4) - I felt that these were out of place since they were the only single red-tick notes in the entire difficulty. (They're not too difficult for an Easy, but they just bugged me for consistency reasons :p)

[Normal]
01:22:759 (1) - Sounded a bit strange going from red to red tick instead of white to white.
*03:23:092 - Kiai is supposed to start here.

[Hard]
01:12:258 (1,2,3,4) - Try moving these to the left a little bit. In gameplay, the 01:13:425 (6,7,1) stack starts from the left and things look a bit messy! http://puu.sh/eoiT
01:33:259 (1) - This is unrankable because the second slider repeat is hidden by previous hitbursts http://puu.sh/eojN
02:12:425 (4) - Threw me off because of the extra repeat..
02:46:925 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Most of the overlapping patterns in this difficulty are fine, but this one was a bit too hard to read

[~~Insane~~ yznoob's special]
*Offset is on a different measure than the other difficulties.
*I'd suggest making the kiai like the other difficulties, but since it's a guest difficulty it's not necessary. (However, that last kiai section is super long, so it might be better to break it up like the others anyway)
*Storyboard/fire toggle is used in the other difficulties, but not this one; keep them consistent please!
*0.5 tick rate is no longer rankable, so please change it to something higher (preferably 2 to be consistent with the other difficulties and because the bpm is so low).
00:31:758 (7) - Try moving this slider down a bit; right now it's reallllllly high up and goes under the HP bar.
00:39:091 (5) - ^
00:40:091 (7) - This one goes off the bottom of the screen by a few pixels
*01:15:091 - Kiai should start here; not the blue tick before.
02:39:258 (9) - Doesn't really sound right, im my opinion; not to mention it's hidden under the other notes and you can't even tell that it's a slider (which is pretty much unrankable).
*02:40:425 - Kiai should start here; not the blue tick before.
02:40:925 (2,3) - Can't tell which is the slider and which is the note; try a new combo like 03:17:591 (7,1) instead
02:45:258 (8,9) - ^
*Why does 02:40:425 - 03:10:925 use normal whistles? Is this intentional? It really doesn't fit with the rest of the map :/ Otherwise, the hitsounds are VERY nice in this difficulty!

Overall: Great mapset! Just needs some touch-ups and it should be nearly ready for a bubble!

EnakoRin

Topic Starter

EnakoRin 2012-01-27T07:33:02+00:00

Derekku wrote:
I'm glad to be remodding this after it's been nearly a year! <3 this song~

[General]
*For some reason, only the Easy and Hard difficulties are included when downloading this beatmap... Try a full submit to see if that fixes this!
Full submited

*I see that you have a silent spinnerbonus.wav, but what about spinnerspin? It sounds kind of awkward to have the silent bonus, so perhaps just remove that and use an inherited section to silence spinners (or lower their volume) instead.
Removed file, and turned down the volume

*Easy/Normal use pink/blue/green combo colors but Hard/Insane use pink/blue/yellow? This isn't a problem, but I thought it was interesting and want to make sure it's intentional! o3o
I've made EZ and NM same to the other diffs

[Easy]
01:25:759 (1,2) - I love interestingly-shaped sliders like these~

02:03:092 (1,2,1,2) - Should really try to avoid overlapping notes/sliders like this in an Easy, but I suppose they're obvious and visible enough in this case!
Style changed

02:38:758 (1,1) - I suggest not stacking these; especially since there's 1/1 between sliders and 01:12:425 (1,2) was 1/2 between sliders.
Fixed

03:02:758 (2,4) - I felt that these were out of place since they were the only single red-tick notes in the entire difficulty. (They're not too difficult for an Easy, but they just bugged me for consistency reasons :p)
Removed notes on the red-tick

[Normal]
01:22:759 (1) - Sounded a bit strange going from red to red tick instead of white to white.
Fixed

*03:23:092 - Kiai is supposed to start here.
Fixed

[Hard]
01:12:258 (1,2,3,4) - Try moving these to the left a little bit. In gameplay, the 01:13:425 (6,7,1) stack starts from the left and things look a bit messy! http://puu.sh/eoiT
I've changed them to slider

01:33:259 (1) - This is unrankable because the second slider repeat is hidden by previous hitbursts http://puu.sh/eojN
Fixed

02:12:425 (4) - Threw me off because of the extra repeat..
Fixed

02:46:925 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Most of the overlapping patterns in this difficulty are fine, but this one was a bit too hard to read
Fixed

[~~Insane~~ yznoob's special]
*Offset is on a different measure than the other difficulties.
Offset of all diffs are same now

*I'd suggest making the kiai like the other difficulties, but since it's a guest difficulty it's not necessary. (However, that last kiai section is super long, so it might be better to break it up like the others anyway)
Cutted

*Storyboard/fire toggle is used in the other difficulties, but not this one; keep them consistent please!
Fixed

*0.5 tick rate is no longer rankable, so please change it to something higher (preferably 2 to be consistent with the other difficulties and because the bpm is so low).
Changed to 2

00:31:758 (7) - Try moving this slider down a bit; right now it's reallllllly high up and goes under the HP bar.
Fixed

00:39:091 (5) - ^
Fixed

00:40:091 (7) - This one goes off the bottom of the screen by a few pixels
Fixed

*01:15:091 - Kiai should start here; not the blue tick before.
Fixed

02:39:258 (9) - Doesn't really sound right, im my opinion; not to mention it's hidden under the other notes and you can't even tell that it's a slider (which is pretty much unrankable).
Using stream instead now

*02:40:425 - Kiai should start here; not the blue tick before.
Fixed

02:40:925 (2,3) - Can't tell which is the slider and which is the note; try a new combo like 03:17:591 (7,1) instead
Fixed

02:45:258 (8,9) - ^
Fixed

*Why does 02:40:425 - 03:10:925 use normal whistles? Is this intentional? It really doesn't fit with the rest of the map :/ Otherwise, the hitsounds are VERY nice in this difficulty!
Removed all normal-whistle

Overall: Great mapset! Just needs some touch-ups and it should be nearly ready for a bubble!
Thanks

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-01-29T05:30:55+00:00

以前不是都mod过了么。。。

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