Sorry it took me so long to get to this. =x
[General]
*I expected a single kiai fountain on 03:33:766. (:
*The spinner spin/point noises are a bit loud and don't fit the song... If you could add silent .wav sounds for these or silence (or even just lower the volume) for the spinners in each difficulty, I think they would sound much better.
*Offset feels a bit late. Try something like 21,759 and resnap on all difficulties, please.
*"beatmap" covering up Yui's name in the intro is a bit strange. Also,
[Easy]
02:34:766 (1) - Hmmmm maybe start this on the white tick and shorten?
02:58:266 (3) - This and 02:59:599 (3) are the only blue tick notes in the entire map, so they're a bit unexpected. How about using some more sliders here to make it a bis easier?
[Normal]
*Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Approach Rate are all a bit high for a Normal. They're only a tick or two under Hard's settings, so how about lowering each of these a little bit?
02:38:265 (1) - Even though this is Normal, I think that this is the only single blue-tick note you used (so again, it's a bit unexpected). How about ending the spinner a white tick early, and then place a beat at 02:37:766?
[Hard]
01:22:599 (1) - It's really hard to see that this is a slider due to the hitbursts (100/300's) from the previous notes.
02:06:099 (6) - ^
02:10:932 (1) - ^
02:55:765 (10,1) - spacing? o-o;
03:33:765 (7) - perhaps make this a new combo (like in Normal)?
*I was worried about many of the overlapping notes such as 01:23:432 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11), but I didn't seem to have any trouble reading patterns like these when playing, so I suppose it's okay.
*A bit easy for 13M points... It looks like lowering either the drain or the overall difficulty one tick will lower the score to 10M, so I highly recommend doing that.
Great job!
Great job!
[General]
*I expected a single kiai fountain on 03:33:766. (:
*The spinner spin/point noises are a bit loud and don't fit the song... If you could add silent .wav sounds for these or silence (or even just lower the volume) for the spinners in each difficulty, I think they would sound much better.
*Offset feels a bit late. Try something like 21,759 and resnap on all difficulties, please.
*"beatmap" covering up Yui's name in the intro is a bit strange. Also,
[Easy]
02:34:766 (1) - Hmmmm maybe start this on the white tick and shorten?
02:58:266 (3) - This and 02:59:599 (3) are the only blue tick notes in the entire map, so they're a bit unexpected. How about using some more sliders here to make it a bis easier?
[Normal]
*Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Approach Rate are all a bit high for a Normal. They're only a tick or two under Hard's settings, so how about lowering each of these a little bit?
02:38:265 (1) - Even though this is Normal, I think that this is the only single blue-tick note you used (so again, it's a bit unexpected). How about ending the spinner a white tick early, and then place a beat at 02:37:766?
[Hard]
01:22:599 (1) - It's really hard to see that this is a slider due to the hitbursts (100/300's) from the previous notes.
02:06:099 (6) - ^
02:10:932 (1) - ^
02:55:765 (10,1) - spacing? o-o;
03:33:765 (7) - perhaps make this a new combo (like in Normal)?
*I was worried about many of the overlapping notes such as 01:23:432 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11), but I didn't seem to have any trouble reading patterns like these when playing, so I suppose it's okay.
*A bit easy for 13M points... It looks like lowering either the drain or the overall difficulty one tick will lower the score to 10M, so I highly recommend doing that.
Great job!
Great job!