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fripSide - Flower of Bravery

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yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
I will make some suggestions on the new difficulty by hutka:

00:05:497 (6)(7) - These two sliders sounds a bit weird if compared with vocal...
00:26:023 (1) - Put this note outside of slider maybe?
00:34:707 (10) - Move this note a tiny grid to the left
00:35:003 (11) - This note sounds like a lone note to me... either add more notes or remove it
00:38:556 (10) - Because this note comes right after a "half-BPM" section, consider moving it closer to the slider
I like the diamond jumps~~~
01:18:523 ~01:26:812 - Lengthening snapping distance in a section of song is ok, but try make it consistent

In general, add hitsounds, and make some sections' snapping distance more consistent.

And a very good map so far! ^^b
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
yongtw123//Thanks Fixed ^^ :)

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [hutka's Hard+].osu
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
star for Fripside
askerlate47
45 posts
Joined September 2009
askerlate47
star~~~~~~~
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Koihime >O</*
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
:oops:
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All fine.

[Easy]

00:37:47 (4) - Sounds bad. Change it?

[Normal]

00:26:41 (1) - Too far from (5).

[Yongtw123's Hard]

00:11:61 (4) - Too close from (3).
01:40:62 (2) - Too far from (1).

[Hard]

01:43:78 (1) - Too far from (2), or this is a jump?
01:54:83 (1) - Too close from (5).

[Hutka's Hard+]

Fine.

[Insane]

03:35:89 (1) - This slider go outscreen.
03:37:47 (1) - ^
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
I like fripSide's songs. :)

Please change artist name to 'fripSide'. not 'Fripside'
Your every maps of fripSide have reverse capital letters.

No kudosu plz.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Updated according to ykcarrot's suggestion~

Now this should go along with the ones already updated by minyeob.

And uhm...
no mp3 file?
Something should have gone wrong with uploading.

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
And the map pack still does not contain the audio mp3 file...

I deleted the ones on my computer and tried downloading the new one,
but the map pack is so small (28KB)...
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Ok, how long is this taking ._.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
minyeob
Shorter than you :p
Anyways, fixed everything and bump.
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok
(this diff seems a Normal :S)

[Normal]

It's ok

[yongtw123's Hard]

00:01:015 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]

It's ok

[hutka's Hard+]

00:34:070 (10) - End on white tick (00:35:102)
00:35:497 (x) - Add a circle
00:37:076 (9,10) - confusing :S
01:47:024 (9) - End on white tick (01:47:733)
01:48:128 8x) - Add a circle

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
Gens
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3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. The guest mappers' tags must be on all difficulties.
[Normal]
  1. This is a bit too hard for a normal, but I'm sure you already know that.
02:26:041 (1) - IMO this spinner doesn't fit.

[yongtw123's Hard]
  1. Overall difficulty is too low. :(
00:36:048 (3) - Sounds pretty bad... you better stick more to the vocals. I wouldn't use 1/8's for a slider's repeat.
01:05:089 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.
01:09:064 (6) - Same as 00:36:048 (3).
01:53:006 (1) - Same.

[Hard]

02:26:061 (1) - IMO this spinner doesn't fit.
02:29:057 (1) - ^
03:32:073 (1) - ^
03:35:089 (1) - ^
03:41:081 (6) - I'd move this beat 1/4 back and respace properly. Sounds better.

[hutka's Hard+]

00:34:070 (10) - The endpoint sounds weird in 1/4 snap, try extending it 1/4 more.

[Insane]

Meh... same spinner suggestions as [Hard].

~ ~ ~

You aren't going to let this die, are you? :|
minyeob
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Topic Starter
minyeob
Thanks for supporting me ^^
I'll fix them later.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

Gens wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]
  1. Overall difficulty is too low. :(
Up by 1 notch

00:36:048 (3) - Sounds pretty bad... you better stick more to the vocals. I wouldn't use 1/8's for a slider's repeat.
01:05:089 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.
01:09:064 (6) - Same as 00:36:048 (3).
01:53:006 (1) - Same.
All fixed
Thanks for the advice Gens!

I also optimized the distance spacing.

Updated:

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
miny <3

fripside >w</

hope you can rank it soon after you come back~ :D
minyeob
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Topic Starter
minyeob
yongtw// Thanks for updating fastly for a long period. It had bothered you a lot, hadn't it?

quintitem// Thanks for taking care about me. :D

1 month is pretty long >_<
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze

minyeob wrote:

To BAT/MATs: Please save old maps, thanks
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
:p
Good map
Feeding SP
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Decided to do some modding... :D
Hope you don't mind~

Overall:
How about an offset of 1150?
IMO this map can be a bit difficult for those who hasn't heard this song before, but it's ok I guess~
I won't comment on hitsounds :D

[Easy]
01:07:470 (1) - IMO this jump is too hard for Easy

[Normal]
Overall: maybe fix the "almost" off-screen notes
00:12:602 (1) - IMO this jump is a bit unexpected
03:05:891 (1,2,1,2,3) - Maybe following the three heavy beats in the BGM is better?
03:18:523 (1,2,3) - Maybe the three beats here should be quicker?
03:40:628 (1) - change in spacing, maybe fixing it?

[yongtw123's Hard]
I can't mod my own diff, lol...

[Hard]
00:10:426 (9,1,2,3,1) - IMO spacing here is a bit irregular, and it's not aligned with (9), not pretty :p
01:43:781 (1) - This is jump is too sudden if compared with the one on 01:42:794

[hutka's Hard+]
There are some big jumps, but I guess can be expected...
Also, this difficulty's max score is lower than [Hard]'s, I'd recommend continue mapping the entire song.

[Insane]
:( I'm not good at modding insane difficulties. But from what I've seen this is sure one insane diff.
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
new diff :)

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [hutka's Diff].osu
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Yayyy (///∇//)

[General]
- delete "minyeob" from your TAG.. I know you know Why X<
- delete "Anime" from your TAG because It was already on Genre
- delete "Fripside flower of bravery" from your TAG because It was already on Artist and Title
- Add "hutka" in TAG
- BG Colour: Black
- If It possible delete the .osb file too and full submit
- your .mp3 so high quality.. lol XD

[Easy]
01:32:437 - this timing selection seem useless
01:38:951 - ^
01:45:266 - ^
01:57:997 - ^
02:03:622 - ^
02:12:898 - ^
03:13:490 - ^
03:20:102 - ^
Fine ~

[Normal]
03:45:760 (4) - Orz... remove sound Whistle at last silder (and maybe low volume abit)

[yongtw123's Hard]
- make sure that this difficulty have the same Preview Point with other difficulties
00:13:194 (1) - try sound finish
03:46:895 (1) - move it to white tick?
03:47:191 (2) - move it to blue tick?
03:47:487 (3) - move it to red tick?

[Hard]
Fine ~

[Insane]
02:35:891 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this past killing meeeeeee
Orz.. In fact.. your Insane is killing me at all.. grrrrr
Fine ~

[hutka's Diff]
00:13:786 (1) - try sound finish
00:24:641 (6) - new combo
00:24:839 (1) - remove new combo
02:39:049 (1) - try sound finish

Already stared xD
<3 koihime, anyway
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

orioncomet wrote:

Yayyy (///∇//)
[yongtw123's Hard]
- make sure that this difficulty have the same Preview Point with other difficulties
I'll leave minyeob to fix this. And btw, I feel the preview point should be a little earlier. The vocal suddenly fades in. >:(
00:13:194 (1) - try sound finish ok
03:46:895 (1) - move it to white tick?
03:47:191 (2) - move it to blue tick?
03:47:487 (3) - move it to red tick?
oh unsnapped. fixed.
But I'd like to point out that after I re-snap these notes, I feel the hitsound is slightly off from the BGM. I highly encourage a recheck on the offset. :?
Thanks!

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Remove "Fripside" from tags.
2. For [Easy], [Normal], [Hard], and [Insane], add kiai time like [yongtw123's Hard] or [hutka's Diff].
3. Honestly, I don't like the whistles spamming.

[Easy]
00:35:891 (1) - Please no such jump in [Easy] diff.
00:43:786 (2) - Move one tiny grid up.
00:51:977 (2) - Hmm. I see a blue tick note in [Easy] diff. It's rather hard thought. I prefer slider for this section. Start from (1), repeat on (2), end on (3).
00:53:556 (2) - ^
01:02:339 (2,3) - Little distance error.
01:04:312 (1,2) - Sounds bad in my opinion.
01:18:523 (3) - Add repeat maybe. [?]

[Normal]
00:05:102 (3) - It looks like 1/2 beat with (2) for me. Consider changing its placement to triangle shape?
00:07:470 (1) - The jumping is too far, maybe. [?]
00:41:418 (5,6,7) - Move them down a bit.
02:58:983 (1,2,3) - ^
03:37:470 (1,2) - ^

[yongtw123's Hard]
00:01:944 (4,6) - Reduce them one 1/4 beat. You follows the vocal, right?
00:13:194 (1) - I prefer the spinner start from 00:14:181.
00:38:951 (1) - This is bad. Move backward one 1/4 tick, then extend the slider so it will be 1/4 repeating slider. [!]
02:27:108 (4,6) - I don't like this little jump.

[Hard]
-- I found some ugly jumps and patterns..
00:10:628 (1) - Ugly jump and placement.
00:12:602 (8) - Ugly placement.
01:57:207 (1) - Ugly jump.
01:52:668 (5) - Those repeats are really bad. Even overmapped. Please reduce it if you want.
02:55:826 (1) - No. Use distance snap for this. [!]
03:37:470 (1,3) - I find their placements are odd. They are not stacked properly.

[Insane]
00:10:431 (6) - No. Use distance snap. [!]
03:39:839 (3) - Move it down a bit.

[hutka's Diff]
00:37:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped.
01:46:944 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:50:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Star.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

VanMoNky wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]
00:01:944 (4,6) - Reduce them one 1/4 beat. You follows the vocal, right? Hmm, but I feel it sounds good as it is. :D
00:13:194 (1) - I prefer the spinner start from 00:14:181. ok, i mapped the gap a bit
00:38:951 (1) - This is bad. Move backward one 1/4 tick, then extend the slider so it will be 1/4 repeating slider. [!] fixed
02:27:108 (4,6) - I don't like this little jump. i just removed it lol
Thanks for the mod!

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Why is this on WIP?
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
minyeob
I'm considering removing some of my diffs lol
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami

minyeob wrote:

I'm considering removing some of my diffs lol
First to go should be hard if you look at it in an entire mapset, you already have "Hard" type diffs from the guest mappers, Maybe Easy as well...
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
프립사이드 곡 3개 중에서 가장 먼저 랭크될 기세가
이렇게 겔겔(?)거리다니..
otakumak
78 posts
Joined October 2009
otakumak
good
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Ooh, new custom hitsound~

But unfortunately my diff is full of blue-tick notes that I can't place this "clapping" appropriately.

Still I managed to use it at some sections. Hope it sounds okay. :D

Go~go~go~

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
하드라곤 하지만 결국 인세인3개 아닌가요? ㅎㄷㄷ
yongtw123
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Joined April 2009
yongtw123

sonnyc wrote:

하드라곤 하지만 결국 인세인3개 아닌가요? ㅎㄷㄷ
I will try to reduce my diff to < 4.45 stars, making that a [Hard]... :?

Edit: Done, with major re-arrangements. Hope that's better. Whew~

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
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minyeob
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Topic Starter
minyeob
oh will you? ><
Well it's hard to connect with hutka nowadays orz
So I'd really appreciate it if you reduce your difficulty
DeathxShinigami
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Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
ew Hutka's diff that's one of the worst name you could ever give it... [Hutka] ?_?
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
why not ranked yet ?
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
minyeob
dvorak// mm maybe Japanese is better method? lol
私にランクとは、あまり意味を持たないです。
あなたがこのMAPを楽しくしたら、それで私は満足するのみです。
WyndII
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Joined October 2008
WyndII
yay! it'here :lol: i hope it gets ranked
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
minyeob
Ahaha seems that BAT don't mod maps without requests unless it's bubbled ;__;
Waiting without request is kinda fun ><
henry912
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henry912
good maps~
_llkey_18
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_llkey_18
;)
minyeob
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Topic Starter
minyeob
_llkey_18 // Please don't bribe me, thanks.
Bikko
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Bikko
:P
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
★
lovhin456
1,959 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Use the colors in yongtw123's Hard for all diff.
- Delete osb file and full sub
- Audio lead-in and preview point is not the same in all diff.
- Don't use countdown

Easy;
- Circle size >> Large
- HP Drain >> -1 ??
- Slider velocity is too fast for easy
- 00:39:049 >> one grid down
- 01:14:576 >> curve this better
- 01:20:102 >> ^
- No kiai time ??

Normal +;
- Notes are well placed but some sliders are not curved well and some notes overlap others :/

* Can't really mod, hard or insane, shame on me :3
* Good luck ! and star ~ :3
Lucas Almeida_old
30 posts
Joined January 2009
Lucas Almeida_old
Love this song, star. <3
SUPERMarIOwii
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Joined June 2010
SUPERMarIOwii
:shock:
Firetribe
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Firetribe
Not sure if this is graveyarded, but star. :)
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