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Alace
Timing is good for me
-12 is a bit early

<Hard>
01:24:94 (1,2) - I think you can follow those 3/4 divisors (jumps or something)
01:52:77 (5) - ^

star
yongtw123
I am here to offer my difficulty for preview as minyeob consents.

The notes are snapped and timing is done.
Sounds are not added yet.
Because I was using mp3 encoded by myself when mapping, I manually shifted my map approximately 168ms forward to coincide with minyeob's.
BTW, it's 4.51 stars (minyeob requests 4.5+ lol)

Thanks.

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
minyeob
Added >A<
yongtw123
I added in hitsounds. Hope they sound okay. (In fact I don't like whistling sliders very much...)

I also corrected some minor spacing problems.

Comments and suggestions welcome~

PS. sorry minyeob for taking so long :P

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
minyeob
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yongtw123
The more the merrier~
My humble opinion:

[Easy]
01:07:575(1) this note is quite a jump from the previous note
01:10:733 - 01:13:102 I prefer the notes to be arranged as (1)(2)(3)( )(4)(5)(6) on the timeline

And would you like to change the mp3 to another one of better quality?
Breeze
sorry for my late mod
I'm moving into colledge grade 3 lol

now mod start go go!!

blue :arrow: it's just my personal opinion, fix it or not both OK, it depends on you
red :arrow: it's strongly recommened that you fix it

Overall

  1. all your own diff. - too much whistle, maybe that's your style, seemed OK, but sound bad to me
[Easy]

  1. 01:04:812 (2) - spacing wrong, it looks like 1/2 beat spacing
  2. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle would better
[Kakan ni Ouen]

  1. 00:23:365 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  2. 00:35:996 (1) - terrible spacing
  3. 00:40:733 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
  4. 01:21:786 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  5. 01:29:286 spinner - add finish
  6. 01:48:628 (1) - terrible spacing
  7. 01:53:365 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
  8. 03:32:444 (5) - spacing wrong
  9. 03:48:233 spinner - remove whistle
[Normal]

  1. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle
  2. 02:32:838 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  3. 03:48:233 (4) - remove whistle
[yongtw123's Normal+]

  1. continuous 1/8 beat notes are terrible to a NORMAL diff. IMO, or it called HARD is better
  2. 00:12:320 (4) - makie it overlapping perfectly with the start of (2) is more beautiful
  3. 01:28:110 spinner - add fnish
  4. 02:19:820 (8) - overlaping with the end of (7) is better
  5. 03:18:241 KIAI timing section - as a rule, kiai time should start on the hit you intend the fountain to be on, obviously it isn't here
  6. 03:26:136 (7) - overlaping with the end of (6) is better
[Hard]

  1. 00:42:312 (1) - long linear slider looks bad IMO
  2. 01:03:233 (6) - a little confused, 1/4 length (5) and delete (6) or just delete (6)
  3. and some same problem as your other diff. : spinner add finish, it all depends on you
sorry I'm lazy at mod Insane
so, mod these for you
I'd like your diff.
nice map, star!
Topic Starter
minyeob
@yongtw123
Fixed.
I think mp3 flie is fine..... And I'm too lazy lol

@Breeze
lol Spacing thing on Kakan ni Ouen orz
That's an Ouendan Style! (Ready Steady go spacing)
Finally fixed that bad spacing. Most of modders hates that >_>

Also, I removed whistles on my spinner

Thanks for modding.
yongtw123
[Insane]
Compare the quick notes at 00:09:944, 00:44:681, 01:13:496. Maybe consider making them consistent. I like the spacing of the last one though.
01:24:944 move this stack a bit up

That's all I can find as of now.

And I updated my version with Breeze's advice. I'll leave it to you to decide whether or not to change the name to "Hard".
(Thanks Breeze!)

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Normal+].osu
dkey
nice song~
ztrot
Great map but plz use some more claps I'm not gonna make a list they should scream out to you Clap me!
I'll mod at some point no kds for this post plz
yongtw123
I'll attempt to mod [Easy] for now, especially on the hitsounds. Note that whatever below is just suggestion :D

[Easy]
00:03:233 (4)(5) - Add whistle
00:05:996 (4-) - Add whistle
00:07:575 (1->6) - Add clap (for the slider do it only for the right end)
00:12:312 (slider) - Add clap
00:14:286 (5) - Add clap + finish
00:20:207 (1) - Add finish
00:20:996 (2) - Add whitsle
00:23:365 (1) - Add finish
00:24:154 (2) - Add whistle
00:32:049 (4) - Add clap
00:33:628 (2->5) - Add clap
00:36:786 (2->3) - Change to clap
00:39:154 (1->5) - Add clap
00:42:312 (1) - Remove whistle
00:52:378 (3) - Add finish
00:53:957 (3) - Add finish
00:56:523 (4) - Remove whistle
01:02:44 (2) - Change to clap
01:04:802 (2) - Change to clap
01:05:602 (end of 3) - the only whistle in that slider
01:06:292 (end of 4) - Add clap
01:06:588 (5) - Remove hitsound
01:07:575 (1->2) - Change to clap only
01:09:549 (4) - Add clap
01:09:944 (5) - Start whistle middle none end clap
01:12:312 (4->6) - Change to clap
01:04:286 (2) - Remove whistle
01:07:049 (slider) - Remove whistle
01:08:233 (2) - Add clap
01:09:812 (4) - Add clap
01:21:786 (start of slider) - Whistle change to clap
01:24:549 (4) - Change to clap
01:24:994 (entire slider) - Apply all hitsounds
01:25:733 (1) - Add clap
01:26:917 (4) - Add clap + finish

I'll go ahead to mod the others if you think this sounds okay to you.
tsuka
I like Fripside XD
star
mtmcl
Why is this map in WIP and in my queue?
Topic Starter
minyeob
Oh, Mark
I moved this map to WIP cause of ztrot's post orz
Edit: Moved to pending again
Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
Overall:
The mp3 quality makes me vomit. If you can find a better one, add it. if you can't, I'll search for one. If I can't either, I'll ask Ephemeral. If he can't, the universe explodes.

Insane:
03:45:76 (6) - This circle stacks with the spinner after it for some reason. Not sure what you can do about it, but if you can think of something,

Hard:
03:37:77 (2) - Offscreen argh.

Normal:
good

Easy:
^_^

Kakan ni Ouen:
This map isn't authentic REALLY. it has plenty overlapping notes and unauthentic sliders. Sliders should be perfectly symmetric or not even trying to be symmetric. Circle-like sliders should be as perfect as they can be. Also, NEVER EVER OVERLAP NOTES IN ANY WAY POSSIBLE.
Also, authentic breaks have become unrankable. Make em normal size.

Unpronouncable name's Hard:
00:39:06 (1,2,3) - make the spacing equal >:(
03:20:017 - Move that kiai start onto the next white tick <.<
03:37:58 (9) - hiding a slider like that is gay.
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yongtw123

Larto wrote:

Unpronouncable name's Hard: I won't deny that my ID is unpronounceable...lol
00:39:06 (1,2,3) - make the spacing equal >:( I noticed that these were actually mistimed notes. Adjusted with 1/8 snapping, and it should feel better.
03:20:017 - Move that kiai start onto the next white tick <.< done
03:37:58 (9) - hiding a slider like that is gay. hiding it was my original intention but oh well it's ok. Changed.
Your modding is appreciated, Larto.

I also did minor adjustments to the map.
And minyeob, this beatmap pack IS getting better. Keep the spirits up!

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
La Valse
La Valse
AImod fixed version.. :)
- And diff fixed

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [hutka's Hard+].osu
Ra-s
Goooooooooooooood!!!!!!
요번꺼 대박인듯 뒤늦게 줘서 ㅈㅅ요

+Star
yongtw123
I will make some suggestions on the new difficulty by hutka:

00:05:497 (6)(7) - These two sliders sounds a bit weird if compared with vocal...
00:26:023 (1) - Put this note outside of slider maybe?
00:34:707 (10) - Move this note a tiny grid to the left
00:35:003 (11) - This note sounds like a lone note to me... either add more notes or remove it
00:38:556 (10) - Because this note comes right after a "half-BPM" section, consider moving it closer to the slider
I like the diamond jumps~~~
01:18:523 ~01:26:812 - Lengthening snapping distance in a section of song is ok, but try make it consistent

In general, add hitsounds, and make some sections' snapping distance more consistent.

And a very good map so far! ^^b
La Valse
gdeath
star for Fripside
askerlate47
star~~~~~~~
orioncomet
Koihime >O</*
Tanmak
:oops:
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All fine.

[Easy]

00:37:47 (4) - Sounds bad. Change it?

[Normal]

00:26:41 (1) - Too far from (5).

[Yongtw123's Hard]

00:11:61 (4) - Too close from (3).
01:40:62 (2) - Too far from (1).

[Hard]

01:43:78 (1) - Too far from (2), or this is a jump?
01:54:83 (1) - Too close from (5).

[Hutka's Hard+]

Fine.

[Insane]

03:35:89 (1) - This slider go outscreen.
03:37:47 (1) - ^
yongtw123
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Sure
I like fripSide's songs. :)

Please change artist name to 'fripSide'. not 'Fripside'
Your every maps of fripSide have reverse capital letters.

No kudosu plz.
yongtw123
Updated according to ykcarrot's suggestion~

Now this should go along with the ones already updated by minyeob.

And uhm...
no mp3 file?
Something should have gone wrong with uploading.

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
yongtw123
And the map pack still does not contain the audio mp3 file...

I deleted the ones on my computer and tried downloading the new one,
but the map pack is so small (28KB)...
bmin11
Ok, how long is this taking ._.
Topic Starter
minyeob
Shorter than you :p
Anyways, fixed everything and bump.
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok
(this diff seems a Normal :S)

[Normal]

It's ok

[yongtw123's Hard]

00:01:015 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]

It's ok

[hutka's Hard+]

00:34:070 (10) - End on white tick (00:35:102)
00:35:497 (x) - Add a circle

00:37:076 (9,10) - confusing :S
01:47:024 (9) - End on white tick (01:47:733)
01:48:128 8x) - Add a circle


[Insane]


It's ok

Starred~
Gens
[General]
  1. The guest mappers' tags must be on all difficulties.
[Normal]
  1. This is a bit too hard for a normal, but I'm sure you already know that.
02:26:041 (1) - IMO this spinner doesn't fit.

[yongtw123's Hard]
  1. Overall difficulty is too low. :(
00:36:048 (3) - Sounds pretty bad... you better stick more to the vocals. I wouldn't use 1/8's for a slider's repeat.
01:05:089 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.
01:09:064 (6) - Same as 00:36:048 (3).
01:53:006 (1) - Same.

[Hard]

02:26:061 (1) - IMO this spinner doesn't fit.
02:29:057 (1) - ^
03:32:073 (1) - ^
03:35:089 (1) - ^
03:41:081 (6) - I'd move this beat 1/4 back and respace properly. Sounds better.

[hutka's Hard+]

00:34:070 (10) - The endpoint sounds weird in 1/4 snap, try extending it 1/4 more.

[Insane]

Meh... same spinner suggestions as [Hard].

~ ~ ~

You aren't going to let this die, are you? :|
Topic Starter
minyeob
Thanks for supporting me ^^
I'll fix them later.
yongtw123

Gens wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]
  1. Overall difficulty is too low. :(
Up by 1 notch

00:36:048 (3) - Sounds pretty bad... you better stick more to the vocals. I wouldn't use 1/8's for a slider's repeat.
01:05:089 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.
01:09:064 (6) - Same as 00:36:048 (3).
01:53:006 (1) - Same.
All fixed
Thanks for the advice Gens!

I also optimized the distance spacing.

Updated:

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
DeadAlready
miny <3

fripside >w</

hope you can rank it soon after you come back~ :D
Topic Starter
minyeob
yongtw// Thanks for updating fastly for a long period. It had bothered you a lot, hadn't it?

quintitem// Thanks for taking care about me. :D

1 month is pretty long >_<
Breeze

minyeob wrote:

To BAT/MATs: Please save old maps, thanks
Sonnyc
:p
Good map
Feeding SP
yongtw123
Decided to do some modding... :D
Hope you don't mind~

Overall:
How about an offset of 1150?
IMO this map can be a bit difficult for those who hasn't heard this song before, but it's ok I guess~
I won't comment on hitsounds :D

[Easy]
01:07:470 (1) - IMO this jump is too hard for Easy

[Normal]
Overall: maybe fix the "almost" off-screen notes
00:12:602 (1) - IMO this jump is a bit unexpected
03:05:891 (1,2,1,2,3) - Maybe following the three heavy beats in the BGM is better?
03:18:523 (1,2,3) - Maybe the three beats here should be quicker?
03:40:628 (1) - change in spacing, maybe fixing it?

[yongtw123's Hard]
I can't mod my own diff, lol...

[Hard]
00:10:426 (9,1,2,3,1) - IMO spacing here is a bit irregular, and it's not aligned with (9), not pretty :p
01:43:781 (1) - This is jump is too sudden if compared with the one on 01:42:794

[hutka's Hard+]
There are some big jumps, but I guess can be expected...
Also, this difficulty's max score is lower than [Hard]'s, I'd recommend continue mapping the entire song.

[Insane]
:( I'm not good at modding insane difficulties. But from what I've seen this is sure one insane diff.
La Valse
orioncomet
Yayyy (///∇//)

[General]
- delete "minyeob" from your TAG.. I know you know Why X<
- delete "Anime" from your TAG because It was already on Genre
- delete "Fripside flower of bravery" from your TAG because It was already on Artist and Title
- Add "hutka" in TAG
- BG Colour: Black
- If It possible delete the .osb file too and full submit
- your .mp3 so high quality.. lol XD

[Easy]
01:32:437 - this timing selection seem useless
01:38:951 - ^
01:45:266 - ^
01:57:997 - ^
02:03:622 - ^
02:12:898 - ^
03:13:490 - ^
03:20:102 - ^
Fine ~

[Normal]
03:45:760 (4) - Orz... remove sound Whistle at last silder (and maybe low volume abit)

[yongtw123's Hard]
- make sure that this difficulty have the same Preview Point with other difficulties
00:13:194 (1) - try sound finish
03:46:895 (1) - move it to white tick?
03:47:191 (2) - move it to blue tick?
03:47:487 (3) - move it to red tick?

[Hard]
Fine ~

[Insane]
02:35:891 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this past killing meeeeeee
Orz.. In fact.. your Insane is killing me at all.. grrrrr

Fine ~

[hutka's Diff]
00:13:786 (1) - try sound finish
00:24:641 (6) - new combo
00:24:839 (1) - remove new combo
02:39:049 (1) - try sound finish

Already stared xD
<3 koihime, anyway
yongtw123

orioncomet wrote:

Yayyy (///∇//)
[yongtw123's Hard]
- make sure that this difficulty have the same Preview Point with other difficulties
I'll leave minyeob to fix this. And btw, I feel the preview point should be a little earlier. The vocal suddenly fades in. >:(
00:13:194 (1) - try sound finish ok
03:46:895 (1) - move it to white tick?
03:47:191 (2) - move it to blue tick?
03:47:487 (3) - move it to red tick?
oh unsnapped. fixed.
But I'd like to point out that after I re-snap these notes, I feel the hitsound is slightly off from the BGM. I highly encourage a recheck on the offset. :?
Thanks!

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Remove "Fripside" from tags.
2. For [Easy], [Normal], [Hard], and [Insane], add kiai time like [yongtw123's Hard] or [hutka's Diff].
3. Honestly, I don't like the whistles spamming.

[Easy]
00:35:891 (1) - Please no such jump in [Easy] diff.
00:43:786 (2) - Move one tiny grid up.
00:51:977 (2) - Hmm. I see a blue tick note in [Easy] diff. It's rather hard thought. I prefer slider for this section. Start from (1), repeat on (2), end on (3).
00:53:556 (2) - ^
01:02:339 (2,3) - Little distance error.
01:04:312 (1,2) - Sounds bad in my opinion.
01:18:523 (3) - Add repeat maybe. [?]

[Normal]
00:05:102 (3) - It looks like 1/2 beat with (2) for me. Consider changing its placement to triangle shape?
00:07:470 (1) - The jumping is too far, maybe. [?]
00:41:418 (5,6,7) - Move them down a bit.
02:58:983 (1,2,3) - ^
03:37:470 (1,2) - ^

[yongtw123's Hard]
00:01:944 (4,6) - Reduce them one 1/4 beat. You follows the vocal, right?
00:13:194 (1) - I prefer the spinner start from 00:14:181.
00:38:951 (1) - This is bad. Move backward one 1/4 tick, then extend the slider so it will be 1/4 repeating slider. [!]
02:27:108 (4,6) - I don't like this little jump.

[Hard]
-- I found some ugly jumps and patterns..
00:10:628 (1) - Ugly jump and placement.
00:12:602 (8) - Ugly placement.
01:57:207 (1) - Ugly jump.
01:52:668 (5) - Those repeats are really bad. Even overmapped. Please reduce it if you want.
02:55:826 (1) - No. Use distance snap for this. [!]
03:37:470 (1,3) - I find their placements are odd. They are not stacked properly.

[Insane]
00:10:431 (6) - No. Use distance snap. [!]
03:39:839 (3) - Move it down a bit.

[hutka's Diff]
00:37:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overmapped.
01:46:944 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:50:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Star.
yongtw123

VanMoNky wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]
00:01:944 (4,6) - Reduce them one 1/4 beat. You follows the vocal, right? Hmm, but I feel it sounds good as it is. :D
00:13:194 (1) - I prefer the spinner start from 00:14:181. ok, i mapped the gap a bit
00:38:951 (1) - This is bad. Move backward one 1/4 tick, then extend the slider so it will be 1/4 repeating slider. [!] fixed
02:27:108 (4,6) - I don't like this little jump. i just removed it lol
Thanks for the mod!

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
bmin11
Why is this on WIP?
Topic Starter
minyeob
I'm considering removing some of my diffs lol
DeathxShinigami

minyeob wrote:

I'm considering removing some of my diffs lol
First to go should be hard if you look at it in an entire mapset, you already have "Hard" type diffs from the guest mappers, Maybe Easy as well...
Sonnyc
프립사이드 곡 3개 중에서 가장 먼저 랭크될 기세가
이렇게 겔겔(?)거리다니..
otakumak
good
yongtw123
Ooh, new custom hitsound~

But unfortunately my diff is full of blue-tick notes that I can't place this "clapping" appropriately.

Still I managed to use it at some sections. Hope it sounds okay. :D

Go~go~go~

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Sonnyc
하드라곤 하지만 결국 인세인3개 아닌가요? ㅎㄷㄷ
yongtw123

sonnyc wrote:

하드라곤 하지만 결국 인세인3개 아닌가요? ㅎㄷㄷ
I will try to reduce my diff to < 4.45 stars, making that a [Hard]... :?

Edit: Done, with major re-arrangements. Hope that's better. Whew~

Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
minyeob
oh will you? ><
Well it's hard to connect with hutka nowadays orz
So I'd really appreciate it if you reduce your difficulty
DeathxShinigami
ew Hutka's diff that's one of the worst name you could ever give it... [Hutka] ?_?
dvorak_old
why not ranked yet ?
Topic Starter
minyeob
dvorak// mm maybe Japanese is better method? lol
私にランクとは、あまり意味を持たないです。
あなたがこのMAPを楽しくしたら、それで私は満足するのみです。
WyndII
yay! it'here :lol: i hope it gets ranked
Topic Starter
minyeob
Ahaha seems that BAT don't mod maps without requests unless it's bubbled ;__;
Waiting without request is kinda fun ><
henry912
good maps~
_llkey_18
;)
Topic Starter
minyeob
_llkey_18 // Please don't bribe me, thanks.
Bikko
:P
KanaRin
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Use the colors in yongtw123's Hard for all diff.
- Delete osb file and full sub
- Audio lead-in and preview point is not the same in all diff.
- Don't use countdown

Easy;
- Circle size >> Large
- HP Drain >> -1 ??
- Slider velocity is too fast for easy
- 00:39:049 >> one grid down
- 01:14:576 >> curve this better
- 01:20:102 >> ^
- No kiai time ??

Normal +;
- Notes are well placed but some sliders are not curved well and some notes overlap others :/

* Can't really mod, hard or insane, shame on me :3
* Good luck ! and star ~ :3
Lucas Almeida_old
Love this song, star. <3
SUPERMarIOwii
:shock:
Firetribe
Not sure if this is graveyarded, but star. :)
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