tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:10:73 (1,2) - Jump on normal? Fixed.
01:54:94 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Considering lol

[Hard]
00:04:81 (7) - New combo. Fixed.
00:24:94 (4) - End slider here 00:25:14. Fixed.
01:56:72 (1,1) - Spacing. Considering lol

[Insane]
All cool.

It's creative, so... Star+kudosu star.

minyeob wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 8월 4일 화요일 at 오후 1:28:17

Artist: Fripside
Title: Flower of Bravery
Tags: Anime minyeob Fripside flower of bravery
BPM: 152
Filesize: 1926kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.83 stars, 488 notes)
2. Insane (4.96 stars, 590 notes)
3. Kakan Ni Ouen (3.97 stars, 260 notes)
4. Normal (4.34 stars, 395 notes)

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Koihime Mosou Single OP Full ver.

ALL FINISHED.

Map History
6/30-> Submitted
7/1-> Hard 1st part- Finished
7/3-> Hard 2nd part- Finished
7/4-> Hard Note-> All finished. (Hitsounds=WIP)
7/5-> Lowered HP drain rate.
7/7-> Difficulty Name has changed. Normal->Hard Hard->Insane
7/12-> Hard= Done
7/16-> Normal= Done
7/29-> Tieff's modding.
8/1-> Added Kakan ni Ouen(Used Ouendan patterns), v2b modding.
8/2-> lesjuh modding(He's so pro lol)

Genre: Anime

Symbolic wrote:

Hey, here's the other mod u asked for Oh and btw, thanks for changing some things while ur map was bubbled =].


[Kakan Ni Ouen]

Use Slider Tick Rate 1, sounds better imo.

00:35:79 (5,1) - This jump is weird, because it is a 1/2 but it has the same spacing as the 1/1s. It's Ouendan Style lol
01:48:43 (6,1) - ^


[Normal]

01:42:31 (1) - Shorten this slider 1/2. No


[Hard]

03:07:18 (1) - Put this note a bit up, so it will be a jump/bigger jump.Done.
03:38:75 (5,1) - This one is confusing, even though there is a new combo, I don't except that there.I don't know what I have to do


[Insane]

02:29:08 (1,2,3) - Put these 1 level 3 grid up so it's in the middle of the pattern. Noooo


Nice job, I liked the other Fripside song better, but this map better. I really like Insane here
Starred *

1. There seems to be gaps in between the note and where a break starts. Redo all of your breaks. The second break is in serious need of redoing.

1. 02:57:11 (3,4,5) - Can you move these a little up please? They are slightly cut off from the bottom.
2. 03:34:41 (1,2,3,4,5) and 03:40:73 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: This is a normal? It's up to you if you want to make these notes closer. ^.^ No pressure~
3. Redo last break. It'll shorten.

1. 01:56:32 (5) - Suggestion: New combo

Mafiamaster wrote:

Kakan Ni Ouen~

1. There seems to be gaps in between the note and where a break starts. Redo all of your breaks. The second break is in serious need of redoing.

Redo'd 2nd break only. They are an Ouendan-Styled break setting

Normal~

1. 02:57:11 (3,4,5) - Can you move these a little up please? They are slightly cut off from the bottom.Fixed
2. 03:34:41 (1,2,3,4,5) and 03:40:73 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: This is a normal? It's up to you if you want to make these notes closer. ^.^ No pressure~ Fixed
3. Redo last break. It'll shorten.

Done

Insane~

1. 01:56:32 (5) - Suggestion: New combo

No

1. all your own diff. - too much whistle, maybe that's your style, seemed OK, but sound bad to me

1. 01:04:812 (2) - spacing wrong, it looks like 1/2 beat spacing
2. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle would better

1. 00:23:365 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
2. 00:35:996 (1) - terrible spacing
3. 00:40:733 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
4. 01:21:786 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
5. 01:29:286 spinner - add finish
6. 01:48:628 (1) - terrible spacing
7. 01:53:365 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
8. 03:32:444 (5) - spacing wrong
9. 03:48:233 spinner - remove whistle

1. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle
2. 02:32:838 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
3. 03:48:233 (4) - remove whistle

1. continuous 1/8 beat notes are terrible to a NORMAL diff. IMO, or it called HARD is better
   
2. 00:12:320 (4) - makie it overlapping perfectly with the start of (2) is more beautiful
3. 01:28:110 spinner - add fnish
4. 02:19:820 (8) - overlaping with the end of (7) is better
5. 03:18:241 KIAI timing section - as a rule, kiai time should start on the hit you intend the fountain to be on, obviously it isn't here
6. 03:26:136 (7) - overlaping with the end of (6) is better

1. 00:42:312 (1) - long linear slider looks bad IMO
2. 01:03:233 (6) - a little confused, 1/4 length (5) and delete (6) or just delete (6)
3. and some same problem as your other diff. : spinner add finish, it all depends on you

Larto wrote:

Unpronouncable name's Hard: I won't deny that my ID is unpronounceable...lol
00:39:06 (1,2,3) - make the spacing equal I noticed that these were actually mistimed notes. Adjusted with 1/8 snapping, and it should feel better.
03:20:017 - Move that kiai start onto the next white tick <.< done
03:37:58 (9) - hiding a slider like that is gay. hiding it was my original intention but oh well it's ok. Changed.

1. The guest mappers' tags must be on all difficulties.

1. This is a bit too hard for a normal, but I'm sure you already know that.

1. Overall difficulty is too low.

Gens wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]

1. Overall difficulty is too low.

Up by 1 notch

00:36:048 (3) - Sounds pretty bad... you better stick more to the vocals. I wouldn't use 1/8's for a slider's repeat.
01:05:089 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.
01:09:064 (6) - Same as 00:36:048 (3).
01:53:006 (1) - Same.
All fixed

minyeob wrote:

To BAT/MATs: Please save old maps, thanks

orioncomet wrote:

Yayyy (///∇//)
[yongtw123's Hard]
- make sure that this difficulty have the same Preview Point with other difficulties
I'll leave minyeob to fix this. And btw, I feel the preview point should be a little earlier. The vocal suddenly fades in.
00:13:194 (1) - try sound finish ok
03:46:895 (1) - move it to white tick?
03:47:191 (2) - move it to blue tick?
03:47:487 (3) - move it to red tick?
oh unsnapped. fixed.
But I'd like to point out that after I re-snap these notes, I feel the hitsound is slightly off from the BGM. I highly encourage a recheck on the offset.

VanMoNky wrote:

[yongtw123's Hard]
00:01:944 (4,6) - Reduce them one 1/4 beat. You follows the vocal, right? Hmm, but I feel it sounds good as it is.
00:13:194 (1) - I prefer the spinner start from 00:14:181. ok, i mapped the gap a bit
00:38:951 (1) - This is bad. Move backward one 1/4 tick, then extend the slider so it will be 1/4 repeating slider. [!] fixed
02:27:108 (4,6) - I don't like this little jump. i just removed it lol

minyeob wrote:

I'm considering removing some of my diffs lol

sonnyc wrote:

하드라곤 하지만 결국 인세인3개 아닌가요? ㅎㄷㄷ