wmfchris wrote:

nice bg Thx , I had a hard time looking for BG ><

[Banvi beat]
0:34:014 (2) right+ up 1 grid? k
0:40:635 (4) down 1 grid k
nice~

star >w<

wmfchris wrote:

[Holoaz Beat!]
0:07:739 (3)up 1 grid--fixed!
0:23:152 (9) delete?--no , I think it better
0:37:325 (2) up 1 grid--fixed!
1:25:532 (3) down 1 grid--fixed!
1:26:980 (7) down 1 grid--fixed!
1:42:083 (2) ending of (2) not properly stacked on ending of (1)?--no
2:19:221 (7,8) delete (8), (7)+finish?--no
2:27:808 (1) right+ up 1 grid--fixed!

Qrool wrote:

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHahih~
[Holoaz Beat/Hit object]
Slider後のCircleｽﾞﾚがやや気になりました。
00:52:221 (2) - x286 y336--Fixed!
00:53:877 (6) - x286 y48--Fixed!
00:54:704 (8) - x226 y336--Fixed!
01:42:704 (3,4) - x255 y192--わざとです
02:04:635 (3) - x286 y272--Fixed!

Qrool wrote:

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHahih~
[banvi Beat/Hit object]
00:02:566 (4) - 1 grid right or 00:02:877 (5) - 1 grid left oop, ok fixed!

Overall: good map.鳥肌モノですた。:arrow:Thxxxxx

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

add kiai mode? umm , I won't add kiai.

banvi Beat

00:35:049 (5) - new combo no
00:35:877 (8) - ^ no
01:42:911 (5) - ^ no
01:43:739 (8) - ^ no
02:54:911 (12,13) - seperate them k


good map , star thx~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
there's a HUGE gap between valuable Beat and banvi Beat, that is... yeah, a big problem and i'm pretty sure before a diff added to fill it in, this map won't get ranked. /me sad. uhhh , back to wip for making valua beat to last song.
tbh i really don't like those 4*claps in the first 2 diffs...(for example: 00:08:566 (1,2,3,4) in [banvi] it sucks orz.
hmm changed
[valuale Beat]
hey what? you should say sorry to valuable www wwwwwwwhy I'm baka><
00:07:325 (1) - remove whistle at the end. k
01:01:118 (3) - remove whistle k
01:07:325 (1) - whistle? k
01:37:946 (3) - finish instead of clap k

[banvi Beat]
HP-1, AR+1 (yes, HP-1 also help reduce the scores partly..) k
00:15:187 - 00:16:842 - i guess you don't need this break = = k
00:40:014 (3,4,5) - this is preferred to me.. no
01:01:014 (8) - move 1/4 later? no
01:37:842 - add a note? k
02:49:118 (1) - i doubt if you need a new combo in this part...= = 17 is... too long fixed

Rita =w=

yuugeki1234 wrote:

:)

KSHR wrote:

ヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★

Sandpig wrote:

Holoaz Beat

00:24:290 (3) - would it be better if it's changed into a 3-note-slider?--No. I think it's better
01:37:221 (3,4) - I think they come later than the music. make them 1/4 earlier and add a note on 01:37:532--Fixed
01:51:394 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is too long, I think. And it hears weak because soft-sample is used here, also I would like to suggest you not --No. sry

use finish in stream body. make some change here.--Fixed
02:29:670 (1) - this circle is lonely...put it "in" your map--Fixed
good map , star

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Holoaz Beat]
00:02:670 (5,6) - switch whistle--Fixed
00:02:980 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - xxoxxxo (x=whistle, o=normal)--Fixed
00:10:014 (4) - remove whistle, and same to other similar parts... (too many to list them all T T)--Fixed
00:13:739 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning--Fixed
00:29:256 (3) - remove whistle--Fixed
00:54:911 (1) - whistle at the end.--Fixed
00:55:325 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning--Fixed
01:01:118 (11,12,14) - remove whistle--Fixed
01:34:221 (9) - finish at the end.--Fixed
01:55:221 - add a note?--Fixed
02:05:463 (3) - remove whistle--Fixed
02:31:739 (5) - finish at the white line beat (9th..) instead of at the end.--Fixed
02:49:325 (3,4,6) - remove whistle--Fixed
02:50:152 (3,6,8) - ^--Fixed
02:52:221 (1) - volume increase by 5 in every combo (02:53:049 (1) - 02:53:877 (1) - 02:54:704 (1) ?--Fixed. and arrange it.
02:55:739 (1) - xoxoxxooxoxoxxox--Fixed
03:12:911 (6) - change to a 1/2 reversed slider?--No. sry
Rita =w=

Licnect wrote:

omg
i like this game !!!!
Fighting Game!!

jericho2442 wrote:

valuable's Easy
00:05:256 (2) - it would play and sound much better if this part followed the beat like this fixed
00:11:877 (2) - same for this part fixed
02:29:670 (3,4) - feels odd to play due to the timing i suggest deleting (4) then making a slider from 02:30:083 - to 02:30:497 fixed
02:50:773 (5) - new combo to flow to your pattern fixed


Normal

your hitsounds feel too weak to me :/ hm , added more finish.

02:59:463 - a note would go nice here fixed

banvi Beat

again it feels like the hitsounds are too weak for the song, also theres no need to have your name in the map when your the mapper
fixed

Holoaz Beat

clean from big probs

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well nice smooth maps so enjoy a star for now

Garven wrote:

[valuable's Easy] remaked

[Normal]
00:28:428 (1) - Mm, kind of iffy for being soon after a spinner. Though considering the difficulty spread, it's probably okay. I think. You sure have a lot of them though. @_@ reduce some sppiner
02:44:980 (1) - Phew, this part is pretty hard for a normal. Maybe throw in some new combos at these two places to give more HP back: ok
02:50:773 (7) - New combo k
02:54:083 (5) - ^ k

[Insane]
Looked fine, though I would really suggest that you tone this difficulty down a bit (mostly the streams and some of the bigger jumps) and rename it as a hard. Considering your difficulty spread right now, it would serve this mapset as a whole much better that way, imo.

[Holoaz Beat]
OD +1? Streams felt a little easy to 300. k
01:31:221 (1) - This combo is running fairly long. Maybe cut it a bit? k

The maps are mostly fine on their own, though the set as a whole would benefit greatly if you could tone down the Insane and turn it into a hard. Just my opinion though
hmm , I thought and tried... but I couldn't make hard. Also this diff is my first attempt normal circle size map , so I want keep
Sorry for my overindulgence
But reduced some stream because I noticed [Holoaz Beat] has too.
~

Nivalis wrote:

Hi again banvi

[valuable's Easy]
00:48:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adjust like this maybe so (1) and (2) is separated by the center line? he say don't wanna change.

SPOILER

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00:59:463 (2) - Stack to (5)? ok
01:33:808 (2) - Add whistle at slider end? ok
02:52:428 (1) - Curve more? (Or just copy-paste 02:50:773 (3) and rotate 90°) he say don't wanna change.

[Normal]
02:53:049 (2,3,4) - Uh, spacing? It's quite noticeable oop , fixed!

[Insane]
00:52:221 (3) - One grid up for the middle waypoint? ok
02:45:808 (1) - Shape it better? This slider wave is weird hmm , fixed
03:14:773 (3) - ^ I don't think this silder don't fit...(02:06:911 (3) too)
03:23:049 (5) - Make this symmetrical? (One grid up for middle waypoint and adjust the last waypoint) ok

[Holoaz Beat]
-> Maybe you want to rename the diff to Holoaz's Beat. But other than that, no problem. hmm , should I rename? fixed

Good luck thank you very much!!!

kioukiou wrote:

Looks good.

Bubbled.