1. Hard (4.42 stars, 433 notes)
2. Normal (2.94 stars, 272 notes)

eveless wrote:

timing我弱 不过我觉得现在的有点快.具体BPM和offset可能要找比较擅长的人测测看


[Hard]
00:26:399 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这边作为开始显得有些快和抢的感觉 适当的空拍或者放慢会比较好。如果是我的话第二根白线我会空掉
00:44:645 (1) - 建议拉开点
01:37:957 (x) - 建议加note 以带入下面
03:05:765 (8) - 这边分开太远了有点...
03:31:565 (3) - 234之间间距不一样 如果是故意的就无视 如果不是 最好改掉 后03:36:127 (3) 同
03:39:120 (1) - 结束在03:40:261或者其他好听点的地方 现在的不太适合

[Normal]
00:36:093 (2) - spacing?
01:13:439 (4) - ^
01:15:720 (4) - ^
01:43:659 (6) - ^

整体上来说new combo需要修

wmfchris wrote:

我自己覺得hitsound有點大

the offset is not so accurate...?

[Hard] Try to use some whistles...?
00:47:251 (2,3,4) - uneven spacing
00:48:677 (1,2,3) - ^
00:58:084 (4,5,6,...) - left 1 grid
01:09:773 (11) - right 1 grid
01:53:820 - make it gradually louder?

[Normal]
00:46:966 (1) - left 1 grid
00:58:940 (1) - down+right 1 grid

star~

aesopl19193 wrote:

:) 很耐沒見啊Robin

All my comments are suggestions only, feel free to ignore them

[General]
-Off count down?
-Change combo colour?
-Change the mp3 file with higher sound level?
I do one for you, you may try
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6hd59l
*If you change it, you don't need to reduce the hitsound volume

[Hard]
00:34:422 (timing) - reduce hitsound volume by 2 grid
00:35:562 (1) - whistle?
01:06:922 (7) - new combo
01:21:177 (timing) - reduce hitsound volume by 2 grid (same to all soft-hitsound after that)
02:07:361 (5) - 1 grid left?
02:07:931 (8) - ^
03:08:656 (3) - ^
03:17:778 ~ 03:21:485 - the distance inside these triple seem uneven?

[Normal]
00:35:562 (timing) - set the hitsound volume same as hard

節奏下的不錯~ 努力喔
STAR

Zelos wrote:

Your timing is correct (unless my ears decieve me)

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

General

I see this beatmap nearly rankable but you might as well add more hitsounds...

Also, looks like you can make an easier difficulty..

Eh, dont kudosu this.....

Star!!!!

1. No problems on the with the .osu files.
2. Is there any possible tag that can be added?

1. Wow 2x of spacing for the easiest diff? Well the BMP is kinda slow but 1.4x would be enough, I highly suggest to reduce spacing to
   1.6x (at least).
2. 00:42:405 (4) - Remove the Whistle from the slider body, It sounds bad.
3. 00:51:527 (4) - ^
4. 01:14:905 (3,4) - Was this intended? Mmm Stack it correctly please.
5. 02:14:203 (3,4,5) - ^
6. 02:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Keep spacing regular (Consistent), (4) is too close.
7. 03:30:608 (2,1) - ^ (1) is too close.
8. 03:39:160 (1) - This spinner is too short imo, Why don't you replace it with a slider?
9. Just a single little break for such a long song? Add one more if it's possible please.

1. 00:42:405 (7) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, Again, it sounds bad.
2. 00:51:527 (7) - ^
3. 00:55:804 (3,4,5) - Stack it correctly, It doesn't look good.
4. 01:01:791 (7,1) - Wow that's a big jump, A little unexpected, Reduce spacing between (7) and (1) a bit.
5. 01:37:142 (4,5,6) - Mmm no, this is not easy to read, try this instead.
6. 01:38:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move all this pattern some grids down.
7. 01:58:238 (5) - Stack it correctly.
8. 02:15:344 (6,7) - ^
9. 02:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - If you see the time line, (4) is not correctly spaced, increase spacing.
10. 02:48:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stack every note correctly, so It doesn't look messy.
11. 03:03:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this~
12. No Breaks? Add 1~2 short breaks at least.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. No problems on the with the .osu files.
2. Is there any possible tag that can be added?

Normal

1. Wow 2x of spacing for the easiest diff? Well the BMP is kinda slow but 1.4x would be enough, I highly suggest to reduce spacing to
   1.6x (at least).
2. 00:42:405 (4) - Remove the Whistle from the slider body, It sounds bad.
3. 00:51:527 (4) - ^
4. 01:14:905 (3,4) - Was this intended? Mmm Stack it correctly please.
5. 02:14:203 (3,4,5) - ^
6. 02:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Keep spacing regular (Consistent), (4) is too close.
7. 03:30:608 (2,1) - ^ (1) is too close.
8. 03:39:160 (1) - This spinner is too short imo, Why don't you replace it with a slider?
9. Just a single little break for such a long song? Add one more if it's possible please.

Hard

1. 00:42:405 (7) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, Again, it sounds bad.
2. 00:51:527 (7) - ^
3. 00:55:804 (3,4,5) - Stack it correctly, It doesn't look good.
4. 01:01:791 (7,1) - Wow that's a big jump, A little unexpected, Reduce spacing between (7) and (1) a bit.
5. 01:37:142 (4,5,6) - Mmm no, this is not easy to read, try this instead.
6. 01:38:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move all this pattern some grids down.
7. 01:58:238 (5) - Stack it correctly.
8. 02:15:344 (6,7) - ^
9. 02:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - If you see the time line, (4) is not correctly spaced, increase spacing.
10. 02:48:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stack every note correctly, so It doesn't look messy.
11. 03:03:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this~
12. No Breaks? Add 1~2 short breaks at least.

Nice relaxing song and map. Have a Star.

starpun1 wrote:

要說的大概都跟你說了~
那只是個人感覺.
畢竟我也沒再做圖
打圖也是看感覺
那你繼續加油喔~

Keksi wrote:

Keksi's Mod
Green:Request
Blue:Would be nice if you change
Red:Change it!

[Normal]
Found Nothing

[Hard]
00:39:839-Change (1) (2) (3) to this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49136
Nothing else.

star~

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Normal
01:12:054 (1,2,3) - ugly overlap, maybe make it like this?

SPOILER

01:55:958 (3,4,5) - ^
02:31:879 (x) - add note and finish

Hard
since no technical problems, some hitsounds.

00:51:527 (7) - add whistle?
01:02:076 (1,2,3) - remove finishs?
02:27:032 (2) - add whistle?
02:28:743 (4,6) - ^
02:31:879 (7) - add finish?
02:56:682 (x) - add note
02:58:963 (x) - ^
03:31:178 (1) - add finish
03:31:748 (SP) - extend to 03:35:169 ... kinda bad end though TBH... make it end at the place as Normal did

That's it, have this star!

• Title: Haruka na Chi he (遥かな地へ) ... use this to change title viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919
  
  Tags: Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind (English translation)
  
  Offset: +7ms?

• 02:39:862 (2) - clap end instead of whistle?
  02:42:712 (6) - Clap instead of whistle?
  02:44:993 (6) - ^
  02:47:274 (6) - ^
  02:47:844 (7) - New combo
  02:48:984 (8) - clap end instead of whistle?

• 00:27:580 (1) - Remove new combo?
  00:29:861 (1) - ^
  00:32:141 (1) - ^
  00:34:422 (1) - ^
  01:15:760 (6,1,2) - New combo at 2 like 01:13:479 (5,6,1) ?
  01:22:887 (6) - Same suggestion like normal...hhwhhc pattern?(h=hit w=whistle c=clap)
  01:24:598 (8) - ^
  01:23:457 (7,7) - New combo?
  ....etc.

Selee wrote:

风之谷 >_>

[General]

• Title: Haruka na Chi he (遥かな地へ) ... use this to change title viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919
  
  Tags: Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind (English translation)
  
  Offset: +7ms?

[Normal]

You can't use this stack leniency ... Increase 2 ticks like hard?

hmm, I can't find anything wrong, just some suggestions

• 02:39:862 (2) - clap end instead of whistle?
  02:42:712 (6) - Clap instead of whistle?
  02:44:993 (6) - ^
  02:47:274 (6) - ^
  02:47:844 (7) - New combo
  02:48:984 (8) - clap end instead of whistle?

Nice~

[Hard]

Can't find anything either, lol, suggestions:

• 00:27:580 (1) - Remove new combo?
  00:29:861 (1) - ^
  00:32:141 (1) - ^
  00:34:422 (1) - ^
  01:15:760 (6,1,2) - New combo at 2 like 01:13:479 (5,6,1) ?
  01:22:887 (6) - Same suggestion like normal...hhwhhc pattern?(h=hit w=whistle c=clap)
  01:24:598 (8) - ^
  01:23:457 (7,7) - New combo?
  ....etc.

Simple and clean~
Good job! Take my star ^^