1. Easy (0.57 stars, 73 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 325 notes)
3. Normal (2.58 stars, 138 notes)
4. Vicho's Hard (4.84 stars, 292 notes)

H-boy wrote:

Easy

HP Drain Rate +1 or +2

01:17:226(8) - NC
01:18:150(1) - remove NC
01:40:343(5) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down(lv3)
01:42:150(1) - move to last red line(01:41:919)
01:42:611(2) - ^ (01:42:380)
01:43:073(3) - ^ (01:42:842)

suggestions

00:26:457(2) - finish or whistle
00:27:380(2) - remove whistle
00:28:303(4) - whistle
00:29:226(4) - remove whistle
00:30:150(1) - whistle
00:31:073(1) - remove whistle
00:31:996(3) - whistle
00:32:919(3) - remove whistle
01:18:150(1) - finish and whistle
01:19:996(2) - whistle
01:32:919(4) - whistle and finish
01:33:380(x) - add a circle with a whistle hitsound
01:40:343(5) - whistle and finish

Normal

some notes are unsnapped

00:26:457(1) - whistle and clap
00:30:150(7) - whistle and clap
00:55:996(1) - make symmetric with (3)
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Hard

00:26:803(2) - remove finish
00:28:650(2) - ^
00:30:496(1) - ^
00:32:342(6) - ^
01:17:919(4) - finish
01:25:303(4) - ^
01:25:765(5) - whistle
01:32:688(5) - finish
01:33:150(7) - whistle
01:40:073(4) - clap
01:40:534(6) - whistle

Insane

00:26:803(1) - remove finish
00:27:150(1) - remove finish and add whistle hitsound
00:28:650(7) - remove finish
00:28:996(8) - remove finish and add whistle hitsound
00:30:496(2) - remove finish
00:30:842(2) - remove finish and add whistle hitsound
00:32:342(5) - remove finish
00:32:688(6) - remove finish and add whistle hitsound
01:17:688(3) - ^
01:25:303(4) - whistle and clap
01:32:688(6) - finish
01:40:073(4) - finish and clap


3star

Holoaz wrote:

[General]
http://www.mediafire.com/?jbnnq58e5cb9xe0
↑New mp3
これに差し替えてoffset変更してください
[Timing]
New offset 6,186
[Easy]
Good
[Normal]
Good
[Hard]
finishをもう少し使って盛り上げてもいいかも
01:07:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ちょっと見にくいかも
01:40:073 (4) - finish?
[Insane]
finishをもう少し使って盛り上げてもいいかも
00:17:955 (1) - 1grid left
00:18:647 (4) - New combo?
00:20:262 (7) - ^
00:22:801 (5) - ^
00:35:724 (1) - remove new combo & 00:37:109 (3) - new combo
00:39:416 (1) - ^ & 00:40:801 (4) - ^
00:41:493 (7) - ^ & 00:41:724 (1) - ^
00:46:570 (1) - ^ & 00:47:262 (4) - ^
00:49:570 (5) - new combo
00:51:416 (5) - ^
01:04:109 (4) - ^
01:05:493 (4) - ^
01:22:570 (8) - new combo
01:23:724 (1) - remove new combo
01:25:339 (4) - new combo

いい感じだと思います
とりあえず参考程度に　殆どCombo関係ですがｗ
Rank狙えると思うので頑張ってください

wmfchris wrote:

lol soft clap and soft whistle become the same?!?

[Insane]
00:09:878 (5,6,7,8) try to stack their ending?
01:02:032 (5,6) - spacing
01:11:032 (2,3,5) - down 1 grid
01:17:262 (1,2,3,4) - remove finish on (1), finish on (3). also (2) left 1 grid or (4) left 1 grid?
01:39:416 (2) - down 1 grid?

[Hard]
00:30:186 (1) - right 1 grid?
00:31:801 (5) - left 1 grid
00:36:186 (7) - down 1 grid
01:04:109 (4,2) - down 1 grid
01:17:262 (1) - remove finish
01:44:262 (4) - down 1 grid
01:44:724 (2,3,4) - down 1 grid

[Normal]
00:!5:416 (1) - down 1 grid

nice music and map, star~