o/ oki here we go~
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- 00:10:321 (1,2,3,4) - it would be pretty nice if you could make them a bit more special to the previous jumps (00:08:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ) since the overall intensity is pretyy high compared
- 00:12:604 (6,7) - its a bit wierd that you stack the (7) directly under the tail but you only do it here, maybe change it to theese like here 00:17:821 (6,7) - etc
- 00:24:995 (4,6) - nazi blanket mod~
ok now my main concern with the map is coming up now - you have like a pretty clockwise heavy prefer in you movement and from time to time its gameplay wise pretty boring, for example 00:31:843 - to 00:44:886 -
02:31:843 - here its like the same where you have one pretty obvious direction the whole section (cw) tho in comperison with 02:21:408 - you change the direction multiple time, like even near to every mesure, so the movement balance/consistency is pretty wierd.
- 01:38:202 (4,1) - maybe stack them directly under it to show the stop in the music (stop in music -> stop in motion)
- 01:59:234 (1,2) - imo you should space them more out to see that they are really 1/2 gaps since the spacing of them is even smaller than for example this: 01:54:343 (2,3) - etc
idk but to me you visual spacing for the whole 1/1s in your diff is kinda wierd since spacing wise they are compleatly the same, try to differ them more from the 1/2~
- 01:48:636 (6,1) - the spacing is too low since (1) is a downbeat
i think i stop here since the map in itself is pretty solid but like the things im noticing are repeting themselfs
i hope you can do something with it (and i hope i wasnt too subjective~)
bye o/
[Topdiff]
- 00:10:321 (1,2,3,4) - it would be pretty nice if you could make them a bit more special to the previous jumps (00:08:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ) since the overall intensity is pretyy high compared
- 00:12:604 (6,7) - its a bit wierd that you stack the (7) directly under the tail but you only do it here, maybe change it to theese like here 00:17:821 (6,7) - etc
- 00:24:995 (4,6) - nazi blanket mod~
ok now my main concern with the map is coming up now - you have like a pretty clockwise heavy prefer in you movement and from time to time its gameplay wise pretty boring, for example 00:31:843 - to 00:44:886 -
02:31:843 - here its like the same where you have one pretty obvious direction the whole section (cw) tho in comperison with 02:21:408 - you change the direction multiple time, like even near to every mesure, so the movement balance/consistency is pretty wierd.
- 01:38:202 (4,1) - maybe stack them directly under it to show the stop in the music (stop in music -> stop in motion)
- 01:59:234 (1,2) - imo you should space them more out to see that they are really 1/2 gaps since the spacing of them is even smaller than for example this: 01:54:343 (2,3) - etc
idk but to me you visual spacing for the whole 1/1s in your diff is kinda wierd since spacing wise they are compleatly the same, try to differ them more from the 1/2~
- 01:48:636 (6,1) - the spacing is too low since (1) is a downbeat
i think i stop here since the map in itself is pretty solid but like the things im noticing are repeting themselfs
i hope you can do something with it (and i hope i wasnt too subjective~)
bye o/