• 
  感觉Kiai Time不适合这首歌 （特别是最后一段）
  还有题目里ft后面应该加点吧

• 
  00:31:790 (3): 对称一下
  00:55:790 (1,2): 美观一下这两个Silder
  03:11:021 (1): 开头Clap

• 
  01:12:175 : Add a cirlce

• 
  01:14:713 (3): Clap
  01:23:021 (5): 这里加Clap
  01:42:405 (6): Finish音效听起来不是特别好 建议去掉或者改用Clap
  02:23:482 (2): 容易让人误解 建议重复-1 在后面加个Circle
  02:46:098 (3): 这里加Clap
  02:50:713 (3): Clap
  02:54:405 (3): ^
  03:40:559 (1): 结尾处去掉Clap

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ok, I've found nothing wrong
But I suggest you to grow the AR by 1 in easy. no. but thanks your star X)

Here is your star~

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Easy]
00:19:328 (1,2) - Maybe rearrange these so they're not overlapping?
00:45:175 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not a fan of stacks in easy difficulties - especially ones with sliders involved. I'll just mention these, but there are more out there.
00:54:867 (2,1) - Minor overlap, if you care
01:12:405 (4,1) - Yeah, looks pretty bad. :/
01:19:328 (4,5) - Hrm, maybe try to rearrange things so you can get the sliders positioned with control j?
03:11:021 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. The spinner feels like it starts too soon too. Maybe start the spinner at 03:08:713 - and extend it all the way to 03:12:405 - ?
03:32:713 (2,1,2) - Overlaps. :<
03:39:175 (3,4,1,2) - Yeah, this kind of sticks out against the rest of the difficulty. Maybe use short sliders instead? Or try reworking a different rhythm in there.

[Roddie's Normal]
00:33:175 (6) - Forget a clap?
01:06:867 (1) - Kinda iffy time-wise after a spinner on a normal.
01:36:405 (2,4) - Maybe set the end points two grids further out so they're not overlapping the 3 and 5?
02:59:944 (1) - Same thing, spinner

[Hard]
Looked fine.

*yawn* Such a long slow song to map. clapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclapclap

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

我的建议:

[General]

• 
  感觉Kiai Time不适合这首歌 （特别是最后一段）
  还有题目里ft后面应该加点吧

^My Internet connection got problem, so fix this at later

[Easy]

• 
  00:31:790 (3): 对称一下
  00:55:790 (1,2): 美观一下这两个Silder
  03:11:021 (1): 开头Clap

[Roddie’s Normal]

• 
  01:12:175 : Add a cirlce No.

[Hard]

• 
  01:14:713 (3): Clap
  01:23:021 (5): 这里加Clap
  01:42:405 (6): Finish音效听起来不是特别好 建议去掉或者改用Clap
  02:23:482 (2): 容易让人误解 建议重复-1 在后面加个Circle
  02:46:098 (3): 这里加Clap
  02:50:713 (3): Clap
  02:54:405 (3): ^
  03:40:559 (1): 结尾处去掉Clap

Good map~

☆ STAR ☆

Pahoskentelija wrote:

I ain't a big fan of Usher, but this beatmap is epic. Is it possible to add even harder version into it? Pleeeease, with sugar on top? :3

IceBeam wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]
01:14:251 (1) - This object is hidden,and approach circle is hardly visible,it may confuse beginners,so better choose better place for it.
01:16:098 (1) - Remove NC?
01:43:790 (4) - Finish fits better.
03:34:559 (1) - It's not stacked well,check it's position viewing from 03:34:098.As you can see app.circles don't match.So,maybe stack it manually,w/o using Grid Snap?
^All Fixed~~

[Hard]
OMG pentagons!
I love you. 0.0

Good job.
Star.

IceBeam wrote:

[Roddie]
01:14:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use pentagon shape? Like this: Fixed.

SPOILER

ATTACH[pg.JPG]I know it's kinda failure,just an example.Try to make it perfect -_-

03:41:944 (2) - Add finish to this clap? Done

Emaal wrote:

Delete .osb and full submit~

Leorda wrote:

Apa Kabar

General
I have 2 OSB, remove the wrong one
^Fix this at later

Easy
00:15:636 (2) - Make symetric?
00:29:944 (1) - Move 4 grid up? To avoid for overlapping?
00:50:713 (4) - Try make a slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43263
01:36:405 (3,4,5) - Move 1 grid up?
02:48:405 (3) - Should be like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43384
02:52:098 (2) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43383
03:41:482 (x) - Add note here?
^All Fixed

Hard
01:19:790 (4) - New combo?
^Yes

Good job

Leorda wrote:

Roddie-kun's Normal
00:50:251 (1) - Move 2 grid down? Nah.
00:50:713 (2) - I think you might want this.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43404 Sure.
00:55:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern are messy, try this pattern to make interesting http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43405 ^
01:57:636 (1) - Make symetric? ^
01:58:559 (2,3,4,5,1) - This pattern are weird, maybe? Not really...
02:33:174 (2) - Move 1 grid left? Done.

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- May I suggest you a better preview time? I think 00:37:328 would suit better. Hmm.. no. i think at 00:14:521 better than 00:37:328

Easy:
Nothing :3.

Hard:
00:28:098 (3) - Move this back one 1/2 tick. And add a note here 00:28:559 - <-Yes, Fixed

Oh my Gosh, cool map.

Rukarioman wrote:

Roddie's Normal:
00:59:251 - Add a note? Okay.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Genuinely couldn't find anything wrong, good job.

Lesjuh wrote:

All difficulties look alright to me, just this:

Easy
03:00:867 (1,2) - This little part really doesn't go with the music.

Take a look at it and tell me if you've fixed it or not. I'll bubble afterwards

Lesjuh wrote:

There!

Emaal wrote:

Delete .osb and full submit~