Hi~
[General]
[Storyboard]
[Easy]
[xIchBinVale's Easy]
[gary00737's Normal]
[Capsule's Normal]
[DominiGG's Hard]
[Hard]
[DominiGG's Insane]
[Musunde~!]
Good Luck!
[General]
- The preview point is different on xIchBinVale's Easy compared to all the others
[Storyboard]
When storyboarding for ranked there should not be any excess transparency around a sprite if it can be helped. For example, on this sprite the red around is all transparency that can be cropped out. This applies to
- BubbleGlow.png
- MagicCircleS.png
- More Star4.png
(make sure to leave a 1 pixel border of transparency around the sprites if they are rotating however (for interpolation to work properly))
Also why is the top diff the only one with circle highlights?
[Easy]
DS Errors:
- 00:27:616 (3,1) - 0.75x
- 00:31:145 (1,2) - 0.83x
- 00:48:086 (3,4) - 1.11x
- 00:51:616 (4,1) - 0.66x
- 00:57:263 (4,1) - 0.8x
- also most of the section from 00:08:557 to 00:19:851
while it is not mandatory to have time distance equality it is very highly recommended, especially for the lowest sr easy diff
also consider this. This also applies to SV changes, because SV changes shouldn't be used in low level diffs unless there is a clear and major shift in the music (i.e. a bpm change)
[xIchBinVale's Easy]
- See what I wrote for the Easy difficulty, because it applies to this one as well
- 00:00:087 (1,2) - This rhythm could be a little awkward for easy players and would probably be better if 2 was clickable on the downbeat
- 00:09:969 (2) - This slider doesn't really look too nice, plus its weird contrasting with the cornered and sharp slider before. Especially for this slow section,
consider making simpler shapes as well as having those shapes look more similar to each other to make it cleaner - 00:12:969 (2) - This slider has a lot of unseeable corners and weird angles and turns and could be really confusing for an easy player to play
- 00:19:851 (1,2,1) - No time distance equality here. Despite all 3 being the same distance, 1 and 2 are vastly more far apart then 2 and blue 1. this should be fixed by making 2 and blue 1 further away
- 00:31:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - NCs seem all over the place for this section, remove NC from 00:35:381 (1) - and put one on 00:33:616 (3) -
- Also, consider changing 3 to be 2 circles so that the downbeat is clickable
[gary00737's Normal]
- 00:20:910 (3) - Try not to have a sliderend on a downbeat and instead make it clickable (i.e. like making a 1/2 slider for 2 and 3 then putting a circle on the downbeat)
[Capsule's Normal]
- 00:00:087 (1,2,3,4) - Why do all these sliderbodies have whistle hitsounds on them?
- 00:43:851 (1,2) - Rhythm is a little weird here, probably should just open up with a 1/2 slider into a circle (basically reverse it)
- 00:47:028 (2,3) - The slider should probably be where the circle is (again haha) because it would to a good job representing the vocals.
- 01:02:381 (4,5,6) - Weird to play, probably should either have all 3 stacked or none stacked
[DominiGG's Hard]
- 00:06:263 (2,3,4,5) - Super confusing spacing, 1 2 and 3 are all pretty much the same distance despite 1 and 2 have a much shorter distance of time between them compared to 2 and 3. Fix this by making 1 and 2 a lot closer and 2 and 3 a lot further
- 00:11:381 (3) - I'm not really a fan of this overlap, its kind of hard to see plus it looks unfitting, consider moving 3 elsewhere
- 00:39:263 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same thing about confusing spacing, at least separate these 2 parts as an indication of the change
[Hard]
- 00:06:086 (2,3,1) - Really confusing spacing here, no real indication 1 is so far away time wise so these should be more spread out
- 00:06:969 (3,1,2) - ^
- 00:17:734 (4,1) - Why is nothing mapped in between these 2 notes? To me it seems weird to just have an empty space there
[DominiGG's Insane]
- The SV feels super high, so maybe consider lowering it
- 00:08:028 (1,2,3,1,2) - Same thing about time-distance equality I said in hard, theres no way to tell the sudden rhythm changes throughout this part and it should be redone
- 00:08:557 (2) - Slider shape feels kind of.... random :<. Maybe just go for something simpler
- 00:12:086 (2) - Make this a repeat slider to cover the vocals
- 00:54:086 (4,5,6,7,8) - REALLY awkward to play, I think you should just stack the circles onto the sliders they are leading into
[Musunde~!]
- 00:32:557 (1,2) - This looks like its 1/2 and its really confusing, so you should spread these out
- 00:49:851 (2,3,4,5) - Weird linear movement here, try angling the triplet in a different way
- 00:51:263 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Good Luck!