Pata-Mon wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:21:695 - 这音太轻了 删了更好 ……我覺得連著好一點,刪了後面東西太遠
- 00:30:897 (5,1) - 最好稍微放远点,虽然可以不用一样ds 但是这放的和1/1一样还是很奇怪……fix
- 01:09:916 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这作为最低难度真的是相当难的……把01:10:100 (3,4) - 换成滑条就会简单许多.实际上后面这种跟红线vocal我都建议尽量用滑条,因为滑条能盖住白线上的很响的鼓,现在感觉比较违和……滑條才是真的難,因為星級會掉
- 01:11:572 (1) - 这节奏也是 对新手很不友好.总之这里如果跟vocal我会这么摆:https://puu.sh/uai8j/c552a17635.png
- 01:12:124 (2,3) - 说跟vocal吧,中间蓝线的vocal也完全没法跟,听着其实很怪.我觉得不如1/1跟鼓效果好……不跟鼓
- 01:15:805 (4,1) - 这里切轨太不舒服了
- 01:18:014 (4,5,6) - 这节奏没太看懂……至少01:18:566 - 这个要跟,而01:18:750 - 可以不跟吧,毕竟vocal都有,但是伴奏在白线那里空了
- 01:21:695 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:23:903 (2,3) - 跟前面类似
thx mod !!ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Nihao!
[General]
[Narcissu's Normal]
- Hi Narcissu :3/ …… :3/
- 00:01:450 (1,2) - hummm... that was very strange, because the second finish in 00:02:922 - , so... I want to suggest this:
…… i want not use 1/2 in quiet part, and i think player will click when he hear finish even if downbeat behind finish- 00:16:173 (1) -
not a finish here?Not hitsounds?? xD …… i request Garden do it Orz- 00:30:897 (5,1) - This anti-jump will be bad idea, because it is the most low diff in this mapset. Consider add more space please! …… fix
- 00:32:186 (2,1) - those are very close (this will be confusing for noobs).…… fix
- 01:00:345 (1) - improve blanket?…… fix lol, I didn't take it too seriously = =
- 01:03:290 (1,2) - humm... idk... I want to make a suggestion, but I am not sure if its a bad suggestion, so, ask more opinions please:
- 01:11:572 (1) - I am not agree with this. I dont feel any "clickable sound" in the slider head. I think a better solution could be:…… fix
- 01:12:124 - here, I think its better if short to 01:12:492 - ……no, i want to make hard here
- 01:44:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - nice!
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