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Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.)

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LMT
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19:51 LMT1996: umm first off, there's a timing issue
19:51 Jonawaga: oh dang
19:51 Jonawaga: what did I do?
19:51 LMT1996: uh
19:51 LMT1996: just halve the bpm
19:51 LMT1996: and double the sv
19:51 Jonawaga: hm?
19:52 LMT1996: the bpm is in fact 89.25
19:52 Jonawaga: exaplin
19:52 Jonawaga: what
19:52 LMT1996: check the downbeats :d
19:53 Jonawaga: ono
19:53 Jonawaga: I can't really
19:53 Jonawaga: halve a 3/4 song
19:53 Jonawaga: won't I have to third it?
19:53 LMT1996: nvm
19:53 Jonawaga: idk im not good at math anymore
19:53 LMT1996: leave it like that
19:53 LMT1996: it's probably not so important
19:54 LMT1996: the ending tho
19:54 LMT1996: not precise enough
19:54 Jonawaga: hopefully owo
19:57 LMT1996: uhh
19:57 LMT1996: try
19:57 LMT1996: 02:27:432 - 150bpm
19:57 LMT1996: 02:28:632 - 142bpm
19:57 LMT1996: 02:29:899 - 132bpm
19:57 LMT1996: unless someone else timed this for you then you'll probably want to consult that person
19:58 Jonawaga: nah it was self timed
19:59 LMT1996: 00:28:105 (2,3) - spacing :d
20:01 LMT1996: 00:40:542 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rhythm and rearrange so that the sliderhead has the correct emphasis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880004
20:03 LMT1996: 00:58:357 (2) - sliderhead isn't really on a strong beat (and ends on a stronger beat, which is more concerning)
20:04 Jonawaga: 00:40:542 (2,3) - here you messed up the spacing
20:04 Jonawaga: should be 1.2x
20:04 LMT1996: i was just trying to get the message across
20:04 LMT1996: don't mind the placement xd
20:05 Jonawaga: I see
20:05 Jonawaga: fixed all so far
20:05 LMT1996: 00:58:357 (2,3,4) - i actually think you have to come up with a different pattern here
20:06 LMT1996: since right now that double blanket doesn't emphasise anything recognisable
20:06 LMT1996: the first 2 makes sense, but the third one should be separate
20:09 LMT1996: 01:49:786 (3,4,1) - probably want to space it evenly since that is a potential misread?
20:09 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ25M/580d9aaded.jpg
20:09 Jonawaga: weird stack pattern ftw
20:09 Jonawaga: yeah
20:10 Jonawaga: fixed
20:12 LMT1996: 01:10:794 (1,2,3) - would buff the note density here a bit up
20:12 LMT1996: 01:11:802 (1,2,3,1) - so it's more fitting to this
20:13 LMT1996: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880104
20:13 LMT1996: 01:13:819 (1,2,3,4) - seems unstructured
20:14 LMT1996: comparing with the rest of the patterns the clicking pattern is very different
20:14 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs. 01:13:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - , even tho there isn't something that stands out
20:15 LMT1996: 01:16:844 (4,5,6) - this is good tho because of the violin
20:15 Jonawaga: yeah definetly
20:15 LMT1996: 01:24:575 (3) - should be another 1/2 slider because consistency
20:16 Jonawaga: idea on how to fix 01:13:819 -
20:17 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - sth like this
20:17 LMT1996: i'll give it a try
20:19 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ2EQ/d1c3cc437c.jpg
20:19 Jonawaga: this is bad cuz the reverse
20:19 LMT1996: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6880153 try mine
20:21 Jonawaga: ay yours is cool
20:21 Jonawaga: http://puu.sh/sZ2MB/158ae2f574.jpg
20:21 Jonawaga: this was my other
20:21 Jonawaga: but I like yours
20:22 LMT1996: that gap is probably too inconsistent with the rest of the rhythm pattern?
20:22 LMT1996: i'm talking about your other
20:23 LMT1996: 02:19:365 (1) - that extra spacing is probably not needed
20:23 LMT1996: but that's not really important
20:24 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
20:25 LMT1996: 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - why such different rhythm with 00:13:315 (4,5,6) -
20:27 Jonawaga: ok finally done with blessing wew
20:27 LMT1996: 01:19:533 (4) - 2 circles?
20:28 Jonawaga: because the piano does different things there
20:28 LMT1996: or
20:28 LMT1996: 01:18:861 (3) - this can be different
20:28 LMT1996: sec this is a bit hard
20:28 Jonawaga: at 1:18 fixed
20:29 Jonawaga: 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - this i dont get
20:29 LMT1996: so
20:29 LMT1996: the only different piano note i hear is this
20:29 LMT1996: 00:13:987 -
20:29 LMT1996: higher pitch than the previous
20:30 Jonawaga: oh
20:30 LMT1996: 00:12:307 (3) - this and 00:14:323 (5,6) - this are the same imo
20:30 LMT1996: also
20:30 LMT1996: 00:14:323 (5,6) - if these were just a slider
20:30 LMT1996: 00:14:996 (7,1) - these 2 can be more distinct
20:30 LMT1996: which is what the vocal is donig
20:30 LMT1996: doing*
20:31 LMT1996: 00:30:794 (6,7) - would make this a slider to differentiate from the rest of the notes
20:32 LMT1996: differentiate the 2 high pitch notes*
20:32 Jonawaga: I made
20:32 Jonawaga: 00:14:323 - / 00:14:659 - 1 slider
20:32 LMT1996: cool
20:33 Jonawaga: xd
20:33 Jonawaga: keep it going~
20:33 LMT1996: 01:15:836 (4,5) - 01:13:819 (1) - same as in blessing
20:34 Jonawaga: oh is is
20:34 Jonawaga: less structured?
20:35 LMT1996: yea has a completely different clicking pattern
20:35 LMT1996: kinda confusing
20:36 LMT1996: 01:49:113 (4) - nice slider but...
20:36 LMT1996: don't think lowering note density here fits the music
20:37 LMT1996: also the flow could be awkward
20:37 LMT1996: when it needs to be straightforward
20:37 Jonawaga: lol I'm still figuring out how to fix 01:14:491 (2) - this
20:37 Jonawaga: think I just got it
20:38 LMT1996: eh
20:38 LMT1996: i'd literally copy paste 01:15:836 (5,6) -
20:38 LMT1996: xd
20:38 LMT1996: you figured that out , it's good then
20:38 Jonawaga: ya and then I spend 1 minute staring at it
20:38 Jonawaga: until I realized about Ctrl+g
20:39 LMT1996: :D
20:39 LMT1996: i just ctrl+ j
20:39 LMT1996: or k i can't remember
20:39 Jonawaga: not even
20:39 Jonawaga: it's a literal copy/paste pattern
20:39 Jonawaga: and a minor ds change
20:40 LMT1996: yup xD
20:40 Jonawaga: 01:49:113 (4) - why do you wanna change this and not 00:56:676 (4) - this/
20:41 LMT1996: i missed it
20:41 LMT1996: xD
20:41 LMT1996: you probably want to change that too
20:41 Jonawaga: xd
20:42 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131245 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
20:42 LMT1996: 00:31:466 (1,4) - um not sure why the difference
20:43 LMT1996: there is a difference, but how you make it distinguishable isn't really "emphasised" here
20:44 Jonawaga: higher pitch made me excited lol
20:44 LMT1996: yup
20:44 LMT1996: but
20:44 Jonawaga: fixed
20:44 LMT1996: nice
20:44 LMT1996: 00:31:466 (1) - tbh
20:44 LMT1996: a better thing would be
20:45 LMT1996: just a 1/1 slider + a circle on that high pitch
20:45 LMT1996: but that's probably too hard to fix
20:45 Jonawaga: i don't wanna do that anyway
20:45 LMT1996: 00:34:491 (4) - that or you can break this up to 1/1 + 1 circle for the vocals
20:45 Jonawaga: simple 1 click reverse slider of 2/1 slider makes sense to me
20:46 Jonawaga: or*
20:48 LMT1996: 01:44:071 (1,2,3,4) - you stress the second beat instead of the first but 01:47:096 (1,2,3,4) - here you stress the first beat
20:48 LMT1996: i think it should be the other way round?
20:48 LMT1996: cus instruments stress the second one while the vocals stress the first
20:49 LMT1996: 02:07:265 (4,1) - sorry for breaking that symmetry but these shouldn't have the same representative pattern as these 02:04:239 (1,2) -
20:54 LMT1996: once you're done can you update the map?
20:54 LMT1996: I'd like to see how they play
20:56 Jonawaga: fixed fixed sure
20:56 LMT1996: xD
20:56 Jonawaga: it's up
20:58 LMT1996: top diff feels a lot better now
20:59 Jonawaga: updating again I forgot a combo
20:59 Jonawaga: yeah thanks ;3
20:59 Jonawaga: now I will be able to take some credit for that
21:00 LMT1996: 00:58:693 (2,3) - this is still cancer to play tho xd
21:00 Jonawaga: Marianna's Blessing mapped by Marianna
21:00 Jonawaga: and modded by Jonawaga
21:00 Jonawaga: thi-is is
21:00 LMT1996: 01:00:374 (3) - i'd also make this clean
21:01 Jonawaga: not thi-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-s is
21:01 LMT1996: :p
21:01 LMT1996: it would be more intuitive tho
21:01 LMT1996: 00:58:861 (3) - if you stacked this to (2)
21:01 LMT1996: but that's a concept you have to use consistently
21:01 LMT1996: which this map doesn't use that
21:02 Jonawaga: yeah ><
21:02 LMT1996: so going clean there is the best option i can think of
21:02 Jonawaga: just gotta change the patterns
21:02 LMT1996: tbh i like how this diff flows
21:02 LMT1996: it's just the rhythm was weird
21:04 LMT1996: 01:14:659 (3,4) - careful xd overlapping
21:04 LMT1996: the stack ruined it lol
21:04 Jonawaga: unstacked~
21:05 *LMT1996 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1131246 Jewel - What Child Is This? (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
21:05 LMT1996: check your snapping
21:05 LMT1996: :V
21:05 LMT1996: actually
21:05 LMT1996: SV = 0.9 fixes it
21:06 LMT1996: shit
21:06 LMT1996: something
21:06 LMT1996: went horribly wrong
21:06 LMT1996: actually yeah 0.9 fixes most of them
21:07 LMT1996: wait wut
21:07 LMT1996: what's going on
21:08 LMT1996: the sv after the first kiai is correct
21:08 LMT1996: everything before that is unsnapped wtf
21:09 Jonawaga: did you notice the SV changes?
21:10 LMT1996: i noticed it or not
21:10 LMT1996: the sv right now is rip
21:10 Jonawaga: hm? not on my end
21:10 LMT1996: resubmit it?
21:11 LMT1996: Normal diff i'm saying
21:11 Jonawaga: ohhhh
21:12 LMT1996: yup something went horribly wrong in the normal diff
21:12 LMT1996: just resnap them i guess
21:14 Jonawaga: timing > recalc slider lenths
21:14 LMT1996: wew
21:15 Jonawaga: also fixed the cancer in belssing
21:15 LMT1996: :3
21:15 LMT1996: nice
21:16 LMT1996: that's probably it from it
Mafumafu
M4M.

[General]
Why not silence the sliderslide?
Why you used PNG format for your BG? Convert it to JPG and it will save a lot of space!

Could you explain: https://puu.sh/tlFX5/264719f55d.png ?

[Easy]
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to keep consistency with other diffs.

[Blessing]
OD+1
00:34:491 (3) - Wrong snap on its end.
00:42:559 (2,1) - Blanket should be better.
00:58:693 (2,3,4) - Flow could be much better if you try this: https://puu.sh/tlFEr/2d85a6bbe1.png
01:01:718 (1,2) - Blanket does need to be improved.
01:20:878 (3,4) - They are too close, as to their sliderbody. Try this: https://puu.sh/tlFJi/740dad5564.png
02:17:349 (3) - Need a whistle on its head i guess.
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to prevent unexpected HP drain.
02:31:262 (1) - Adding a whistle would sounds great!

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Call me back when you get metadata confirmed!
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal
Just in time for Christmas.

Regraz wrote:

M4M.

[General]
Why not silence the sliderslide? Fixed~!
Why you used PNG format for your BG? Convert it to JPG and it will save a lot of space! Transparency for the storyboard, since I use the background in the storyboard with fading effects

Could you explain: https://puu.sh/tlFX5/264719f55d.png ? It appears that way inside the editor, but it goes away during gameplay

[Easy]
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to keep consistency with other diffs. Fixed~!

[Blessing]
OD+1 Fixed~!
00:34:491 (3) - Wrong snap on its end. Fixed~!
00:42:559 (2,1) - Blanket should be better. Fixed~!
00:58:693 (2,3,4) - Flow could be much better if you try this: https://puu.sh/tlFEr/2d85a6bbe1.png Changed differently
01:01:718 (1,2) - Blanket does need to be improved. Fixed~!
01:20:878 (3,4) - They are too close, as to their sliderbody. Try this: https://puu.sh/tlFJi/740dad5564.png Fixed~!
02:17:349 (3) - Need a whistle on its head i guess. Fixed~!
02:19:365 (1) - Add a break after this note to prevent unexpected HP drain. Fixed~!
02:31:262 (1) - Adding a whistle would sounds great! Fixed~!

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Call me back when you get metadata confirmed! http://www.jeweljk.com/music.html
Thank you so much for modding!
Mafumafu
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

Regraz wrote:

Bubbled!
thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u
pishifat
are you waiting til next christmas to rank this lol
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

pishifat wrote:

are you waiting til next christmas to rank this lol
Pretty much
Bonsai
holy shit you've ruined Christmas Greensleeves, can't unhear this ;_;

On a more serious note, why is it still called "Nightcore Mix", even though MkGuh already pointed out that it should be "Speed Up Ver."? o:
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

Bonsai wrote:

holy shit you've ruined Christmas Greensleeves, can't unhear this ;_;

On a more serious note, why is it still called "Nightcore Mix", even though MkGuh already pointed out that it should be "Speed Up Ver."? o:
After receiving his advice, I asked KwaN for a metadata check to be more certain. Her reply:

IamKwaN wrote:

Sound like a Nightcore Version to me, as the pitch is higher than the original version while Speed Up Ver. only indicates the bpm turns faster.

so, probably something like this as the title is more appropriate:

What Child Is This? (Nightcore Mix)
And thus, we have our title.
Bonsai
Seems like we've got ourselves a rare case of KwaN being wrong, because raising the speed automatically raises the pitch too, which is mentioned in the article MkGuh linked too (speed =/= tempo). Just look at all the examples that MkGuh provided and you'll see that the pitch is higher everywhere.
The process that a Nightcore- or a SpeedUp-version go through is 100% the same, the only relevant difference is the genre of the song, techno/trance/dance-songs being called Nightcore. That's how we've been treating this in osu! for a long time now and I've got a SpeedUp-song ranked myself just two months ago and had that discussion there too :P

Alas, my love, you do me wrong
IamKwaN
I never realize raising the speed goes along with higher pitch, thanks for letting me know!

Probably as a guideline in the metadata ranking criteria draft.
Can you list out some genres which would be suitable to use (Speed Up Ver.)?
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

Bonsai wrote:

Seems like we've got ourselves a rare case of KwaN being wrong, because raising the speed automatically raises the pitch too, which is mentioned in the article MkGuh linked too (speed =/= tempo). Just look at all the examples that MkGuh provided and you'll see that the pitch is higher everywhere.
The process that a Nightcore- or a SpeedUp-version go through is 100% the same, the only relevant difference is the genre of the song, techno/trance/dance-songs being called Nightcore. That's how we've been treating this in osu! for a long time now and I've got a SpeedUp-song ranked myself just two months ago and had that discussion there too :P

Alas, my love, you do me wrong
fixed >W<
Mafumafu
Nice knowledge
pishifat
so when do i rank
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

pishifat wrote:

so when do i rank
in less than 22 days :3
LMT
it's been a year already wat.
pishifat
nightcore
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal

pishifat wrote:

nightcore
Speed up ver.!

Thank you so much
My Senpai Rina
I like this
Topic Starter
Jonarwhal
First Ranked Map in 2018... Wow...
Noffy

Jonawaga wrote:

First Ranked Map in 2018... Wow...
wow!!! :D
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