atian540 wrote:

hii NM req

hmmm singkat padat dan jelas ini song :v

1|2|3|4

General

1. ?? wrong dimension of BG,gambarnya jadi pecah2
   
2. maybe you can try this BG >>>>> https://puu.sh/y3y0C/1202f8e0a0.jpg

LV .13

1. 00:00:284 (284|3) - col 2
2. 00:00:918 (918|0) - col 3
3. 00:01:129 (1129|1,1341|2) - move 1 col to left
4. uuh ini dari 00:01:341 ke 00:03:031 menurutku terlalu fokus di 24,coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364811 soalnya buat ngikut yg di part ini 00:04:721 -
5. 00:03:242 (3242|3) - col 2
6. 00:05:566 (5566|2,5777|3) - ctrl+J
7. 00:08:101 - ini juga sama kayak kasus no 3, di 34, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364876
8. 00:10:214 loh ini kok 3 note ? padahal yg lainya 2 note
9. 00:11:904 - same
10. 00:15:073 (15073|0,15284|1) - ctrl+J
11. 00:15:918 (15918|3) - col1 biar balance
12. 00:28:383 (28383|0,28383|2,28383|1) - has ended at here 00:30:284 -

LV. 8

1. 00:02:186 - kek gini lebih ena https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370614
2. 00:03:453 (3453|1) - col 1 biar ga stack di col 2
3. 00:04:721 (4721|0,4721|1,4721|2) - ini kok 3 note ? padahal ga ada suara symbal / suara yg keras,suggest aja del di col 2
4. 00:05:143 (5143|0) - col 4
5. 00:05:566 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370634
6. 00:08:101 (8101|0,8101|3,8101|1) - ini 3 note,sedangkan 00:09:791 (9791|3,9791|0) sama 00:11:481 (11481|1,11481|2) - 2 note,kan suara symbal,buat konsistensi aja,bisa di delet 1 note yg di 3 note itu / add note di 2 note itu
7. 00:09:580 (9580|3,9791|3) - ini di sini jack, 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|1) - ini ga, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370655
8. 00:15:284 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370677
9. 00:18:665 (18665|2,18876|3) - ctrl+J

dah ya segitu aja
Good Luck~

tailsdk wrote:

Mod from my queue

Lv.13

00:03:453 - ony make double here
00:20:566 (20566|1) - maybe find a way to move this note its in a really uncomfortable spot
missing a note here 00:25:003 -

Lv.8

00:19:721 (19721|2) - move this one

couldn't find much else but have a star aswel

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

Lv 13

just think the hold notes in this places, should follow the violins
you can use other patterns if you don't like these

Salty Mermaid wrote:

Hello, nm from the beautiful modding queue.

Lv.5

1. 00:11:270 (11270|2) - I'd suggest to delete this note, since you didn't put any at 00:09:580.
2. 00:24:369 (24369|1) - You could delete this note it makes a nice little pattern.
3. 00:26:059 (26059|1) - Same with this one.

Lv.8

1. This diff is a little bit messy, tbh. For example, here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1) - you put a double for the sound, it's fine. but then right after, here 00:06:834 (6834|3) - you only put a single note. Sometime you map the voice, sometime you map the like drum sound and switch between them without any logical pattern. Also here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1,7890|1,8101|1) - there is a little jack,, but not tehe00:09:580 (9580|2,9791|3) - nor there 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|2) - , but here 00:12:960 (12960|1,13172|1) - yes. And then at 00:22:256-, you suddenly start using 1/4 although you could have add 1/4 notes at plenty of other places in the diff, like here 00:11:376 (11376|1) -. I'd suggest rearranging the whole diff with those things in mind, shouldn't take too long, since the song is only 30 seonds.
2. Oh and there's a sound on which you simply didn't put any sound at 00:07:256. Add notes.

Lv.13

1. 00:12:749 (12749|0,12749|3,12749|1) - Only a double here.
2. 00:14:017 (14017|0,14017|3,14017|2) - Same
3. 00:14:017 (14017|2,14228|1) - ctrl + h those two notes, to avoid this 00:13:383 (13383|2,13594|2,13805|2,14017|2) - .
4. 00:22:045 (22045|2) - To col 2.
5. 00:23:524 (23524|0) - To col 4.
6. 00:23:946 (23946|3) - To col 1.
7. 00:24:052 (24052|0) - To col 3.
8. 00:24:158 (24158|2) - To col 1.

So that's it for the mod. Good luck.

Faputa wrote:

From my Queue,
o/


[General]
⏩Make sure to add hitsounds to the notes. You need to have hitsounds if for ranked.
⏩Delete one tag One Room It appeared twice in the tags.
⏩Change the source to OneRoom Instead of One Room, because it is joined character from the source.

[Lv.5]
⏩00:26:904 (26904|2,27115|0,27327|1,27538|2,27749|0) - Its quite overloaded here, you should make it less dense or it may shock players.


[Lv.8]
⏩00:15:284 (15284|2,15284|1,15496|3,15707|2,15918|3,16129|1,16129|2,16341|3) - I think you should be consistent with the first phase, make the rhythm like 00:01:341 (1341|3,1341|1,1763|3,1763|2,2186|1,2397|3,2608|2,2608|1,2820|3) - . That’s to delete 00:15:496 (15496|3) - .
There are many parts with this issue but I’ll not list them out, find them yourself :v


[Lv.13]
⏩00:20:566 (20566|3,20672|0,20777|3) - The flow here isn’t comfortable I think, at least changing the positions of these three, or change the hold places if you want. Right now it affects the playing of the whole part until the next hold so I think you should definitely check it out.
⏩00:25:003 (25003|1) - I think it is okay removing this note considering there aren’t significant sounds here just as other places.


Short mod because the maps are quite neat, and there’s only 30s ;w;
Good luck with the set!

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

1. 00:03:876 (3876|1,4087|3,4298|1,4510|2) - these notes are actually out of sync. I suggest some pattern like this one.
2. 00:16:552 (16552|0,16763|1,16974|3,17186|2,17397|0,17608|1,17820|2) - this one too, change pattern like this one.

1. 00:03:665 (3665|1,3876|3,4087|0,4298|1,4510|3) - As i said in Lv.13's diff, it's out of sync. change pattern like this one.
2. 00:16:763 (16763|3,16974|2,17186|1,17397|3,17608|0,17820|1,18031|2) - Again, change pattern like this one.

Actually I like this song. Good luck and thanks again for mod my map

- Aries - wrote:

Mod for Mod Request

[General]

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Lv.13]

1. 00:03:876 (3876|1,4087|3,4298|1,4510|2) - these notes are actually out of sync. I suggest some pattern like this one.
2. 00:16:552 (16552|0,16763|1,16974|3,17186|2,17397|0,17608|1,17820|2) - this one too, change pattern like this one.

[Lv.8]

1. 00:03:665 (3665|1,3876|3,4087|0,4298|1,4510|3) - As i said in Lv.13's diff, it's out of sync. change pattern like this one.
2. 00:16:763 (16763|3,16974|2,17186|1,17397|3,17608|0,17820|1,18031|2) - Again, change pattern like this one.

Actually I like this song. Good luck and thanks again for mod my map

I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Hello there! here's my little mod in the last difficulty
1|2|3|4

00:01:129 (1129|0,1341|1) - you can swap column so there will be pitch relevancy

00:11:904 (11904|1,12115|3,12327|1) - move to 3 , 2 , 1 respectively for comfortable execution. If applied, 00:12:538 (12538|2) - move to 2

00:13:805 (13805|2) - move to 4 to avoid 00:13:383 (13383|2,13594|2,13805|2) -

00:20:672 (20672|2,20777|1) - swap column so the sight will be clearer and easier to execute.

00:21:622 (21622|2) - move to 2 for comfort

00:23:101 (23101|0) - move to 3 ^

00:27:327 - add note to 3 with kick sound

00:27:749 - ^ to 2 same reason


Good song choice actually. Good luck and keep it up!

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

1234 zzz
from queue

Lv. 5

1. 00:00:284 (284|3,496|2,707|1,918|3,1129|0) - I think that you should delete some of the notes here because it's very dense for an Easy diff and compared to other diffs it's the same density
2. 00:13:594 - Put another note here

Lv. 8

1. 00:00:284 (284|0,496|2,707|0,918|3,1129|2) - Same as Lv. 5, make it less dense
2. 00:01:552 - Add a note here

Lv. 13

1. 00:00:284 (284|1,496|2,707|3,918|2,1129|1) - Here instead of doing this you can rearrange the objects for pitch relevancy:
   00:00:301 - Add 1
   00:00:496 - Add 4
   00:00:707 - Add 3
   00:00:918 - Add 2
   00:01:129 - Add 1
2. 00:01:341 (1341|0) - Move to 2

Very nice map, I like it. Good luck

1. Looks good!

1. 00:07:256 - Feels kinda awkard to catch 4/1 stream on this part. Can you make more easily like this https://i.imgur.com/DVmmyUw.png
2. 00:11:693 (11693|1,11904|0,12115|1,12327|0,12538|1) - Looks it's focused only Left-hand so it's should be make balance here
   00:12:538 (12538|1,12960|2,13172|1,13594|2) - Ctrl+H after 00:13:805 - Make [3][4]
3. 00:14:017 - Missing one more note? same as 00:13:172 - 00:13:594

1. 00:03:876 - Add note you missed whistle
2. 00:07:256 - You mapped double notes on Whistle? how about others like a this 00:02:186 maybe do you follow something?
3. 00:13:172 (13172|0,13172|1) - Swap it, For the make balance.

1. 00:13:594 - Delete one or add more notes on 00:14:017 (14017|1,14439|1) - here

SpectorDG wrote:

Normal mod req from my queue!

[General]

1. Looks good!

[Lv.13]

1. 00:07:256 - Feels kinda awkard to catch 4/1 stream on this part. Can you make more easily like this https://i.imgur.com/DVmmyUw.png
2. 00:11:693 (11693|1,11904|0,12115|1,12327|0,12538|1) - Looks it's focused only Left-hand so it's should be make balance here
   00:12:538 (12538|1,12960|2,13172|1,13594|2) - Ctrl+H after 00:13:805 - Make [3][4]
3. 00:14:017 - Missing one more note? same as 00:13:172 - 00:13:594

[Lv.8]

1. 00:03:876 - Add note you missed whistle
2. 00:07:256 - You mapped double notes on Whistle? how about others like a this 00:02:186 maybe do you follow something?
3. 00:13:172 (13172|0,13172|1) - Swap it, For the make balance.

[Lv.5]

1. 00:13:594 - Delete one or add more notes on 00:14:017 (14017|1,14439|1) - here

goodluck!

chouyaa wrote:

gw ganteng

2017-11-10 22:37 chouyaa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442908 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.13]]
2017-11-10 22:37 chouyaa: 00:00:284 (284|0,284|1,496|3,707|2,918|1,1129|0) - delete
2017-11-10 22:38 RiP46: y?
2017-11-10 22:38 chouyaa: no sound, ga bagus klo map vocalnya karna lu di part seterusnya cuma map perkusi
2017-11-10 22:38 chouyaa: sama violin
2017-11-10 22:38 RiP46: berlaku buat semua dong?
2017-11-10 22:38 chouyaa: yup
2017-11-10 22:38 RiP46: general diff
2017-11-10 22:38 chouyaa: ga bagus bener deh :/
2017-11-10 22:39 RiP46: ok
2017-11-10 22:39 chouyaa: 00:04:087 - ama 00:04:510 - itu melodi baru violinnya, dibikin 1/2 LN
2017-11-10 22:39 RiP46: next next
2017-11-10 22:39 chouyaa: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9509291
2017-11-10 22:40 chouyaa: 00:07:890 (7890|2,8101|2,8312|2) - coba direarrange, stacknya rada ga enak
2017-11-10 22:41 chouyaa: karna kolom 2 udh nahan LN, klo mau dibikin stack, usahakan di kolom 4 biar lebih balance
2017-11-10 22:41 chouyaa: 00:09:580 (9580|0,9791|0) -
2017-11-10 22:42 chouyaa: ^ ada baiknya diarrange kek 00:18:031 (18031|3,18136|2,18242|3,18242|0) -
2017-11-10 22:44 RiP46: next
2017-11-10 22:46 chouyaa: 00:07:467 (7467|2,7890|0) - 00:08:735 (8735|3,9580|2) - di part ini kenapa jacknya banyak :/ jadi ga konsisten jacknya main dimana
2017-11-10 22:46 RiP46: lv brp?
2017-11-10 22:46 chouyaa: 00:14:862 - konsistensi penempatan notenya beda lagi mulai dari sini
2017-11-10 22:46 chouyaa: ehya
2017-11-10 22:46 chouyaa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442910 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.8]]
2017-11-10 22:47 chouyaa: penempatan notenya perlu dicek lagi semuanya, terutama konsistensi penempatan khususnya jack, jadi biar ga membingungkan
2017-11-10 22:47 RiP46: gaboleh kah begitu :c
2017-11-10 22:48 chouyaa: karna 4k punya keterbatasan kolom, jadi usahakan penempatan note lebih rapi, ditambah mapnya full LN
2017-11-10 22:48 RiP46: ok
2017-11-10 22:49 chouyaa: 00:17:397 (17397|2) - move ke col 4? lebih balance sih :/ sama lebih leluasa, biar ga stack ama 00:16:974 (16974|2) -
2017-11-10 22:49 chouyaa: 00:18:242 (18242|1,20143|1,20566|1) - rearrange
2017-11-10 22:51 RiP46: 00:00:284 (284|1,918|2) - apus ga?
2017-11-10 22:51 chouyaa: hooh
2017-11-10 22:52 chouyaa: 00:10:425 (10425|2) - move ke col 1, lebih balance
2017-11-10 22:53 RiP46: bagian itu dah gw rearrange
2017-11-10 22:53 chouyaa: okee
2017-11-10 22:53 chouyaa: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442909 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.5]]
2017-11-10 22:53 chouyaa: 00:00:284 (284|0) - delete
2017-11-10 22:54 chouyaa: 00:14:439 (14439|1) - replace ama LN? buat naikin emphasize melodi panjang di sana
2017-11-10 22:55 chouyaa: 00:25:636 - ini kicknya bisa dikasih 1 note :/
2017-11-10 22:55 chouyaa: 00:25:636 - ini kicknya bisa dikasih 1 note :/
2017-11-10 22:55 chouyaa: 00:26:059 - missing a notee
2017-11-10 23:00 RiP46: sip

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound mod:

00:24:369 (24369|2) - change to C

00:19:932 (19932|3) - add F
00:27:960 (27960|3) - remove F

remove these whistles or change them to a different sound (https://puu.sh/yulvX/bfe0fa850a.wav):
00:02:820 (2820|2,2925|1) -
00:06:200 (6200|3,6305|2) -
00:07:890 (7890|3,7996|2) -
00:09:580 (9580|3,9686|2) -
00:11:270 (11270|3,11376|1) -
00:16:341 (16341|0,16446|3) -
00:18:031 (18031|3,18136|2) -
00:19:721 (19721|1,19827|2) -
00:20:566 (20566|0,20672|1) -
00:22:256 (22256|2,22362|1) -
00:23:946 (23946|0,24052|2) -
00:25:636 (25636|1,25742|3) -
00:27:327 (27327|2,27432|0) -
00:28:066 (28066|1,28172|2,28277|3) -