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[Color Oni]
- 00:11:392 - and 01:26:059 - How about this(To fit the sounds of the drums)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703034 - 00:16:892 - delete?
- 00:26:392 - Change to d and move to 00:26:642 -
To fit the sounds of the piano and increase variation. - 00:28:559(152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) -
It seems that you wanna fit the sounds of the drums, How about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703040 - 00:51:225 - add d. please pick up the kick of the drums
- 01:02:392 - I thought this is better.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703057 - 01:12:725 - How about this(I considered the guitar part and your originally map)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703068 - 01:31:392 - I think kkkkddddkkkkddddk is too simple, I'm gotta suggegst this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703045
- 00:14:392 - Change to k
This part sounds kick and snare at the same time, but I felt the snare is bigger. - 00:16:559 - Change to d
I felt this part sounds only snare. - 00:28:892(88,89) - Ctrl+G
It seems that you wanna fit the sounds of the drums. - 00:37:392 - Change to k
I considered well that big change of the song exist at 00:38:059 - - 00:37:725 - delete.
If you don't use my suggestion at 00:37:392, you don't need to use this opinion. - 00:43:392 - How about this? it's better
- 01:12:059 - Change to k
To avoid the repeats - 01:14:392 - Change to k
This part sounds snare clearly. - 01:32:559 - delete
Conseidering the sounds of the drums, I think this is better
- 00:11:392 - and 01:26:059 - How about this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703097 - 00:19:059 - Add finisher
This part sounds largely - 00:19:392 ~ 00:24:392 - your arragement in this part is too hard as Futsuu players so how about this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703108 - 00:28:725(1,2) - Ctrl+G
Judging from the sounds of the drums, this is better - 00:40:725 - Change to D.
This part sounds cymbal, but it's great that you add finisher to this ONLY. - 00:41:059 (14) - Change to k
If you don't use my suggestion at 00:40:725, you don't need to use this opinion. - 00:41:392(15,16) - Change to d
considering the sounds of the drums - 00:45:392 - Change to k
^ - 00:48:725 - How about this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703129 - 01:10:392 (21) - Change to d and move to 01:10:059.
I wanna put the notes to fit the drums better than the melody. - 01:29:725 - Change to k
considering the sounds of the drums
- 00:00:726(1,2) - Change to k
This part sounds the piano higher - 00:11:392 and 01:26:059 - Change to k
considering the sounds of the drums - 00:21:392(23,24) - Ctrl+G
^ - 00:29:392 - Change to d
^ - 00:46:059 - Change to d
^ - 01:30:725(117,118) - Ctrl+G
^ - 00:40:725 - Change to d
This part sounds cymbal, but it's great that you add finisher to this ONLY. - 01:10:059 - Change to d
^ - 01:14:059 - Change to d
This part is not high tension and sounds lower that the other - 00:54:059 - This part sounds a lot of snare sounds so how about this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9703137