1. Merry Christmas (4.01 stars, 347 notes)
2. Snowy White (1.15 stars, 178 notes)

Thank everyone for helping me

cirno- wrote:

Hello

Combo colors 1 and 3 are a lot alike. I'd change it a little bit. | add 1 color new
Add source + tags | i will think about it, and add it later

I think you did a great job mapping these and the hitsounds sound great to me. This is a pretty calm song and I think you did a great job with it!

Snow Christmas

SPOILER

Do you mean Snowy Christmas? | yes
CS5 is better for easy | because it was very easy , should i want it don't too big
04:22:356 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter | ok

Merry Christmas

SPOILER

This felt like a normal to me. The streams were kind of hard for a normal, but overall this is much easier than any hard. I think that's what you wanted right? Not sure if this is supposed to be a normal or hard.

Anyways:

Some of the NC's are personal preference. I think it looks better.

00:27:529 (7) - NC
00:49:943 (3) - ^
00:53:391 (1) - ^
00:58:219 (5) - ^
01:22:012 (7) - ^
01:36:839 (6) - ^
03:16:150 (5) - ^


02:49:081 (2) - Move a little to the left.
04:09:253 (2) - Make it a bezier slider
| ok, i fix all

Are you going to make a insane/hard diff?
i same want , but i want my map ranked in 24/12/2012. so it has a great significance for Christmas Day in vietnam

1. Since the song is related to christmas, adding tag "Christmas" will be good.
2. Decrease audio lead-in to 1000ms. Yeah, I know the song starts too suddenly. But 2000ms is too long, also the first note is over there 00:20:632.
3. You didn't set preview point. 01:39:598 - I suggest this point as preview point. (Timing - Set current position~)
4. Disable countdown. I think it doesn't fit this calm song.
5. 01:09:770 - I don't know why is there beep sound. It's really annoying. Can you find the normal MP3?
6. There are BPM changes in the end of the song. Here are what I got.
   00:00:293 - BPM 87
   04:23:051 - BPM 79
   04:24:569 - BPM 70
   04:26:283 - BPM 79
   04:27:422 - BPM 70
   04:28:279 - BPM 62
   04:29:246 - BPM 56
   04:35:942 - It will be the spinner end point
   
   You should remap section end of the song after this work.
   And don't forget to resnap all note.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Since the song is related to christmas, adding tag "Christmas" will be good. | add
2. Decrease audio lead-in to 1000ms. Yeah, I know the song starts too suddenly. But 2000ms is too long, also the first note is over there 00:20:632. | i was reduced as you said
3. You didn't set preview point. 01:39:598 - I suggest this point as preview point. (Timing - Set current position~) | add
4. Disable countdown. I think it doesn't fit this calm song.| yes, remove
5. 01:09:770 - I don't know why is there beep sound. It's really annoying. Can you find the normal MP3? | this is songs HD < follow i know >, I think music is so
6. There are BPM changes in the end of the song. Here are what I got.
   00:00:293 - BPM 87
   04:23:051 - BPM 79
   04:24:569 - BPM 70
   04:26:283 - BPM 79
   04:27:422 - BPM 70
   04:28:279 - BPM 62
   04:29:246 - BPM 56
   04:35:942 - It will be the spinner end point
   
   You should remap section end of the song after this work.
   And don't forget to resnap all note.
   WOW!!! i thank you very much. i will add bpm

[Merry Christmas]
00:53:391 (1) - Remove NC
01:11:322 (7) - Add finish
01:20:287 (5) - NC
01:22:012 (1) - Remove NC
01:26:150 (5) - NC
01:36:839 (6) - NC
02:59:598 (6) - NC
03:02:012 (1) - Remove NC
03:02:356 (2) - NC
03:10:632 (5) - NC

Fix all
[Snowy Christmas]
About diff name : Snowy Christmas? Hmm... I'd like to change from Snowy to White.
OD 3
00:40:632 (1) - The start point is quite awkward. 00:41:667 - This point would be good for start point, but the length too short for Easy diff. Oh well, would you remove this spinner and fill with other notes?
01:10:632 (4) - Add finish to tail
02:20:632 (1) - Start from 02:20:977
02:54:081 (2) - Feels disparate in shape

Fix all
Good luck ;D

Saten wrote:

Hi

[General]
BPM: 79
04:23:113 - Merry Christmas
04:23:872 - Snowy White

These timings are not consistent. They should be the same on both diffs.

[Merry Christmas]
00:22:423 (1) - whistle on end
00:31:389 (1) - whistle
00:35:527 (2) - whistle on end
00:40:355 (1) - remove whistle on repeat
00:59:320 (2) - clap
01:04:492 (5) - clap on end
01:06:561 (2) - whistle on end
01:07:941 (4) - remove whistle on repeat
01:09:665 (2) - make a triple? just like you have here 01:37:251 (2,3,4) -
01:27:941 (4) - clap on end
01:34:148 (2) - whistle on second repeat & end
01:35:527 (4) - whistle on start & end
01:37:251 (2) - whistle
02:46:217 (2) - remove whistle from repeat and & add whistle on end instead
02:46:906 (3) - whistle on end
02:49:148 (2) - remove whistle
02:51:389 (1) - whistle on start
03:33:458 (6) - whistle
04:10:010 (3) - clap on start
04:24:631 (1) - whistle

[Snowy White]
I would prefer Circle Size 3 on this, since you already uses 4 on Hard/Merry Christmas
01:38:975 (4) - random finish kinda
02:44:148 (1,2) - awkward imo because you touch both the start & end here
03:34:837 (5) - random finish imo
03:05:182 (1) - finish
04:22:423 (3) - this slider ends weird. It should end at 04:23:872 - but impossible at the the current state Fix the timing as I mentioned in General first. I never checked which of them that were correct.


Merry Christmas!

Garven wrote:

From the Christmas queue

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.| i will use it with easy

[Normal]
It's best to keep your new combos at every two measures (tall white ticks), so a new combo at 00:38:975 (5) - would be better than at 00:41:044 (1) - etc. See what you can find to adjust to that to keep things consistent.
01:51:389 (1) - I would prefer to have a little more time than this after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:02:423 (1) - ^
02:13:458 (1) - ^
03:08:630 (1) - ^
03:47:251 (1) - ^
03:58:286 (1) - ^
04:09:320 (1) - ^
04:20:354 (1) - ^
04:27:484 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam

[Hard]
Same comment about the new combos here. Try to keep it consistent.
00:30:699 (4) - I can tell what you're trying to snap to, but it sounds awkward without the end of the rhythm at 00:31:734 -
03:05:182 (6) - Kind of the same thing here.
04:23:872 (7) - ^
04:27:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just... sounds really bad. Might be better just using circles instead.

UNRANKED wrote:

:3

HellDawn wrote:

Snowy White

01:39:665- If you put whistle with finish Sound gonna well | it was have here
02:45:872- Ugly slider :/ | I do not know how to give it have appropriate the music
02:51:389- This slider will good if you rotate to center like this : | i don't wan't it balance, but, it is idea good



03:35:527- with whistle :3| it was have here

Sorry I couldnt motivation this song also boring for me :/
And you should work on slider shapes
Anyway Good luck

__Ag wrote:

-snowy white-
HP+1 AR+1 OD+1 CS再大一号
01:49:320 (2) - 这个slider把它拉平吧，斜着一点一眼看着有点违和 | fix slider
00:29:320 (2) - 丢到x260 y192 | move
01:39:665 (1,2) - 其实这两根slider调整成对称的会美观很多 | 这是刻意安排
03:06:561 (2) - ctrl+G？| 这是故意的
01:51:389 (2) - 这里这样干怎么样，http://puu.sh/1BsHT | 有点困惑, i fix
01:56:217 (1) - 和01:57:596 (2) - 各来一次ctrl+G | 我知道，这将是更好的,但它会使难以玩家,所以我希望它简单 ^^
03:18:975 (1) - 和03:20:354 (2) - ^ | same ^ and 距离
04:18:286 (2) - 其实类似这种长一点的slider挑一两条来做一下形状看起来会丰富一些 | 它是真正的我更好, 但在这个阶段，我想强调的音小提琴


-merry christmas-
00:26:217 (4,5,6) - 我的话会这样放，http://puu.sh/1BsS1 | 滑块 have ，鼓音 XD
00:30:699 (4) - 这个粘的太近了，试试这样的，http://puu.sh/1BsUl | 你可以看到在我的地图, 无妄
00:33:458 (5) - 换成slider吧，然后一直拉到蓝线，尾巴离下一个1号note近点就好了 | 我已经有一个替代方案
00:34:148 (1) - 这里这样怎么样？http://puu.sh/1BsY3 | 段的小提琴1/1
01:34:148 (2) - 你觉得这里弄成这样的梗怎么样，http://puu.sh/1Bt0o | 我只是希望它 easy
01:55:527 (5) - NC、| fix
01:58:975 (1,2) - 这两个slider盖了伴奏很多音诶，本来可以做出好梗的，这里要不再想想怎么调整，把那几音个用上，不然太可惜了 | 它是一个统一的声
02:04:492 (1,2,3) - hard的话，像这种三个都是直的slider，还是那么紧挨的排列就少用些吧，可以拉一下slider，做一些花样
03:09:320 (4) - ctrl+G | 我不想跳
03:46:217 (5) - NC | fix
03:46:906 (1) - 取消NC | fix
04:27:912 (1,2,3) - 这三个弄成正三角？| fix


很温柔的歌呢，是粤语么？祝好运ww

Update

Garven wrote:

[Snowy]
Be careful - the drum sound set has an audible sliderslide and it sticks out when you use it.

[Merry]
Same thing with the sliderslide issue. Add some more silent sliderslide custom sounds.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~Some Suggestions~

[General]
i think this map, need another diffie (one more Insane or maybe... a Normal diffie) | I want it to be quickly ranked in the Christmas Day should


[Snowy White]

01:05:872(4): finish ? | fixed sound
01:09:320(3): amm, this slider its so strange, according with easy diffie, fix plz. | yes. i know it, it no use for file mp3 new it is of file old FiX
01:33:458(4): finish ? | fixed sound
01:38:975(4): ^ | it is a bit random, I deleted it from mod of saten
01:44:492: clap ?| fixed sound
01:47:941: make this slider more circular (delete the red point in the center) | I want it to face the previous slider
02:06:561: whistle ?| fixed sound
02:17:596: fix this slider, make more symtrical according with diffie | FIX
02:45:872: the form of this slider its so strange too, do more simple (more easy, do lineal) | i fix
03:40:354: whistle ? | fixed sound
04:02:423: ^| fixed sound

[Merry Christmas]
00:43:803(x): add note with finish (if you want) | add note add Whistle
02:06:561: delete clap and ass whistle ? (sounds better, i think) | fixed sound
02:56:906; finish ? | no, it follow music song
04:13:458: ... fix this slider xD (make someone more normal) | follow vocal should ....

nice diffie


ok, thats all.
Good luck.

BeatofIke wrote:

Didn't really find anything wrong with this map, so I'm starring it!

Although, the slider at 04:13:458 (5) on Hard difficulty is a bit distroted! | follow vocal should ....

Garven wrote:

Bubbled!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Told to ignore overlaps, so I am ignoring them.

Going to sleep soon, so this is a random mod post. Anyone is free to rebubble/rank, even if not everything in this mod is done. I just want to share my opinions.

Add xmas to the tags since some people will search that.| add TAG

Snowy White:
00:38:975 (1) - make the slider symmetrical, slightly irritating during gameplay | fix
00:44:492 (1) - align with 00:43:113 (4)? | fix
01:34:148 (1,2,3) - please remove the red points in these sliders, they just look random-shaped and messy right now | i was fix it other
01:49:320 (2) - the transition from a curved slider to a slider with a sharp edge felt weird, so I would remove the red anchor | Fix
02:01:734 (1) - align with 02:01:044 (4)? | fix
02:44:492 (2) - make the slider symmetrical? | fix
03:05:182 (1) - this will probably look better as a wave slider (move the last point in the slider downward) | down a bit
03:58:975 (3) - the red anchor points and lack of symmetry make me wonder what you were planning to do with this slider | change its shape

Merry Christmas:
02:51:389 (1) - Make the curves a bit more even? (probably look better as a wave slider) | http://puu.sh/1EIwH I do poorly it XD
04:27:912 (1,2,3) - why is there a jump in spacing during a slow down in vocals? | there, is muti BPM, I do not know how with it should......

Armin wrote:

[General]
*shouldn't the artist's title be "Thùy Chi"? Add the "ù" instead of the simple "u"!
[Merry Xmas]
00:30:699 (4) - aww this repeat does not follow anything, I ask to you if you can find a better rhythm for this part
03:05:182 (6) - as above, even if is more acceptable
04:13:458 (5) - do this slider better!

[Snowy White]
04:28:341 (2,3,4) - I understood what are you trying to do here! But that last slider is really placed off, seeing those previous sliders! Try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539825

Armin wrote:

bubbled.
Also, have a Happy Xmas ^_^

kazumikos wrote:

gratz ^^

mintong89 wrote:

Zejky pro mapper 0.0

119410501 wrote:

So nice song, awesome

UNRANKED wrote:

merry christmas

Nya-nyan wrote:

Xin chúc mừng và có một Giáng sinh tuyệt vời

ykcarrot wrote:

a bit late, congrats though

Pentz wrote:

òhhhhhhh người việt nam thanks nha beatmap hay người việt xài hang viêt.