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RoughSketch ft.Aikapin - Alice In Voodooland [OsuMania]

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Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Garalulu wrote:

hi

[Queen of Heart]
  1. 00:28:048 - You can add one note more like 00:27:714 (27714|3) -
  2. 00:30:798 - 00:31:131 - too much. You already expressed this part 00:28:131 - 00:28:464 - with triple + one LN, but quad with short LN are too heavy compared with it :p
  3. 00:32:798 - 00:34:131 - actually you should make this part with consistency, 00:32:798 - 00:33:131 - and 00:33:464 - 00:33:798 - should be same.
  4. 00:49:798 (49798|6,49964|4,50131|2) - they are different structure with how you put LN, 00:50:131 (50131|2) - should be LN and 00:49:798 (49798|6,49964|4) - should be single note actually
  5. 00:54:798 - 00:55:464 - non-averaged SV. 10.0×1 + 0.10 ×7 = 10.7, It should be 8.0. if you wanna maintain 10x 0.1x, use the SV below
    below
    54798,-10,4,2,0,30,0,0
    54858.5455,-1000,4,2,0,30,0,0
  6. 01:03:464 (63464|4) - why is this LN only short rather than others 01:02:131 (62131|1) - 01:00:798 (60798|4) - 00:59:464 (59464|6) - 00:58:131 (58131|2) - 00:56:798 (56798|5) - 00:55:464 (55464|0) -
  7. 01:06:131 (66131|4) - make this a single note if you want to show the LN only for 'uwau' effect like 01:06:298 (66298|1,66631|3,66964|4,67298|5) - I'd like to keep it like this since I followed bells with that LN
  8. 01:10:631 - 01:10:798 - how about this? it makes same with 01:21:964 - 01:22:131 - that you already use
  9. 01:18:798 (78798|1) - I don't know why it is 1/1 length
  10. 01:20:131 (80131|3,80464|1) - same issue with above and more and more I used 1/1 on places with sound "wiu" or whatever
  11. 01:16:964 (76964|4) - does it have any sound? and why only for this place?

    Actually there are many questionable issue like consistency, ghost note at 01:16:964 (76964|4) - 01:16:964 (76964|4) - , you must check about them
  12. 01:53:464 - 01:54:131 - non-averaged SV. 1.6x 0.4x or 1.4x 0.6x plz
  13. 01:54:131 - 01:58:131 - Too heavy heavy heavy rather than other your structure!!!! It makes worse your whole concept actually. Reduce the amount of notes plz, here are an example for you. I don't mention same issue what it has.
    01:54:131 - Quad
    01:54:298 - Triple
    01:56:881 - Double
    01:56:964 - Triple
    01:57:548 - Single

Nice attempt, Good luck for your mapset
thanks!
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Meiju
Hi

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Queen of Hearts]
00:08:798 (8798|2) - move to 6 column
00:19:464 (19464|6,19464|3,19798|6,19798|3,20131|6,20131|3,20464|6,20464|3,20798|6,20798|3) - did you do it on purpose? if no then repattern
00:23:464 - in this part you use quads then pentas on the same sounds, use only quads or only pentas
00:25:298 (25298|2) - remove there are no sounds that was before (00:23:964 - 00:24:631 - )
00:39:464 - not the best place for penta, make quad
00:52:798 - https://puu.sh/ypSES/a5573c0992.png - maybe this is better
01:06:131 (66131|4) - why LN?? Make single
01:12:798 - add one more note for compliance with 01:11:464
01:18:298 - isn't here should be the same as 01:20:964 - 01:23:631
01:26:298 - same here
01:37:798 - 01:37:964 - maybe make double LNs?

[540's Extreme]
00:25:964 - make here something another so that it does not look like 00:23:964 - cuz sounds aren't same. Maybe https://puu.sh/ypSZl/f1d419736b.png
00:31:298 - same
00:27:298 - should be 1/8
00:38:298 - add note for vocal
00:41:964 (41964|2) - no vocal, remove
01:17:964 (77964|3) - this sounds ends 01:18:131 - here, why did you extend this LN
01:20:631 - 01:23:298 - 01:25:964 - and etc. - same things
01:18:298 (78298|6) - divide this 1/1 LN to two 1/2 for compliance with music
01:20:964 - 01:23:631 - 01:26:298 - and etc. - same things
01:18:131 - should be quad as you make further 01:20:798 - 01:23:464 - and etc.
01:24:631 - triple? yes, triple
01:31:548 (91548|4) - why did you use here 1/4?? :thinking:
01:34:964 - triple
01:38:798 (98798|0,98798|1,98964|1,98964|2,99131|2,99131|3,99298|3,99298|4) - CAN YOU PLEASE DONT DO THIS

Good luck!
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Mage wrote:

Hi

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Queen of Hearts]
00:08:798 (8798|2) - move to 6 column
00:19:464 (19464|6,19464|3,19798|6,19798|3,20131|6,20131|3,20464|6,20464|3,20798|6,20798|3) - did you do it on purpose? if no then repattern
00:23:464 - in this part you use quads then pentas on the same sounds, use only quads or only pentas
00:25:298 (25298|2) - remove there are no sounds that was before (00:23:964 - 00:24:631 - ) I think that does not matter since sound is almost the same its just a little bit changed
00:39:464 - not the best place for penta, make quad
00:52:798 - https://puu.sh/ypSES/a5573c0992.png - maybe this is better
01:06:131 (66131|4) - why LN?? Make single
01:12:798 - add one more note for compliance with 01:11:464
01:18:298 - isn't here should be the same as 01:20:964 - 01:23:631
01:26:298 - same here
01:37:798 - 01:37:964 - maybe make double LNs?
Thank you!
Yukari_Sama
720 posts
Joined April 2015
Yukari_Sama

Mage wrote:

Hi

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[540's Extreme]
00:25:964 - make here something another so that it does not look like 00:23:964 - cuz sounds aren't same. Maybe https://puu.sh/ypSZl/f1d419736b.png i keep dat for easier =w=
00:31:298 - same ^
00:27:298 - should be 1/8 woke
00:38:298 - add note for vocal nope, i follow long vocal
00:41:964 (41964|2) - no vocal, remove hmmm k
01:17:964 (77964|3) - this sounds ends 01:18:131 - here, why did you extend this LN
01:20:631 - 01:23:298 - 01:25:964 - and etc. - same things
01:18:298 (78298|6) - divide this 1/1 LN to two 1/2 for compliance with music
01:20:964 - 01:23:631 - 01:26:298 - and etc. - same things ^ all
01:18:131 - should be quad as you make further 01:20:798 - 01:23:464 - and etc. forget lol
01:24:631 - triple? yes, triple same
01:31:548 (91548|4) - why did you use here 1/4?? :thinking: hmm i need mineral water :''''v
01:34:964 - triple forget again
01:38:798 (98798|0,98798|1,98964|1,98964|2,99131|2,99131|3,99298|3,99298|4) - CAN YOU PLEASE DONT DO THIS OK OK :'V

Good luck!
thanks wew~ =w=)b
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error_exe777
720 posts
Joined February 2016
error_exe777
did another irc

no kudosu since you gave me some on the first page
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
ik boi

er cee
23:14 Umo-: ih
23:15 error_exe777: np me ps
23:15 error_exe777: pls
23:15 Umo-: type it
23:15 *Umo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1393275 RoughSketch ft.Aikapin - Alice In Voodooland (Edit Ver)]
23:15 Umo-: sum lower diffs or some shit pls
23:15 error_exe777: SR wtf
23:15 error_exe777: where did it go
23:16 Umo-: had to reduce it
23:16 Umo-: since it was
23:16 Umo-: c a n c e r o u s
23:17 error_exe777: fuck
23:17 error_exe777: wtf
23:17 *error_exe777 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1424615 RoughSketch ft.Aikapin - Alice In Voodooland (Edit Ver) [Hyper]]
23:17 Umo-: hiper
23:18 error_exe777: 00:07:464 (7464|4,7464|6) - 00:10:131 (10131|6,10131|4) - 00:12:798 (12798|0,12798|2) - 00:15:464 (15464|5,15464|3) - are these being the same pattern intended or not
23:18 error_exe777: if not pls change variation exist
23:18 error_exe777: exists*
23:18 Umo-: intended
23:18 error_exe777: 00:18:131 (18131|6,18131|4,18298|2,18464|6,18464|4,18631|2,18798|6,18798|4,18964|2,19131|6,19131|4,19298|2,19464|6,19464|4,19631|2,19798|6,19798|4,19964|2,20131|6,20131|4) - this shit looks like something you'd find in a hitsound diff
23:18 Umo-: ikr
23:18 Umo-: but it plays nice af
23:19 Umo-: plus it fits for hyper
23:19 error_exe777: ugh okay
23:19 Umo-: and its not too complex
23:20 error_exe777: 00:28:464 (28464|0,28464|2) - are these representing the same as 00:27:464 (27464|1,27464|0,27798|6,27798|5) - ?
23:20 error_exe777: wait
23:20 error_exe777: thats a stupid question
23:20 error_exe777: is it for the drum or melody
23:20 Umo-: mel0dy
23:20 error_exe777: then 00:28:464 (28464|0,28464|2) - these start at 00:28:131 -
23:21 Umo-: wait
23:21 error_exe777: and if you are gonna cut it short just blame it on drums
23:21 Umo-: then drums would be fucked up if I moved them there
23:21 error_exe777: ugh dw
23:21 error_exe777: 00:30:798 (30798|2,30798|0,30964|6,30964|4,31131|0,31131|2,31464|4,31464|6,31798|4,31798|6) - you're so creative
23:22 Umo-: I think that drums work better as they are right now
23:22 Umo-: it would be fucked af if I changed it
23:22 error_exe777: i wasnt saying to change it lol
23:22 error_exe777: its fine
23:22 error_exe777: anyway make that pattern more interesting
23:22 Umo-: I know I am
23:22 Umo-: nfuoewhfwerhgfwerfre
23:22 Umo-: okay
23:22 Umo-: continue
23:22 Umo-: I did
23:23 error_exe777: good
23:23 error_exe777: 00:32:798 - tfw column 1 isnt loved
23:23 Umo-: inteneded
23:23 error_exe777: well its not a very good intention
23:23 Umo-: if it plays nice then it is
23:24 error_exe777: you cant blame shitty patterns on playability
23:24 Umo-: plus 1st column is used in enxt section anyways
23:24 error_exe777: you'll get *nowhere*
23:24 Umo-: next*
23:24 error_exe777: thats also not a valid reason you div
23:24 Umo-: thats like 1 second long pattern
23:24 Umo-: why u complaining
23:24 Umo-: its not unrankable
23:24 error_exe777: still
23:24 error_exe777: shut up
23:25 error_exe777: just change it for me pls
23:25 Umo-: e x c u s e  m e
23:25 Umo-: HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
23:25 Umo-: I'd rather die
23:25 Umo-: I mean
23:25 Umo-: fine
23:25 error_exe777: i wont rank your maps if you dont listen to me :triumph:
23:25 Umo-: now wait untill I make it play good
23:26 Umo-: continue
23:26 error_exe777: 01:13:464 (73464|3,73548|6,73631|4,73714|1,73798|3,73881|5,73964|2,74048|4,74131|1) - column 1 wyd
23:27 error_exe777: like this isnt 6+1k
23:27 error_exe777: smh
23:27 Umo-: it could be
23:28 error_exe777: oh ffs
23:28 error_exe777: gotta restart osu
23:28 error_exe777: bc editor broke
23:28 error_exe777: brb
23:28 error_exe777: dont delete the chat ill need it afterwards
23:28 Umo-: okay
23:28 Umo-: WeLcoMe tO oSu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
23:29 error_exe777: am back
23:29 error_exe777: where were we
23:29 Umo-: 01:10:548 - 
23:29 Umo-: about columbn1
23:29 Umo-:   01:12:798 - 
23:29 Umo-: here
23:29 Umo-: I fixed it
23:29 error_exe777: cool
23:30 error_exe777: as for the entire pattern
23:30 error_exe777: the first half rolls right
23:30 error_exe777: and the second half bursts
23:30 error_exe777: 01:12:798 -  to 01:13:464 - should roll
23:30 error_exe777: bc thats how you are doing things
23:31 error_exe777: 01:13:298 (73298|2,73381|0) - so roll these pls
23:31 Umo-: ew no
23:31 Umo-: 01:13:464 - music gets the most intense here
23:31 error_exe777: yeah
23:31 error_exe777: thats what i was saying
23:31 error_exe777: so roll until then
23:31 error_exe777: 01:13:298 (73298|2,73381|0) - roll these pls
23:31 error_exe777: like this:
23:31 Umo-: no
23:32 error_exe777: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9615535
23:32 Umo-: what
23:32 Umo-: thats the same pattern
23:32 error_exe777: no
23:32 error_exe777: its not u dumbass
23:33 Umo-: how
23:33 Umo-: im not changing the pattern anyways
23:34 error_exe777: im making a better one
23:34 error_exe777: shush
23:34 Umo-: idc
23:34 error_exe777: fuck it cba
23:35 Umo-: :D
23:35 error_exe777: 01:21:964 (81964|4) - this LN is for the 1/8th but it blends with the rest of the section
23:35 error_exe777: so takes away emphasis on the 1/8th
23:35 error_exe777: you could make it a double LN
23:35 Umo-: what
23:35 Umo-: oh
23:36 Umo-: okay
23:36 error_exe777: but then you would have to do the same in the rest of the map
23:36 Umo-: no shit
23:36 Umo-: well mostly for 1/8
23:37 Umo-: ok done
23:37 error_exe777: okay
23:37 error_exe777: 01:23:298 (83298|4,83298|5) - why is this a double
23:37 error_exe777: i hear no extra sound
23:38 Umo-: thats what I asked myself
23:38 Umo-: removed it lol
23:38 error_exe777: now that i look your entire LN usage confuses me
23:38 error_exe777: ill go chronologically
23:38 error_exe777: 01:20:964 (80964|3) - why is this 1/4th shorter
23:39 Umo-: idk
23:39 error_exe777: would rather have it longer to be consistent with all the others
23:39 error_exe777: 01:23:631 (83631|3) - etc etc
23:40 Umo-: fixed
23:40 error_exe777: 01:24:798 (84798|1,85131|3,85464|4) - why are these 1/1 long
23:40 error_exe777: the sound doesnt last that long
23:40 Umo-: fixed when your osu crashed
23:40 error_exe777: okay
23:40 Umo-: I fixed all 1/1 LNs
23:40 error_exe777: 01:26:298 - 01:26:464 - where are your LNs
23:40 Umo-: when your osu died
23:41 error_exe777: i understand why you might not of though
23:42 Umo-: r u ded
23:42 error_exe777: i was waiting for a reply
23:42 error_exe777: where are those LNs lol
23:42 Umo-: oH
23:42 error_exe777: wait brb
23:42 Umo-: I forgot to add the,
23:42 Umo-: them
23:48 error_exe777: I JUST CHoked
23:48 Umo-: on dick?
23:48 error_exe777: a sausage roll
23:48 Umo-: dO nOt LiE tO mE
23:49 error_exe777: 01:33:964 (93964|2,94048|0) - the fuck is this?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
23:49 error_exe777: 01:27:131 (87131|5,87298|3) - ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
23:49 error_exe777: wait
23:49 error_exe777: they are different
23:49 Umo-: yes
23:49 Umo-: they are
23:49 error_exe777: 01:27:298 (87298|3) - this should be the same as 01:33:964 (93964|2,94048|0) -  though
23:50 Umo-: okay
23:51 error_exe777: can you update
23:51 Umo-: no
23:51 error_exe777: so i can see what you've done
23:51 Umo-: fInE
23:51 error_exe777: thanks dad
23:52 Umo-: you dont have a right to call me dad
23:52 Umo-: ))))))))))):
23:52 error_exe777: r u d e
23:52 Umo-: this shit uploaded for like 50 times alredy
23:52 Umo-: sending changes
23:52 Umo-: done
23:53 error_exe777: 01:15:798 (75798|1) - should be a double right
23:53 Umo-: its not loud as other ones imo
23:53 error_exe777: okay
23:54 error_exe777: 01:34:464 (94464|5,94464|3,94464|4,94464|6) -
23:54 error_exe777: why is this a quad
23:54 Umo-: mg
23:54 error_exe777: are there any others
23:54 error_exe777: idk
23:54 Umo-: fixed
23:55 error_exe777: 01:35:964 (95964|5) - should be a double for the 1/8th
23:55 Umo-: done
23:55 error_exe777: 01:55:298 (115298|3,116631|5) - same
23:55 error_exe777: for both
23:55 Umo-: yeah fixed that part rn
23:56 error_exe777: okay
23:56 error_exe777: 00:25:964 (25964|5) - 00:31:298 (31298|3) - tfw missing double again
23:56 Umo-: ffs
23:57 error_exe777: 01:10:631 (70631|3) -
23:58 Umo-: done
23:58 Umo-: I dont think there are any left
00:00 Umo-: r you dead
00:00 error_exe777: 01:18:131 - 01:20:798 - 01:23:464 - 01:26:131 - 01:28:798 - 01:30:131 - 01:31:464 - 01:32:798 - 01:34:131 - arent these meant to be triples
00:00 Umo-: fuck
00:00 Umo-: yeah
00:02 Umo-: done
00:02 error_exe777: i think thats it
00:02 error_exe777: i cant find anything else
00:02 Umo-: bubble pls
00:03 error_exe777: actually
00:03 error_exe777: 01:38:131 - all the LNs in this section are very centered
00:03 Umo-: intended
00:03 error_exe777: okay
00:03 error_exe777: then thats all
00:03 Umo-: some gimmicky shit
MrAntagonizer
38 posts
Joined July 2015
MrAntagonizer
Hello! NM mod from my queue.
My 7k mods are probably bad so feel free to reject any of them! :)
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Beginner
02:04:798 (124798|3) - This note can become a 2-note chord to line up with the way this sound is represented in the previous few measures
Didn't find much here
Normal
01:36:131 (96131|4,96298|3,96464|1,96631|2) - Maybe make these notes 2-note chords since they are representing a sound that was a chord earlier in the section?
Didn't find much here either
Hyper
00:12:631 (12631|0) - There's a note hidden under the LN in column 1 here
01:17:798 (77798|0,77798|2,77881|0) - Why does this jack when no other notes of this sound in this kiai jack as well?
01:41:131 - Missing a note in this chord here?
Satan's Insane
00:20:798 - Add a note here for 4-note chord emphasis on this sound? Like was present here 00:18:131 -
00:53:464 - Extend these LNs to the white tick here, it might play a little better
01:26:964 (86964|4,86964|1,86964|0,86964|5) - Why is this a 4-note chord? The sound is no different
01:56:798 - I love this pattern and I don't know enough about 7k to know if this is playable or not, but I hope it is because it looks great
^Trills that alternate hands is another way to handle this sound
540's Extreme
01:12:798 - This part may be confusing to play because of the change of roll direction in |1|2|3| (maybe not- I think I just suck)
01:31:464 - Missing a note here?
Queen of Hearts
00:29:131 - Extra note here? Or is this for emphasis?
01:23:464 - Missing a note here?
01:28:798 - ^
01:34:131 - ^
01:38:464 - ^
01:38:798 - One too many notes here?
01:39:798 - ^

This mapset is very solid imo, so best of luck with ranking!
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

MrAntagonizer wrote:

Hello! NM mod from my queue.
My 7k mods are probably bad so feel free to reject any of them! :)
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Beginner
02:04:798 (124798|3) - This note can become a 2-note chord to line up with the way this sound is represented in the previous few measures I think this is fine because I dont want any double notes on that calm part of the song
Didn't find much here
Normal
01:36:131 (96131|4,96298|3,96464|1,96631|2) - Maybe make these notes 2-note chords since they are representing a sound that was a chord earlier in the section?
Didn't find much here either
Hyper
00:12:631 (12631|0) - There's a note hidden under the LN in column 1 here
01:17:798 (77798|0,77798|2,77881|0) - Why does this jack when no other notes of this sound in this kiai jack as well? no idea how that happend
01:41:131 - Missing a note in this chord here?
Queen of Hearts
00:29:131 - Extra note here? Or is this for emphasis?
01:23:464 - Missing a note here?
01:28:798 - ^
01:34:131 - ^
01:38:464 - ^
01:38:798 - One too many notes here?
01:39:798 - ^

This mapset is very solid imo, so best of luck with ranking!
thanks for the mod!
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
atian told me to take care of his difficulty

MrAntagonizer wrote:

540's Extreme
01:12:798 - This part may be confusing to play because of the change of roll direction in |1|2|3| (maybe not- I think I just suck) works for me
01:31:464 - Missing a note here?
Hilmi Ghazian
277 posts
Joined August 2013
Hilmi Ghazian
mod by my Queue :3
i mod for consistency and technical style :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Beginner
00:25:964 (25964|5) - i feel bad to use 1/8 sound in this diff,, delete it
00:28:798 - u can add LN like 00:23:464 (23464|1) -
00:30:964 - add note
00:32:631 - add note
00:39:131 (39131|0) - u can replace with 1/2 note
00:41:464 (41464|0) - move to 6
01:08:464 (68464|1) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:16:798 - add note for start kiai
01:21:964 (81964|3) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it
01:24:464 (84464|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:26:131 (86131|4) - ^
01:29:964 - add note please
01:31:631 (91631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:32:631 (92631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note and move to 3
01:35:964 (95964|2,96131|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681099
01:43:298 (103298|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it
01:44:798 (104798|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:45:798 (105798|6) - ^
01:47:464 (107464|3,107964|1,108131|5,108631|2) - u can use it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681115

Normal
00:44:798 (44798|0) - move to 3
00:45:464 (45464|2) - move to 7
00:46:131 - add note please
00:47:464 - add note
00:48:798 - add note
00:51:464 - ^
00:51:798 (51798|0) - move to 7
00:52:798 - ^
01:04:798 - add 1 LN same as 01:04:798 (64798|3) -
01:05:464 - add 1 LN same as 01:05:464 (65464|1) -
01:06:131 (66131|2) - delete
01:12:798 (72798|5,73131|0,73464|3,73798|2,74131|1) - if u like my pattern,,, u can change it XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680983
01:44:298 (104298|3) - ghost note,, delete it
Hyper
00:12:631 (12631|0) - why u add not at there?
00:12:798 - add 1 note please... same as 00:10:131 (10131|6,10131|4) -
00:34:964 - add 1 note please,, if u use vocal sound like 00:34:298 (34298|4,34631|3) -
00:37:631 (37631|2) - move to 2
00:41:464 (41464|3) - move to 3
01:10:464 (70464|0) - move to 3 to avoid shield
01:14:798 (74798|1) - move to 6 or 7... too much in left side
01:23:131 (83131|3) - move to 6
01:37:798 (97798|3) - u can use 1/2 LN like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680875
01:44:964 (104964|0) - delete this and 01:45:798 - add note to make 3-2-3 pattern

I hope this mod can help u..... :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Hilmi Ghazian wrote:

mod by my Queue :3
i mod for consistency and technical style :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Beginner
00:25:964 (25964|5) - i feel bad to use 1/8 sound in this diff,, delete it I think it's fine
00:28:798 - u can add LN like 00:23:464 (23464|1) -
00:30:964 - add note
00:32:631 - add note
00:39:131 (39131|0) - u can replace with 1/2 note
00:41:464 (41464|0) - move to 6
01:08:464 (68464|1) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:16:798 - add note for start kiai
01:21:964 (81964|3) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it I was following 1/8 sound
01:24:464 (84464|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:26:131 (86131|4) - ^
01:29:964 - add note please added LN
01:31:631 (91631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note same as before
01:32:631 (92631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note and move to 3 same as before but I've moved it to 3
01:35:964 (95964|2,96131|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681099 rearanged
01:43:298 (103298|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it same as before
01:44:798 (104798|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:45:798 (105798|6) - ^
01:47:464 (107464|3,107964|1,108131|5,108631|2) - u can use it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681115

Normal
00:44:798 (44798|0) - move to 3
00:45:464 (45464|2) - move to 7 why
00:46:131 - add note please sound doesen't support the double
00:47:464 - add note ^
00:48:798 - add note ^
00:51:464 - ^ ^
00:51:798 (51798|0) - move to 7
00:52:798 - ^ this is fine imo
01:04:798 - add 1 LN same as 01:04:798 (64798|3) - sound is not really that loud to support it unlike other ones
01:05:464 - add 1 LN same as 01:05:464 (65464|1) - ^
01:06:131 (66131|2) - delete why
01:12:798 (72798|5,73131|0,73464|3,73798|2,74131|1) - if u like my pattern,,, u can change it XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680983 I prefere mine
01:44:298 (104298|3) - ghost note,, delete it
Hyper
00:12:631 (12631|0) - why u add not at there?
00:12:798 - add 1 note please... same as 00:10:131 (10131|6,10131|4) -
00:34:964 - add 1 note please,, if u use vocal sound like 00:34:298 (34298|4,34631|3) - vocals fade out on that part so i didn't want to emphesize it
00:37:631 (37631|2) - move to 2
00:41:464 (41464|3) - move to 3
01:10:464 (70464|0) - move to 3 to avoid shield
01:14:798 (74798|1) - move to 6 or 7... too much in left side
01:23:131 (83131|3) - move to 6
01:37:798 (97798|3) - u can use 1/2 LN like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680875
01:44:964 (104964|0) - delete this and 01:45:798 - add note to make 3-2-3 pattern

I hope this mod can help u..... :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
thanks!
Satania Daimaou
Satania Daimaou
Satan's Insane
00:20:798 - Add a note here for 4-note chord emphasis on this sound? Like was present here 00:18:131 - ok
00:53:464 - Extend these LNs to the white tick here, it might play a little better i'l think of that
01:26:964 (86964|4,86964|1,86964|0,86964|5) - Why is this a 4-note chord? The sound is no different well, didn't notice that
01:56:798 - I love this pattern and I don't know enough about 7k to know if this is playable or not, but I hope it is because it looks great
^Trills that alternate hands is another way to handle this sound i think it's playable :v


Here the file
Satan's Insane

I'm very very sorry for late mod :(
Ortlinde
255 posts
Joined January 2015
Ortlinde
damn seems like i'm late sorry lol
Beginner and Normal seems good to me
feel free to reject this

Hyper
  1. 00:18:131 - add 1 note here since it has the same sound with 00:20:798 -
  2. 00:20:631 (20631|2,20631|3,20631|0) - dunno if it deserves 3-note
  3. 00:27:464 - 00:27:798 - add 1 note each for consistency
  4. 00:32:798 - in this part, put 1 note on each LN
  5. 01:10:631 (70631|0) - jacking this isn't necessary though
  6. 01:24:631 (84631|2) - add 1 note here
  7. 01:25:798 (85798|1) - how come this has only 1 note?
  8. 01:32:131 - and why this is 4-note?
  9. 01:43:048 (103048|2) - put this on the white tick or delete this like 01:44:381 -
  10. 01:45:798 - either make this 3-note or 01:44:798 - delete 1 note here

Satan's Insane
  1. 00:15:464 (15464|5) - this LN is unnecessary i think
  2. 00:28:798 (28798|0,28798|6,29131|2,29131|4) - make it into 3-note i think
  3. 00:31:631 (31631|2,31631|1) - you put 3 note on 00:30:964 - so i think this deserves 3-note too (or change 00:30:964 - into 2-note)
  4. 00:52:798 (52798|4,52798|5,53548|5,53548|4) - why not make it LN all the way through? (i think the buildup starts in 00:52:798 -
  5. 00:55:464 - add 1 note to emphasize this part
  6. 01:14:131 (74131|3,74131|4,74131|2) - this doesn't deserve 3-note since it isn't louder than the previous (actually it only has one click like 01:14:464 - )
  7. 01:17:798 (77798|3) - 01:20:464 (80464|2) - 01:23:131 (83131|5) - 01:25:798 (85798|3) - etc. - unnecessary LN i think (the sound doesn't make it feel like mini-jacks)

540's Extreme
  1. 00:32:798 - add 1 note here since it has bassdrum
  2. 00:44:131 (44131|1,44131|0,44131|3,44298|3,44298|1,44298|0,44464|2,44464|6,44464|5,44631|2,44631|6,44631|5) - this sounds like an ordinary kick so i think 2 notes would be enough
  3. 00:49:798 (49798|3,49798|6,49798|1) - delete 1 note since it sounds the same as 00:49:464 - (it doesn't even have vocals)
  4. 00:52:631 (52631|5,52631|3,52631|1) - 1 or 2 note would be enough (there's no bell sound)
  5. 01:11:464 - maybe put 1 note here for the *ding* sound
  6. 01:21:714 - put 1 note to emphasize the bassdrum
  7. 01:29:964 (89964|4,90048|3) - same as above
  8. 01:44:798 (104798|3,104964|0) - maybe make it into mini-jacks to emphasize the bassdrum
  9. 01:45:798 (105798|3,105964|5) - same as above

Queen of Hearts
  1. 00:07:464 - just suggestion but maybe you can accentuate the note with small 1/8 LNs
  2. 00:18:131 - put note on 4 to emphasize the bassdrum
  3. 00:22:798 (22798|2) - extend the LN to 00:23:464 -
  4. 00:33:631 (33631|4,33964|3) - tbh i found this LN unnecessary. either delete it or put LN at the previous one (since it sounds same)
  5. 01:15:964 - maybe put LN here since the voice sounds "wobbly"?
  6. 01:21:798 - make it 4-note maybe since you tend to put 4-noter on the bassdrums
  7. 01:23:131 - dunno why you make it only 2 notes
  8. 01:26:131 (86131|5,86131|6,86298|0,86298|1,86464|5,86464|6) - maybe make these 3 or 4 notes
  9. 01:27:131 - Add 1 note to emphasize the snare (and to differentiate from 01:27:298 - )
  10. 01:29:464 - welp idk why this is the only 5-note bassdrum

fkn awesome song and set and everythin'
go for rank!
Ortlinde
255 posts
Joined January 2015
Ortlinde
Lol
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Ortlinde wrote:

damn seems like i'm late sorry lol
Beginner and Normal seems good to me
feel free to reject this

Hyper
  1. 00:18:131 - add 1 note here since it has the same sound with 00:20:798 -
  2. 00:20:631 (20631|2,20631|3,20631|0) - dunno if it deserves 3-note I think its fine since double wouldn't be enough and quad would be too much
  3. 00:27:464 - 00:27:798 - add 1 note each for consistency
  4. 00:32:798 - in this part, put 1 note on each LN
  5. 01:10:631 (70631|0) - jacking this isn't necessary though
  6. 01:24:631 (84631|2) - add 1 note here
  7. 01:25:798 (85798|1) - how come this has only 1 note?
  8. 01:32:131 - and why this is 4-note?
  9. 01:43:048 (103048|2) - put this on the white tick or delete this like 01:44:381 -
  10. 01:45:798 - either make this 3-note or 01:44:798 - delete 1 note here

Queen of Hearts
  1. 00:07:464 - just suggestion but maybe you can accentuate the note with small 1/8 LNs nah, I don't think it'll fit the pattern very well
  2. 00:18:131 - put note on 4 to emphasize the bassdrum
  3. 00:22:798 (22798|2) - extend the LN to 00:23:464 - I prefere it like this
  4. 00:33:631 (33631|4,33964|3) - tbh i found this LN unnecessary. either delete it or put LN at the previous one (since it sounds same)
  5. 01:15:964 - maybe put LN here since the voice sounds "wobbly"? it doesen't really fit imo
  6. 01:21:798 - make it 4-note maybe since you tend to put 4-noter on the bassdrums quad doesen't fit there imo, plus it would cause inconsistency problems
  7. 01:23:131 - dunno why you make it only 2 notes
  8. 01:26:131 (86131|5,86131|6,86298|0,86298|1,86464|5,86464|6) - maybe make these 3 or 4 notes
  9. 01:27:131 - Add 1 note to emphasize the snare (and to differentiate from 01:27:298 - )
  10. 01:29:464 - welp idk why this is the only 5-note bassdrum

fkn awesome song and set and everythin' <3
go for rank!
thanks for the mod!
Yukari_Sama
720 posts
Joined April 2015
Yukari_Sama
no reply=fix

Ortlinde wrote:

540's Extreme
  1. 00:32:798 - add 1 note here since it has bassdrum nope,for easier (?)
  2. 00:44:131 (44131|1,44131|0,44131|3,44298|3,44298|1,44298|0,44464|2,44464|6,44464|5,44631|2,44631|6,44631|5) - this sounds like an ordinary kick so i think 2 notes would be enough
  3. 00:49:798 (49798|3,49798|6,49798|1) - delete 1 note since it sounds the same as 00:49:464 - (it doesn't even have vocals) well i hear sound like umm apalah
  4. 00:52:631 (52631|5,52631|3,52631|1) - 1 or 2 note would be enough (there's no bell sound) ^
  5. 01:11:464 - maybe put 1 note here for the *ding* sound nope for consisteny
  6. 01:21:714 - put 1 note to emphasize the bassdrum nope
  7. 01:29:964 (89964|4,90048|3) - same as above ^
  8. 01:44:798 (104798|3,104964|0) - maybe make it into mini-jacks to emphasize the bassdrum nope
  9. 01:45:798 (105798|3,105964|5) - same as above ^


fkn awesome song and set and everythin'
go for rank!
thanks owo
here
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
updated and lowered the SR for hyper a bit down
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
I'll apply some mods for satania since he didn't answer my PMs for a week

no reply=fixed

Ortlinde wrote:

Satan's Insane
  1. 00:15:464 (15464|5) - this LN is unnecessary i think
  2. 00:28:798 (28798|0,28798|6,29131|2,29131|4) - make it into 3-note i think could cause inconsistency
  3. 00:31:631 (31631|2,31631|1) - you put 3 note on 00:30:964 - so i think this deserves 3-note too (or change 00:30:964 - into 2-note)
  4. 00:52:798 (52798|4,52798|5,53548|5,53548|4) - why not make it LN all the way through? (i think the buildup starts in 00:52:798 - gonna keep this
  5. 00:55:464 - add 1 note to emphasize this part
  6. 01:14:131 (74131|3,74131|4,74131|2) - this doesn't deserve 3-note since it isn't louder than the previous (actually it only has one click like 01:14:464 - )
  7. 01:17:798 (77798|3) - 01:20:464 (80464|2) - 01:23:131 (83131|5) - 01:25:798 (85798|3) - etc. - unnecessary LN i think (the sound doesn't make it feel like mini-jacks) there is some kind of "break" on the sound so they fit
Mirea
417 posts
Joined May 2016
Mirea
hi there,
as requested in My Super Modding Queue

Hyper
00:21:132 - 1 note is enough cause there's no drum like 00:20:132 - 00:20:465 -

00:28:132 - there should be a LN imo since the synth is gradually volume up and getting higher from 00:28:465 - which u mapped it with a LN there

01:08:799 - 4 notes eh? the sound is same as the other below

01:31:465 (91465|0) - move to col 5 and 01:31:799 (91799|4) - move to col 4 (this one is optional)
check > 01:30:799 (90799|0,91132|0,91465|0,91799|0,92132|0) -

Satan's Insane
00:20:465 (20465|1,20465|5) - will be more fit to the sound since thats a 1/2 synth that the sound is similar with 00:17:799 (17799|4,17799|0) - which is followed by LNs
so it would be more consistent on what sound u map with LNs.

00:25:632 (25632|1) - shouldnt be a note here cause u didnt do that on 00:23:965 - 00:24:632 - 00:25:299 - and just following the drum

00:28:715 (28715|5,28715|1) - pretty sure this notes are ghostnote, no sound there besides a fading sound that appear gradually to 00:29:132 - which its already layered by 00:28:799 (28799|0,28799|6) -

00:44:799 (44799|4,44799|3,44799|2) - no need to put 3 notes imo, its not even louder than 00:44:465 (44465|2,44465|4,44632|4,44632|2) - etc

00:35:465 (35465|1) - move to col 7? so empty on the right hand

00:43:465 (43465|1,43465|5,43632|5,43632|1,43799|1,43799|5) - and the other above, separate them every 3 notes in 1/1 snap like that is weird and doesnt feel match with the kicks itself. also it might be confusing when it played
prefer to do this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9817579

00:52:799 - 4 notes here eh? pretty sure its the same compared with 00:44:799 -

00:54:799 (54799|4,54799|5) - totally ghost notes, u'll know when u hear it in 25% playrate even in 100% playrate.

01:34:132 - should be 3 notes.

01:41:799 (101799|1,102132|1,102465|1,102799|1,103132|1,103465|1) - rearrange.

01:51:465 (111465|3,112799|3) - couldnt understand whats this LNs stand for whereas there are only 1/2 synths that has been covered by the LNs 01:51:632 (111632|4,111799|2,111965|4) - etc

chouyaa should learn more how to mod 7k properly
also umo, pls check ur request on my queue, there's a reply about ur M4M

goodluck <3
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

chouyaa wrote:

hi there,
as requested in My Super Modding Queue

Hyper
00:21:132 - 1 note is enough cause there's no drum like 00:20:132 - 00:20:465 -

00:28:132 - there should be a LN imo since the synth is gradually volume up and getting higher from 00:28:465 - which u mapped it with a LN there I only want to have doubles there that follow drums, I added that LN because it would be too much empty on that spot

01:08:799 - 4 notes eh? the sound is same as the other below

01:31:465 (91465|0) - move to col 5 and 01:31:799 (91799|4) - move to col 4 (this one is optional)
check > 01:30:799 (90799|0,91132|0,91465|0,91799|0,92132|0) - fixed the anchor but I wont move it to 5 because there will be a jackhammer

chouyaa should learn more how to mod 7k properly
also umo, pls check ur request on my queue, there's a reply about ur M4M

goodluck <3
thanks for the mod!
Syadow-
Beatmap Nominator
1,514 posts
Joined October 2013
Syadow-
feed me .....
sorry for delay mod

  • [Beginner]
  1. 00:21:465 (21465|5) - i feel odd tbh, u can make like this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821226
  2. 00:25:965 (25965|5) - maybe avoid using LN 1/2 beat n change into short note
  3. 00:30:799 - how bout like this more balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821416
  4. 00:39:2599 (39299|1,39465|2) - move to col 4 n 5, avoid put a stair in same hand
  5. 00:55:465 - double to emphasis the cymbal
  6. 01:11:299 - yah same like u do in 01:08:632 -
  7. 01:21:965 (81965|3) - short note, tricky note for beginner player
  8. 01:26:965 - same like 01:26:299 - add note
  9. 01:29:965 (89965|0) - same issue
  10. 01:31:632 (91632|4,92632|2,93965|3,95965|2) - ^
  11. 01:40:632 - add note
  12. 01:43:299 (103299|5) - same issue
  13. 01:47:965 (107965|1,108632|2) - ^
  14. 01:53:632 (113632|2,113799|3,113965|4) - maybe ignore this, cuz u put a loud sound with 1/1 beat n the calm sound 1/2 beat it more harder than other
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:23:799 - till 00:34:132 - i think u can buff this diff if u put a double in almost all loud sound n reduce the gap between normal n hyper example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821487 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821492
  2. 00:52:799 (52799|5) - extend the LN till 00:54:799 -
  3. 01:06:465 - till 01:10:799 - same issue double almost all loud sound
  4. 01:17:132 - till 01:36:632 - ^
  5. 01:54:132 - suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821516
Good Luck guys >w<)b
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Syadow- wrote:

feed me .....
sorry for delay mod

  • [Beginner]
  1. 00:21:465 (21465|5) - i feel odd tbh, u can make like this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821226 I think its fine
  2. 00:25:965 (25965|5) - maybe avoid using LN 1/2 beat n change into short note
  3. 00:30:799 - how bout like this more balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821416
  4. 00:39:2599 (39299|1,39465|2) - move to col 4 n 5, avoid put a stair in same hand its the same sound as the other notes so there is no reason to move it to another column
  5. 00:55:465 - double to emphasis the cymbal
  6. 01:11:299 - yah same like u do in 01:08:632 -
  7. 01:21:965 (81965|3) - short note, tricky note for beginner player
  8. 01:26:965 - same like 01:26:299 - add note
  9. 01:29:965 (89965|0) - same issue
  10. 01:31:632 (91632|4,92632|2,93965|3,95965|2) - ^
  11. 01:40:632 - add note
  12. 01:43:299 (103299|5) - same issue
  13. 01:47:965 (107965|1,108632|2) - ^
  14. 01:53:632 (113632|2,113799|3,113965|4) - maybe ignore this, cuz u put a loud sound with 1/1 beat n the calm sound 1/2 beat it more harder than other I'll keep this because it would be too much empty and it would be weird not to map those sounds imo
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:23:799 - till 00:34:132 - i think u can buff this diff if u put a double in almost all loud sound n reduce the gap between normal n hyper example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821487 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821492
  2. 00:52:799 (52799|5) - extend the LN till 00:54:799 -
  3. 01:06:465 - till 01:10:799 - same issue double almost all loud sound
  4. 01:17:132 - till 01:36:632 - ^
  5. 01:54:132 - suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821516
Good Luck guys >w<)b
thanks for the mod
Slaerd
13 posts
Joined February 2015
Slaerd
Hiya from my modding queue

[Satan's Insane]
  1. 01:27:132 (87132|2,87215|3,87299|4,87382|5) - The glide really stands out so I think adding an LN or changing the pattern into an LN one would fit more just like here 01:33:965 (93965|2) - .
    Example
  2. 01:34:132 - Missing triple here.
  3. 01:40:632 (100632|6) - I think there's space to fit 1/8s here.
  4. 01:43:299 (103299|6) - ^ but even more space.
  5. 01:47:965 (107965|6) - ^
  6. 01:48:465 (108465|5) - LNs would fit better here too.
    Suggestion
[Hyper]
  1. 01:15:799 - Should be a double LN here. (This is consistent wit Satan's difficulty though so I don't know if i'm missing something.)
  2. 01:57:215 (117215|4) - Move this to 4, it creates a mini-thrill for no reason.
  3. 02:00:799 - Usually a double here
  4. 02:03:465 - ^
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:799 - 01:36:632 This kiai is way too similar to the one in beginner difficulty and doesn't even stand out in it's own chart. Putting doubles should be playable since there are full beat gaps and will even out difficulty spread. Also in general you should add some doubles on big white ticks so that it doesn't look to much like beginner.
Beginner is clean.

GL for rank !
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Slaerd wrote:

Hiya from my modding queue

[Hyper]
  1. 01:15:799 - Should be a double LN here. (This is consistent wit Satan's difficulty though so I don't know if i'm missing something.) well its satan's choice for that to be double note, I made it single in hyper since its easier and it fits better since the vocals are not as loud as on other LNs
  2. 01:57:215 (117215|4) - Move this to 4, it creates a mini-thrill for no reason.
  3. 02:00:799 - Usually a double here
  4. 02:03:465 - ^
[Normal]
  1. 01:16:799 - 01:36:632 This kiai is way too similar to the one in beginner difficulty and doesn't even stand out in it's own chart. Putting doubles should be playable since there are full beat gaps and will even out difficulty spread. Also in general you should add some doubles on big white ticks so that it doesn't look to much like beginner. well it doesen't even have to stand out imo, this is fine because its alredy simple enough for normal difficulty,
    just because its a higher difficulty that does not mean that I have to make completely diffrend chart with whole new concepts and stuff
Beginner is clean.

GL for rank !
thanks for the mod!
Satania Daimaou
Satania Daimaou

chouyaa wrote:

hi there,
as requested in My Super Modding Queue

Satan's Insane
00:20:465 (20465|1,20465|5) - will be more fit to the sound since thats a 1/2 synth that the sound is similar with 00:17:799 (17799|4,17799|0) - which is followed by LNs I think that doesn't similiar ngak sama itu coba dengerin lagi
so it would be more consistent on what sound u map with LNs.

00:25:632 (25632|1) - shouldnt be a note here cause u didnt do that on 00:23:965 - 00:24:632 - 00:25:299 - and just following the drum i don't remember put that note :v ulah bang umo kali :v

00:28:715 (28715|5,28715|1) - pretty sure this notes are ghostnote, no sound there besides a fading sound that appear gradually to 00:29:132 - which its already layered by 00:28:799 (28799|0,28799|6) - i think it's sound like this 00:27:715 (27715|3,27715|4,27799|5,27799|2,28049|1,28132|4,28132|5) - sama kok bang

00:44:799 (44799|4,44799|3,44799|2) - no need to put 3 notes imo, its not even louder than 00:44:465 (44465|2,44465|4,44632|4,44632|2) - etc Fixed udh dibetulin

00:35:465 (35465|1) - move to col 7? so empty on the right hand ok

00:43:465 (43465|1,43465|5,43632|5,43632|1,43799|1,43799|5) - and the other above, separate them every 3 notes in 1/1 snap like that is weird and doesnt feel match with the kicks itself. also it might be confusing when it played fixed udh dibetulin
prefer to do this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9817579

00:52:799 - 4 notes here eh? pretty sure its the same compared with 00:44:799 - okay ulah bang umo lagi ini :v

00:54:799 (54799|4,54799|5) - totally ghost notes, u'll know when u hear it in 25% playrate even in 100% playrate. yeah i think so

01:34:132 - should be 3 notes. fixed

01:41:799 (101799|1,102132|1,102465|1,102799|1,103132|1,103465|1) - rearrange. done

01:51:465 (111465|3,112799|3) - couldnt understand whats this LNs stand for whereas there are only 1/2 synths that has been covered by the LNs 01:51:632 (111632|4,111799|2,111965|4) - etc fixed

chouyaa should learn more how to mod 7k properly
also umo, pls check ur request on my queue, there's a reply about ur M4M

goodluck <3

thx for mod
Satania Daimaou
Satania Daimaou

Slaerd wrote:

Hiya from my modding queue

[Satan's Insane]
  1. 01:27:132 (87132|2,87215|3,87299|4,87382|5) - The glide really stands out so I think adding an LN or changing the pattern into an LN one would fit more just like here 01:33:965 (93965|2) - fixed.
    Example
  2. 01:34:132 - Missing triple here. done
  3. 01:40:632 (100632|6) - I think there's space to fit 1/8s here.
  4. 01:43:299 (103299|6) - ^ but even more space.
  5. 01:47:965 (107965|6) - ^ fixed all this
  6. 01:48:465 (108465|5) - LNs would fit better here too. i'l take your sugestion
    Suggestion
Beginner is clean.

GL for rank !
Satania Daimaou
Satania Daimaou
Satan's Insane
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
very interesting.

i see some nice svs would be a shame if i... throw in a lot of suggestions?
sv
00:18:132 - 00:18:215 - not sv but there are some really random ass kiai like nobody would even notice it even happened.
00:34:132 - 00:34:215 - likewise
01:12:799 - 01:12:882 - seriously why are you doing these

ok now to actual svs

00:07:465 - now this intro has a very mild spooky tone this would be best to have a slowjam like that of 00:55:465 - so use a x0.8 for this
00:12:799 - drop a x0.9 here
00:18:132 - get a x1 here
00:21:632 - use a similar effect here like that of 00:54:799 - or a simple teleport will do. or a 00:21:632 - x0.2 and 00:21:882 - x3.4 as a jumpy sv effect
01:14:132 - wrong values here btw the 1.6 should be a 5.9 considering how the slowjam is placed on the next 1/8 tick (maths 5.9 + 0.3*7 = 8 ticks)
01:15:132 - there needs to be a jumpy sv here mostly because of the sudden introduction of the vocals. This time do a x3.1 in 01:15:132 - and a x0.3 in 01:15:174 - revert back to x1 by 01:15:299 -
01:36:799 - you can add a note here and use svs like that in 01:14:132 - as there are clock ticks here
01:50:799 - not as required but you can do that here too. If you think that specific application is too "strong" you can do either an slowjam to speed up or a 1/2 or 1/4+3/4 combi sv like:

speedup :
01:50:799 - 0.9
01:50:965 - 1
01:51:132 - 1.1
01:51:299 - 1.2
01:51:465 - 1
1/2
01:50:799 - 1.7
01:50:882 - 0.3
rinse and repeat
or a 1/4+3/4
01:50:799 - 3.1
01:50:840 - 0.3
rinse and repeat

01:59:465 - slowjam

queen of hearts
00:43:465 - i like the concept of this section but it would be nice to have that note moved to 4 for an actual descending motion. consider https://puu.sh/yPr1W/27eb3a57b9.png
00:49:799 (49799|6) - while i know youre extending this to prevent dead air, it's rather inconsistent to map this music box sound as a 1/1 when everything else is a 1/2
00:55:465 - when you have a really strong static sound like this section you are expected to do a more complex ln section. This is quite easy would like too see denser lns like for starters doubling stuff like 00:55:465 (55465|0,56799|6) -
01:08:632 - i dont see anything wrong with adding a 1/2 ln here
considering how 01:16:799 - is quite a lot easier than 01:38:132 - you can use larger chords for the former just to justify the sr and have something actually fairly difficult than being just a pushover section
01:38:132 - you know what would be more fun? more lns even a simple ln layer conversion would make this second bit of the kiai spicier consider something like: https://puu.sh/yPXUv/2e603b48ca.png
01:45:965 - another playsafe thing, it's perfectly fine to add a 1/2 ln at col 2 it's more consistent and is not actually as difficult as you may think
01:56:799 - this is a very bland take on what is potentially a fun song ender. consider using chordstreams like that in 01:12:799 - and use a more rigid 1/8ths like this as a template: https://puu.sh/yPY92/dc353710c9.png

refreshing break from what ive been modding lately best of luck!
Umo-
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Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Lenfried- wrote:

very interesting.

i see some nice svs would be a shame if i... throw in a lot of suggestions?
sv
00:18:132 - 00:18:215 - not sv but there are some really random ass kiai like nobody would even notice it even happened.
00:34:132 - 00:34:215 - likewise
01:12:799 - 01:12:882 - seriously why are you doing these they are for effects to represent the change in music, alot of ranked maps have those

ok now to actual svs

00:07:465 - now this intro has a very mild spooky tone this would be best to have a slowjam like that of 00:55:465 - so use a x0.8 for this
00:12:799 - drop a x0.9 here
00:18:132 - get a x1 here
00:21:632 - use a similar effect here like that of 00:54:799 - or a simple teleport will do. or a 00:21:632 - x0.2 and 00:21:882 - x3.4 as a jumpy sv effect nah I dont really like that suggestion, its a bit weird to play imo
01:14:132 - wrong values here btw the 1.6 should be a 5.9 considering how the slowjam is placed on the next 1/8 tick (maths 5.9 + 0.3*7 = 8 ticks)
01:15:132 - there needs to be a jumpy sv here mostly because of the sudden introduction of the vocals. This time do a x3.1 in 01:15:132 - and a x0.3 in 01:15:174 - revert back to x1 by 01:15:299 -
01:36:799 - you can add a note here and use svs like that in 01:14:132 - as there are clock ticks here
01:50:799 - not as required but you can do that here too. If you think that specific application is too "strong" you can do either an slowjam to speed up or a 1/2 or 1/4+3/4 combi sv like:

speedup :
01:50:799 - 0.9
01:50:965 - 1
01:51:132 - 1.1
01:51:299 - 1.2
01:51:465 - 1
1/2
01:50:799 - 1.7
01:50:882 - 0.3
rinse and repeat
or a 1/4+3/4
01:50:799 - 3.1
01:50:840 - 0.3
rinse and repeat

01:59:465 - slowjam

queen of hearts
00:43:465 - i like the concept of this section but it would be nice to have that note moved to 4 for an actual descending motion. consider https://puu.sh/yPr1W/27eb3a57b9.png
00:49:799 (49799|6) - while i know youre extending this to prevent dead air, it's rather inconsistent to map this music box sound as a 1/1 when everything else is a 1/2
00:55:465 - when you have a really strong static sound like this section you are expected to do a more complex ln section. This is quite easy would like too see denser lns like for starters doubling stuff like 00:55:465 (55465|0,56799|6) - hm. I actully prefere my pattern because I dont really want to make that section harder then it is since that part is somewhat calm then the rest of the map so I would like to have it a bit easier then harder
01:08:632 - i dont see anything wrong with adding a 1/2 ln here
considering how 01:16:799 - is quite a lot easier than 01:38:132 - you can use larger chords for the former just to justify the sr and have something actually fairly difficult than being just a pushover section well I have no idea how I should add more longer LNs since there are not alot of sounds that can support them
01:38:132 - you know what would be more fun? more lns even a simple ln layer conversion would make this second bit of the kiai spicier consider something like: https://puu.sh/yPXUv/2e603b48ca.png um no thanks, even tho that I like the idea I wont apply since I think that this currect patter has alredy enough of LNs and I think that adding more would be a bit too much. That part is too hard for me to play it and I dont want to have patterns that I can't play in this difficulty since its alredy hard enough and knowing me if I'm going to add more LNs I'm just going to make it more cancerouus then it is.
01:45:965 - another playsafe thing, it's perfectly fine to add a 1/2 ln at col 2 it's more consistent and is not actually as difficult as you may think
01:56:799 - this is a very bland take on what is potentially a fun song ender. consider using chordstreams like that in 01:12:799 - and use a more rigid 1/8ths like this as a template: https://puu.sh/yPY92/dc353710c9.png

refreshing break from what ive been modding lately best of luck!
thanks!
Kim_GodSSI
Former osu!mania 7K Champion: 2018
358 posts
Joined December 2012
Kim_GodSSI
Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Hello~ here come to my modding :3
Modding
[Queen of Hearts]
  1. 00:20:632 (20632|1,20632|0,20632|2,20632|4) - I think it should be normal note It doesn't same 00:20:299 (20299|4,20465|3) - like these sound
  2. 00:23:799 (23799|0,23799|2,24132|2) - Ctrl+H and move to same place
  3. 00:27:132 - How about
    This pattern?

  4. 00:33:132 - add one more note at 1 col
    It make the more balance
  5. 00:43:465 (43465|0,43465|6,43465|2,43632|6,43632|4,43632|0,43799|4,43799|0,43799|2,43965|0,43965|6,43965|2,44132|6,44132|2,44132|4,44299|0,44299|2,44299|4,44465|2,44465|0,44632|0) -
    Ah.... If you don't want change the pattern... ok .. but I recommend change the pattern
  6. 01:08:465 (68465|0,68632|0,68799|0) - what's for make these ? I think just make the LN better like same LN like 01:07:965 (67965|5,68299|3) - these
    or change the LN to normal note
  7. 01:15:299 (75299|6,75299|4,75465|0,75465|2,75799|4,76132|0,76132|1) - what do you want for sound to LN It need to make clearly
    I think you follow the vocal sound but it's not matched you have to do move that
    The first vocal sound it's start at 01:15:299 - here and end at 01:15:632 - here
    Second vocal sound is start at 01:15:799 - here and end at 01:15:965 - here
    Third is start at 01:16:132 - here and end at 01:16:465 - here

    if you follow vocal + another sound
    make it clearly
  8. 01:18:299 (78299|1,78299|2,78465|1,78465|2) - this and 01:20:965 (80965|6,80965|4,81132|6,81132|4) - this it's a same sound
    why 01:18:465 (78465|2,78465|1) - these LN are more long ?
  9. 01:22:799 (82799|5) - move to 1 col
  10. 01:26:132 (86132|5,86132|4,86132|6) - why those LN ? it doesn't same sound 01:26:299 (86299|0,86299|2,86299|1,86465|4,86465|6,86465|5) - those
    Change to normal note
  11. 01:26:799 (86799|1) - just change to normal note or make one more LN at 01:26:965 - here
  12. 01:30:049 (90049|6) - delete this one it's doesn't matter to note's number

Good luck
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Hello~ here come to my modding :3
Modding
[Queen of Hearts]
  1. 00:20:632 (20632|1,20632|0,20632|2,20632|4) - I think it should be normal note It doesn't same 00:20:299 (20299|4,20465|3) - like these sound
  2. 00:23:799 (23799|0,23799|2,24132|2) - Ctrl+H and move to same place
  3. 00:27:132 - How about
    This pattern?

  4. 00:33:132 - add one more note at 1 col
    It make the more balance
  5. 00:43:465 (43465|0,43465|6,43465|2,43632|6,43632|4,43632|0,43799|4,43799|0,43799|2,43965|0,43965|6,43965|2,44132|6,44132|2,44132|4,44299|0,44299|2,44299|4,44465|2,44465|0,44632|0) -
    Ah.... If you don't want change the pattern... ok .. but I recommend change the pattern I'll just rearange some notes
  6. 01:08:465 (68465|0,68632|0,68799|0) - what's for make these ? I think just make the LN better like same LN like 01:07:965 (67965|5,68299|3) - these
    or change the LN to normal note
  7. 01:15:299 (75299|6,75299|4,75465|0,75465|2,75799|4,76132|0,76132|1) - what do you want for sound to LN It need to make clearly
    I think you follow the vocal sound but it's not matched you have to do move that
    The first vocal sound it's start at 01:15:299 - here and end at 01:15:632 - here
    Second vocal sound is start at 01:15:799 - here and end at 01:15:965 - here
    Third is start at 01:16:132 - here and end at 01:16:465 - here I'm aware of your concerns but I think that would just be boring to play so i just split first two LNs to "A" 2nd two "lice" next one for "In" next two for "Voo" and last one for "dooland"

    if you follow vocal + another sound
    make it clearly
  8. 01:18:299 (78299|1,78299|2,78465|1,78465|2) - this and 01:20:965 (80965|6,80965|4,81132|6,81132|4) - this it's a same sound
    why 01:18:465 (78465|2,78465|1) - these LN are more long ?
  9. 01:22:799 (82799|5) - move to 1 col
  10. 01:26:132 (86132|5,86132|4,86132|6) - why those LN ? it doesn't same sound 01:26:299 (86299|0,86299|2,86299|1,86465|4,86465|6,86465|5) - those
    Change to normal note I'd make them shorter since they have the violin sound as 01:23:632 (83632|0,83632|1,83799|0,83799|1) -
  11. 01:26:799 (86799|1) - just change to normal note or make one more LN at 01:26:965 - here
  12. 01:30:049 (90049|6) - delete this one it's doesn't matter to note's number

Good luck
Thanks!
MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian
Hello!
I'm from RRM queue and here's the mod you requested!
Queen of Hearts
  1. I feel like using pitch revelancy for the beginning (so from 00:07:465 - to 00:17:799 -) would be the best option, because the part is really calm, pitch is easily heard, so it won't be a problem to use pr (like this https://puu.sh/yVwPi/aa649d64e6.png for instance)
  2. 00:23:465 - 00:34:132 - lack of the space usage here hurts me really much
  3. 00:30:465 (30465|2,30632|4) - these two lns should be changed to 1 3/4 long ln, listen to the sound
  4. 00:31:632 (31632|0,31632|1,31799|0,31799|1) - how about changing them to 23 13, the minijack on first column is pretty big and pitch changes a bit as well, so it would be nice to express the change
  5. 00:38:299 - the lack of notes in second column doesn't look good to me, could you move some notes? (00:41:465 - here in sixth column as well)
  6. 00:43:465 - I feel like this pattern could represent the song better if it was like https://puu.sh/yVxPq/b5c8e83e89.png this. Bells' pitch is decreasing and so the vocal's is and showing it like I did. Also your pattern is a bit uncomfortable in my opinion.
  7. 01:13:299 (73299|3,73382|4,73465|5,73549|4,73632|3,73715|4,73799|5,73882|4,73965|3,74049|4) - this looks really uncomfortable to me and isn't really predictable by the player, so I would change that chordstream to https://puu.sh/yVyaW/283d6e1d75.png or something similiar
  8. 01:36:132 - I do not really like this pattern because of the minijack on 2 it makes, the transition from burst to 12 is pretty meh, yet playable. I'd suggest you changing it to https://puu.sh/yVygz/b4b152b12d.png to prevent the 5notes minijack and to make it more pitch relevant
I'll probably mod the rest later, I feel too bad now, sorry.
Good luck with the map!
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
[General]
Why the song title is Alice In Voodooland (Edit Ver) instead of Alice In Voodooland feat.Aikapin
http://www.tanocstore.net/shopdetail/000000000946/
http://notebookrecords.net/cd/nbcd-026/

[Beginner]
00:18:132 - I'm thinking add an extra note here like what you did here 00:20:799 -
02:02:132 - 01:59:465 - You might want to make them both the same notes amount as they sounds the same

[Normal]
00:20:799 (20799|1) - Suggesting move this note the 7th col, make the whole pattern more balance. The current is too heavy on the left hand

[540's Extreme]
01:36:465 (96465|0,96465|2,96632|3) - should be 1/2 length
01:57:549 (117549|2,117549|4) - Any reason why you use double here? i get the double here 01:57:799 (117799|4,117799|2) - as there is a tick sound, but not the one on the blue line. If you want to follow the 1/2 tick sound, img you might want to try this


Nice map
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-
no reply=fixed

MrDorian wrote:

Hello!
I'm from RRM queue and here's the mod you requested!
Queen of Hearts
  1. I feel like using pitch revelancy for the beginning (so from 00:07:465 - to 00:17:799 -) would be the best option, because the part is really calm, pitch is easily heard, so it won't be a problem to use pr (like this https://puu.sh/yVwPi/aa649d64e6.png for instance)
  2. 00:23:465 - 00:34:132 - lack of the space usage here hurts me really much ok?
  3. 00:30:465 (30465|2,30632|4) - these two lns should be changed to 1 3/4 long ln, listen to the sound
  4. 00:31:632 (31632|0,31632|1,31799|0,31799|1) - how about changing them to 23 13, the minijack on first column is pretty big and pitch changes a bit as well, so it would be nice to express the change no, sound is repetitive so it doesen't really hurt for minijacks plus its not painful to play
  5. 00:38:299 - the lack of notes in second column doesn't look good to me, could you move some notes? (00:41:465 - here in sixth column as well)
  6. 00:43:465 - I feel like this pattern could represent the song better if it was like https://puu.sh/yVxPq/b5c8e83e89.png this. Bells' pitch is decreasing and so the vocal's is and showing it like I did. Also your pattern is a bit uncomfortable in my opinion.
  7. 01:13:299 (73299|3,73382|4,73465|5,73549|4,73632|3,73715|4,73799|5,73882|4,73965|3,74049|4) - this looks really uncomfortable to me and isn't really predictable by the player, so I would change that chordstream to https://puu.sh/yVyaW/283d6e1d75.png or something similiar
  8. 01:36:132 - I do not really like this pattern because of the minijack on 2 it makes, the transition from burst to 12 is pretty meh, yet playable. I'd suggest you changing it to https://puu.sh/yVygz/b4b152b12d.png to prevent the 5notes minijack and to make it more pitch relevant I dont see a problem in here tbh, I think its fine how it is
I'll probably mod the rest later, I feel too bad now, sorry.
Good luck with the map!

YaHao wrote:

[General]
Why the song title is Alice In Voodooland (Edit Ver) instead of Alice In Voodooland feat.Aikapin
http://www.tanocstore.net/shopdetail/000000000946/
http://notebookrecords.net/cd/nbcd-026/ I asked IamKwan for metadata, here is the pic. but I think because the original version is longer then this one because I think the official one is like 4 minute long or something. https://i.imgur.com/rK9EHD1.png

[Beginner]
00:18:132 - I'm thinking add an extra note here like what you did here 00:20:799 -
02:02:132 - 01:59:465 - You might want to make them both the same notes amount as they sounds the same I think the first one is much louder then the 2nd one so thats why the first one is double

[Normal]
00:20:799 (20799|1) - Suggesting move this note the 7th col, make the whole pattern more balance. The current is too heavy on the left hand

Nice map
thanks both of you!
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
There is a 02:15 long youtube video link directly from the offical website and i'm sure its the one you used.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS5TrOWb3Yw and there is no "Edit Ver" in the title
the "Edit Ver" is only 02:01 long which you can see from
http://recochoku.jp/song/S1003537264/
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01LXTORHB/

I dont see any differences between these two version of the song beside the length, so i guess they both ok??
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-

YaHao wrote:

There is a 02:15 long youtube video link directly from the offical website and i'm sure its the one you used.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS5TrOWb3Yw and there is no "Edit Ver" in the title
the "Edit Ver" is only 02:01 long which you can see from
http://recochoku.jp/song/S1003537264/
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01LXTORHB/

I dont see any differences between these two version of the song beside the length, so i guess they both ok??
hm, you are right

I'll remove "(edit ver)" sometimes later
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
Umo-

YaHao wrote:

There is a 02:15 long youtube video link directly from the offical website and i'm sure its the one you used.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS5TrOWb3Yw and there is no "Edit Ver" in the title
the "Edit Ver" is only 02:01 long which you can see from
http://recochoku.jp/song/S1003537264/
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01LXTORHB/

I dont see any differences between these two version of the song beside the length, so i guess they both ok??
done

fixing hitsound volumes

still waiting for atian to respond to a mod
jkkd
80 posts
Joined December 2016
jkkd
hihi

about the title: i have this song, the title is like what you have rn but it's around 5 minutes long, i think this should be edit ver.

[Beginner]
00:10:132 - move to left hand (also rearrange stuff after so its back to alternating hands)
also i noticed theres no notes in 5 from 01:28:465 - 01:36:132 but that might just be my shitty ocd mapping style
[Normal]
00:59:465 - imo i find this more comfortable in 4+6
02:02:132 (122132|4) - this should probably start at 02:03:465 - or 02:02:799 - since thats when this sound becomes loud enough to be noticed
[Hyper]
00:52:132 - i would move this to 2 and 00:52:465 - to 5 (but thats really minor and probably subjective)

nice song and map :)
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
Hi~
1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Beginner
1.00:21:465 (21465|5) - move to 4 col.the first reason:you can reference your Normal diffhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004166.the second reason:you can use this mapping very well to express a fade out.
2.00:28:799 (28799|3) - move to 3 col.you can make where i marked it up to a balance00:27:465 (27465|5,27799|1,28132|4) -
3.01:10:799 (70799|4,70965|3,71132|1,71299|2) - change pattern to (7,5,1,3) may be better.
4.01:44:465 (104465|0,104799|5,104965|4,105132|3,105465|1) - change this maybe betterhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004205
Normal
1.00:28:799 (28799|0) - move to 2
Hyper
1.00:21:132 (21132|2) - should double this ,put not in 1 col&add kick hitsound
2.00:38:799 (38799|6) - move to 2,if you follow my advice,you will find these have the same spacehttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004252
3.00:54:715 (54715|6,54715|4) - in my opinion,these notes error mapping a sounds. delete it
4.01:50:965 (110965|5) - move to 7,its will have these mirror like 01:51:132 (111132|2,111299|0) -
Satan's Insane
1.00:32:132 (32132|2) - move to 1
2.01:34:799 (94799|2) - move to 6
good luck! :)
lucari0lu
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lucari0lu
Queen of Hearts
01:32:632 (92632|0,92674|1,92715|2,92757|3) - this burst in the music is slightly different than the other bursts in this section, it's much faster. Therefore, I would map this differently to have it stand out, probably by mapping it as a faster burst.

01:56:632 (116632|0,116632|6,116674|1,116674|5,116715|2,116715|4,116757|3) - same as above

01:56:632 (116632|0,116632|6,116674|1,116674|5,116715|2,116715|4,116757|3) - I wouldn't change the column this note is in, since it stays on the same note with the same sound in the music. I would rework this section for consistency.




Super solid overall, fun to play
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