lepidopodus wrote:

Took request from #modreqs

Overall
- There is strange sound in near 00:00:000 in mp3 file.
- Delete .osb file and full-submit?

Zero Point
- Spinners are really short for this kind of easy maps, and it can be too close to next note. {Removed one of the short spinners.}
- Other than that, I like how you place the notes.

X Stream
00:05:077 (2) - Some people think it's strange to hear normal sliderslide in something like this slider. If you downloaded skins from updater, you might be able to find templateskin folder in skin folder. (If not, try downloading it from updater.) You can find soft-sliderslide.wav from that folder. rename it to normal-sliderslide.wav and put it to folder of this mapset, then set custom override 1 when it's needed.
00:13:649 (1) - How about removing clap?
00:24:541 (2) - I personally think whistle in slider body isn't good, especially this repeat-a-lot slider.
00:45:970 (1) - How about moving this one grid down? {Not sure why, but ok.}
00:48:827 (1) - How about moving this one grid up? {^}

X Burner
00:02:220 (7) - Same as 00:05:077 (2) in X Stream.
00:05:077 (7) - ^
00:15:256 (1) - Maybe it would be better to follow vocal here?
00:38:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think setting to start this 5 1/4 streams in 00:39:006 would be better?
00:51:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about this kind of formation?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:886ff]aa.jpg[/attachment:886ff]

01:21:506 (4) - Replace to whistle?
01:21:863 (5) - Add whistle?
01:24:184 (3) - Replace to whistle?


Well, kinda crappy modding. {I disagree }
Map seemse {seems*} nice.

Mashley wrote:

Last break is weird, there's hardly anything after it. You should map the break. {The pause seems nice to me, going through an insane "fight" and then resting.}

Zero Point
00:25:791 (1) - Remove new combo

X Stream
00:03:291 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:149 (1) - ^

X Burner
00:46:327 (3) - Wtf? What a weird jump {Small enough for people to disregard, anyway.}
00:49:184 (3) - ^ {^}

Pretty good

rust45 wrote:

[Zero Point]
00:18:113 (1) - Auto can only get 3000 on this, this seems a little risky for the easiest map. {Changed it so AIMod bitches at the spinner-from-beat timing. 800+ms should be more than enough, though.

I don't quite get the names for the diffs, but they're still good and fun.

NoHItter wrote:

Zero Point
00:15:970 (2) - This slider sounds odd because of the finish at the end - OR you could make it end at 00:16:506 and keep the finish
00:34:988 (x) - Why is the kiai not on 00:35:077?
01:03:470 (1) - IMO, this note appears too soon after a spinner for an Easy. {Removed}
01:05:970 (1) - Maybe you could H-Flip this so it'll not be in the same position as the previous slider's end? If you're following the vid then just H-flip or move the previous slider then. {Oh, you noticed Anyway, changed the previous slider a little.}

X Stream
00:12:220 - 00:25:613 - Why is the sampleset here soft while the other diffs' are normal?
00:44:363 (6) - This doesn;t match the music at all. Move 1/1 forward.
01:12:220 (1) - Make this a whistle whose volume is low for consistency with the other diffs {Silly me}

X Burner
01:08:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could you tone down these jumps a little?

Deif wrote:

General:
- Use soft hitsounds to every non-kiai part, instead of normal {No.}
- Remove from tags: reborn (already on source) {That's "Reborn!", this is "Reborn"}

[Zero Point]
- 0.50.791: A slider would fit perfectly here (end: 0.51.853)
- 1.01.863: ^ (end: 1.02.557)
- 1.08.649: ^ (end: 1.09.148). Check spoiler to see this slider

SPOILER

[attachment=0:94376]slider.png[/attachment:94376]

[X Stream]
- 0.42.557: Move 3 grids right, 1 down
- 0.42.934: Move 4 grids right, 1 down
- 0.50.434: Move 3 grids right

[X Burner]
- Overall Difficulty +1
- 0.01.149: Add note OR slider from 0.00.970 to 0.01.149
- 0.02.041: ^ from 0.01.863 to 0.02.041
- 0.04.006: ^ from 0.03.827 to 0.04.006
- 0.04.889: ^ from 0.04.720 to 0.04.889
- 0.33.649: Add break
- 1.07.456: Move 1 grid up

These are only tips, you don't have to follow all of them
Great song, hope it get ranked... Star~

Lanttu wrote:

[X Burner]
00:20:970 (5) - Maybe new combo here?
00:25:613 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to the next note?
00:37:577 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:39:005 (8)?
01:00:434 (9) - Maybe new combo here?
01:01:863 (10) - This would be cool when reversed, I think~ :3 {Big jump, even by my standards.}
01:12:577 - This break feels pretty long for a TV-Size map, would it be impossible to map this? ;u;
01:26:684 (1) - This spinner also feels too long. Maybe shorten it to half of it's length?

[X Stream]
00:50:256 (4,5,6) - Maybe stack all these three? The slider feel kinda funny when next to 4 and 5.
01:12:577 - Again this break~
01:26:149 (6) - I think this would look cool~

^If you do that, move also 01:23:827 (1,2,3) one grid down.

[Zero Point]
Maybe lower AP one tick and rise OD one?
00:43:291 (6) - maybe new combo here.
01:00:434 (5) - The empty spot after this slider feels kind of... well, empty. Add another slider like before?
01:07:398 (2) - Pretty big jump for easiest diff, maybe move this note between 3 and end of the slider? {Its for map-video awesomeness.}
01:12:577 - Again this break, but maybe it's OK in this easiest diff.

Nice map, starred~ :3

dksslqj wrote:

[Zero Point]
00:28:827 (1) - http://puu.sh/qFR
00:37:577 (5) - add new combo?
00:43:291 (6) - △
00:54:720 (4) - △
01:00:434 (5) - △

[X Stream]
00:43:292 (5) - add new combo?
00:55:791 (5) - http://puu.sh/qFY

[X Burner]
00:23:827 (X) - add note?


good

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3

[General]
Offset : 813 (Don't forget to resnap all note)

[Zero point]
01:07:398 (2) - Jump in an easy diff ? {It follows the video D:}
01:09:363 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and end it at the same spot it was

[X Stream]
01:08:470 (1) - This anti-jump is a bit unintuitive, you should use the DS for this note {Cool symmetric-to-middle rule.}

[X Burner]
00:00:792 (1,2) - The whistle sounds better on (2) than on (1)
00:01:506 (4,5) - Add whistles ? {Only on (4)}
00:03:649 (1,2) - The whistle sounds better on (2) than on (1)
00:04:363 (4,5) - Add whistles ? {Only on (4)}

Yeah, it's a good map, all are just suggestion and you can skip them (except for the offset I guess)
Here is your star :3

poisonchan wrote:

Hi ;3 Quick mod here ~
Remember ~ I'm only giving you suggestions :3

I'm not good modding Easy, so... X Stream and X Burner only, k ? :3

X Stream

00:11:527 (5) - I think hitsound finish doesn't fits here.
00:11:705 and 00:11:884 - Add a beat here - Guess sounds better
00:15:098 - Add a beat here.
00:20:098 to 00:20:812 ~ I think you should add beats in this 'space' over here.. Like.. this maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36523
00:22:955 to 00:23:670 - ^ like that, maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36525
00:27:777 (4) - Hm, i guess you should reverse one more time, till 00:28:848 .
00:37:598 (1) - Should finish at 00:38:670 . Silence this spinner and start the next one here 00:38:848 till 00:40:455 (http://puu.sh/rlL)
00:44:384 - Add a beat here (http://puu.sh/rlM maybe?)

X Burner

00:54:741 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this beats.. Sounds a bit weird to me o-o ~ Maybe like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36528
01:00:455 (1) - Hm, I don't think whistle fits here.

I just think you should check hitsounds.. I'm not good at fixing hitsounds, but I can ask a friend for a check if you want to ~

---
I'm sorry if my mod doesn't makes sense sometimes >w< Hope it helps.

Nice map :3

Samah wrote:

General:
Remove tag: reborn

Zero Point:
00:12:241 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This rhythm is too tricky for easy. Try something like this: {Tried. Sounds horrid}

SPOILER

00:20:991 (1) - Move the slider back to 00:20:812, but make it longer such that it ends at the same point.

X-Stream
00:37:598 (1,1) - These spinners are a bit awkward. Maybe replace the first with a slider and shorten the second?

00:44:741 (7,1) - Move these apart slightly.
No major problems, starred.

haha5957 wrote:

General
offset 800(or less, say 798?) feels much better. try it {Nope.}


Zero Point
Nothing seems wrong for me

X Stream
00:21:514(2,3) 1 grid left?

X Burner
00:05:085(7) starting point of slide down by 1 grid (not the whole slider, but the starting point) {Looks bad}
00:52:228(1) down by 1 grid?


and else, I like your map!

Muya wrote:

niedz's Alternate Future
00:48:477 (8.7) - 1grid down , 2grid left (grid level 3)

Muya wrote:

Zero Point
fine.

X Stream
00:32:227 (1,2) - change it [1,2]
01:08:298 - add note

X burner
00:22:584 (5) - change it [1]
00:29:379 (2,3) - this jump is don't much.
01:08:477 (2) - add new combo

niedz's Alternate Future
00:48:477 (8.7) - 1grid down , 2grid left (grid level 3)



star for you

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Unique audio-lead in in different diffs (1500/1511
half of the song being kiai time may to too long, fix this if you like it.

[niedz's]
0:19:013 (3) down 1 grid?
0:31:870 (2) left 1 grid?
1:26:513 (4) not sure about this, maybe make more 1 tick / 1 tick less :/
very previse mapping : d
Left to niedz to check

[X Burner]
0:01:691 (5,6) left 1 grid
0:04:548 (5,6) right 1 grid
Made them down 1 grid
no problem for me :/

[X stream] Why there's no stream here
fine for me

star!

al2e10 wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]
- Combo problem
00:52:227 (9) - New combo
00:54:370 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:513 (6) - New combo?
- Sound
00:06:513 (1-1st) - Finish
00:09:370 (1-1st) - ^
00:26:513 (6) - ^
00:31:334 (7) - Remove clap

[X Burner]
- Sound
00:23:477 (3) - Remove finish
00:27:763 (6,7) - ^
00:32:227 (3) - REmove wistle and finish
00:37:227 (5) - remove finish
00:39:370 (5) - ^
00:42:941 (5) - ^
00:59:370 (8) - ^
01:03:477 (2) - ^
01:06:334 (3) - ^
01:09:191 (6) - ^
00:01:513 (4) - Remove wistle,, 00:01:870 (6) - Wistle
00:04:370 (4,6) - ^
00:09:013 (11) - Remove finish
00:09:370 (1,1st) - Finish
00:21:513 (2) - remove finish
- Spacing
00:36:513 (3,4,5,6) - Too large of spacing problem

[All]
Too noise to add the finish like in X burner
After that, it is a good map ever. STAR.

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Unique audio-lead in in different diffs 1500/1511 changed to1500

[niedz's]
0:19:013 (3) down 1 grid? fixed
0:31:870 (2) left 1 grid? ^
1:26:513 (4) not sure about this, maybe make more 1 tick / 1 tick less :/ im not really sure about it after changing it,so i left it the way it was ._.
very previse mapping : d yeah D: lol

al2e10 wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]
- Combo problem
00:52:227 (9) - New combo fixed
00:54:370 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:26:513 (6) - New combo? ^
- Sound
00:06:513 (1-1st) - Finish ^
00:09:370 (1-1st) - ^ ^
00:26:513 (6) - ^ i dont feel it suits there,so i left it the way it was
00:31:334 (7) - Remove clap fixed

frost-b-spec wrote:

hi~

[Zero Point]
1.03.477~1.07.763 - use white tick (all)

[niedz's]
0.10.441(2) - 1grid down? {Its symmetric, I checked}

+star

frost-b-spec wrote:

[Zero Point]
1.03.477~1.07.763 - use white tick (all)

Verdisphena wrote:

niedz's Alternate Future:
Fine, but I suggest mapping the break (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

X Burner:
Fine but mapping the break ;_; (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)


X Stream:

00:32:763 (3) - Spacing {Alright, fine. Respaced. 4th mod about this, sheesh.}
Mapping the break~ (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

Zero Point:
Fine, but mapping the break -w- (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

Gl with the map

DragonSparta wrote:

Zero Point

00:28:834 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:49:013 (1) - Way too near from the previous note
01:09:191 (1) - Start the spinner earlier? {Small glimpse of Tsuna makes it look better}

X Stream

00:45:977 (1) - This is far from the end of slider (7)
01:08:477 (1) - Too near to (2)

X Burner

Approach Rate -1 or -2?
00:46:334 (3) - Place it next to (2)?
00:49:191 (3) - ^

Nied'z Alternate Future

00:37:584 (8) - This is the epic part. Why is it slowing down?
00:43:097 (6) - Four grids down and One grid right
00:44:191 (7) - ^
00:44:370 (8) - ^
00:52:227 (1) - Slow again?
00:56:156 (7) - ^


Don't give me kudosu if this doesn't help you T-T

Anyways...star

DragonSparta wrote:

Niedz's Alternate Future

00:37:584 (8) - This is the epic part. Why is it slowing down? tried to match up with vocal D:
00:43:097 (6) - Four grids down and One grid right what ._.
00:44:191 (7) - ^ ^
00:44:370 (8) - ^ ^
00:52:227 (1) - Slow again? vocals
00:56:156 (7) - ^ ^

misja056 wrote:

[zero point]
-None

[X stream]
00:19:191 (2,1) - Suggest to map it. {I tried.}
01:04:549 (4,1) - ^ {There's nothing to map}
01:21:870 (2,1) - ^

[X Burner]
00:08:656 (7,8,9,10,11) - It's hard yet {??}
00:39:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ {??}
00:48:834 (1,2) - Swap? {No diff}

[Niedz's alternate Future]
00:37:584 (8) - Looks very ugly.


Done
Very well done! [This are more suggestions so not musts!] Star

misja056 wrote:

[Niedz's alternate Future]
00:37:584 (8) - Looks very ugly.

Muya wrote:

non Kudosu?

NoHItter wrote:

Recheck

General
Add niedzwiedz1124 to the tags.
I also think the kiai timing sections are not snapped to the note itself by a few ms.

Zero Point
Kiai is not the same with other diffs?

X Stream
00:25:620 (x) - Add a note here or add a repeat from the previous slider.
00:29:191 (5,1) - New combo and Remove new combo respectively.
01:25:977 (x) - The following slider should start from here.

X Burner
New combo all the spinners in this diff. This is due to a bug.

niedz's Alternate Future
Not a huge fan of slowdowns, but I guess these are ok.
Just new combo the spinners on 00:44:548 and 01:09:370.

rEdo wrote:

requested by niedz :3

[niedz's Alternate Future]
0:29:727 (3,5) - those claps sounds randomly...consider deleting them played around a little with the pattern D:
0:44:548 (1) - shouldn't this spinner start 1/2 later, so it's going with vocals? meh,done
this and some suggestions on IRC

rEdo wrote:

requested by niedz :3

[niedz's Alternate Future]
0:29:727 (3,5) - those claps sounds randomly...consider deleting them
0:44:548 (1) - shouldn't this spinner start 1/2 later, so it's going with vocals?
this and some suggestions on IRC

[X Burner]
0:33:298 - 0:35:084 (x) - insert break time?
1:07:763 (1,2) - swap new-combo with them, i mean insert new combo at the second circle

[X Stream]
0:03:656 (1)- what an unexpected jump o.o try placing previous note further

[Zero Point]
0:29:370 (1) - try extending this spinner 'til 0:32:227


[General]
try using another offset: 806. current one is too early for me

+1sp

Louis Cyphre wrote:

stop stop.

Why Audio Lead in is not same in all diffs?

I like this song starred :3

Xgor wrote:

Nothing here to warrant a pop but some stuff that could be better.

[Zero Point]
Wouldn't it be better to start this difficulty as the same place as the other difficulties

Also what's with the colourhaxing here? To sync with the video. {Actually, colourhax is in every difficulty except niedz.}

[X Stream]
00:55:627 (5) - This sounds awfully sync compared to the rest of the map {Couldn't you map to the vocals like the rest here. Well, it's more of a double-map to compromise between rhythm and vocals.}

Nothing big or anything but something I think should be looked on before ranking.

Will try to re-bubble this as fast as I can if you change any of these.

whymeman wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]

00:33:663 (9) - I seriously disagree with the idea of silencing this slider. Try using soft-hitsounds or something instead of muting it.