dksslqj wrote:

[Zero Point]
00:28:827 (1) - http://puu.sh/qFR
00:37:577 (5) - add new combo?
00:43:291 (6) - △
00:54:720 (4) - △
01:00:434 (5) - △

[X Stream]
00:43:292 (5) - add new combo?
00:55:791 (5) - http://puu.sh/qFY

[X Burner]
00:23:827 (X) - add note?


good

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3

[General]
Offset : 813 (Don't forget to resnap all note)

[Zero point]
01:07:398 (2) - Jump in an easy diff ? {It follows the video D:}
01:09:363 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and end it at the same spot it was

[X Stream]
01:08:470 (1) - This anti-jump is a bit unintuitive, you should use the DS for this note {Cool symmetric-to-middle rule.}

[X Burner]
00:00:792 (1,2) - The whistle sounds better on (2) than on (1)
00:01:506 (4,5) - Add whistles ? {Only on (4)}
00:03:649 (1,2) - The whistle sounds better on (2) than on (1)
00:04:363 (4,5) - Add whistles ? {Only on (4)}

Yeah, it's a good map, all are just suggestion and you can skip them (except for the offset I guess)
Here is your star :3

poisonchan wrote:

Hi ;3 Quick mod here ~
Remember ~ I'm only giving you suggestions :3

I'm not good modding Easy, so... X Stream and X Burner only, k ? :3

X Stream

00:11:527 (5) - I think hitsound finish doesn't fits here.
00:11:705 and 00:11:884 - Add a beat here - Guess sounds better
00:15:098 - Add a beat here.
00:20:098 to 00:20:812 ~ I think you should add beats in this 'space' over here.. Like.. this maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36523
00:22:955 to 00:23:670 - ^ like that, maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36525
00:27:777 (4) - Hm, i guess you should reverse one more time, till 00:28:848 .
00:37:598 (1) - Should finish at 00:38:670 . Silence this spinner and start the next one here 00:38:848 till 00:40:455 (http://puu.sh/rlL)
00:44:384 - Add a beat here (http://puu.sh/rlM maybe?)

X Burner

00:54:741 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this beats.. Sounds a bit weird to me o-o ~ Maybe like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36528
01:00:455 (1) - Hm, I don't think whistle fits here.

I just think you should check hitsounds.. I'm not good at fixing hitsounds, but I can ask a friend for a check if you want to ~

---
I'm sorry if my mod doesn't makes sense sometimes >w< Hope it helps.

Nice map :3

Samah wrote:

General:
Remove tag: reborn

Zero Point:
00:12:241 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This rhythm is too tricky for easy. Try something like this: {Tried. Sounds horrid}

SPOILER

00:20:991 (1) - Move the slider back to 00:20:812, but make it longer such that it ends at the same point.

X-Stream
00:37:598 (1,1) - These spinners are a bit awkward. Maybe replace the first with a slider and shorten the second?

00:44:741 (7,1) - Move these apart slightly.
No major problems, starred.

haha5957 wrote:

General
offset 800(or less, say 798?) feels much better. try it {Nope.}


Zero Point
Nothing seems wrong for me

X Stream
00:21:514(2,3) 1 grid left?

X Burner
00:05:085(7) starting point of slide down by 1 grid (not the whole slider, but the starting point) {Looks bad}
00:52:228(1) down by 1 grid?


and else, I like your map!

Muya wrote:

niedz's Alternate Future
00:48:477 (8.7) - 1grid down , 2grid left (grid level 3)

Muya wrote:

Zero Point
fine.

X Stream
00:32:227 (1,2) - change it [1,2]
01:08:298 - add note

X burner
00:22:584 (5) - change it [1]
00:29:379 (2,3) - this jump is don't much.
01:08:477 (2) - add new combo

niedz's Alternate Future
00:48:477 (8.7) - 1grid down , 2grid left (grid level 3)



star for you

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Unique audio-lead in in different diffs (1500/1511
half of the song being kiai time may to too long, fix this if you like it.

[niedz's]
0:19:013 (3) down 1 grid?
0:31:870 (2) left 1 grid?
1:26:513 (4) not sure about this, maybe make more 1 tick / 1 tick less :/
very previse mapping : d
Left to niedz to check

[X Burner]
0:01:691 (5,6) left 1 grid
0:04:548 (5,6) right 1 grid
Made them down 1 grid
no problem for me :/

[X stream] Why there's no stream here
fine for me

star!

al2e10 wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]
- Combo problem
00:52:227 (9) - New combo
00:54:370 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:513 (6) - New combo?
- Sound
00:06:513 (1-1st) - Finish
00:09:370 (1-1st) - ^
00:26:513 (6) - ^
00:31:334 (7) - Remove clap

[X Burner]
- Sound
00:23:477 (3) - Remove finish
00:27:763 (6,7) - ^
00:32:227 (3) - REmove wistle and finish
00:37:227 (5) - remove finish
00:39:370 (5) - ^
00:42:941 (5) - ^
00:59:370 (8) - ^
01:03:477 (2) - ^
01:06:334 (3) - ^
01:09:191 (6) - ^
00:01:513 (4) - Remove wistle,, 00:01:870 (6) - Wistle
00:04:370 (4,6) - ^
00:09:013 (11) - Remove finish
00:09:370 (1,1st) - Finish
00:21:513 (2) - remove finish
- Spacing
00:36:513 (3,4,5,6) - Too large of spacing problem

[All]
Too noise to add the finish like in X burner
After that, it is a good map ever. STAR.

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Unique audio-lead in in different diffs 1500/1511 changed to1500

[niedz's]
0:19:013 (3) down 1 grid? fixed
0:31:870 (2) left 1 grid? ^
1:26:513 (4) not sure about this, maybe make more 1 tick / 1 tick less :/ im not really sure about it after changing it,so i left it the way it was ._.
very previse mapping : d yeah D: lol

al2e10 wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]
- Combo problem
00:52:227 (9) - New combo fixed
00:54:370 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:26:513 (6) - New combo? ^
- Sound
00:06:513 (1-1st) - Finish ^
00:09:370 (1-1st) - ^ ^
00:26:513 (6) - ^ i dont feel it suits there,so i left it the way it was
00:31:334 (7) - Remove clap fixed

frost-b-spec wrote:

hi~

[Zero Point]
1.03.477~1.07.763 - use white tick (all)

[niedz's]
0.10.441(2) - 1grid down? {Its symmetric, I checked}

+star

frost-b-spec wrote:

[Zero Point]
1.03.477~1.07.763 - use white tick (all)

Verdisphena wrote:

niedz's Alternate Future:
Fine, but I suggest mapping the break (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

X Burner:
Fine but mapping the break ;_; (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)


X Stream:

00:32:763 (3) - Spacing {Alright, fine. Respaced. 4th mod about this, sheesh.}
Mapping the break~ (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

Zero Point:
Fine, but mapping the break -w- (01:12:584 - 01:20:441)

Gl with the map

DragonSparta wrote:

Zero Point

00:28:834 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:49:013 (1) - Way too near from the previous note
01:09:191 (1) - Start the spinner earlier? {Small glimpse of Tsuna makes it look better}

X Stream

00:45:977 (1) - This is far from the end of slider (7)
01:08:477 (1) - Too near to (2)

X Burner

Approach Rate -1 or -2?
00:46:334 (3) - Place it next to (2)?
00:49:191 (3) - ^

Nied'z Alternate Future

00:37:584 (8) - This is the epic part. Why is it slowing down?
00:43:097 (6) - Four grids down and One grid right
00:44:191 (7) - ^
00:44:370 (8) - ^
00:52:227 (1) - Slow again?
00:56:156 (7) - ^


Don't give me kudosu if this doesn't help you T-T

Anyways...star

DragonSparta wrote:

Niedz's Alternate Future

00:37:584 (8) - This is the epic part. Why is it slowing down? tried to match up with vocal D:
00:43:097 (6) - Four grids down and One grid right what ._.
00:44:191 (7) - ^ ^
00:44:370 (8) - ^ ^
00:52:227 (1) - Slow again? vocals
00:56:156 (7) - ^ ^

misja056 wrote:

[zero point]
-None

[X stream]
00:19:191 (2,1) - Suggest to map it. {I tried.}
01:04:549 (4,1) - ^ {There's nothing to map}
01:21:870 (2,1) - ^

[X Burner]
00:08:656 (7,8,9,10,11) - It's hard yet {??}
00:39:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ {??}
00:48:834 (1,2) - Swap? {No diff}

[Niedz's alternate Future]
00:37:584 (8) - Looks very ugly.


Done
Very well done! [This are more suggestions so not musts!] Star

misja056 wrote:

[Niedz's alternate Future]
00:37:584 (8) - Looks very ugly.

Muya wrote:

non Kudosu?

NoHItter wrote:

Recheck

General
Add niedzwiedz1124 to the tags.
I also think the kiai timing sections are not snapped to the note itself by a few ms.

Zero Point
Kiai is not the same with other diffs?

X Stream
00:25:620 (x) - Add a note here or add a repeat from the previous slider.
00:29:191 (5,1) - New combo and Remove new combo respectively.
01:25:977 (x) - The following slider should start from here.

X Burner
New combo all the spinners in this diff. This is due to a bug.

niedz's Alternate Future
Not a huge fan of slowdowns, but I guess these are ok.
Just new combo the spinners on 00:44:548 and 01:09:370.

rEdo wrote:

requested by niedz :3

[niedz's Alternate Future]
0:29:727 (3,5) - those claps sounds randomly...consider deleting them played around a little with the pattern D:
0:44:548 (1) - shouldn't this spinner start 1/2 later, so it's going with vocals? meh,done
this and some suggestions on IRC

rEdo wrote:

requested by niedz :3

[niedz's Alternate Future]
0:29:727 (3,5) - those claps sounds randomly...consider deleting them
0:44:548 (1) - shouldn't this spinner start 1/2 later, so it's going with vocals?
this and some suggestions on IRC

[X Burner]
0:33:298 - 0:35:084 (x) - insert break time?
1:07:763 (1,2) - swap new-combo with them, i mean insert new combo at the second circle

[X Stream]
0:03:656 (1)- what an unexpected jump o.o try placing previous note further

[Zero Point]
0:29:370 (1) - try extending this spinner 'til 0:32:227


[General]
try using another offset: 806. current one is too early for me

+1sp

Louis Cyphre wrote:

stop stop.

Why Audio Lead in is not same in all diffs?

I like this song starred :3

Xgor wrote:

Nothing here to warrant a pop but some stuff that could be better.

[Zero Point]
Wouldn't it be better to start this difficulty as the same place as the other difficulties

Also what's with the colourhaxing here? To sync with the video. {Actually, colourhax is in every difficulty except niedz.}

[X Stream]
00:55:627 (5) - This sounds awfully sync compared to the rest of the map {Couldn't you map to the vocals like the rest here. Well, it's more of a double-map to compromise between rhythm and vocals.}

Nothing big or anything but something I think should be looked on before ranking.

Will try to re-bubble this as fast as I can if you change any of these.

whymeman wrote:

[niedz's Alternate Future]

00:33:663 (9) - I seriously disagree with the idea of silencing this slider. Try using soft-hitsounds or something instead of muting it.