General: AR 9.5 is too high for a map this "simple"
changed to AR900:46:238 (4,5,6) - Move 6 to 392|40 or something similiar to achieve symmetry with previous pattern, right now it looks ugly
Fixed00:55:838 (3) - Ctrl + G , the flow from slider 2 to 3 looks forced, or better just do things like this for example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/970492900:59:738 (2) - Make the slider longer by 1 more beat.
I'm prioritising the vocals here, therefore, i want the slider to end here: 01:01:53801:15:490 (6) - Move this to 20|228 or something to mirror circle 4 respective to slider 5. Although overall starts from this, I'd prefer increasing the spacing on overall map, but I tried
fixed01:18:340 (9,10,11) - Fix the triplet please, the DS between 9-10 to 10-11 are not roughly the same
fixed01:18:790 (12,1) - You might want to emphasize it with jumps, not stack, since the slider 1 has stronger beat, playing this without moving the cursor seems weird
agree, will fix this somehow01:20:140 (5,6,7,8) - Might want to make a larger jump between this too, although I don't know how to arrange this, might want to keep it as the suggestion first, since you already have 01:18:940 (1,2) - before
will need to think about this.01:25:840 (8,1) - This part doesn't look intuitive, might want to play with spacing a bit
i like this pattern, will need to gather more feedback on this i think.01:26:740 (3) - If you want to keep it straight, better make it parallel with 01:26:440 (2) -
fixed01:27:340 - 01:28:390 - could be mapped, example rhythm:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9705012 , it feels weird to leave it as a pause
disagree,
there is only guitar in this part, no drums so i want to keep it as a pause here. I also feel like it gives the player a feeling of suspense for whats about to come next. 01:31:540 (3,4,5,6) - Consistent DS since you don't want to make any jumps , might be an example of better adj ust :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9705030 fixed01:32:440 (8,9,10,11,12) - The drastic change in DS looks unintuitive, since the song intensity doesn't go down at all
01:33:640 (2) - Move to 100|104 or something to get a better look and because of this, you might want to adjust slider 3 a bit too
01:36:940 (1,2,3,4) - Should be mapped with 8 circles, or combination of both, the pattern you used doesn't really click with the song (oh, with higher DS too if possible)
done01:38:140 (5) - NC
01:41:140 (3,4,5,6) - If you can make the DS same, it would looks much better (1.4x for example, I think you use it as the base)
01:42:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just an opinion, but the flow doesn't really make sense here, I'd prefer go to somehow linear flow like :
fixed?01:43:540 (5) - Strong beat, might want to emphasize with a jump
01:46:540 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think you should try to be a bit more consistent, although I think you should make all of them are slider, and try to adjust the DS a bit lower too , try not to make a jump on that part
fixed somewhat01:47:890 - Ignored sound?
i changed the rhythm here a bit because the song is about to transition into the slow part.01:51:790 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Consistent DS, on 10-11 is the most notable miss to me (since you make squares, which is pretty static)
fixed01:58:540 (5,6) - The distance between end slider of 5 to end slider to 6 is too close, either stack it if you want or just make it further, consistent to your physical DS 1.4x if possible (well actually, overall on that NC might need a further look)
fixed01:59:740 (1,3) - Fix blanket
fixed02:16:540 (1,2,3) - Song intensity is increasing, but you make the DS is even lower, try to make things a bit more hyped
fixed02:18:490 (7,8,9,1) - Inconsistent DS
fixed02:30:640 (10,1) - The flow doesn't really works well imo, I'd do something like this :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9705169 , feel free to fit your style in it
did something similar02:35:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This song has a great amount of emphasis, but unfortunately the pattern is messy and I was actually hoping for more jump emphasis is there, like what you did in 02:38:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
created a new pattern.02:41:740 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make a polygon here instead, using tool Ctrl+Shift+D , and if you want to make stars, just swap the circle around, instead of making things manually
fixed02:42:940 (1,2,3) - and 02:44:140 (6,7,8) - has different spacing although song doesn't really have any change of intensity
fixedI'll stop here, since I already give more than enough example I think