Mod from my queue.
Dance
Who made that storyboard btw I want him to sb my map too lol
00:44:530 (1,1) - I really like this slider, however 00:47:304 (1) - 's tail isn't completely stacked on 00:44:530 (1) - 's body making it really really annoying to look at
00:58:402 (1,1) - no connection between these? Kind of a disappointment
01:19:212 (1) - sv increase comparing to 01:17:824 (1) - maybe?
01:28:923 - I suggest using really short kiai bursts from this moment on, I suggest you can insert them at every shake of the storyboard for about 1/4 of a beat
01:32:651 (2,3) - even though they are not touching, stack leniency makes them look like they are, I think you should move them further away from each other to avoid unaesthetic stacks
01:37:767 (6) - move it down a little bit so that it fully blankets 01:37:940 (1) - 's tail
02:13:836 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you just make 4 stick to the rest of the objects? it would look neater imo (applies to all)
02:14:356 (1,2) - I think this should be mapped as one slider, there's no distinct sound to indicate the need for the second slider
02:25:454 (5,6) - same thing applies, besides NC would be neat here
02:54:241 (1,2,3,4) - in the previous patterns all such patterns were treated as two circles attached to each other and divided by a bigger spacing, here this isn't as emphasized however. I know that intensity increases in this part but for me you should at least space 2 and 3 more so that it resembles the previous idea a bit better and transitions into a more emphasized version of it
03:19:558 (3) - at the exact half of the slider the music starts to fade, how about you end the slider at 03:19:645 - and then add another one with less sv?
03:25:108 (4) - same thing applies there, except I'd expect a higher sv there
03:38:720 (6,7,8,9) - even if you're gonna keep the pattern you've established before, this one has way WAY lesser spacing between 8 and 9, I guess if you want to be consistent you should either increase the ds or simply decrease ds between the circles
03:51:900 - why don't you add a curve there so it blankets 03:52:680 - ?
04:02:911 - my gf on period LOL
04:11:928 (1) how about you just make the slider repeat a couple of times? I mean the song supports it so why not? \:D/
04:21:726 - unmapped sound there, I'd just put a triple there instead of a slider
04:22:680 - again unmapped sound
05:30:657 (1) - two 1/4 sliders would fit in better imo
05:49:212 - my gf on her period when I try talking to her LOL
Alright all from me, good luck!
Dance
Who made that storyboard btw I want him to sb my map too lol
00:44:530 (1,1) - I really like this slider, however 00:47:304 (1) - 's tail isn't completely stacked on 00:44:530 (1) - 's body making it really really annoying to look at
00:58:402 (1,1) - no connection between these? Kind of a disappointment
01:19:212 (1) - sv increase comparing to 01:17:824 (1) - maybe?
01:28:923 - I suggest using really short kiai bursts from this moment on, I suggest you can insert them at every shake of the storyboard for about 1/4 of a beat
01:32:651 (2,3) - even though they are not touching, stack leniency makes them look like they are, I think you should move them further away from each other to avoid unaesthetic stacks
01:37:767 (6) - move it down a little bit so that it fully blankets 01:37:940 (1) - 's tail
02:13:836 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you just make 4 stick to the rest of the objects? it would look neater imo (applies to all)
02:14:356 (1,2) - I think this should be mapped as one slider, there's no distinct sound to indicate the need for the second slider
02:25:454 (5,6) - same thing applies, besides NC would be neat here
02:54:241 (1,2,3,4) - in the previous patterns all such patterns were treated as two circles attached to each other and divided by a bigger spacing, here this isn't as emphasized however. I know that intensity increases in this part but for me you should at least space 2 and 3 more so that it resembles the previous idea a bit better and transitions into a more emphasized version of it
03:19:558 (3) - at the exact half of the slider the music starts to fade, how about you end the slider at 03:19:645 - and then add another one with less sv?
03:25:108 (4) - same thing applies there, except I'd expect a higher sv there
03:38:720 (6,7,8,9) - even if you're gonna keep the pattern you've established before, this one has way WAY lesser spacing between 8 and 9, I guess if you want to be consistent you should either increase the ds or simply decrease ds between the circles
03:51:900 - why don't you add a curve there so it blankets 03:52:680 - ?
04:02:911 - my gf on period LOL
04:11:928 (1) how about you just make the slider repeat a couple of times? I mean the song supports it so why not? \:D/
04:21:726 - unmapped sound there, I'd just put a triple there instead of a slider
04:22:680 - again unmapped sound
05:30:657 (1) - two 1/4 sliders would fit in better imo
05:49:212 - my gf on her period when I try talking to her LOL
Alright all from me, good luck!