Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen - Junjou Emotional · forum

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-07-12T10:42:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 19, 2017 at 1:15:26 PM

Artist: Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen
Title: Junjou Emotional
Source: 異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
Tags: Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni. In a Different World with a Smartphone. ending tv size production reed gaia uchida maaya kouno marika fukuo yui uesaka sumire akasaki chinatsu yamashita nanami
BPM: 148
Filesize: 11245kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Gaia's Hard (2.81 stars, 213 notes)
Insane (3.92 stars, 296 notes)
Normal (1.67 stars, 122 notes)

Download: Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen - Junjou Emotional
Download: Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen - Junjou Emotional (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#54 異世界はスマートフォンとともに。

エルゼ、リンゼ、八重、ユミナ、スゥシィ、リーン
-- 純情エモーショナル --

also an end card provided by best waifu in the series :d

hard - Gaia
video encoding - Shad0w1and

Last edited by Momochikun 2017-11-20T02:03:32+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2017-07-15T18:49:50+00:00

artist from offical web video

エルゼ (CV.内田真礼) & リンゼ (CV.福緒唯) should be correct i think w

Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-07-16T08:48:21+00:00

thanks !
also added video :3

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-07-17T00:34:17+00:00

m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn, mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323

[normal]
perfect

[gaia's hard]
00:20:064 (1) - this jump is too high imo
01:12:361 (2,3) - slider 3 should be ds'd in 1.3x instead of 1.4x to keep consistency with 01:02:632 (2,3) -
01:27:767 (6,7) - maybe use high ds?

[insane]
00:21:483 (1) - what about stack the tail with 00:21:077 (4) - ?
01:08:307 (1) - remove nc, no need

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3

871

194 posts

Joined August 2011

871 2017-07-23T08:44:58+00:00

Hi ~
Well... it's a bit tough to mod map like yours. It's nearly perfect. I'll still point out some things that bother me.

[Insane]

00:16:415 (2) - Mb place this note here to make it look like some sort of blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8661869

00:20:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part looks a bit dirty.

This part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) and this part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) looks different visually, but rhythmically they are the same. Maybe make them both like 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

00:37:091 (5,6) and 00:38:713 (5,6) - ^ same. Tbh it's not even a serious problem, I'm just trying to find at least something

01:06:280 (5) - this slider bothers me a bit. Wave, curve or line would fit better

01:09:422 (4,5) - Mb just stack them ?

01:16:618 (1) - Also weird slider. There a lot various sliders in your Insane diff, I wonder if that variety is really needed since they don't represent anything special like wub's in technical maps.

Most of this are mine concerns about map's visuals, because everything else's fine.

I wanted to mod Gaia's Hard and Normal as well, but I can't find anything in them to mod, sry.

hohol454

255 posts

Joined November 2012

hohol454 2017-07-23T11:43:27+00:00

M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms

Insane:
00:15:011 (1,2,3) - easy to missread the rhythm. Would be much more intuitive if the kicksliders moved in the direction of the long slider. I would also reduce the spacing slightly
00:29:403 (3,4,5) - could blanket with 00:28:998 (1) -
00:37:106 (5,6) - and 00:38:728 (5,6) - should have at least similar spacing
00:40:957 (1) - You could make the slider 1/2 and add a circle on the red tick. Emphasises the drum beat more than a sliderend and you map the piano on the white tick with it
01:13:390 (1,3) - i think this overlap doesn't look too good
01:19:268 (4,5,6,7,1) - a bit strange stream shape, not very fitting with anime song imo

Hard:
00:13:172 (8,1) - why is this stacked?
00:13:983 (3) - I would really like the red tick to be clickable

Normal:
00:33:037 (1,2,3,4) - you could continue the vocals focus and do the rhythm like this

That's all. gl

Einja

663 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-07-29T23:47:09+00:00

mod (what is the anime)

[general]
check widescreen, video is enabled

[hard]

01:01:415 (7) - why is this spaced farther away from 01:01:010 (6) - instead of 01:02:023 (1) - . i would close the spacing between 6 and 7 for better downbeat emphasis on 01:02:023 (1) -

01:07:902 (6,1) - this might be confusing for players to read because of the perfect overlap

01:09:118 (2) - this is too curved for a proper blanket, loosen up the curve on this pls

01:16:618 (6,8) - these would player better if slider 6 was flipped around 15-20 degrees and 01:17:429 (8) - was ctrl h'd

[insane]
00:17:429 (2,3) - i would rotate each one by 180 degrees for it to look nicer

00:32:226 (3,4,5) - this should be the same as 00:30:604 (3,4) - (or the other way around) since they are both the same sound

00:47:429 (1,2) - if you flipped each one by 15 degrees, it would play much better

00:53:307 (3) - 180 degree flip?

00:59:692 (3,4) - this is the only double that isn't between sliders. i would make 4 a 1/2 slider, or make 00:59:388 (2) - a 1/2.

that's all i have for this map, it's pretty neat

good luck!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-30T02:29:12+00:00

Underforest

Underforest wrote:
m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn, mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323

[gaia's hard]
00:20:064 (1) - this jump is too high imo seems fitting to me tho
01:12:361 (2,3) - slider 3 should be ds'd in 1.3x instead of 1.4x to keep consistency with 01:02:632 (2,3) -
01:27:767 (6,7) - maybe use high ds?

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3

hohol454

hohol454 wrote:
M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms

Hard:
00:13:172 (8,1) - why is this stacked? uhh i might change this in the future, ill keep for now tho
00:13:983 (3) - I would really like the red tick to be clickable i kinda like it

That's all. gl

Einja

Einja wrote:
mod (what is the anime) isekai smartphone

[hard]

01:01:415 (7) - why is this spaced farther away from 01:01:010 (6) - instead of 01:02:023 (1) - . i would close the spacing between 6 and 7 for better downbeat emphasis on 01:02:023 (1) -

01:07:902 (6,1) - this might be confusing for players to read because of the perfect overlap the circle before is perrfectly stacked too, should be fine

01:09:118 (2) - this is too curved for a proper blanket, loosen up the curve on this pls

01:16:618 (6,8) - these would player better if slider 6 was flipped around 15-20 degrees and 01:17:429 (8) - was ctrl h'd i like this small flow break

good luck!

thx for mod! no reply are fixed

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Title:Junjou Emotional
TitleUnicode:純情エモーショナル
Artist:Elze (CV. Uchida Maaya) & Linze (CV. Fukuo Yui)
ArtistUnicode:エルゼ (CV.内田真礼) & リンゼ (CV.福緒唯)
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
Tags:Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni.  In a Different World with a Smartphone. ending tv size production reed  gaia
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318,232,70740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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322,126,71753,6,0,P|403:147|473:134,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Momochikun

1,944 posts

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Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-07-30T02:44:50+00:00

hohol454 wrote:
M4M from your queue

General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms would get confirmation about this

Insane:
00:15:011 (1,2,3) - easy to missread the rhythm. Would be much more intuitive if the kicksliders moved in the direction of the long slider. I would also reduce the spacing slightly nah both worked fine
00:29:403 (3,4,5) - could blanket with 00:28:998 (1) - i dont intend blanket here
00:37:106 (5,6) - and 00:38:728 (5,6) - should have at least similar spacing
00:40:957 (1) - You could make the slider 1/2 and add a circle on the red tick. Emphasises the drum beat more than a sliderend and you map the piano on the white tick with it nope
01:13:390 (1,3) - i think this overlap doesn't look too good
01:19:268 (4,5,6,7,1) - a bit strange stream shape, not very fitting with anime song imo

Normal:
00:33:037 (1,2,3,4) - you could continue the vocals focus and do the rhythm like this

That's all. gl

Einja wrote:
mod (what is the anime)

[general]
check widescreen, video is enabled fixed

[insane]
00:17:429 (2,3) - i would rotate each one by 180 degrees for it to look nicer nah i like it this way

00:32:226 (3,4,5) - this should be the same as 00:30:604 (3,4) - (or the other way around) since they are both the same sound nope

00:47:429 (1,2) - if you flipped each one by 15 degrees, it would play much better yea tbh

00:53:307 (3) - 180 degree flip?

00:59:692 (3,4) - this is the only double that isn't between sliders. i would make 4 a 1/2 slider, or make 00:59:388 (2) - a 1/2. idk its fine imo,
i did doubled too 01:09:422 (4,5) - , fine with sliders

that's all i have for this map, it's pretty neat

good luck!

Underforest wrote:
m4m from your queue, my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700
if my map already gets bn, mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323

[insane]
00:21:483 (1) - what about stack the tail with 00:21:077 (4) - ? nope, for the sliderbody enough
01:08:307 (1) - remove nc, no need for kiai reset

sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
gl~ :3

871 wrote:
Hi ~
Well... it's a bit tough to mod map like yours. It's nearly perfect. I'll still point out some things that bother me.

[Insane]

00:16:415 (2) - Mb place this note here to make it look like some sort of blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8661869 i dont intend blanket here tbh

00:20:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part looks a bit dirty.

This part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) and this part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) looks different visually, but rhythmically they are the same. Maybe make them both like 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

00:37:091 (5,6) and 00:38:713 (5,6) - ^ same. Tbh it's not even a serious problem, I'm just trying to find at least something

01:06:280 (5) - this slider bothers me a bit. Wave, curve or line would fit better

01:09:422 (4,5) - Mb just stack them ? nah

01:16:618 (1) - Also weird slider. There a lot various sliders in your Insane diff, I wonder if that variety is really needed since they don't represent anything special like wub's in technical maps.

Most of this are mine concerns about map's visuals, because everything else's fine.

I wanted to mod Gaia's Hard and Normal as well, but I can't find anything in them to mod, sry.

thanks for modding ~

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-07-30T04:47:23+00:00

i got slapped 30 times to mars before i got this answer :'3

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-07-31T13:53:06+00:00

hello

insane

00:52:902 (2,3) - spacing can cause some misreads imo, why not try a spacing a bit as 00:55:132 (3,1) - o:
so cool, so pro

gaia

00:06:280 (6,1) - why spacing is sooo different than 00:04:659 (3,4) - ):
01:09:118 (2,3) - what about trying something as u did on 00:56:145 (2,3) -
01:12:361 (2,3) - mmh kinda understand why u put a 1/3 here, but i guess 1/4 would surely fit better and making that more easier and consistent. Cause ya, we can also put a 1/3 here 00:56:145 (2,3) - but u didnt make it there, so i think you should put the slider end on the blue tick :c
cool!!

normal

01:08:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - that rhythm was cool 00:55:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;w;
ok fine to me

[]
no kd if no change, glglgl!!

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-08-02T01:20:23+00:00

although the song is focused on linze as you can see the whole verse is sung by her, actually i wanted to use the Elze (CV. Uchida Maaya) only on the artist field. But since it's obligated to list all the artists so i'd prefer to use the character name instead of all the voice actresses name (which is way too long) just like the video and the official artist web, i'll add the rest of VA on the tags later

Irohas wrote:
hello

insane
00:52:902 (2,3) - spacing can cause some misreads imo, why not try a spacing a bit as 00:55:132 (3,1) - o: i wanted to make this one had less spacing because of the slowdown from (2)
so cool, so pro ty D

normal
01:08:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - that rhythm was cool 00:55:537 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;w; :D
ok fine to me
[]
no kd if no change, glglgl!!

probably gaia will change smth so i'd prefer to kd u xDDD

thanks !
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Meyrink

728 posts

Joined February 2014

Meyrink 2017-08-04T00:46:34+00:00

Normal

00:12:564 (4) - can move this slider in rythm to 00:12:767 - to be able to catch clap 00:13:172 - like this http://puu.sh/x0Zc6.jpg
00:22:496 (4) - how about change this to 2 1/2 sliders ? fits better with song http://puu.sh/x0Zfe.jpg
00:47:834 (3,4) - this feels kinda awkward since you suddenly decide to follow vocals only, 00:48:037 - and 00:48:848 - are a bit noticeable empty ! would be nice to change rhythm there and catch them or at least 00:48:848 - with a circle

Le Cultured Gaia

00:02:023 (6,7) - This work is incredible.can u at least make this overlap look good lool looks edgy compared to other overlaps
00:02:632 (7,8,9) - Merci beau cul flow awkward
00:24:118 (2,3,4) - I will definitely keep supporting you http://puu.sh/x0ZTs.jpg suggestion since that overlap was 3edgy4me
00:55:132 (5) - Amazing!! http://puu.sh/x100K.jpg can you move 5 a bit down so it fits with slider
01:27:564 - Though the later part of the map is intense, I liked it.dont map dat cool drum with slider tail ! instead reverse slider 4 so the rest is 3 circles

Insane

00:08:307 (6) - i think this can be spaced more for emphasis like 00:11:550 (5) -
00:34:861 (2) - if you move this slightly to right i think it would flow better than linear http://puu.sh/x10nJ.jpg
00:58:375 (4) - Reverse ? http://puu.sh/x10s1.jpg !
01:27:564 (3) - nc ?

Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-08-04T10:09:51+00:00

can i gee dee

ill use frostings style xd

nvm i thought it was the opening LMAO

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-08-07T12:15:09+00:00

hai from my queue

General

not inserted video only Normal

Normal

00:00:605 - remove green line?
01:27:564 (6) - i prefer to be clickable on 01:27:969 - for strong finisher sound

Gaia's Hard

hp4 is slightly low for hard i guess. why dont you raise to 4.5 or 5?
00:09:118 (7) - i feel it's weird shape a bit. i prefer to copy & paste 8's slider like the image below
SPOILER
01:19:861 (1) - why inserted NC here?

Insane

00:22:902 - missing sumpleset:N?
00:55:132 (3) - add NC? cuz sv changes greatly compared with before and after
01:20:672 (1) - i prefer to extend the slider to 01:21:280 - like Gaia's diff since the slider is following background sound(dunno what is sound name ;w;) imo
01:27:969 - add clap? it's a just my preference ><

sry for short mod ;w;
i guess literally neat mapset & song
Good Luck☆

salchow

508 posts

Joined February 2017

salchow 2017-08-09T19:05:13+00:00

Hi, mod incoming

. Sorry for short mod but this mapset has just few flaws

.

Normal

00:06:280 (1) - I dont think there should be a "repeat slider". Use your previus patterns like this one 00:07:902 (2,3)

Basicly this difficulty is almost flawless. I think

Gaia's hard

00:03:037 (8) - would peffer to move that circle around at x:348 y:170. But problem is that patter repeats it self in the map quite alot so idk

01:07:902 (6,1) - you shouldn't stack these two, becouse its kinda hard to read.

Insane

Perfect

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-08-11T03:44:23+00:00

Meyrink wrote:
Normal
00:12:564 (4) - can move this slider in rythm to 00:12:767 - to be able to catch clap 00:13:172 - like this http://puu.sh/x0Zc6.jpg ok
00:22:496 (4) - how about change this to 2 1/2 sliders ? fits better with song http://puu.sh/x0Zfe.jpg
00:47:834 (3,4) - this feels kinda awkward since you suddenly decide to follow vocals only, 00:48:037 - and 00:48:848 - are a bit noticeable empty ! would be nice to change rhythm there and catch them or at least 00:48:848 - with a circle make some change myself

Insane
00:08:307 (6) - i think this can be spaced more for emphasis like 00:11:550 (5) - yes
00:34:861 (2) - if you move this slightly to right i think it would flow better than linear http://puu.sh/x10nJ.jpg sure
00:58:375 (4) - Reverse ? http://puu.sh/x10s1.jpg ! nah i like this one
01:27:564 (3) - nc ? nope

joker- wrote:
hai from my queue

General
not inserted video only Normal fixed

Normal
00:00:605 - remove green line? ok
01:27:564 (6) - i prefer to be clickable on 01:27:969 - for strong finisher sound prfer reverse to follow instrument

Insane
00:22:902 - missing sumpleset:N? yes ! nice catch
00:55:132 (3) - add NC? cuz sv changes greatly compared with before and after nah it dont need
01:20:672 (1) - i prefer to extend the slider to 01:21:280 - like Gaia's diff since the slider is following background sound(dunno what is sound name ;w;) imo following vocal too
01:27:969 - add clap? it's a just my preference >< added

sry for short mod ;w;
i guess literally neat mapset & song
Good Luck☆

salchow wrote:
Hi, mod incoming . Sorry for short mod but this mapset has just few flaws .

Normal
00:06:280 (1) - I dont think there should be a "repeat slider". Use your previus patterns like this one 00:07:902 (2,3) nope, i use for variation

Basicly this difficulty is almost flawless. I think

Gaia's hard
00:03:037 (8) - would peffer to move that circle around at x:348 y:170. But problem is that patter repeats it self in the map quite alot so idk

01:07:902 (6,1) - you shouldn't stack these two, becouse its kinda hard to read.

Insane
Perfect

thanks for modding !

Gaia

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Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-08-14T04:49:05+00:00

Irohas

Irohas wrote:
hello

gaia
00:06:280 (6,1) - why spacing is sooo different than 00:04:659 (3,4) - ):
01:09:118 (2,3) - what about trying something as u did on 00:56:145 (2,3) - this one sounds like 1/2 to me lololol
01:12:361 (2,3) - mmh kinda understand why u put a 1/3 here, but i guess 1/4 would surely fit better and making that more easier and consistent. Cause ya, we can also put a 1/3 here 00:56:145 (2,3) - but u didnt make it there, so i think you should put the slider end on the blue tick :c mm yeah i agree but it really sounds like 1/3 to me, ill keep for now and see what the bns have to say i guess
cool!! thx! these girls so inconsistent with their vocals ;-;

[]
no kd if no change, glglgl!!

Rink

Meyrink wrote:
Le Cultured Gaia
00:02:023 (6,7) - This work is incredible. best op can u at least make this overlap look good lool looks edgy compared to other overlaps
00:02:632 (7,8,9) - Merci beau cul of season, flow awkward slider leniency so its okey
00:24:118 (2,3,4) - I will definitely keep supporting you http://puu.sh/x0ZTs.jpg haven't seen suggestion since that overlap was 3edgy4me
00:55:132 (5) - Amazing!! http://puu.sh/x100K.jpg the map butcan you move 5 a bit down so it fits with slider
01:27:564 - Though the later part of the map is intense, I liked it. should be gooddont map dat cool drum with slider tail ! instead reverse slider 4 so the rest is 3 circles

joker-

joker- wrote:
hai from my queue

Gaia's Hard
hp4 is slightly low for hard i guess. why dont you raise to 4.5 or 5?
00:09:118 (7) - i feel it's weird shape a bit. i prefer to copy & paste 8's slider like the image below
SPOILER
01:19:861 (1) - why inserted NC here?

sry for short mod ;w;
i guess literally neat mapset & song
Good Luck☆

salchow

salchow wrote:
Hi, mod incoming . Sorry for short mod but this mapset has just few flaws .

Gaia's hard
00:03:037 (8) - would peffer to move that circle around at x:348 y:170. But problem is that patter repeats it self in the map quite alot so idk i like the linear circle pattern cuz it emphasizes the strong snare beats

01:07:902 (6,1) - you shouldn't stack these two, becouse its kinda hard to read. i think it's fine

thanks all for modding! no reply = fix

wwwk

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TitleUnicode:純情エモーショナル
Artist:Elze, Linze, Yae, Yumina, Sushie, Leen
ArtistUnicode:エルゼ、リンゼ、八重、ユミナ、スゥシィ、リーン
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:異世界はスマートフォンとともに。
Tags:Isekai wa Smartphone to Tomo ni.  In a Different World with a Smartphone. ending tv size production reed  gaia
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Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-09-14T20:45:34+00:00

~~placeholder for tonight, i have a lab i need to get ready for =w=~~
i swear the mc looks too much like kirito but with an even edgier coat

aaaa maaya uchida <3

[Normal]

00:22:496 (4) - i think two 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate than a repeat slider, since drums on 00:23:104 - end up getting skipped :c
01:10:942 (4,5) - kind of a weird rhythm here, since 01:11:348 - isn't really that emphasized compared to 01:11:550 - . why not try something like this?
SPOILER

[Gaia]

00:20:064 (1,2) - this actually looks kind of bad :c any chance you can redesign this pattern lol
yeah that's it lol

[Insane]

00:11:044 - not sure if skipping the guitar here is a good idea since you mapped to the blue tick guitars before this s:
00:13:780 (2,3,4) - 2->3 is kind of really small, and 3->4 is kind of really big. maybe try moving the (3) to somewhere like x284|y8 and nerf the 3->4 distance by a little too
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - i think these should be equal spacing actually, since vocal emphasis on each note is equal
00:31:213 (1,2,3) - i think this will work better if you Ctrl + G the rhythm here. downbeat is start of a new phrase, so it should have a clickable point there, not a slider end
01:08:307 (1,2) - works better if you swap NCs here
01:22:091 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - sound kind of really weird and doesn't really match the piano that well. maybe try a rhythm like this? focuses on the piano a little more so the rhythm changes don't feel as weird
SPOILER

get like 1-2 more mods and call me back

Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2017-09-18T02:09:36+00:00

Doormat wrote:
~~placeholder for tonight, i have a lab i need to get ready for =w=~~
i swear the mc looks too much like kirito but with an even edgier coat and a lot luckier rofl

aaaa maaya uchida <3

[Normal]
00:22:496 (4) - i think two 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate than a repeat slider, since drums on 00:23:104 - end up getting skipped :c fix both
01:10:942 (4,5) - kind of a weird rhythm here, since 01:11:348 - isn't really that emphasized compared to 01:11:550 - . why not try something like this?
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:11:044 - not sure if skipping the guitar here is a good idea since you mapped to the blue tick guitars before this s: the guitar rhythm isnt so clear so i'd prefer sticking with drum here
00:13:780 (2,3,4) - 2->3 is kind of really small, and 3->4 is kind of really big. maybe try moving the (3) to somewhere like x284|y8 and nerf the 3->4 distance by a little too did some changes
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - i think these should be equal spacing actually, since vocal emphasis on each note is equal nah its fine imo
00:31:213 (1,2,3) - i think this will work better if you Ctrl + G the rhythm here. downbeat is start of a new phrase, so it should have a clickable point there, not a slider end i did this on purpose though, idk i wanted the drum hit in the slider end here xD
01:08:307 (1,2) - works better if you swap NCs here kinda following vocal here
01:22:091 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - sound kind of really weird and doesn't really match the piano that well. maybe try a rhythm like this? focuses on the piano a little more so the rhythm changes don't feel as weird i tried new rhythm for the first part, but i think 01:23:713 (1,2,3,4) - is already fine
SPOILER
get like 1-2 more mods and call me back

ty :3

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-10-10T11:26:01+00:00

Hello Mocomolomochi! Your mapset has been chosen from my Queue.

~Normal~

00:13:375 (1) - I feel like the tick at 00:13:983 should be clickable due to the higher intensity of the pitch there. I would reduce this slider by 1/2 so that you can add a circle 1/2 after to make it clickable and to fill the sound at 00:13:780 with a proper elements instead than slidertick: https://puu.sh/xUzVW.png
00:40:132 - What about adding a circle here to fill the vocal in the music? It fits nice imo;
00:42:564 (1,2) - Switch NC?
00:57:969 (5) - Since you are mapping the vocal, I think this slider should end 1/2 earlier so you can add a circle at 00:58:577 that should be (imo) clickable to emphasize the vocal better. Two consecutive 2/1 sliders look kinda "empty" with hitsounding. It would be even consistent with the next 01:11:550 (5) ;
01:01:821 - Add a circle to emphasize the upcoming vocal section better?
01:10:132 (3) - Again here, you could decrease it by 1/2 adding a circle after to fill the vocal properly;
01:14:186 (5) - Well, you know xP
01:27:159 (5) - Add NC for consistency, you should have the same combo elements of previous part (4 elements for the same rhythm).

~Gaia's Hard~

00:11:145 (3) - You should remove Normal addition on this slider's head to make the hitsounding consistent with all previous parts;
00:17:429 (2) - I honestly dislike how you placed this slider up there. I would suggest you a different placement, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284775
00:18:037 (3,4) - If you fix above, don't forget to replace these 2 elements as well. Also, I would reduce the intensity of the curve of these two and of this one as well 00:19:659 (7) - because imo their curves look too pushed and it destroys the flow tbh;
00:31:415 (6) - I would add NC here to emphasize the new vocal and spacing better. I am not a fun of long combos on easiest diff tbh xD If you apply this, you could add it on 00:35:267 (6) - as well;
00:40:942 (6) - ^ If you agree, same here;
00:46:010 (1,2) - Switch NC like you did on next parts where you set them following the vocal rhythm on red ticks;
00:50:469 (4) - Move this circle a bit on the left and down because it's actually covered by HP bar and it looks ugly tbh;
01:07:699 (6) - Don't forget you are still mapping vocal and according to this there should be an element here. What about using this rhythm? https://puu.sh/xUAy6.png I think it fits well;

~Insane~

00:09:523 (4) - This slider would be much more smoother if placed in this way to make a comeback with cursor movement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284805
00:10:740 (2) - I didn't get this curved slider honestly, it just breaks the flow you actually created. I would make it straight in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284814 or in some other way but not in this way xD
01:20:672 (1) - What about making a particular and different shape that would warn players about the slowdown? Just a tip, but it would be nice to give more information about the upcoming change imo xP

I apologize for this mod but I kinda rushed it because I had to go, but at least I hope it will help anyways.
Good luck Momochi!

X Light

463 posts

Joined August 2012

X Light 2017-10-14T17:23:15+00:00

[Insane]

00:15:503 (2,3) - if you gonna follow the drumbeat why not put sliderhead like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315440 also it fits piano better
00:22:902 (5) - try this rhythm i guess?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315444
00:29:388 (3,4,5,1) - nice pattern
00:37:902 (1,2,3) - better use 3/4 silder imo to be consistant with 00:38:713 (4) -
00:41:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - attempt to make the flow smoother https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315487
01:06:280 (5) - why not make a curve s-shaped slider

[Normal]

00:59:794 (2) - i'd prefer 1/2 slider + note

\
from my queue
GL

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-10-20T05:06:51+00:00

Doormat

Doormat wrote:
~~placeholder for tonight, i have a lab i need to get ready for =w=~~
i swear the mc looks too much like kirito but with an even edgier coat

aaaa maaya uchida <3

[Gaia]
00:20:064 (1,2) - this actually looks kind of bad :c any chance you can redesign this pattern lol idk it looks fine to me /shrug
yeah that's it lol
get like 1-2 more mods and call me back

Chewin

Chewin wrote:
Hello Mocomolomochi! Your mapset has been chosen from my Queue.

~Gaia's Hard~

00:11:145 (3) - You should remove Normal addition on this slider's head to make the hitsounding consistent with all previous parts;
00:17:429 (2) - I honestly dislike how you placed this slider up there. I would suggest you a different placement, for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284775 don't see a problem with mine though, i put in a slight jump for vocal emphasis and avoided the overlapping so it looks cleaner too. flow wise it's also fine
00:18:037 (3,4) - If you fix above, don't forget to replace these 2 elements as well. Also, I would reduce the intensity of the curve of these two and of this one as well 00:19:659 (7) - because imo their curves look too pushed and it destroys the flow tbh;
00:31:415 (6) - I would add NC here to emphasize the new vocal and spacing better. I am not a fun of long combos on easiest diff tbh xD If you apply this, you could add it on 00:35:267 (6) - as well; breaking NC consistency of the entire map for these 2 combos isn't something i like doing
00:40:942 (6) - ^ If you agree, same here;
00:46:010 (1,2) - Switch NC like you did on next parts where you set them following the vocal rhythm on red ticks; ^ i nc whenever a note hits the beginning of every other measure, or in this case, since it's a slider that picks up from the upbeat before the first downbeat, I nc that
00:50:469 (4) - Move this circle a bit on the left and down because it's actually covered by HP bar and it looks ugly tbh;
01:07:699 (6) - Don't forget you are still mapping vocal and according to this there should be an element here. What about using this rhythm? https://puu.sh/xUAy6.png I think it fits well; i think the drums are much more prominent here, so i want this antijump to emphasize that
I apologize for this mod but I kinda rushed it because I had to go, but at least I hope it will help anyways.
Good luck Momochi!

others r fixed, thx 4 mods!

i forgot to watch the last episode for this :>

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2017-10-23T00:17:34+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hello Mocomolomochi! Your mapset has been chosen from my Queue.

~Normal~

00:13:375 (1) - I feel like the tick at 00:13:983 should be clickable due to the higher intensity of the pitch there. I would reduce this slider by 1/2 so that you can add a circle 1/2 after to make it clickable and to fill the sound at 00:13:780 with a proper elements instead than slidertick: https://puu.sh/xUzVW.png fixed
00:40:132 - What about adding a circle here to fill the vocal in the music? It fits nice imo; i tried to not use 1/2 as much as possible lol
00:42:564 (1,2) - Switch NC? nope
00:57:969 (5) - Since you are mapping the vocal, I think this slider should end 1/2 earlier so you can add a circle at 00:58:577 that should be (imo) clickable to emphasize the vocal better. Two consecutive 2/1 sliders look kinda "empty" with hitsounding. It would be even consistent with the next 01:11:550 (5) ; well i did so so ican catch the clap tho, ending the slider in red tick would be weird
01:01:821 - Add a circle to emphasize the upcoming vocal section better?
01:10:132 (3) - Again here, you could decrease it by 1/2 adding a circle after to fill the vocal properly;
01:14:186 (5) - Well, you know xP
01:27:159 (5) - Add NC for consistency, you should have the same combo elements of previous part (4 elements for the same rhythm). fixed

~Insane~

00:09:523 (4) - This slider would be much more smoother if placed in this way to make a comeback with cursor movement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284805 nah it plays better current way tbh
00:10:740 (2) - I didn't get this curved slider honestly, it just breaks the flow you actually created. I would make it straight in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9284814 or in some other way but not in this way xD
01:20:672 (1) - What about making a particular and different shape that would warn players about the slowdown? Just a tip, but it would be nice to give more information about the upcoming change imo xP nah i like this 1
I apologize for this mod but I kinda rushed it because I had to go, but at least I hope it will help anyways.
Good luck Momochi!

X Light wrote:
[Insane]
00:15:503 (2,3) - if you gonna follow the drumbeat why not put sliderhead like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315440 also it fits piano better idk maybe i keep this one
00:22:902 (5) - try this rhythm i guess?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315444 nope
00:29:388 (3,4,5,1) - nice pattern
00:37:902 (1,2,3) - better use 3/4 silder imo to be consistant with 00:38:713 (4) -
00:41:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - attempt to make the flow smoother https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9315487 kinda changed but differnt way
01:06:280 (5) - why not make a curve s-shaped slider nope
[Normal]
00:59:794 (2) - i'd prefer 1/2 slider + note nah thats too hard imo
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from my queue
GL

Thanks guys !
updated :3

Chewin

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Chewin 2017-10-27T11:34:28+00:00

Surprise!

~Normal~

00:13:375 (1) - I feel this slider too pushed on the left and it makes the flow a little bad. Just move it some grid on the right like this maybe? It would give a more impact on flow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9405763
00:24:118 (2,3) - What about filling properly all the vocal in the music here with using small sliders like you did for 00:22:496 (4,5) - ?
00:51:483 (4) - I would reduce this slider by 1/2 to fill the sound on the red line with adding an 1/2 slider after:
01:14:186 (5) - Reduce by 1/2 and add a circle on the white tick to fill the vocal properly and to be consistent with 01:11:550 (5,1) -

~Gaia's Hard~

01:16:314 - Add a circle like you did for 01:19:557 (5) - ? It sounds good.

~Insane~

01:08:510 (2,3) - Bad antijump compared to the spacing you used on previous part at 00:55:537 (1,2) -
01:24:321 (3) - Try to make it easier to read?

Call me

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2017-10-27T11:55:17+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Surprise! !!!!

~Normal~

00:13:375 (1) - I feel this slider too pushed on the left and it makes the flow a little bad. Just move it some grid on the right like this maybe? It would give a more impact on flow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9405763
00:24:118 (2,3) - What about filling properly all the vocal in the music here with using small sliders like you did for 00:22:496 (4,5) - ? kinda different fix but i fill the red tick
00:51:483 (4) - I would reduce this slider by 1/2 to fill the sound on the red line with adding an 1/2 slider after:
01:14:186 (5) - Reduce by 1/2 and add a circle on the white tick to fill the vocal properly and to be consistent with 01:11:550 (5,1) -

~Insane~

01:08:510 (2,3) - Bad antijump compared to the spacing you used on previous part at 00:55:537 (1,2) -
01:24:321 (3) - Try to make it easier to read? tbh its already appropriate to read imo, i like this pattern xD
Call me

Others fixed :3

Gaia

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Gaia 2017-10-27T19:15:03+00:00

mm i don't hear a note there tho :S the 2nd one is a drum roll so it's different

thx for modding tho! : )

Chewin

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Chewin 2017-10-28T00:27:51+00:00

Have my first bubble ~

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-11-17T11:32:09+00:00

insane
00:11:044 - mapping this would work so well with the guitar here which you seemed to be following for most of this part, like https://i.imgur.com/uT2nvDm.jpg
00:49:963 (4) - how about whistle here to emphasize blue tick vocal like you did on 01:02:936 (3) - ?
01:16:010 (4) - having no hitsounding on this when it's still part of the outstanding 1/1 melody thing seems a bit lacking, why not add soft whistle?
hs things might also apply to lower diffs
cute blue tick rhythms

gaia
00:02:632 (7) - all rhythms before follow melody so this feels really unfiting since you skip percussion just before it. something like https://i.imgur.com/bvOgWf9.jpg would make a nice transition away from melody
00:13:172 (8,1) - stack seems so weird here considering you mapped similar things like 00:08:307 (5,6) - 00:11:550 (4,5) - etc. as jumps
00:34:456 (4,5,6,7,8) - enable stacking
01:05:875 (2) - seems slightly awkward (implied) movement wise, try something like https://i.imgur.com/RePOwEU.jpg ?

normal
00:50:672 (3,4) - can you reduce the overlapping here a bit? it's getting as bit hard to read for newer players and you don't have an easy
00:57:969 (5,1) - this one maybe too since you cover most of the starting path
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should be all, let me know if you need someone to qualify

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2017-11-17T12:07:19+00:00

Lasse wrote:
insane
00:11:044 - mapping this would work so well with the guitar here which you seemed to be following for most of this part, like https://i.imgur.com/uT2nvDm.jpg changed
00:49:963 (4) - how about whistle here to emphasize blue tick vocal like you did on 01:02:936 (3) - ? nah i prefer to left this part without whistle
01:16:010 (4) - having no hitsounding on this when it's still part of the outstanding 1/1 melody thing seems a bit lacking, why not add soft whistle? added
hs things might also apply to lower diffs
cute blue tick rhythms thanks ! ((((:

normal
00:50:672 (3,4) - can you reduce the overlapping here a bit? it's getting as bit hard to read for newer players and you don't have an easy
00:57:969 (5,1) - this one maybe too since you cover most of the starting path fixed both
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should be all, let me know if you need someone to qualify

Thanks a lot lasse

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-11-19T01:51:42+00:00

Lasse

Lasse wrote:
gaia
00:02:632 (7) - all rhythms before follow melody so this feels really unfiting since you skip percussion just before it. something like https://i.imgur.com/bvOgWf9.jpg would make a nice transition away from melody ive always been following the melody though, that slider is following the long (synth? idk) note
00:13:172 (8,1) - stack seems so weird here considering you mapped similar things like 00:08:307 (5,6) - 00:11:550 (4,5) - etc. as jumps
00:34:456 (4,5,6,7,8) - enable stacking
01:05:875 (2) - seems slightly awkward (implied) movement wise, try something like https://i.imgur.com/RePOwEU.jpg ? didnt follow exactly but i didnt really like ur pattern so i redude the curve and moved it a bit

should be all, let me know if you need someone to qualify

thx for modding, others are fixed.

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2017-11-19T06:15:36+00:00

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Lasse

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Lasse 2017-11-19T10:27:03+00:00

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wa sorry for forgetting to recheck, i got busy with irl stuff ;w;

grats on the qualify though!

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