Nyan wrote:

3rd try OMG????XDDDDD

[General]


SliderMultiplier:1.60383972523691 -> 1.4 V

[Timing]

01:16:930 - move this green timing point -1ms (76929) V
02:33:730 - move this green timing point -1ms (153729) V
02:54:987 - better remove the green point V
04:56:358 - move this green timing point +1ms (296359) V

[Pattern]

01:44:272 - add a kat V
04:00:987 (83,84,85,86,87,88,1) - kkkddkk V
Actually pattern is good. :D:D

☆☆☆

Nyan wrote:

ahh actually I intended SliderMultiplier 1.6 my mistake :ccc sorry

-byakuya- wrote:

3PC

Fantazyy wrote:

-byakuya- wrote:

3PC

到底在炫耀什麼wwwwwwww

好圖不能只給你一個FC (σˋ▽ˊ)σ

maziari1105 wrote:

Hi, MOD from mod queue!
I write MOD all intend to good better this map. But if you don't like few it, It doesn't matter you ignore it.
I'm not good at English, sorry if you can't understand my sentence. >< me too !!! DDDXX

[Fan's Inner Oni]
00:00:130 ~ 00:09:730 : Ringing much kick's 1/1, d d d d…. So picking up the kick is better ?

TO

OR

.
ah ah !!! THANKS!!!! i was never think about it!!!>0<
For the same reason, ? ~~OK >V<
00:11:701 (5) - k V
00:13:072 (15) - k V
00:14:444 (5) - k V
00:15:815 (15) - k V
00:17:187 (5) - k V
00:18:558 (15) - k V

00:21:044 (43,44,45,46) - same 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42):? dddk k (1/6 + 1/4) V
00:21:387 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural imo. ((OAO it's start to harder again!!


You should avoid continuing same color　long. =3=
00:22:758 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - dkkd kd ?(1/4) V
00:23:444 (12) - d V
00:24:815 (26) - d V
00:26:187 (37,38,39) - dk k (1/4) V
00:27:215 (45,46) - d k (1/2) V
00:28:244 (52) - d V
00:29:101 (59) - k V
00:29:615 (63,64,65,66) - d k d k (1/2) V
00:30:987 (72,73) - dk (1/4) V
00:31:930 (79) - d? why question mark? ^^
00:37:587 (7,8) - dk? (1/4) the sound feeling go down so.....
00:38:530 (14) - d V
00:41:272 (37) - d V

00:44:015: ~ 00:54:987: im very distressed this part Thx!!!!!!
On the first note of the measure, when pick up the kick, easy to find a rhythm.
Next, when last note of the measure and first note of the next measure is wrong color, player recognize easy. So, became pleasant.





TO like




is better imo. V

01:02:873 (13,14,15,16) - ddkk (1/4) V
01:04:244 (13,14) - dk (1/4) V
01:05:272 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - kddkddk (1/6) That is more natural imo. V
01:27:730 (34,35) - kk (1/4) V
01:38:872 (99) - k V


02:02:015 (10) - k V
02:03:387 (20) - k and 02:03:472 - add k V
02:06:215 (42,43) - kd (1/4) V
02:06:215 (42,43) - add k and 02:07:672 (53) - d V
02:11:101 (89) - k This color scheme is hard to hit. >< V


02:13:158 (13) - d? ah! that's better OUO
02:19:672 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) i think your right 0.0
02:22:415 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4) V
02:24:129 (13) - d? V
02:30:643 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) V and (70) k->d

02:33:730: ~ If same pattern until now, player get tired. So variegate. QAQ thx! there has other people said it too
02:35:015 - add k V
02:35:101 (13) - d V
02:36:387 - add k V
02:37:758 - add k V
02:40:501 - add d V
02:41:615 (71,72,73,74) - kkdk? (1/4) V
02:43:244 - add d V
02:44:358 (96,97,98,99,1) - kkkkd (1/4) V

02:44:701: ~ Added kick, but there isn't change pettern, It's unnatural. :O
02:44:872 (2,3,4,5) - ddkdd (1/4) V
02:45:987 - add k V
02:46:072 (13) - d V
02:46:244 (14,15,16,17) - ddkkd (1/4) V
02:47:358 - add k V
02:47:787 - add k V
02:48:730 - add k V
02:49:158 - add d V
02:50:530 - add k V
02:51:472 - add d V
02:51:901 - add k V

02:52:930 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - kddkddkdkddkddkd (1/4) It doesn't match melody. oh no , i think you heard wrong??


02:55:672 (1) - d V
02:56:358 (6) - k V
02:56:958 - add k? V
02:57:044 (11) - d V
02:58:330 (23,24,25) - kdk? (1/4) V
02:59:787 (34) - d V
03:00:044 (36) - k? V
03:00:301 (38) - k? V
03:00:815 (42,43) - d k (1/2) V
03:01:072 - add k V
03:01:158 (44) - d V
03:01:415 (46) - k V
03:01:587 (47) - k V
03:02:530 (54) - d V
03:03:815 (66) - k V
03:12:130 (131) - d V
03:13:501 (141,142) - dk V

03:16:587 (6,7,8,9) - kkkd (1/6) V
03:16:930 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kddkddk (1/6) V


03:28:244 (10,11) - k k d(1/1) V
03:36:130 (24) - k? V

04:01:501: ~ Pick up the kick, become much more fun. ok>3<
04:01:158 (85,86,87,88,1) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:01:672 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V
04:03:215 (14) - d V
04:03:386 (15,16,17) - kkd (1/4) V
04:04:158 (21,22) - kd (1/4) V
04:04:415 (23,24,25) - kkd (1/4) V
04:05:615 (32,33,34,35) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:06:986 (45,46,47,48) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:08:358 (55,56,57,58) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:10:501 (75) - k V

04:11:787 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - kddkdd (1/6) V
04:12:301 (99,100,101,1) - kkkd (1/6) This color scheme is hard to hit. >< :O

04:12:644 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V
04:13:758 - add k V
04:13:843 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:14:872 (23) - d V
04:15:129 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:16:501 - add k V
04:16:586 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:17:957 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:19:244 - add k V
04:19:329 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:20:358 (73) - d V
04:20:614 (75,76,77,78,79) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:21:987 - add k V
04:22:072 (88,89,90,91) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:23:614 (2,3,4) - kkd (1/4) V

04:24:730 - add k V
04:24:814 (13,14,15,16) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:25:844 (23) - d V
04:26:100 (25,26,27,28,29) - kd kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:27:472 - add k V
04:27:557 (38,39,40,41) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:28:930 (51,52,53,54) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:30:215 - k V
04:30:300 (63,64,65,66) - d kkd (1/2 + 1/4) V
04:31:330 (73) - d V
04:31:587 - add d V
04:32:444 (84) - k V
04:32:958 - d V


04:35:787 (11,12) - dk (1/4) V
04:36:815 (20,21,22,23,24) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:38:530 (34,35) - dk (1/4) V
04:39:901 (47) - d V
04:41:272 (57,58) - dk (1/4) V



04:45:387: ~ Pick up the kick. V
04:45:730 - add d V
04:46:415 - add k V
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4) V
04:46:758 (43,44) - dk (1/4) V
04:46:758 (43,44) - add d? you accidentally pressed ??
04:47:787 (52,53,54,55,56) - kkdkd (1/4) V
04:48:472 - d V
04:49:158 - k V
04:49:501 (66,67) - dk (1/4) V
04:50:530 (75,76,77,78,79) - ddkdk (1/4) V

04:50:872: ~ Pick up the 1/2 kick d d d d d d d d…, better imo. :OOO

TO like

.V

04:54:387 (114) - k V

04:54:987 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,1) -

TO

. This one is easy to hit and beautiful. XDD


05:08:015 - add k V
05:09:387 - add d V
05:10:758 - add k V
05:12:130 - add d V

05:12:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -

TO

. This one is better imo. all k ??:O

05:17:101 (39) - k V
05:17:444 (44) - k V
05:17:615 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - dkkdkkd (1/6) That is more natural. V :O


And, scroll changes intensive are become hindrance of play. sor i think im not good in timming using ^^
00:00:130 - scroll change x1.00.
00:11:101 - delete scroll change.
00:19:330 - delete scroll change.
00:54:987 - delete scroll change.
01:06:301 - scroll change x0.75.
01:08:701 - delete scroll change.
01:16:929 - delete scroll change.
01:27:730 - scroll change x0.80.
01:27:815 - scroll change x0.90.
02:00:815 - scroll change x0.87.
02:03:558 - delete scroll change.
02:06:301 - delete scroll change.
02:10:415 - delete scroll change.
02:11:787 - delete scroll change.
02:11:958 - delete scroll change.
02:32:358 - delete scroll change.
02:33:387 - delete scroll change.
02:33:730 - delete scroll change.
02:55:672 - delete scroll change.
03:14:872 - delete scroll change.
03:16:244 - delete scroll change.
03:50:530 - delete scroll change.
04:01:501 - delete scroll change.
04:11:101 - delete scroll change.
04:12:472 - delete scroll change.
04:12:644 - delete scroll change.
04:33:044 - delete scroll change.
04:34:415 - delete scroll change.
04:34:587 - delete scroll change.
04:54:987 - delete scroll change.
04:56:359 - delete scroll change.
05:07:330 - delete scroll change.
05:12:815 - delete scroll change. but.....now don't have any kiai time?? :<


That's all. Thank you for reading this long MOD. Good luck on ranked!

DaDul Moyerrrrr wrote:

HI! Mod from modding queues!
:d OMG I saw you at muti game
and I pick this map, remember me ? oh god!!! that's a insane map
So,

[Fan'z Inner Oni]

00:44:444 (6) - k V lol that timing :D I forgot delete
00:45:815 (6) - k V
00:46:072 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - kdkdkddd or kdkdkkkk or kdkdkddk i think is better to put here 00:48:815 -
00:47:187 (6) - k V

01:05:958 (1,3,5,7) - k oops~this two parts is better to put d for the low sound :>
01:16:930 (1,3,5,7) - k? ^

03:06:215 - add d ok~~

03:50:530 - add scroll change 0.7x start form x0.7 is too slow!!
04:01:330 - add scroll change 0.8x ?
04:01:415 - add scroll change 0.9x ?
04:01:501 - add scroll change 1.0x thx i put other kind scroll change

04:50:872 (83) - d + finish k is better for the sound and add finish???
04:51:558 (89) - add finish i feel little strange that only one finish is here 0.0
04:51:901 - add d? V
04:52:158 - add d? no~ no same sound here
04:52:501 (97,100) - d V
04:52:587 (98) - k V
04:52:672 - add k hm......not very well here

it is already awesome map haha Thx!!!!
gl on ranked xD

Thanks for MOD !!!!!

maziari1105 wrote:

I forgot to write few Mods. ><
Don't kudos this post.

[Fan'z Inner Oni]
･Diff name : "Fan's Inner Oni"? or "Inner Oni"
This map's creator is you. You don't have to write your name in diff name? LOL XDDD

･SV : 1.6 -> 1.4
Taiko's SV in general is 1.4, and many player easy to play. ok! but i feel many parts that become so slow D: if it is possible can you give suggestions for scroll change ?;w;

･HP : 5 -> 4
Specification in osu!, marathon is hard to clear, so if you aim Approved, you should down HP IMO. oK~~:>


Mod is fin this time! Good Luck on Approved.

Thanks for MOD!!!!

maziari1105 wrote:

It is preferable that scroll change puts in rouse part.
So, for example, how about putting scroll change x1.1 on 02:11:787: ~ 02:54:301: and putting scroll change x1.2 on 04:34:415: ~ 04:56:358: ? V
Also, 03:50:530: and 04:01:672: 's scroll changes is undistinguishble, so I recommendation change to 0.8x and 0.9x . V

By the way, is 04:02:872 (11,12,13,14): mistake of "d kkd (1/4)"? V

Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LunaticP wrote:

try this ?

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
8. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
9. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
10. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

or

1. Offset: 130ms BPM: 175.00
2. Offset: 130ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
3. Offset: 66,301ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
4. Offset: 68,701ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
5. Offset: 71,444ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
6. Offset: 74,187ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
7. Offset: 76,930ms BPM: Inherited (0.5x)
8. Offset: 79,672ms BPM: Inherited (0.6x)
9. Offset: 82,415ms BPM: Inherited (0.7x)
10. Offset: 85,158ms BPM: Inherited (0.8x)
11. Offset: 87,215ms BPM: Inherited (0.9x)
12. Offset: 87,558ms BPM: Inherited (1x) i accepted some change and i will make some different


02:44:273 (100) - remove V

Thanks for mod!!!!!

Remus wrote:

Hello from my queue o/

Tatsujin

1. 00:48:645 (7) - forgot about kat here or just did it specially? is it heard not pretty!? O: ok~i hv some change~~
2. 02:43:244 (91) - the same as ^, but accroding to 02:41:873 (78,91) . I won't like to make same color 02:41:873 (78) - ,,,so i make 02:42:987 (88,89,90) - kdk here 030
3. 02:46:844 (22,25) - swap them maybe? sorry i don't know what's this mean ;w;;;;;;;;; but (22)is better use kat so i make ''dkkdkdkkd'' 030

Oh, looks pretty. That map is very repeatable, so i can't even find something worth to improve D:
Ok, that's all i can suggest here ._.
Good luck!

1. 00:03:472 - 00:04:844 - 00:08:958 - 00:06:215 - 00:07:587 - why are these k when you used d before, it's still the same sound and sounds better as d.
2. 00:21:387 - This is unfitting and really bad playwise since it doesn't follow the sound at all. If you wanna keep this, make it a long 1/6 starting at 00:21:387 - Or just make a spinner/slider. What you have right now is really bad.
3. 00:23:187 - Either use kk kd or dk kd. This way you'll be following the music correctly.
4. 00:30:987 - kd ^

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hi, M4M requested in my queue!

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:472 - 00:04:844 - 00:08:958 - 00:06:215 - 00:07:587 - why are these k when you used d before, it's still the same sound and sounds better as d. V
2. 00:21:387 - This is unfitting and really bad playwise since it doesn't follow the sound at all. If you wanna keep this, make it a long 1/6 starting at 00:21:387 - Or just make a spinner/slider. What you have right now is really bad. that k is my miss , and i try the spinner/slider before but i feel that's not well ...
3. 00:23:187 - Either use kk kd or dk kd. This way you'll be following the music correctly.V
4. 00:30:987 - kd ^ V

I'm sorry, but after seeing the rest of the map I don't want to continue modding this. First of all I hate whistle mapping, second, your streams are really randomly hitsounded, your rhythm is really weird and your 1/6's are really unfitting. Also I don't really like the song, so I'm really sorry. im sure i am not good at 1/6 but it realy bertter to use it , and is it weird of my rhythm ? you sure?? @@?

Good luck.

cdhsausageboy wrote:

#late
hmmm 1/6等等的部分打不来，无法很好的从玩家的角度提供意见，如果找些会玩又会mod的大触(eg tasuke)来会比较好些

Inner Oni

1. 00:09:044 - 这里是不是少了个don啊。。。明明从00:05:615 开始你就开始放kddk kd了这里忽然变回kd k kd稍显违和啊 好好 不違和不違和DX
2. 00:20:701 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,1) - 这段嘛。。。editor听起来怪怪的但打起来却很自然，个人觉得不需要改些什么orz .....= =? 我是想說00:21:815 (53) - 01:05:701 (33) - 這兩顆要不要改K
3. 00:24:130 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 这里一长串说实话感觉有一点莫名其妙，而且把过渡到下一个小节的感觉给减弱了额，个人建议把00:24:730 - 删掉然后把前面的改成ddkkkdd还是啥的？后面又看了一下，这段直到00:40:415 都只有二~三连音，但一开始却有着这么长的一串感觉实在有点奇怪啊，不然把这串缩短不然把后面改难一点吧，不然一下子难一下子容易感觉有点拿不定主意的感觉 這裡就ˋ只能串了 除非你要連續的兩顆1/6 然後ddkdkkdkdd感覺比較好? <3
4. 00:45:215 (15,16,1) - 这里其实能放1/6 XDDD (逃) 額.. 不太適合喔:O
5. 00:48:130 (1,2,3) - ^ X
6. 00:50:701 (15,16,1,2) - ^ X
7. 00:49:415 - 感觉把这粒改成d会好些，能够让之后的k强调背景的重音 好(?
8. 我居然用了25%把这个鱼蛋听了三次。。。好累 ......= =||| 辛苦了??LOL
9. 01:05:958 - 关于这段的变速想说几句。嘛你这样放并没有什么不对，况且程度也非常轻微不至于很难看的程度。但问题是：有必要吗？owo 就是因为这里改变的程度太小了，所以玩的时候不免让人觉得其实如果没有变速的话其实也没什么差，并不算好的一个梗=w= (不会太凶吧。。。 D: 因為不知道要用什麼 燃後不放惠感覺非常無聊;w; 所以說 把変速差距調大??
10. 01:27:901 to 01:38:872 - 个人很喜欢这点！k的位置的渐变做得蛮不错的而且有呼应到曲子本身，给个赞=w=b ((其實我做完這首最滿意的就是這裡XD ((誤
11. 01:47:101 (169,170,171,172) - 。。。为什么不用ddkdk啊就差最后一点了怎么把维持到现在的规律给打散 最後一段是變化段 是說這是照著鼓聲的030
12. 第一个kiai嗯虽然用编辑器来看有些单调但其实玩起来感觉很带感也很舒服=w=b 打起來有一種奇幻感
13. 03:00:472 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) 和 02:57:730 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - 根本就是一模一样啊段落啊怎么玩了两种完全不同的花样 哪有兒? 聽錯吧?:3
14. 03:03:215 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - 这个最富有跳跃感的一段用一个短stream来带过，实在有点可惜啊。。。但我也不知道该怎么写好== ....?_?_? 抱歉不太懂你的意思 根上面那個一樣ㄟ??
15. 03:13:501 (144,145) - 这种音调往下降的部分你之前都是用kd啊。。。这里不跟吗>_> 跟!! 都可以跟!!
16. 04:55:672 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - 个人感觉dkkdkkdkkd好些 確定喔? ((我是真的有點搞不清楚這裡了>____>

暂时就先这样吧，我不想再拖了orz
曲子许多部分都有重复，而我列出的点是我觉得影响比较严重的，在曲子里有类似部分的话也一样适用
至于你最关心的1/6效果到底怎样，其实我感受得到你放的1/6都是有跟着音乐里的部分，只是这圈子的人大多不喜欢1/4夹杂着1/6的图>_> 偏偏有好多歌都有夾雜;w;;;;;
这图有些部分我很喜欢也打得很爽但也有些地方能再做得好一些，加油=w=b!

Vulkin wrote:

ok mod from queue
#sorryforbeinglate;w;

-Inner Oni-
00:21:730 (52) - make it a d? seems more player-friendly i think ok?!! be friendly!! friendly!!!DDX
01:05:615 (32) - ^ more friendly!!!
01:36:301 (74,80,86) - make them k? sounds better somehow i don't think so D:
03:12:901 (140) - k? it's a low sound here :3
03:56:015 (45) - make it a d for the pitch ok~
04:11:101 - Why not like this? seem like not very well.. but still thinking about here


Very fun map!
Lemme give some stars for ya

S a n d wrote:

Taiko mod request from: Fantazy
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*


- 00:11:615 - kk kdkd -> kkdk kd 因為如果你放慢成50%聽的話, 在 00:11:787 上有一個連續的1/1重低音 好(? 暫時就先採用
-- 00:14:530 - 跟上面同樣的道理 V
- 移動 00:13:587 到 00:13:158 - 理由同上, 也感覺比較不overmap 那就overwatch吧
-- 00:15:901 - 加d? 跟上面同樣的道理 -V-
-- 00:17:272 - ^ ~V~
-- 00:18:644 - ^ >V>
- 00:23:958 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這顆比前三顆的音還高 哇 我居然發現了
- 00:24:815 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這個kd跟 00:23:244 的音一模一樣 ㄟ~~~ 00:24:815 (26) - 這顆音比較低喔 只是好像kd比較好>__>
-- 00:26:187 - ^ <V<
-- 00:41:272 - ^ =V=
---如果改上面的話-->我建議 00:26:015 改成k, 這樣能更加凸顯00:26:272的轉折 ~V~轉吧note
-- 00:27:558 - ^^ 這裡沒什麼差吧?
- 00:32:187 - 改成k? 因為第二個音是高音 真的嗎? 是我音感異於常人嗎?;w; 我感覺的高低醬捏
- 00:37:844 - dkd d -> dkddk 或是 dkddd? 比較跟音 也比較好凸顯 00:38:530 的d 那還是把00:38:530改成kd好了
已下的串play我就當all accept了 這裡超不會;w;;
- 00:44:958(12,13) - Ctrl + G, 因為高音在12 ((聽不太出來>___>
-- 00:47:701(12,13) - Ctrl +G, ^ >___>
- 00:46:244 - 改成 k? 明顯的音差 阿斯可能是我的疏失
--如果改上面的話--> 00:46:586(15,16) - 都改成dd, 也是音差 也比較跟音
- 00:47:272 - 改成k, 是高音
- 00:49:244(14,15) - 改成kk? 跟背景的音, 後面的d是為了撇清下一段落
- 00:53:530(16,1) - Ctrl+G, 高音很明顯是在1喔, 1
- 00:54:987 - ddddkkd -> dddkddk 聽起來比較順
-- 00:56:358 - ^
-- 00:57:730 - ^
-- 00:59:101 - ^
- 00:58:930 - 改成k? 這三個音都應該是同樣的, 所以kkk比較搭 我記得你前面也有用過類似的
- 00:43:958 ~ 01:05:958 - 一個break都沒有很容易被嗆喔www 你中間多少加一點吧 例如: 00:54:901 中間點, 擺點誠意, 做個樣子 以上V
- 02:01:587 - 改成k? 因為這邊的音跟02:00:987 一模一樣啊 沒什麼理由不同譜面w. 下面很多都有這樣的問題, 我就不一個一個列了 我有幻聽 這樣 ((誤
- 02:00:815 - 應該是說節拍整個歪囉, 這樣比較像: 下面一段也一樣就不多說了 V
-- 02:11:958 - 整個kiai都同上^, 你每個2連 (例如dk 或是 kd) 都早了一個1/4拍 沒人找到我好訝異 O:
- 02:03:558 - 節拍整個歪囉w, 這樣比較跟音: 下面同上 V
- 02:44:701 - 開始因為塞note所以看不太出來問題, 但是還是因為上一段擺錯了某些重音 例如: 02:49:158 - 跟重音的話是kdkdd不是kddkd V
- 02:59:187(31,32) - 兩個都是高音喔 改k 只有32?
- 03:03:472 跟 03:03:644 - 兩個都可以刪掉, 比較能凸顯單音的魅力, 也能避免overmap 原來這樣就好;w;;;;;;;;
- 03:31:330 - 改成d? 是低音 而且03:31:672的音比較高 該改為k 這裡就真的是高and低了=3=
- 04:02:701 - 加d? 背景的重低音已經開始出來了, 可以開始塞滿1/2了 這不太好咧
-- 04:05:444 - ^ ^
-- 04:08:187 - ^ ^
- 04:13:672 - 這邊有聲音, 所以從04:12:987開始 建議改成: 因為你04:12:472是用k, 但是後面的段落分隔都用d 一致性不夠. 整個段落都建議, 看你要不要刪一些, 給難度一點高低起伏 我要大改個了 我發覺我之前的音感幾乎相反
- 04:40:415 - 改成d? 前後有音差 這個再看看吧
就這樣
你加油wwww=w=

Ceryuia wrote:

Hihi~ From my Queue :3

[Inner Oni]
01:47:101 (169,170,171,172) - Change this to ddkdk to fit in with 01:47:787 (174,175,176,177,178) m.. the first k is not consort here but i think can use ddddk :3
02:03:387 (18) - Change this to a don as there is a loud drum sound here ;w; felt not well i use it before but still thinking for it
02:32:872 (89) - Change this to a don? The pitch goes down here and then rises again D: i heard wrong before ;w;
02:35:787 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Just a suggestion, change this to dkddkdkdd for higher than 02:37:158 - :3
02:42:644 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - Change to dkddkkddk? ok~~
03:19:501 (11,12) - Ctrl+G, there is a higher note on 03:19:672 no ;w; is low and same as 03:20:015 (13) -

This is a really fun map~! I'll shoot some kudosu stars as I couldn't find a lot ;-; THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good Luck ~!!

steven1 wrote:

random mod from me because i really liked the map! >W<

Inner Oni

00:11:101 (1) - change this one to D i forgot here DX
01:28:415 (4,5,6,7,8) - change it to ddddk, then 01:35:958 (70,71,72,73,74) - change it to ddddd because the tones is lower than the first one i got little wrong here but its not good k in head and tail this part ...
01:44:187 - change it to this change to kkdkd :3
01:46:930 - change it to this change to dkddd k dkddkdk
03:55:587 (40) - change it to kat, i think dkkkddk is better than ddkkddk, just a suggestion its low sound :3
its better if u say this one 04:01:072 (84) -
04:06:558 (41) - ^ this too :3
04:23:014 (104) - ^ this one ok~

Smallwu wrote:

來騙kud的random mod =___=
[Inner Oni]
00:00:130 - 你這裡各有一條紅線和綠線 可是Volume是50%和75% 讓他們保持一樣 不然一個點上有兩個音量很怪 已修正~

00:49:158 (12,13,14) - kkd/kdd (12)的音和後面的(1)一樣都有種"ㄉ-ㄉ-"的音 所以應該要和它相同才對 (而且你後面的三連打第一顆也是k) 安壓 整個沒注意到的說 一定是受到SM之力影響的

02:11:787 - 02:11:872 - 怎放兩條Kiai開頭@口@ 阿~~~又沒注意到;w; 一定又是SM之力害的;w;

03:55:672 (41) - k 比較好打 而且從Break Time結束到這裡 白線上有Note的全部都是k 沒理由這裡不是吧!!!!!!!!!!!! 呵呵呵呵好吧 後面寫得比較合理 呵呵呵

=====
沒了 祝早日Rankㄛ>w<

[R] wrote:

yo

[Inner Oni]
00:29:530 - can add note to cover high pitch forward i think...no? DDD; but change some other <3
01:48:387 - change don to give variety with this part 01:47:015 - not good in d add the finish now :3
01:53:358 - change kat, for variety not sure and possible will change back?_? ((cant heard clear ;w;
01:54:730 - ^ V
02:56:530 - can add note here V
03:12:215 - drum sound stop here, move 03:12:301 - drum? change the 215 to k 301 add d
03:39:215 (75,76) - invert, pitch piano has drop in end part change to ddkkddkk >_>


well maybe just that from me
good luck

Devli wrote:

香腸

Devli wrote:

香腸

Smallwu wrote:

Devli wrote:

香腸

美味!

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi fan o/ sorry for late check ;

General

1. Metadata suggestions (tags and design): Hmmm I think 'Indonesia' tag isn't neccesary (if you have a reason for this could be nice). Also where does 'Doujin Music Circle' come from? o: i thought https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347650 this map was a reliable source >.>||||||| ((i change some viable tags
2. Kiai times: 02:32:358 - 02:33:730 - what about a Kiai break cause it goes more calmer than the rest? :p nice?_?nice
3. Volumes:
   
   1. 00:33:044 - the volume here is really similar than 00:22:072 - so 80% on both fits nice
   2. 00:44:015 - 90% on here maybe cause it's just a little higher than last one
   3. 05:12:815 - 80% could fit better here

how could i missed the front volumes!!!!!!D:::::::::::::::::::::: lol thx for note xp
[Inner Oni]

1. I highly suggest to make the 1/6 on 00:21:044 - instead 00:20:701 - cause it fits song perfectly (dddk is nice I think) but i feel so strange if it all d are some other pattern :thinking: can hv some suggest? >.> i make dddd first
2. 00:24:130 - this longstream doesn't make so much sense since there isn't any other longstream in the whole section D:, so you can add one on 00:29:615 - or make it more short change
3. 00:42:644 (1) - finish it on 00:43:672 - like 00:09:730 (1) - i think if make short its better finish here?00:43:501 - and the sound with?
4. 00:44:015 - wow this is hard but nice xD lol
5. 01:05:958 - I think you could make some variations like d d k k instead lot of d k (for example: 01:07:672 (6,7) - ctrl+g) hm... how about the second repeat make with other sound?
6. 01:30:044 (19) 01:36:901 (76) - - kat on them fills nice :p :thingingingingingink:
7. mmm 03:16:844 (10,11,12,13) - k ddd? 1/6 kats seems too spammy D: ahm...... i change to like 03:16:587 - kkdd d kkkdddk d?

Wow you really just made a nice job on here, call me when you have applied my mod

Surono wrote:

zzzzz makes me want to map a song that would be p-

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

Fantazy wrote:

Surono wrote:

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

terima kasih banyak?

Surono wrote:

a circle tofu clicking game or hitting game.... ?w?w?w?

00:20:615 - swap with 00:20:872 - this, more appropriate on flows pattern emphasis hm.........still not find the best pattern ;w;

00:44:015 - " RC: No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point." delete one of them oh no!!! that's my fault!!!!!

01:05:958 - ~ 01:16:758 - it plays dull zz, you could make structures like x x xxx x x xxx and so on how do u think of these? ((update

01:16:930 - hello a u t h e n t i c c style :-) ：－）

01:19:501 - 01:22:244 - 01:24:987 - can you make these alteration svs to be neat please like example 02:03:387 - from here? somehow it doesnt look good fixed and 01:05:958 - this part too

01:49:844 - 20% to low, i cant even hear the don sounds. change it to 30% D::::::::::::::::::::::(changed

so well first kiai like this, ehh but Im fine with this style coloring like dk kd or kd kd zz

I will rebubble this if the issues has been fixed



https://osu.ppy.sh/u/typeMARS Ｄ：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：： is typeMARS!! omgwww

yeah thats why mania ver. has " Indonesia " on tags cuz the artist is from Indo lo :shrugs: i think...keep not tag for avoid controversy?