Oh damn shit didnt noticed u are finished im rly sorry :/
Anyway
First off why you dont keep the old BG it was much better and had a much better girl on it
00:27:637 (1,2,3) - what are you representing with these? i dont get it ^^ same here 00:38:671 (1,2,3) -
00:45:568 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NCs?
01:46:947 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - why has this much more spacing than this 01:57:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - while being the same ?
02:13:844 (1,2) - blanket
02:16:947 (2) - 02:17:637 (4) - here too
02:36:430 (3,4) - blanket
02:59:361 (1) - and 02:59:706 (3) - are rly close to 02:58:844 (5) - move them a bit away
03:22:464 (6) - and 03:22:981 (2) - as above
02:59:016 (6) - 02:59:534 (2) - blanket
04:33:154 (2) - this sliderend should be clickable like 04:37:637 (2,3) - and the other two times
04:38:671 (2,3) - here too
06:14:533 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - only time u did the NC on a blue tick
beside that minor stuff i meantion nice map!
If u need another NM now or in the future just pm me, its allways a good exercise to mod good maps!
Good Luck finding a BN fast