general
- furry bg is unrelated to the song and is unnecessary, remove it (if you do decide to keep it, at least make it a higher resolution, I can literally count the pixels)
- no hitsounds, plus the hitsound volume is 25% so you can barely hear it regardless, why?
also, od 9.4, why?
- 00:00:284 (1) - this should at least be a circle on the red tick here and two sliders on the white ticks after, else the rhythm makes no sense considering you do this rhythm nowhere else in the map besides 00:07:045 (6) - here (which also has emphasis issues on the white ticks, as there's potent notes there and none of the other sections are mapped like this section ever again)
- 00:01:341 (2,3,4) - 4 should have more emphasis due to the snare instead of having the exact same emphasis throughout, and this goes for almost the entire map; there's really no reason that in a short map like this, snares are unemphasized; look at any other harumachi clover set and you will see the change in spacing for snares
- 00:03:665 (4) - while this is consistent in terms of where you place this, why are you skipping noticeable beats doing this? following vocals on an extra diff especially on a map this hard makes no sense especially considering over 90% of the map is just a constant 1/2 beat regardless (which it really shouldn't be since there's VERY noticeable triples at parts like 00:07:890 (1,2) - this here)
- 00:09:580 (1) - slider starts on a less potent note and ends on a potent one, would much rather have this be similar to 00:05:566 (6) - this rhythm
- 00:11:270 (4) - why does the SV randomly slow down here, and why are you ignoring the song's rhythm here again?
- 00:12:749 (1,2) - these aren't nearly as emphasized as the rest of the pattern you're doing here but they have the same emphasis, not to mention the entire map picks up in spacing instead of just staying the same after this
those are just some of the main points of issue (mainly with rhythm choice), I'm not going to go over the absolutely unnecessary spacing on patterns like 00:21:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this and 00:23:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this, just know that you'll probably have to nerf everything in this map in order for a BN to look at this