Who's this Jeffro? oh a random mapper *pops* =P j/k but now to serious stuff, yeah there's a few things you need to fix here so i have to pop, sorry
[Jeffro's Sora]01:19:828 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug
01:23:428 (1) - you can barely see the slider coming up since it's being covered by the spinner AND the Clear! from the previous spinner:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4160902:51:328 (2) - For the same reasons as ^
03:25:228 (3) - Hitcircle AND approachcircle are barely visible.
[WyndII's Tsubasa]02:26:728 (1,1,1) - NC these spinners to fix spinner bug.
02:47:278 (1) - ^
03:29:428 (1,1) - ^
[Yes' Sakura]01:57:928 (3) - Hitcircle AND approach circle barely visible.
Call me once the fixes are done and i'll rebubble
Edit: Rebubbled!~