Madoka2574 wrote:

Hello,from your modding queue
I have to say,when I firstly watched osu! play your map I soon fell in love with it.Good song and really nice map!The SVs are also pretty good in my eyes.

Start Beat!!

00:04:801 - 00:04:878 - I think you can add 2 notes.There are sounds and feels good good idea, added~
00:23:571 (23571|1,23571|2,24032|2,24032|1) - different pitch,so you'd better place them in different columns changed~
00:32:648 - For this part you can create pattern like these notes 01:51:724 (111724|3,111878|3,112032|2,112186|2,112340|1,112494|1) - Place some notes in the same column. done~
00:42:494 - triple done~
00:49:724 (49724|0,49724|1,49801|3,49801|2,49878|0,49878|1) - Ctrl+H done~
00:52:263 (52263|2,52263|3,52878|2,52878|3) - single and 00:52:340 (52340|1,52340|0) - triple done~
00:56:955 (56955|1) - Delete,no snare here deleted~
01:17:494 (77494|0,77494|1) - single done~
01:21:878 - Triple for cymbal done~
01:25:109 - 01:25:417 - Why suddenly double?You didn't use double in previous parts and I can't see any difference here ah, my bad, fixed~
01:38:955 (98955|1,98955|0) - Not here but here 01:39:032 - fixed~
01:48:955 - Add a note in column 3 added~
02:15:724 - You can add a LN from here to 02:16:032 - for vocal sound I'll skip this vocal sound..
02:45:263 (165263|0,165263|2,165340|1,165340|3,165417|0,165417|2,165494|1,165494|3,165571|2,165571|0) - Change this pettern like this 00:59:263 (59263|1,59263|0,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1,59494|2,59494|3,59571|1,59571|0) - Since the current one is more difficult(no need to use it in this map I suppose) and you never use it in other parts. fixed~
02:45:571 - Triple for cymbal done~
02:50:494 - triple done~
From 02:53:571 - to 02:55:109 - Just see this https://puu.sh/xRcRA/479dd0613d.png done~
03:02:801 - triple done~
03:16:878 - Add a note here like the beginning done~
03:20:032 - triple here,maybe like this https://puu.sh/xRd1e/65f39b1979.png done~
03:33:417 - Add a note in column 1 added~
03:37:263 - You may add a note in column 3 but the cymbal is not so loud so it's up to you I'll keep this double..
03:47:109 - are you sure about this stream? I can't hear so many sounds It's guitar sound, I re-arranged this
04:04:032 (244032|1,244032|3,244340|3,244340|1,244648|1,244648|3) - Try to place them in different columns,and including 04:05:263 (245263|1,245571|1,245878|1,246186|1,246494|1) - you have 9 notes in column 2! fixed~
04:22:801 - triple done~
04:32:648 - I always suggest triple here but it is not a must,sometimes double would be better,I just point them out.you can decide by yourself.However if there is a really clear cymbal sound I still advise triple.Additionally pay attention to consistency. I'll make it triple~
04:37:571 - triple done~
04:40:032 - triple done~
04:44:955 - triple done~
04:54:340 - triple done~
04:59:263 - triple,but it seems fine with double here XD I think i'll make it triple :3
05:07:109 - double done~

Sorry for simple mod but I love the song.

Shot a star and add as fav.

Good luck for ranking!

FAMoss wrote:

modreq
short mod

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00:00:648 (648|3) - suara panjang kenapa ga tambahin aja sampe 00:02:186 -
00:01:263 - tambahin note di 1
00:01:878 - tambahin note di 2
00:03:109 (3109|0) - ln sampe 00:04:648 -
00:03:724 - tambahin note di 4
00:04:340 - tambahin note di 3
00:05:263 - tambahin note di 4
00:05:417 (5417|0) - geser ke 3
00:05:571 (5571|2) - geser ke 1
00:05:571 (5571|1) - jadiin ln sampe 00:07:109 -
00:06:801 - tambah note di 1
00:06:186 - note di 4
00:08:032 (8032|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:08:955 -
00:08:648 - note di 1
delete ini 00:07:263 (7263|1) - nope, ini suara kick nya lbih keras, jadi w bikin double
^ 00:09:263 (9263|0) - ^
^ 00:09:724 (9724|3) - ^
*dari awal sampe 00:10:494 - Itu emang sengaja gak dibikin LN & gak dikasih note buat suara piano, w cuma ngambil suara drumnya aja..
00:20:801 (20801|2) - ke 2 done~
delete ini 00:20:955 (20955|1) - removed~
^ 00:21:571 (21571|2) - ^
^ 00:22:186 (22186|1) - ^
delete ini 02:00:955 (120955|0) - karena disini ga ada bunyi hentakan Ini dibikin triple karna suara snare, lbih keras dri suara kick sbelumnya (double)
^ 02:13:571 (133571|3) - kalo ini dibikin triple karna ada suara symbalnya..

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)


Columns:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

• 

1. 00:20:955 (20955|1) - Move to the column 1. I think i'll keep it
2. 02:12:801 (132801|1) - ^ done~
3. 02:13:109 (133109|2) - Move to the column 4. I think i'll keep it
4. 02:14:494 (134494|2) - Move to the column 2. I'll keep it for consistency with 02:16:955 (136955|1) -
5. 03:14:532 (194532|0) - Move to 03:14:494 - ah my bad, fixed~
6. 03:14:955 (194955|1,195109|2) - Ctrl G. done~
7. 03:57:263 (237263|2) - Move to the column 2. nope, 'cause the sound same as 03:57:417 (237417|2) -
8. 04:32:032 (272032|1) - Move to the column 4. done~
9. 04:51:724 (291724|0) - Move to the column 4 and then Ctrl G 04:51:878 (291878|1,292032|2) - done~

Amazing map! Hope this can help you :33, Good Luck!

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound done : https://puu.sh/xUclz/e52e519720.rar

I am replacing your soft clap and soft whistle.
Not using normal sampleset.

DL new version of Magic Copy in my thread to copy hitsound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330

Mentholzzz wrote:

Hello from my modding queue.

"Zombie~"

00:00:648 - triple here done~
00:12:878 (12878|0,12955|0) - this is evil, pls remove 00:12:878 (12878|0) - removed~
00:44:186 (44186|1,44340|3) - swap column done~
00:46:648 (46648|2) - move to 1 done~
01:07:109 - just a suggestion but you can put quad here I'll keep it triple
00:44:955 - if u want to put SV here, delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) - or if not, make 00:45:109 - double. I delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) -
00:47:571 - add x0.5 sv here , change 00:47:878 - to x0.5 and add x1.0 at 00:48:032 - to make sv average x1.0 I think that's not comfort to play, so i'm not change it
00:50:032 - add x0.5 sv here
00:50:648 - ^
00:51:263 - ^
00:51:878 - ^
00:52:032 (52032|0) - put the tail at either 00:52:186 - or 00:52:263 - and put a note at 00:52:340 - I think this part are already ok
00:54:955 - , 00:57:417 - same as above ^
00:59:878 (59878|0) - move to 3 done~
01:06:571 - I suggest to add x1.5 sv here to make the note "bump" and 0.5x sv is pretty evil imo I think adding x1.5 at 01:06:571 - isn't good idea..
01:16:878 (76878|3,76955|3) - please delete this kind of pattern every part else in this map done~
01:41:494 - x1.4 sv here done~
02:16:032 - change this SV to x1.0 done~
02:18:648 - same as mentioned done~
02:19:263 - , 02:19:878 - , 02:20:494 - ^ done~
02:33:263 - why don't u map here, it should be triple here imo. wtf, what am i doing ?? my bad, fixed
03:32:340 - triple for crash the crash sound is to low, so i keep it double
03:38:648 - the average SV of this gap is (1.25+0.5x2)/3 = 0.75 i suggest to change 1.25 to 2 done~
03:39:263 - similar ^ done~
03:41:571 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304505 , maybe try smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304507 done~
03:52:032 - i think x0.7 is too slow, maybe change x0.7 , x0.8 , x0.9 to x0.79,x0.86 and x0.93 would be better done~
04:12:955 - this kiai are fun af i like this Thank you~ :3
05:01:776 (301776|0) - double here too done~

Maneh wrote:

guud map
up up

Hestia- wrote:

Bandori
[Start Beat!!]
It's good, only issues are a couple of the SVs.
00:01:263 - Add 3; optional notes
00:01:878 - Add 4
00:03:724 - Add 2
00:04:340 - Add 3
00:06:186 - Add 1
00:06:801 - Add 2
00:08:648 - Add 3
I map this part only on drum sounds..

00:32:417 - Change SV here to 0.7
00:47:648 - Move SV here to 00:47:724 -
01:05:878 - Change SV here to 0.55
fixed all~

01:13:878 - Add 23; There is noise but it might be overmapping if you add these... maybe move other things around and only add 1 note so there isn't so much jack spam. optional
01:18:801 - Add 23
01:21:263 - Add 23
01:23:724 - Add 23
01:28:648 - Add 23
Good idea, but I only add 1 note~

01:41:494 - Change SV to 1.3 done~
02:00:955 - This SV is good I like this too~
02:13:801 - Change SV to 1.45 done~

02:42:340 (162340|1) - Remove It's a kick, so I'll keep it
02:42:494 - Add 2 done~
02:47:417 - Add 23 only add single at 2

03:10:801 - Add 2
03:11:417 - Add 1
03:13:263 - Add 3
03:13:878 - Add 4
03:15:724 - Add 3
03:16:340 - Add 2
03:18:186 - Add 2
added all~

03:20:032 - Change SV to 0.94
03:22:494 - Change SV to 0.92
03:38:801 - Change SV to 0.65
03:39:340 - Change SV to 0.65
04:12:878 - Change SV to 1.25
fixed all~

04:48:340 - Add 23 only add single at 3
04:48:648 - Add 4 done~
04:50:417 - Add 4 added at 1
04:51:109 - Add 34 only add single at 4
04:52:263 - Add 4 added at 3
04:53:263 - Add 23 only add single at 4
04:53:571 - Add 34 only add single at 1

05:07:417 - Add 2 - mapping non drum noises lol
05:07:724 - Add 4
05:08:032 - Add 4
05:08:340 - Add 3
05:08:648 - Add 3
05:08:955 - Add 2
05:09:109 - Add 1
05:09:263 - Add 2
05:09:571 - Add 14
05:09:724 - Add 3
05:09:878 - Add 4
05:10:186 - Add 3
05:10:340 - Add 2
05:10:494 - Add 3
05:10:648 - Add 4
05:10:801 - Add 2
05:10:955 - Add 1
05:11:109 - Add 2
05:11:417 - Add 1
05:11:571 - Add 4
05:11:724 - Add 1
I just only mapping till 05:07:109 - :3

goodluck ~ !

[B A D] wrote:

M4M as requested at here
0|1|2|3

Start Beat!!

00:04:801 (4801|1) - Ghost note removed
01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) and 01:48:955 (108955|0,108955|3,108955|2) - They sound the same though 1 of them is a quad. Reduce it to a triple for this 01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) i decided it to quad, 'cause want to make it fun to play
02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|3,153878|0,154032|1,154032|0,154032|3) - These should be doubles since in the same part at 01:49:571 my bad, fixed~ (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) , you mapped it as doubles
03:08:340 (188340|2,188340|3,188340|0,188494|2,188494|0,188494|3) - ^ fixed too~
03:24:494 (204494|0) - The LN start at 03:24:340 I think the LN start at 03:24:494..
03:26:955 (206955|0) - Ghost note removed~
03:44:648 (224648|3) - Add a note here done~
From 03:47:109 to 03:51:109 - There are TONS of ghost notes here. Play at 25% to see if it is a ghost note or not re-arranged this
03:57:263 (237263|2,237417|2) - These sound aren't the same, move 03:57:417 (237417|2) to 3 ah you right, moved~
04:11:724 (251724|3,251724|2) - Make this a single done~
04:23:109 (263109|0,263263|0,263417|0,263571|0,263724|0) - Anchor here is unnecessary fixed~
04:24:340 (264340|3,264494|3,264648|3,264801|3,264955|3) - ^ ^
And the other anchors in this part too which I won't mention
04:52:032 (292032|1,292032|0) - Change to a triple done~
05:07:109 - I'd suggest you extend this part to the end of the song since there so much modders to suggest this, well, I mapped it till the end of the song~

Hope this help and gl for ranking

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

short mod

Modding

[4k]

1. 00:43:571 (43571|1) - ghost note not, a piano sound
   I think piano sound snap is 00:43:609 - here so Just delete is better It's a guitar sound..
   
2. 00:44:494 - where is double note here ? add notes 3 4
   00:44:186 (44186|3,44186|2) - like this it's same thing
   Ah I miss it, but I only put single here, 'cause the sound too low for double
   
   00:49:417 (49417|1,49417|0,49494|3,49494|2,49571|0,49571|1) - ^ It's like here
   
3. 00:52:263 (52263|2) - move to 2 and 00:52:340 (52340|1) - move to 3 done~
   
4. 02:21:571 - Add one more note :3 my bad, added~
   
5. 03:02:494 (182494|1,182494|3,182494|0,182801|0,182801|3,182801|1,183109|1,183109|0,183109|3) - you think it's sound for give you the same loud?
   hm I think 2, 3 ,2 or 3, 3, 2 (Notes number) it's better :3
   This is why I put 3,3,3 :
   03:02:494 (182494|0,182494|3,182494|1) - 3 note for snare
   03:02:801 (182801|0,182801|3,182801|2) - 2 note fore kick + 1 for crash, so i put 3 note
   03:03:109 (183109|1,183109|3,183109|0) - and 3 note for snare :3
   
6. 03:48:494 (228494|3,228494|2,228494|0,228571|1,228648|2,228724|3,228801|2,228878|1,228955|0,228955|3,228955|2,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3,229263|2,229263|0,229340|1,229417|2,229494|3) -
   I think it's have to could be better, Does not match the song
   change please Re-arranged, I hope now is better owo
   
7. 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2,233571|3,233724|2,233878|1,234186|2,234340|0,234494|3,234801|1,234955|0,235109|2,235417|2,235571|1,235724|3,236032|3,236186|1,236340|2,236648|1,236801|0,236955|2,237263|2,237417|3,237571|3,237878|1,238032|0,238186|3,238494|2,238648|0,238801|1,239109|2,239263|1,239417|3,239724|1,239878|0,240032|2,240340|3,240494|1) -
   This section would be better to follow the piano , I don't understand this note's mean
   But the truth is I follow the piano :"v
8. 05:07:417 (307417|2,307571|1,307724|3,308032|3,308186|1,308340|2,308648|2,308801|1,308955|3,309263|3,309417|1,309878|1,310032|0,310186|2,310494|2,310648|0,310801|1,311109|1,311263|0) - ^
   And have some ghost notes I just mapped piano sound which the sound not too low :3

I wish this map go to rank

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

Start Beat!!

00:47:417 (47417|2) - SV here should follow the previous one.
I can't tell the difference between them by listening to the music Ah you remind me for the unconsistency sv, I think 00:47:417 this part is better, so I fixed the previous sv :3

01:06:648 (66648|2) - SV here is so hard to play. I think this sv already fix

think it's ready for rank

AlisceaSparku wrote:

halo~ idk the format for our own queue LOL but anyway here you go

col 1/2/3/4
[Start Beat!!]

1. Since the map is mostly single notes anyway, I would increase the OD and HP to around 8.5 to 9 to discourage "keyboard mashing" and "PP map" I think you right, I change them to 8.5~
2. 00:00:648 - I'd recommend to add slowjams for this part as the start is quite "meh" to play considering there's an almost-two-second gap between the first drum roll to the next drum part. Otherwise, you can use LNs to additionally give more emphasis to the cymbals. Or another suggestion, put a single note for the piano sounds as well, like how you mapped 03:15:724 fixed, i did it like 03:15:724 (195724|2https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=reply&f=10&t=641298#,196340|1) - . xD
3. 00:03:109 - ^same suggestion fixed~
4. 00:05:571 - ^same suggestion fixed~
5. 00:08:032 - ^same suggestion fixed~
6. 00:07:417 - the hand here must have a different note structure from 00:08:032 - . because one is for snare and one is for cymbal. Here's a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386590 that's better!
7. 00:12:801 - this part seems like a kick will play three times, so I advise to make a hand for the cymbal sound. (and of course, avoiding an accidental minijack) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386606 . Additional note, this is the only place where the cymbal is mapped only with a double (focusing on the intro only) fixed it~
8. 00:26:801 - I advise you to rearrange this part into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386621 , so that its easily distinguishable that the 1/2 note represents a different sound. yes i like it
9. 00:36:801 - not sure if this is meant but I think one note should go to col. 1 (no such pattern was repeated in the same section anyway) done~
10. 01:39:032 (99032|3,99109|3) - please try to avoid things like this. (its actually pretty annoying to hit, well if you consider this as fun/challenging, then you may not remove the minijack.) Otherwise, you can remove 01:39:032 (99032|3) - . YES, thank you for fix this, that's better~
11. 02:55:340 (175340|3) - put the note to 02:55:417 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
12. 03:29:801 (209801|0) - put the note to 03:29:878 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
13. 03:32:801 - I'm pretty sure an SV can be inserted here. I think this better without sv :3
14. 03:32:801 (212801|2,212801|1) - This has different pitch than 03:33:109 (213109|2,213109|1) - (if you also consider the piano, which is very very audible), so I recommend you make a mirror pattern for this one. Here's an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386668 fixed~
15. 03:44:571 (224571|3,224648|3) - fixed xD
16. 03:57:417 (237417|3,237571|3) - not sure why these are in the same column. the only same sound I hear is already mapped with 03:56:955 (236955|2,237263|2) - . ah you right, moved
17. 04:21:724 (261724|0) - put it to col. 3 instead so it's not -too heavy- for the left hand. that's better
18. 04:22:724 (262724|3) - put this note to 04:22:801 - to put emphasis on the cymbal sound instead. fixed~
19. 04:44:878 (284878|3,284955|3) - yes, this is unhealthy imo sorry, fixed xD
20. 05:07:032 (307032|3) - put to 05:07:109 - instead to put emphasis on the cymbals. i think i missed quite a lot of these. ups, fixed~
21. 05:07:571 (307571|1) - shouldn't this be at 05:07:878 - , and 05:08:186 (308186|1) - at 05:08:494 - instead? this goes until the piano section ends so, yes. Ahh my bad, you rigth xD fixed all of that~

solid map, there's not much errors
-the whole map lacks creative layering (LN's + SN's patterns), which results in repetitive patterns. there are a lot of instruments you can map using LN's, so try to look out for those c: (in my opinion, it's quite bland to press doubles and hands for almost the whole song, so yes)

good luck~

• 
  [Start Beat!!]

1. Kamu punya banyak hitsound yang tidak digunakan dalam map ini (unused hitsound) https://puu.sh/y99hQ/13ebc7f5ba.png hapus aja kalo nggk dipakai
   
   
2. 00:00:648 - 00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - lebih cocok kalau dikasih LN aja disini, karena melodi gitar nya (long sound) itu strong banget
3. 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - aku kurang mengerti konsep kamu kenapa drum disini cuma dikasih satu note aja, sementara suara tsb lebih keras (menghentak) daripada kick di part ini 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) -
4. 00:17:417 (17417|3) - sama seperti diatas ^
5. 00:18:801 - akan lebih menarik kalau kamu kasih LN untuk saura long bass nya, coba divariasikan lagi supaya nantinya map kamu tidak terlalu "boring" dimainkan
6. 00:25:571 (25571|2,25878|2,26186|2) - seharusnya berada di kolom 2 atau 4, karena pola nya seharusnya konsisten sama seperti sebelumnya 00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) -
7. 00:28:032 (28032|0,28340|0,28648|0,28955|0) - hmmm, coba pindah ke kolom yang lain deh, soalnya kamu tidak mengulang penempatan pattern seperti ini pada bagian sebelum/sesudahnya . . . contoh 00:24:032 - 00:25:263 - 00:29:263 -
8. 00:32:801 (32801|2,32955|2) - mungkin ada bagusnya dibedakan saja kolomnya, karena pada interval berikutnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, contohnya 00:34:032 (34032|0,34186|1) - 00:35:263 (35263|3,35417|2) - dan seterusnya
9. 00:41:417 (41417|2,41571|2,41724|2) - sebelumnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, ada baiknya dikonsisten-kan penempatannya seperti ini saja https://puu.sh/y99Hl/92cb2480b6.png
10. 00:42:494 - aku punya saran yang lebih bagus supaya "feel" dari penekanan suara gitar pada part ini lebih terasa https://puu.sh/y99Kn/7ea703737f.jpg
11. 00:52:494 (52494|1) - pindah ke kolom 4 saja, untuk lebih konsisten dengan pattern pada part ini 00:52:955 - 00:53:571 - untuk jenis rhythm yang sama
12. 00:58:494 - coba ditukar saja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y99PE/162ef4df5d.jpg karena suara kick pada part ini 00:58:494 - tentu berbeda dengan drum (clap) pada bagian ini 00:58:186 - so, bagian double note nya tidak perlu dalam posisi sejajar
13. 00:59:494 - seharusnya bagian sini cukup dikasih satu note saja, karena suaranya jelas sekali lebih lemah dibandingkan pada part drum sound disini 00:59:263 (59263|0,59263|1,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1) - 00:59:571 (59571|0,59571|1,59648|2,59648|3,59724|0,59724|1) -
14. 01:01:724 - 01:02:032 - bukankah 2 bagian ini mempunyai suara yang sama kerasnya ? hmmm, coba kamu re-arrange seperti ini saja http://puu.sh/y99VT/bd989114ab.jpg
15. 01:05:186 - seharusnya 3 notes tersebut bisa dimulai dari sini
16. 01:06:648 - well, menurutku lebih pas (cocok) seperti ini patternnya http://puu.sh/y99Zr/96a95d4ab8.jpg
17. 01:13:724 (73724|1,73878|1) - jujur saya, aku tidak mendengar suara apapun yang mengharuskan part ini dikasih 1/2 jack (baik suara yang sejenis maupun suara yang mirip) sebaiknya dibedakan saja penempatan kolomnya
18. 01:18:648 (78648|1,78801|1) - sama seperti diatas ^
19. 01:21:109 (81109|2,81263|2) - 01:23:571 (83571|1,83724|1) - ^
20. Hmmm kok kalo dirasa polanya berulang-ulang ya ? aku curiga ini pattern copy paste terus Ctrl H / Ctrl G, dan jujur sih agak "boring" pada bagian reff ini, karena kamu hanya fokus terhadap satu suara drum aja dan mengabaikan suara instrumen lainnya (seperti gitar, vocal, dsb) kalau kamu memang berniat ingin membuat map yang spesial dan bukan sekedar monoton untuk di rank, coba lebih diberi kesempatan lagi untuk mapping pada intrumen lainnya dan bikin variasi lebih banyak lagi
21. 01:39:417 (99417|1,99571|1,99724|1,99724|2,99878|2,99878|1,100032|2,100186|2,100340|2) - mungkin hal seperti ini agak berlebihan, coba lebih ditata lagi
22. 01:50:186 - please give some respect to this important guitar sound hehe http://puu.sh/y9aeS/a56f62b1e3.jpg
23. 02:01:263 - emmm gimana yah, mulai dari timing sana sampai 02:11:109 - anchor sama 1/2 jack nya kok agak kurang beraturan yah ? maksudnya tidak terfokus sama penekanan gitar, ataupun suara tertentu gitu, contohnya kalo penekanan pada gitar https://puu.sh/y9aDU/67568f7fc9.jpg
24. 02:14:955 (134955|2) - pindah ke kolom 2 supaya tidak terlalu ditekan pada tangan kanan, keep it balance as well
25. 02:15:878 - 02:15:955 - ketinggalan note buat suara drum disini ? jelas banget loh suaranya
26. 02:17:263 - sama seperti mod di interval sebelumnya, keep it balance
27. 02:18:032 - ketinggalan note buat kick sound disini
28. 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0,143263|2,143263|3) - bukankah pada bagian ini memiliki suara yang sejenis/sama ? re-arrange aja ke kolom yang sama http://puu.sh/y9aNf/10e20d9de0.jpg
29. 02:25:109 - 02:25:417 - suaranya sama persis, kenapa berbeda jumlah notenya ? samakan aja
30. 02:35:724 - seandainya kamu lebih berani bermain dengan LN untuk gitarnya, mungkin akan seperti ini hasilnya https://puu.sh/y9aS8/2a989ea666.jpg buatlah variasi sebaik mungkin, berhubung ini juga map marathon (5 menitan lebih) ya nggak fair dong hampir 90% isinya drum semua berulang-ulang
31. 02:39:878 (159878|2,160032|2) - agak lebih berhati-hati aja dengan tipe pattern seperti ini, sama seperti mod pada bagian reff sebelumnya
32. i don't know why i feels like de ja vu here hahaha xD
33. 03:29:801 - agak sedih rasanya kalo piano se-spesial ini diabaikan dan kamu cuma ingin ngemap drum aja, ini coba aku kasih referensi untuk kombinasi piano sama drumnya https://puu.sh/y9b1E/a132c1f899.jpg http://puu.sh/y9b3Y/fc20efba68.jpg dan seterusnya
34. hmmm kayaknya cukup sampai disini aja dulu, intinya sih masalah terbesarmu adalah pada sisi variasi mapping dan konsistensi penempatan anchor dan 1/2 jack

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

M4M

• 
  [Start Beat!!]

1. Kamu punya banyak hitsound yang tidak digunakan dalam map ini (unused hitsound) https://puu.sh/y99hQ/13ebc7f5ba.png hapus aja kalo nggk dipakai
   Kalo untuk yg ditandai merah itu dipakai buat suara piano :3 sisanya baru dihapus, makasih udah ngingetin
   
   
2. 00:00:648 - 00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - lebih cocok kalau dikasih LN aja disini, karena melodi gitar nya (long sound) itu strong banget Karna banyak yg nyaranin sperti ini, jadinya ku tambahin LN deh
3. 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - aku kurang mengerti konsep kamu kenapa drum disini cuma dikasih satu note aja, sementara suara tsb lebih keras (menghentak) daripada kick di part ini 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - supaya lebih nyaman dimaininnya~
4. 00:17:417 (17417|3) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^
5. 00:18:801 - akan lebih menarik kalau kamu kasih LN untuk saura long bass nya, coba divariasikan lagi supaya nantinya map kamu tidak terlalu "boring" dimainkan sip, saya tambahin~
6. 00:25:571 (25571|2,25878|2,26186|2) - seharusnya berada di kolom 2 atau 4, karena pola nya seharusnya konsisten sama seperti sebelumnya 00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) - okee saya pindahin~
7. 00:28:032 (28032|0,28340|0,28648|0,28955|0) - hmmm, coba pindah ke kolom yang lain deh, soalnya kamu tidak mengulang penempatan pattern seperti ini pada bagian sebelum/sesudahnya . . . contoh 00:24:032 - 00:25:263 - 00:29:263 - oh iya yah, moved~
8. 00:32:801 (32801|2,32955|2) - mungkin ada bagusnya dibedakan saja kolomnya, karena pada interval berikutnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, contohnya 00:34:032 (34032|0,34186|1) - 00:35:263 (35263|3,35417|2) - dan seterusnya okee~
9. 00:41:417 (41417|2,41571|2,41724|2) - sebelumnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, ada baiknya dikonsisten-kan penempatannya seperti ini saja https://puu.sh/y99Hl/92cb2480b6.png ah iya, fixed~
10. 00:42:494 - aku punya saran yang lebih bagus supaya "feel" dari penekanan suara gitar pada part ini lebih terasa https://puu.sh/y99Kn/7ea703737f.jpg makasih sarannya, fixed~
11. 00:52:494 (52494|1) - pindah ke kolom 4 saja, untuk lebih konsisten dengan pattern pada part ini 00:52:955 - 00:53:571 - untuk jenis rhythm yang sama okee
12. 00:58:494 - coba ditukar saja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y99PE/162ef4df5d.jpg karena suara kick pada part ini 00:58:494 - tentu berbeda dengan drum (clap) pada bagian ini 00:58:186 - so, bagian double note nya tidak perlu dalam posisi sejajar ah iya, fixed
13. 00:59:494 - seharusnya bagian sini cukup dikasih satu note saja, karena suaranya jelas sekali lebih lemah dibandingkan pada part drum sound disini 00:59:263 (59263|0,59263|1,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1) - 00:59:571 (59571|0,59571|1,59648|2,59648|3,59724|0,59724|1) - wah bener, fixed
14. 01:01:724 - 01:02:032 - bukankah 2 bagian ini mempunyai suara yang sama kerasnya ? hmmm, coba kamu re-arrange seperti ini saja http://puu.sh/y99VT/bd989114ab.jpg donee~
15. 01:05:186 - seharusnya 3 notes tersebut bisa dimulai dari sini oh iya, fixed~~
16. 01:06:648 - well, menurutku lebih pas (cocok) seperti ini patternnya http://puu.sh/y99Zr/96a95d4ab8.jpg wah bener
17. 01:13:724 (73724|1,73878|1) - jujur saya, aku tidak mendengar suara apapun yang mengharuskan part ini dikasih 1/2 jack (baik suara yang sejenis maupun suara yang mirip) sebaiknya dibedakan saja penempatan kolomnya okee~
18. 01:18:648 (78648|1,78801|1) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^
19. 01:21:109 (81109|2,81263|2) - 01:23:571 (83571|1,83724|1) - ^
20. Hmmm kok kalo dirasa polanya berulang-ulang ya ? aku curiga ini pattern copy paste terus Ctrl H / Ctrl G, dan jujur sih agak "boring" pada bagian reff ini, karena kamu hanya fokus terhadap satu suara drum aja dan mengabaikan suara instrumen lainnya (seperti gitar, vocal, dsb) kalau kamu memang berniat ingin membuat map yang spesial dan bukan sekedar monoton untuk di rank, coba lebih diberi kesempatan lagi untuk mapping pada intrumen lainnya dan bikin variasi lebih banyak lagi iya sih ini hasil copas, ntar ku re-arranged deh :3
21. 01:39:417 (99417|1,99571|1,99724|1,99724|2,99878|2,99878|1,100032|2,100186|2,100340|2) - mungkin hal seperti ini agak berlebihan, coba lebih ditata lagi fixed~
22. 01:50:186 - please give some respect to this important guitar sound hehe http://puu.sh/y9aeS/a56f62b1e3.jpg oke donee~
23. 02:01:263 - emmm gimana yah, mulai dari timing sana sampai 02:11:109 - anchor sama 1/2 jack nya kok agak kurang beraturan yah ? maksudnya tidak terfokus sama penekanan gitar, ataupun suara tertentu gitu, contohnya kalo penekanan pada gitar https://puu.sh/y9aDU/67568f7fc9.jpg oh iya berantakan juga ya xD oke aku re-arranged
24. 02:14:955 (134955|2) - pindah ke kolom 2 supaya tidak terlalu ditekan pada tangan kanan, keep it balance as well donee~
25. 02:15:878 - 02:15:955 - ketinggalan note buat suara drum disini ? jelas banget loh suaranya oh iya kelewat xD
26. 02:17:263 - sama seperti mod di interval sebelumnya, keep it balance okee~
27. 02:18:032 - ketinggalan note buat kick sound disini kelewat lagi xD
28. 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0,143263|2,143263|3) - bukankah pada bagian ini memiliki suara yang sejenis/sama ? re-arrange aja ke kolom yang sama http://puu.sh/y9aNf/10e20d9de0.jpg oke donee~
29. 02:25:109 - 02:25:417 - suaranya sama persis, kenapa berbeda jumlah notenya ? samakan aja oh iya, kusamain jadi single~
30. 02:35:724 - seandainya kamu lebih berani bermain dengan LN untuk gitarnya, mungkin akan seperti ini hasilnya https://puu.sh/y9aS8/2a989ea666.jpg buatlah variasi sebaik mungkin, berhubung ini juga map marathon (5 menitan lebih) ya nggak fair dong hampir 90% isinya drum semua berulang-ulang iya nanti ku re-arrange beberapa part :3
31. 02:39:878 (159878|2,160032|2) - agak lebih berhati-hati aja dengan tipe pattern seperti ini, sama seperti mod pada bagian reff sebelumnya okee :3
32. i don't know why i feels like de ja vu here hahaha xD
33. 03:29:801 - agak sedih rasanya kalo piano se-spesial ini diabaikan dan kamu cuma ingin ngemap drum aja, ini coba aku kasih referensi untuk kombinasi piano sama drumnya https://puu.sh/y9b1E/a132c1f899.jpg http://puu.sh/y9b3Y/fc20efba68.jpg dan seterusnya iya juga sih :'v ntar kutambahin terusannya :3
34. hmmm kayaknya cukup sampai disini aja dulu, intinya sih masalah terbesarmu adalah pada sisi variasi mapping dan konsistensi penempatan anchor dan 1/2 jack

Goodluck ya
oh iya, ditunggu ya mod kamu di map aku

Navyzeap09 wrote:

The map is perfect but I think something is missing <just my personal look tho>
I did not feel the song slowing down in this part maybe you should put SV's here to make the map feel more that it is slowing down then gradually speeding up again

BTW it's in this part
03:10:186 - This part i think needs an SV which is quoted at the bottom ^_^
03:29:878 - Up to here

And also I think the note patterns are a bit repetitive (like the pattern you used in 04:35:724 - 04:38:494 and in 01:20:032 - 01:20:955

By the way I think this song has a great potential to be ranked
Keep up the good work ^_^

SV's in

59. Offset: 190,186ms BPM: Inherited (0.65x)
60. Offset: 200,032ms BPM: Inherited (0.80x)
61. Offset: 204,955ms BPM: Inherited (0.90x)
62. Offset: 207,417ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
63. Offset: 207,724ms BPM: Inherited (1.05x)
64. Offset: 207,878ms BPM: Inherited (1.10x)
65. Offset: 208,186ms BPM: Inherited (1.15x)
66. Offset: 208,494ms BPM: Inherited (1.20x)
67. Offset: 209,263ms BPM: Inherited (1.25x)
68. Offset: 209,878ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

to save you time just copy this in the timing points in the osu go to files the open osu in notepad

190186,-153.846153846154,4,2,1,70,0,0
200032,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,0
204955,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
207417,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
207724,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,70,0,0
207878,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,70,0,0
208186,-80,4,2,1,70,0,0
208494,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,70,0,0
209263,-74.0740740740741,4,2,1,70,0,0

Navyzeap09 wrote:

Hehe I think you forgot to remove the SV's here 03:21:571 (201571|0) and 03:22:494 (202494|2) - here the 0.9 and 1.0x
and also the timing points are doubled in the 03:20:032 (200032|1)

deadbill wrote:

open AImod, it says that the kiai time is too much

00:59:494 - add a note .-. no, this one is lower sound than note before and after..
01:04:801 - add a note .-. this ine I follow the guitar sound

these LNs feel out of place, what are you referring to?
02:35:724 (155724|3,156340|0,156955|2,157571|1) - that LN is for piano sound, I add that to make a variation pattern
02:40:648 (160648|2,161263|1,161878|3,162494|0) - ^
also for the later sections.

just a consideration, you might want to map the melody accordingly instead of placing those LNs

03:20:032 (200032|1,200032|0,200340|1,200340|0,200648|0,200648|1,200955|0,200955|1,201263|1,201263|0,201571|1,201571|0) - I think for this section I just follow the kicks
03:22:494 (202494|3,202494|2,202801|2,202801|3,203109|3,203109|2,203417|2,203417|3,203724|3,203724|2,204032|2,204032|3,204340|3,204340|2,204648|3,204648|2) - ^
03:24:955 (204955|1,204955|2,205263|2,205263|1,205571|1,205571|2,205878|1,205878|2,206186|1,206186|2,206494|2,206494|1,206801|2,206801|1) -
shuffle please =_= done~~

03:27:724 (207724|2,207878|1,208032|0,208186|1,208340|2,208494|3) -
as refer to what? for guitar sounds~

03:29:878 - dat sudden usage of LNs for piano melody... why u no use those for all of piano melody? .-.
I don't know how to combine LN with pattern in this section 03:37:878 - 03:38:417 - , that's why I just use LN till 03:37:263 (217263|0) - qwq


03:52:032 - you already have the piano samples why u no apply them here? ;w; I want, but I can't found a piano chord, I'm not a pianist qwq
also 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2) -
as refer to what? the piano melodies for this section are using 1/2, because of that, the pattern feels really out of place ah, my bad, fixed~

04:11:724 - add a note .-. nope, the last one should be single, just try play with 25% speed then you will understand :3
04:56:032 - add a note .-. ah, I missed that, done~

05:07:109 - same issue with 03:52:032 - fixed too~~

thats all goodluck o/

riunosk wrote:

helo
from queue 1234
i almost thought this was lovelive and wanted to slap myself

start beat sounds like lovelive for some reason

00:07:417 (7417|1,7417|3,7417|0) - this sound has 2 different snaps, one on 1/4 and the other on 1/8 fixed~
01:05:878 (65878|3,65878|1,65878|0,65878|2) - this sounds very similar to the previous triples, why is this a quad? I decided make that quad at every part like that, 'cause to make it more fun
01:16:494 (76494|1,76648|1,76801|1,76955|1) - anchor fixed~
01:40:340 (100340|3,100340|1,100340|0,100340|2) - same as before
02:18:494 - missing note for kick? this sound is lower than 02:19:724, so I make it single
02:19:109 - ^ ^
02:33:724 (153724|0,153878|0,154032|0,154186|0,154340|0,154494|0) - pretty long anchor fixed~
02:34:494 (154494|2,154494|0,154494|1,154494|3) - hnnngnrghrnh
02:59:417 (179417|0,179571|0,179724|0,179878|0) - anchor fixed~
03:03:878 - theres a sound here ah I missed that, added~
03:08:955 (188955|3,188955|1,188955|0,188955|2) - iasjdoaisjd
good chart

gud luk for renk

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM Request from my modding queue

4K:1|2|3|4

[Start Beat!!]

1. 00:04:878 (4878|1) - Even though here is indeed a sound, I think it is too weak here compared to 00:04:955 (4955|2,5109|1,5263|0,5417|1) - , so maybe deleting it would make the patterns look more neat. ah you right, removed~
2. 00:20:340 - to 00:22:801 - You are focusing on piano sounds here, but how about considering the pitch relavancy as well? You can remake the patterns here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522584 done~
3. 00:26:955 (26955|2) - I know this is for the piano sound, but it is also too weak here, which also breaks some of the patterns that you intend to follow around this section. Deleting it would make your patterns look more consistent and neat too. I think to keep this, is better :3
4. I don't really see any reason you need to stack 01:13:878 (73878|2,74032|2) - here. Instead I think such pattern would follow with the music well: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522616 (Just an example). fixed~
5. 01:16:648 (76648|1,76648|0,76724|3,76724|2,76801|0,76801|1) - and 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - are basically the same types of sound with similar volumes, so I think for 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - you may want to double them, and rearrange in a way like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522625 done~
6. 01:18:801 (78801|2,78955|2) - The same stack problem as I mentioned in 01:13:878 (73878|2,74032|2) -, correct here too if you apply my previous mods. yes, fixed~
7. 01:21:263 (81263|1,81417|1) - 01:23:724 (83724|2,83878|2) - Same as above yea~
8. 01:25:109 (85109|0,85186|1,85263|2,85263|3,85417|3,85494|2,85571|0,85571|1) - I would suggest to double all of them too, following the idea in 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - Only one difference here is not to double the note on 01:25:417 - since there is no drum on this line. okay done~
9. 01:28:494 (88494|2,88648|2) - You don't need stack here too. The idea is for this 01:28:648 (88648|2) - sound it has no particularly similar element as 01:28:494 (88494|2,88494|3) - fixed~
10. 01:36:648 - to 01:39:109 - Why not have some variation on the patterns? Try this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522658 You don't need to worry too much about longer stacks here since here the impacts of the drums are really strong, and it is indeed ok for you to make some challenge for the players, and stacks here can be reasonable to put. do that~
11. 01:39:417 - to 01:40:340 - Is there any perceived volume changes between the sounds you put with doubles and those with triples? I don't think so, so why not just make all of them into triple notes, which help with the consistency of note use here? fixed~
12. 01:42:801 (102801|0,102801|1,102955|1,102955|2,103109|3,103109|2,103109|0) - It will be much better to do a ctrl+h here, so you can get rid of three exactly same patterns here. 01:45:263 (105263|2,105263|3,105417|1,105417|2,105571|3,105571|1,105571|0) - and here too. I know you are doing some kind of reflections of the patterns (three in a group), but repeating one certain patterns continuously for three times indeed makes it boring to some players, and I don't hear any elements that will make a huge difference if you do ctrl+h for these two. okay done~
13. 01:46:494 - to 01:48:340 - You were using one col1&2 doubles, one col2&3 doubles and two col2&4 doubles, which makes me feel like the patterns are kinda biased on col2, and indeed you are doing some 4-note stacks here that you used to prevent in previous patterns here. Why not just do some simple patterns like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522711 fixed it~
14. 01:49:571 (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3,109878|0,109878|1,109878|3,110032|1,110032|3,110032|0) - I think these four sounds have the same volume, and are indeed stronger than previous sounds, so add one for each of 01:49:571 (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) - on col3 to make two triple notes here, keeping the consistency of the amount of note used here. ah that's right, fixed~
15. 01:50:955 (110955|2,111109|2,111263|2) - This 3-note stack can be easily avoided by rearranging in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522732 done~
16. 01:57:571 - to 01:58:801 - the patterns are biased to col1 and col4, with 4 and 5 notes on each but only 3 on col2 and 2 on col3.I prefer some balanced patterns like 01:54:648 (114648|3,114801|2,114801|0,114955|1,115109|3,115109|2) - or you can rearrange in a different way to balance them. done, I change the pattern~
17. 02:12:494 (132494|0,132571|1,132648|3,132648|2) - Here these three notes have exactly the same volume, so I prefer to have 02:12:494 (132494|0,132571|1) - appear as double notes. done~
18. 02:14:340 (134340|3,134494|2,134648|3) - What are you following here? I don't quite hear any drums, but only some unclear guitar sounds and vocals, but I don't think you need to follow vocals here. In my opinion, deleting 02:14:340 (134340|3,134648|3) - these two notes would make your patterns still focus on the drums. I follow the vocal here, and i think i will keep it like that :3
19. 02:26:648 (146648|0,146801|1,146955|0) - Here is the same idea as above, deleting 02:26:648 (146648|0,146955|0) - will give you a better focus. keep it too..
20. 02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|0,154032|0,154032|1) - Make these double notes into triple notes too. The idea is to have same amount of note used for similar volume, and from 02:33:878 - the sounds are indeed keeping at the loudest volume, that you used to perceive it in 01:05:263 - yess~
21. 02:40:032 (160032|1,160186|1) - The stack here is unnecessary, and the idea is mentioned above in 01:28:494 (88494|2,88648|2) - fixed~
22. 02:44:186 (164186|3,164263|2,164340|1,164340|0) - It is better to make all into double notes since they are with the same volume. done~
23. 02:49:878 (169878|2,170032|2) - Avoid the stack here too. okay~
24. 02:52:801 (172801|1,172878|2) - What kind of drums are you following here? I don't even hear any drums, but cymbals only, which you used to ignore. there's kick sounds here :3
25. 02:53:724 (173724|0,173801|1,173878|2,173878|3,174032|3,174109|2,174186|0,174186|1) - Make all of them into double notes too, following the same idea as my suggestion for 02:44:186 (164186|3,164263|2,164340|1,164340|0) - yess~
26. 02:57:263 - I think you used to put a single note for this kind of rhythm, so maybe one here too. ah i missed it!
27. 03:00:263 (180263|1) - I don't really hear any clear new sound here (drums,cymbals, etc.) so I prefer you to delete it since it represents nothing for me. removed~
28. 03:07:109 - to 03:07:724 - you are reverting the flow of patterns here, but I prefer you to still keep the same since they are still an extension of this section of drums. Try this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522871 done~
29. 03:08:032 - to 03:08:801 - I tried my best but I still can't hear any volume difference between sounds with doubles and with triples. I think it is better for you to put triple notes for all of them since for me they are basically the same sounds with the same volume. fixed it~
30. 03:10:186 - 03:12:648 - 03:15:109 - You can have some LNs from these lines that last for one whole bar, just like what you did in the very beginning of this map. donee~
31. 03:22:340 (202340|0,202340|1) - I think this sound is much weaker than 03:22:032 (202032|1,202032|3,202186|2,202186|0) - , so a single note is enough. done~
32. 03:27:724 - 03:28:032 - 03:28:340 - You can have double notes on these lines to express the drums on them, making some differences with other single notes here. okayy~
33. 03:34:801 (214801|3) - I think you need to cut this LNs into two LNs, one from 03:34:801 - to 03:35:109 - and the other from 03:35:109 - to 03:35:263 - , because the piano ound has a percussion here. donee~
34. 03:38:263 - to 03:38:494 - the pattern of 1212 is a little bit unbalanced. Try this way to rearrange then：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522904 fixed~
35. 03:39:571 (219571|2,219648|1) - These two notes, in my opinion, are strong enough to put with double notes, comapared to 03:19:878 (199878|1,199955|2) - okayy~
36. 03:40:186 (220186|0,220263|1) - 03:41:417 (221417|0) - 03:42:648 (222648|3) - I can be sure that they are just ghost notes. Delete them to make your patterns flow with the music better. kick douns here uwu
37. 03:47:109 (227109|0,227109|3,227186|2,227263|1,227340|0) - 03:48:032 (228032|0,228032|3,228109|1,228186|2,228263|3) - 03:48:955 (228955|2,228955|0,228955|3,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3) - 03:49:571 (229571|0,229571|3,229571|1,229648|2,229724|1,229801|0) - Are these dump stuff or what? I don't see what sounds you are following. The solution for them is: delete 03:47:186 (227186|2,227263|1,227340|0,228109|1,228186|2,228263|3,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3) - and 03:49:648 (229648|2) - and you can see here 03:49:724 (229724|1,229801|0) - have two strong drum sounds, so make them into doubles like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522930. If you feel that after deleting those notes it is too empty, you may add 1/1 LNs on 03:47:109 - 03:47:571 - 03:48:032 - 03:48:955 - and 03:49:263 - for the guitar sounds. Is it clear? the actually thos note are for guitar, so in this part I mix the drum sound and guitar sounds~ :3
38. 04:10:494 - to 04:11:724 - I don't think chordtrills here express the music well. Why not try some creative ways, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522943.In this way you can even represent the increasing volume of the drums. I think I will keep it like that, that's good enough :3
39. 04:12:955 - to 04:32:648 - The patterns are not wrong, but they are indeed too generic for me. You are only focusing on the drums here, but they seldom have variations, so it will be a trouble for you to only pay attention to them. A solution for you is to also give some focus on vocals by changing some of the normal notes into short LNs that represent the vocals. You may have to reduce some of the notes but that is ok, since you are making this different but not just same patterns for each bar. I just do one bar for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522970. Doesn't it looks more creative and fun to play? In those part I decide to only mapping drum sound only, if I follow vocals too the pattern be too hard to play, that's not fun for mid player qwq
40. 04:37:186 - You miss a note here, since the roll of 04:37:263 (277263|3,277340|2,277417|1,277494|0) - actually starts from 04:37:109 - missed it!
41. 04:38:032 (278032|0,280494|0,280571|1) - They are ghost notes with no sounds. Delete them if you agree with me. yes you right!, removed~
42. 04:42:494 - to 04:44:955 - You may also try the way I linked to you before: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522658, and the idea is the same as 01:36:648 - to 01:39:109 - fixed~
43. 04:45:263 - to 04:46:186 - add one more note for each line, which keeps consistent with the patterns like from 01:39:417 - to 01:40:340 - (which I assume that you have change them with my previous mod to all triple notes except for the last quadraple.) yesss~
44. 04:48:340 (288340|2,288494|2) - No need to stack here, and the idea is the same as 02:40:032 (160032|1,160186|1) - fixed~
45. 04:51:571 (291571|1,291878|2) - I think these two notes are sufficient to be double notes, which has similar volume as 04:52:955 (292955|2,292955|1,293109|0,293109|1) - that you put with doubles. fixeed~~
46. 04:56:955 (296955|2) - It is better to put this to col1 to avoid the 3-note stack here, and the patterns can be more balanced too. moved~
47. 05:00:109 (300109|1) - There is no drum on this line, so delete this note. removed~
48. 05:07:263 - 05:07:878 - To keep consistent with the rhythm of piano sounds after 05:08:340 - , you can add one more note on these two lines, where the piano sounds, maybe a little bit weaker, can be still heard. donee~~
49. 05:13:263 (313263|1) - I prefer this to be on col1, which may balance for both hands.
50. I would like to say that this map is nice when considering the mistakes inside. You are mostly on the right track of following the drums, discerning them correctly with doubles and triples, but till the end kiai you are emphasizing them too much, and another catchy element of the music, vocals, are mostly ignored. If I am going to map this, I will be following the vocals whenever available. Rices only will be just too generic for some parts, and I do think noodles for the vocals will help you a lot in improving the map to have more creativity.

I love this song <3, and I am gonna play BanG Dream soon. Good luck and hope my mods help with this map!

Rivals_7 wrote:

SVs is so damn triggerring me on so many levels
gotta drop a mod in a few days

Rivals_7 wrote:

quick maths

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Basic Reference:
• Y = average of an SV sequence
• S1 = Starting SV
• S2 = Ending SV
• U = Units (counted by snaps)
• U1 = Total number of units / lines
• U2 = Remaining number of units / lines
• N = Normalizing SV

Finding average SV of a sequence
(S1 × U + S2 × U) ÷ U1 = Y

Finding the secondary SV when given the average SV, total units, and initial SV
(U1 – S1) ÷ U2 = S2
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00:32:340 - 02:00:955
((2,05 x 1) + (0,7 x 4)) : 5 = 0,97
its actually near the 1x point but the distance is 5 Lines instead of 4. in which your 1x at - 00:32:724 should be ended at - 00:32:648 - (oh yeah my mistakes, fixed it). and its affecting the readability where everyone expect the scrool will get back to 1 at - 00:32:648 -
if you insist with keeping the 2,05, the 2nd SV should be
(4 - 2,05) : 4 = 0,48
or else you can fiind a work around by doing math magic. I'll make it x2.5 & x0.5 for this part

00:45:186 - honestly dont know why is there a 1,5x speedup. for a challenge? its kinda annoying
you can do something like:
00:44:955 - 00:45:109 - 1,5x
00:45:032 - 00:45:186 - 0,5x
00:45:263 - 1x
half-half method stuff. ((1,5 x 1) + (0,5 x 1)) : 2 = 1 that's a great solution, apply this~

01:06:801 (66801|1) - somehow you managed to have those SVs on 1x average

02:13:571 - probably the same thing as - 00:45:186 - but for the variation thing, would be pretty neat if the SV goes:
0,25 -> 0,75 -> 1,25 -> 1,75 -> 1x (1/4 snaps) great, fixed~

03:27:724 - No. Speedup. Ever. Tell me, can you even play this section without a miss? everyone in high scrool speed (30+) will not be happy about this. remove the speed up, I'll remember that, thanks~

03:38:494 - idk why those SV looks so randomly placed outta nowhere. a Half- half method should work. (or do the math) I change that to x2.5 & x0.5~

04:12:648 - a good place to represent a gradual speedup like i said at - 02:13:571 you right!

All the SVs suggestion could work up on anywhere else. lazy to mention them all. you should know it i guess

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pattern wise....... got no idea. but not that i call its good, there could be so much i could mention. but would rather not since it'll be subjective anyway.

the only thing bothering is the last kiai
04:12:955 (252955|0,253109|0,253263|0) - 04:13:571 (253571|3,253724|3,253878|3) - 04:14:186 (254186|0,254340|0,254494|0) - 04:14:801 (254801|3,254955|3,255109|3) -
did you just copasta this? also the stacks is..... somehow meh. I decided to make the pattern like that, but if that's a problem, I changed it~ thanks for remember me
you can easily avoid those. ex:



04:51:878 (291878|3,292032|3,292186|3,292340|3) - Oops xD fixed it~

DeleT
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Aight GL fam o/

Litharrale wrote:

mod for star beat

I am Lith

I have been here before

your bg sucks can you tell what's wrong in bg ?

1|2|3|4

~my poem

anyway on to the actual mod

Your hitnormal is silent, this is unrankable removed the hitnormal costum

You have duplicate green lines Rip, mybad @-@ fixed


I saw rivals checked the SV so I wont do the math on it and just assume it's ok

00:45:109 (45109|2) - These notes in these SVs (not just this SV) are really gay to hit removed the note

03:26:494 (206494|2) - The slowjam here is weird, why does it go back to 1x in this specific spot? why does it speed up then slow back down? Why doesn't it increase linearly? god, my bad, fixed with move it to 03:27:417 -

04:12:955 (252955|2) - This SV is impossible to predict, doesn't help the average isnt 1 change it with 25 - 50 - 75 - 90. does it fit ?

00:07:571 (7571|2,7878|0) - these two sounds are similar but 00:07:724 (7724|1) - is very different. The simple stair makes them seem all the same and doesn't really reflect the change in music, I'd move to 4 to show the difference in sound fixed that

00:32:648 (32648|1) - I'm disappointed that there's nothing in this section that really shows the bass guitar. I thought you did with the stacks but they seem random and only there to avoid hard stacks re arrange this, hope it's good now

00:45:109 (45109|2) - single here but 00:47:571 (47571|1,47571|0) - double here? double here 00:47:571 because there's kick sound

00:59:494 (59494|2) - I think this note is actually a ghost note. I think you think so too judging but the pattern ah you right, removed that

01:31:263 (91263|2,91263|3,91263|0) - having a crash be the same emphasise as a 01:31:109 (91109|0,91109|3,91109|1) - snare doesn't sit well with me fixed the snare

01:32:263 (92263|1) - I dont hear anything here at all oops removed

01:33:417 - I do hear something very prominent here though that hasn't been mapped fixed by adding note

01:36:801 (96801|2,96801|3,96878|0,96878|1,96955|3,96955|2) - Jumptrills are not the right pattern for this section because the third sound in each triplet is far stronger than the rest so having all 3 notes be represented in the same way doesnt make sense I know here should be (single single doube - single single double - and more) but I make it all double for give a challange for the player. Can I keep it ?

02:15:417 (135417|0) - lotta copy paste in this map 02:16:340 (136340|0) - move this 02:15:417 (135417|1) - to col 3

03:31:109 (211109|0) - Should be 2 LNs to match with the break in sound fixed that

03:32:032 (212032|3) - starts way too late oops, fixed this too

03:32:340 (212340|1,212494|1) - why are these 2 LNs and why does it go for so long? my bad, changed to 1 LN end at 03:32:648

03:37:724 (217724|2,218186|1) - should both be LNs, picking a generic jumptrill over mapping the sound consistently is the wrong choice imo okay, fixed that by change to LN

03:39:724 (219724|2) - guitar solo and you map the drums - _ - re arrange this~

03:49:032 (229032|1) - feels like there's a lot of ghost notes here as well ah you right, removed that

03:49:724 (229724|1,229801|0,229878|1) - after all the other comfortable patterns, this feels fairly out of place fixed by moving note

03:55:417 (235417|2,235571|1) - I have no idea what you're mapping in this section, this notes feel like there's nothing there while there are clear sounds not mapped at all 03:56:494 - you right, fixed all of that

04:10:648 (250648|2) - This jumptrill is whack
First of all, at the start there's barely any sound to justify doubles let alone a jumptrill. Secondly, the first drum sound isn't on a 1/4 snap, it's somewhere between this 04:11:032 (251032|1,251032|0) - and 04:11:109 (251109|3,251109|2) -. Thirdly 04:11:724 (251724|3) - isn't mapped to anything at all ahhh why I'm not realize all of that!!, fixed~

04:31:263 (271263|1,271417|0) - map the blue tick between these two so the drum roll makes sense donee

05:02:083 (302083|3,302186|3) - you cant introduce this 5 minutes into a map fixed by removing this 05:02:083 (302083|3) -

05:13:263 (313263|1) - should probably start earlier fixed~

Needs work/Acceptable: It's a decent map but feels kind of generic and a little bit boring due to a lack of concept development through the map. I'm down to qual but I think you need to find a different BN to bubble as I'm not that confident in it. sad

chouyaa wrote:

hai fadill,
mod iseng, tadinya cuma pengen cek di editor karna lagunya bagus eh malah kebablasan :'v

1|2|3|4

chouyaa ganteng//gakk fadillsan lbih ganteng

00:39:417 (39417|2) - pindah ke col 2? di bagian ini berasa berat di kanan terhitung 00:38:801 (38801|3,38955|3,39263|3,39417|2,39571|2,39571|3) - oops, done~
di satu sisi, penempatan 00:39:417 (39417|2) - dengan 00:39:571 (39571|2) - pada satu kolom juga kurang representative ke intrumentnya termasuk melodi gitar
ditambah di depan 00:39:417 (39417|2) - cuma ada double dan jarak antara kedua kick 00:39:263 - 00:39:571 - ini 1/1.
menurut gw bisa ditaruh di 1 kolom yg sama dengan note di depan klo di 00:39:417 - double atau di 00:39:571 - triple.
karna ini ngga, sekilas jadi keliatan menyia nyiakan kolom di 2. oops, iya juga, done~

00:40:801 (40801|2) - pindah ke col 4? cuma di sini 00:40:648 (40648|0,40648|2,40801|2,40801|0) - keduanya ada di kolom yg sama.
sedangkan 00:35:724 (35724|2,35724|0,35878|2,35878|3) - 00:38:186 (38186|0,38186|2,38340|3,38340|2) - 00:41:263 (41263|1,41263|3,41417|1,41417|2) - 00:43:109 (43109|0,43109|1,43263|3,43263|1) - hanya ada 1 pasang note yg ditempatkan pada 1 kolom yg sama. fixed this too~

00:45:571 (45571|3) - pindah ke col 3 dan 00:45:724 (45724|2) - ke col 4, bakal lebih rapi di kanan.
00:44:955 (44955|3,45263|3,45571|3,45878|3) - jadi biar bisa diputus klo 00:45:571 (45571|3,45724|2) - dituker kolomnya. oh iya bener, done~

00:56:648 (56648|0) - pindah ke col 4. liat kanan kosong melompong. eh iya, fixed~

01:04:801 - di sini kenapa cuma 1 note sendiri kicknya? sedangkan yg lain 2 notes waduh kok single sih :"v fixed

01:07:724 (67724|1,67724|0,67878|2,67878|1,68032|0,68032|2,68032|3) - coba ini dibikin kek > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9776058
bakal lebih balance di kanan ama kiri ketimbang yg sebelumnya cenderung berat kiri dan 1/1 note di col 1 yg tadinya numpuk 4 bisa stop di 01:07:417 - doneeee

01:10:186 (70186|2,70186|0,70340|3,70340|1,70494|3,70494|0,70494|2) - ctrl+h?
ga enak bgt itu coba cek 01:09:878 (69878|0,70186|0,70494|0,70801|0,71109|0) - trus bandingin ama yg kanan. astaga stucinya wkwk, fixed

01:11:263 (71263|2) - pindah ke col 1 bakal lebih rapi, karna ga perlu dibikin numpuk sampe 3 notes ama 01:10:955 (70955|2,71109|2,71263|2) -
sebagai contoh, cek > 01:20:955 (80955|3,80955|1,81109|2,81109|3) - 01:23:417 (83417|0,83417|2,83571|0,83571|1) - dan kawan kawannya. oh iya, done~

01:13:878 (73878|2) - geser ke kanan, col 4 rada kosong itu ditambah notenya dijepit double kiri keduanya. donee~

01:18:801 (78801|2) - geser ke kanan. alasan yg sama dengan di atas. ^

01:34:648 (94648|1) - ini harusnya ada di kolom yg sama dengan salah satu note di 01:34:494 -
agar konsisten dengan 01:33:263 (93263|3,93417|3) - 01:32:032 (92032|0,92186|0) - fixed~

01:35:878 (95878|2) - sama juga ^, untuk keduanya ini mesti disamakan semua gimana peletakannya karna suaranya memang sama.
ntah mau dibikin 1 kolom dengan triple sebelumnya atau ngga. fixed this tooo~

02:12:955 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9776132
stack lebih tepat di 02:12:955 (132955|2,133109|2) - dan 02:13:263 (133263|1,133417|1) - karna di situ drumnya ada di 1 ketukan yg sama.
lebih rapi jika dibandingkan dengan pattern yg sekarang. nice!

kurang setuju klo 02:23:263 (143263|1,143263|0) - dibikin sekolom dengan 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0) - karna di situ jelas ada perbedaan volume drum yg intens di 02:23:263 - dibanding sebelumnya.
bisa diletakan di kolom yg sama klo ga ada perbedaan yg signifikan, sebagai contoh bisa cek > 01:25:571 (85571|1,85571|0,85724|0,85724|1) - di sini keduanya ada di kolom sama karna memang drumnya juga ga ada perbedaan yg besar jika dibandingkan dengan 02:23:263 -
saran gw untuk 02:23:263 (143263|1,143263|0) - bisa dipindah ke kanan (col 3&4) dan 02:23:417 (143417|2) - bisa pindah ke col 1 biar ga kebanyakan stack. okee, t e r p i n d a h

02:28:340 - dari sini sampe 02:30:494 - entah kenapa ketawa anjir denger vokalnya E Ooo E Ooo :''v koo e woo awasee :"v

02:36:494 - di sini kenapa kicknya 2 notes? suaranya sama kan dengan 02:37:109 - 02:37:724 - opps, fixed

02:44:032 (164032|0,164186|0,164340|0,164494|0,164648|0) - liat kanan kosong melompong. oops, move this 02:44:494 (164494|0,164494|1) - to col 3&4

03:06:955 (186955|3,187109|3,187263|3,187417|3) - ga ngerti kenapa bisa dibikin gini :/ ga ada suara yg mendukung stack sampe 4 notes di kanan ketimbang kiri. ara ara :'v move this 03:07:263 (187263|3) - to col 2

03:34:494 (214494|3) - pindah ke col 3, kurang mendukung buat dibikin kek 03:34:494 (214494|3,214648|3) - karna di 03:34:494 - snarenya cukup keras ketimbang drum di 03:34:648 -
jadi biar ada jarak atau spasi kolom yg membedakannya. ditambah 03:34:340 (214340|3,214494|3,214648|3,214801|3) - berasa aneh menurut gw. fixeeeddd~

03:49:648 (229648|2) - ghost note, cek di 25% di sana jelas ga ada melodi gitar kek di 03:49:724 - 03:49:801 - t e r d e l e t e ~

dah itu aja, tolong re-check soal keseimbangan komposisi notenya lagi, karna nemu banyak yg kurang balance di beberapa bagian antara kiri ama kanan.

click

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jaog *-*

goodluck <3