Hey
NM :
00:08:451 (2) - you should make this slider a little bit less "sharpy" like this :
http://puu.sh/wS6gG/6403b323dd.jpg it looks better
imo00:15:418 (4) - move it to x:429 y:359, to not overlap.
00:51:164 (1,2) - 00:52:007 (6) - remove theses notes, there is no sound to it in the music
00:55:916 (2,3,4,5,6) - space a bit the slider like this :
http://puu.sh/wS6GO/6d899689f7.jpg looks better.
01:06:084 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing is incorrect here
01:14:199 (6,1,2,3) - again, when i played it, i hitted the notes too early cz of the unpredictable melody and too low spacing.
01:19:281 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - try to reoarganize the jumps for a better flow
01:23:707 (8,1,2,3) - space a bit the 8 ans the start of the stream, to make the speed of the flow more stable.
01:46:330 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - reduce the spacing pleeeeaaaase that scared me x)
01:57:641 (5,1,2) - space this a bit more
02:14:384 (3,4,5,1) - you can make a nice blanket here
02:17:222 (7) - continue the stream
02:41:347 (1) - place it x:435 y:233
02:48:734 (1) - same thing, place it x:41 y:344
02:52:421 (1,2) -
http://puu.sh/wS7Kk/606b2af2d0.jpg this is the correct position of the slider in the music so i suggest you this :
http://puu.sh/wS7PQ/f091bc2618.jpg02:57:035 (3,4) - avoid overlap
03:02:579 (3) - put the slider there ;
http://puu.sh/wS7Vp/05708ad1f2.jpg and reorganize the pattern
03:03:733 (2,3) - reduce spacing
03:14:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why that gap?
03:16:339 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - make the spacing between the streams bigger, so the flow will be better and so it will be esayer to play
03:19:499 (1,2,3,4) - replace that part of the stream by a slider or anyhthing else, because there is no sound in the music to continue it
03:22:772 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hard to read and play, do something like this :
http://puu.sh/wS8fS/fc18416330.jpg03:27:105 (3) - i like the pattern, but change place the slider or the note, to follow what you did here 03:26:281 (1,2,3,1) -
03:33:662 (9) - make a blanket with the slider behing here.
03:34:482 (2,3,4,5) - not really estetic
03:43:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hard to play
03:46:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - why that stream?
03:51:117 (11,1) - delete that gap, 100% sliderbreak otherwise
03:52:615 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you should remap that part, the spacing is wayyyyy too big for the intensity of the music, and it's very unflowly.
04:32:781 (1,2) - woooow that speed of the slider was really surprising, reduce it x)
04:36:607 (1,2) - bigger spacing please, when i played it, i hit the note too fast because i tought that it was an 1/3 note
04:41:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really like that pattern, it fits well with the song
05:13:676 (4,5) - hard to read/play
05:18:198 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same
05:20:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - try to make that part more flowly, cz it's really hard to play that bpm without flow.
05:34:860 (5) -
http://puu.sh/wS9zg/b306cdcc3c.jpg make something like this to fit the music
Love the music