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Thelma Aoyama feat. Tae Yang - Fall in Love

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kino77
Hi~

[Hard]
感觉整体音量有点小,特别是第一段.
00:55:927 - Add note?
01:04:499 - ^
01:28:606 (3,4,5) - 要么都是circle要么都是slider?
01:41:463 (1) - Finish?
02:04:499 - Add note?
02:06:909 (7) - 换成3连音?
02:14:945 - Add note?
02:17:356 - ^
03:45:749 (1) - 过长,用一个note取代或者结束于03:50:034?

没有什么大问题~加油哦~
orioncomet
[Hard]
03:43:606 (4) - wrong spacing (3) -> (4) != (1,2,3), maybe add new combo? or if you want to fix spacing then fine.

[maxzjs's Insane]
- [suggestion] -1 approah rate
01:35:436 (2,3) - move them a bit closer to (4)

spinners on Easy Normal Hard a bit too long for me though orz (almost 10sec ;O;!)

Good!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

orioncomet wrote:

[Hard]
03:43:606 (4) - wrong spacing (3) -> (4) != (1,2,3), maybe add new combo? or if you want to fix spacing then fine.Fix

[maxzjs's Insane]
- [suggestion] -1 approah rate.Fix
01:35:436 (2,3) - move them a bit closer to (4)Fix

spinners on Easy Normal Hard a bit too long for me though orz (almost 10sec ;O;!)em..Reduce spinner time._.

Good!
Thanks >w<

kino77 wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
感觉整体音量有点小,特别是第一段.稍微調整了
00:55:927 - Add note?Fix
01:04:499 - ^Fix
01:28:606 (3,4,5) - 要么都是circle要么都是slider?Fix
01:41:463 (1) - Finish?Fix
02:04:499 - Add note?Fix
02:06:909 (7) - 换成3连音?Fix
02:14:945 - Add note?Fix
02:17:356 - ^Fix
03:45:749 (1) - 过长,用一个note取代或者结束于03:50:034?Fix

没有什么大问题~加油哦~
Thanks>w<
ignorethis
<Hard>
00:15:748 (1) - Soft finish is enough, no need for normal
01:09:320 (1) - Volume increases too much here. Either lower the volume or remove this inherited section
03:14:409 (5) - Inconsistent distance
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

ignorethis wrote:

<Hard>
00:15:748 (1) - Soft finish is enough, no need for normalfix
01:09:320 (1) - Volume increases too much here. Either lower the volume or remove this inherited sectionfix
03:14:409 (5) - Inconsistent distancefix
Thanks
fartownik
Download: Thelma Aoyama feat. Tae Yang - Fall in Love (kanpakyin) [maxzjs's Insane].osu
Download: Thelma Aoyama feat. Tae Yang - Fall in Love (kanpakyin) [Hard].osu

put this into the folder, changed some weird combo stuff

[maxzjs]

03:45:749 (1) - End this spinner at 03:50:034.

[Hard]

00:43:606 (2) - Make it 1/2 shorter. Sounds off.
00:44:945 - Add a circle.
02:24:320 (3) - Move up 2 ticks.

[Normal]

02:13:338 (1) - Move 1/2 forward, 02:14:677 (2) - move this note at 02:13:338.

[Easy]

02:20:570 (2) - This slider sounds off. Do something other in this part.
02:24:856 (1) - ^
03:32:891 (4) - New combo.
03:36:106 (1,2) - Swap new combos.

Topic Starter
kanpakyin

fartownik wrote:

[maxzjs]

03:45:749 (1) - End this spinner at 03:50:034.fix

[Hard]

00:43:606 (2) - Make it 1/2 shorter. Sounds off..fix
00:44:945 - Add a circle..fix
02:24:320 (3) - Move up 2 ticks..fix

[Normal]

02:13:338 (1) - Move 1/2 forward, 02:14:677 (2) - move this note at 02:13:338..fix

[Easy]

02:20:570 (2) - This slider sounds off. Do something other in this part..fix
02:24:856 (1) - ^.fix
03:32:891 (4) - New combo..fix
03:36:106 (1,2) - Swap new combos.fix
Thanks>"<
Kotone
我來了 :)

Normal
01:09:320(1) - 換成finish應該會更好,自己聽清楚音樂
01:17:891(1) - ^
01:26:463(1) - ^
01:34:034(1) - ^
02:00:749(1) - ^
01:13:070(5) - add finish?感覺很好聽
01:17:356(6) - ^
01:30:213(4) - ^
02:21:641(7) - ^
03:15:213(4) - ^
03:19:499(4) - ^
以上可能有聽少了~自己找節奏一樣的地方吧囧
Hard
那啥,hitsound like Normal

Insane
01:25:927(1) - add finish
01:55:927 - 奇怪的break time
02:25:391(8,9) - 這裹不要完全疊着,(8)上一格,(9)下一格?

噗 我mod完了才發現是帝的Insane
kanpakyin你認識了個好基友呢 噗
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

karenying wrote:

我來了 :)

Normal
01:09:320(1) - 換成finish應該會更好,自己聽清楚音樂
01:17:891(1) - ^
01:26:463(1) - ^
01:34:034(1) - ^
02:00:749(1) - ^
01:13:070(5) - add finish?感覺很好聽
01:17:356(6) - ^
01:30:213(4) - ^
02:21:641(7) - ^
03:15:213(4) - ^
03:19:499(4) - ^
以上可能有聽少了~自己找節奏一樣的地方吧囧
Hard
那啥,hitsound like Normal
ALL fix Thanks
jericho2442
average 128kbps mp3 ;_;

Easy
01:06:909 (2) - plays better starting at 01:07:177 to me, it follows the vocals then
02:24:856 (1,2) - put the new combo on (2) rather than (1), it flows better to your combo pattern

Normal
00:34:766 - add a note here, it feel weird starting to play after the vocals have started, by putting a note here you start at the same time and feels much better
00:41:195 (5) - new combo, to follow your pattern
00:45:481 (5) - same
00:53:249 (3,4,5,6) - spacing, (4,5,6) are too close give them the same spacing as (3,4) two different spacing in one combo like this is really bad :/
(suggestion) 01:06:641 (1) - remove this note and i gives it a better feel i think
02:15:481 (3) - new combo, your breaking the pattern you use earlier
03:41:463 (5) - newcombo, to break this change up abit

Hard
02:11:463 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is really ugly, maybe placement like this?

03:41:195 (4) - new combo here, it makes the spacing of this combo much easier to read, and it also follows the pattern of the next combo

maxzjs's Insane
00:10:391 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your pattern

nothing unrankable in this diff but it really really feels rushed, a lot of the map has alignment probs and some ugly placements on the patterns, i do advise you to go through this map and line up the notes in the combo's better and overall just make it all abit more clean, in other words this kinda need a self nazi on it ;)

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nice set overall though o/
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

jericho2442 wrote:

average 128kbps mp3 ;_;

Easy
01:06:909 (2) - plays better starting at 01:07:177 to me, it follows the vocals then Fix
02:24:856 (1,2) - put the new combo on (2) rather than (1), it flows better to your combo patternFix

Normal
00:34:766 - add a note here, it feel weird starting to play after the vocals have started, by putting a note here you start at the same time and feels much betterFix
00:41:195 (5) - new combo, to follow your patternFix
00:45:481 (5) - sameFix
00:53:249 (3,4,5,6) - spacing, (4,5,6) are too close give them the same spacing as (3,4) two different spacing in one combo like this is really bad :/Fix
(suggestion) 01:06:641 (1) - remove this note and i gives it a better feel i thinkFix
02:15:481 (3) - new combo, your breaking the pattern you use earlierFix
03:41:463 (5) - newcombo, to break this change up abitFix

Hard
02:11:463 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is really ugly, maybe placement like this?Fix
03:41:195 (4) - new combo here, it makes the spacing of this combo much easier to read, and it also follows the pattern of the next combo
Fix
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nice set overall though o/

Thanks-w-
DJPop
Set video offset to -100


~Easy~
00:00:749 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical

~Normal~
00:02:891 (3) - add whistle at start
01:29:677 (4) - move hitfinish to the end of slider

~Hard~
00:35:034 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 left
00:36:106 (3) - make it repeat
00:45:481 (5) - new combo
02:05:034 (3,4) - spacing is different from latter notes

~maxzjs's Insane~
00:02:891 (11) - new combo
00:03:427 (1) - remove new combo
00:05:034 (1) - add whistle
00:05:838 (5) - remove whistle
00:06:641 (1) - add whistle & remove new combo
00:07:177 (3) - new combo
00:09:320 (1) - add whistle at start
00:10:391 (1) - ^
00:11:463 (1) - ^
00:13:070 (6) - add whistle
00:38:784 (7) - ^
00:50:704 (9) - move timing section to (10)
00:58:606 (2,3) - too close
01:22:177 (9) - new combo
01:46:016 (4,5,6,7) - jump? O.o (spacings are not the same)
02:54:320 (1) - remove new combo
02:54:588 (2) - new combo
02:55:391 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:463 (10) - new combo
03:01:820 (1) - remove new combo
03:07:713 (8) - new combo
03:09:052 (1) - remove new combo
03:09:320 (2) - new combo


Already star.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

DJPop wrote:

Set video offset to -100


~Easy~
00:00:749 (1,2) - make them more symmetrical

~Normal~
00:02:891 (3) - add whistle at start
01:29:677 (4) - move hitfinish to the end of slider

~Hard~
00:35:034 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 left
00:36:106 (3) - make it repeat
00:45:481 (5) - new combo
02:05:034 (3,4) - spacing is different from latter notes

~maxzjs's Insane~
00:02:891 (11) - new combo
00:03:427 (1) - remove new combo
00:05:034 (1) - add whistle
00:05:838 (5) - remove whistle
00:06:641 (1) - add whistle & remove new combo
00:07:177 (3) - new combo
00:09:320 (1) - add whistle at start
00:10:391 (1) - ^
00:11:463 (1) - ^
00:13:070 (6) - add whistle
00:38:784 (7) - ^
00:50:704 (9) - move timing section to (10)
00:58:606 (2,3) - too close
01:22:177 (9) - new combo
01:46:016 (4,5,6,7) - jump? O.o (spacings are not the same)
02:54:320 (1) - remove new combo
02:54:588 (2) - new combo
02:55:391 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:463 (10) - new combo
03:01:820 (1) - remove new combo
03:07:713 (8) - new combo
03:09:052 (1) - remove new combo
03:09:320 (2) - new combo


Already star.
ALL done Thanks DJpop>"<
DJPop
Everything is fine.

Bubbled
abalee
I always have the corrupted osz file downloaded(though others got the available file) so it is just a bubble fixed :/
Andrea
I fall in love for this song, so I'm gonna say...

Ranked~
Sandpig
恭喜 :D
[Shalon]
congrat ;)
yongtw123
(clap)(clap)(clap)

Congratulations!
SamiPale
yay!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
Thanks everybody>"<
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