RandomEffect wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Normal]

1. 03:25:387 (2,4) - I like stack well i meant for it to be a star here, and stacking would also break spacing which is alot of trouble to fix here

_AI wrote:

[lfj's Normal]
Sorry if i can't help anything on the diff because it was mapped greatly or something-
but the difficulty for this diff is kinda too hard to bear the title "Normal"
here's a suggestion : Rename the diff to lfh's Hard, Add some triplets if possible or just keep the map just the way it is and raise the HP,OD,AR
lol this is actually pretty standard for a Normal diff, given that an easier diff is provided in the set. I think it makes a good transition to the Hard diff.

Nathien wrote:

[Normal]
00:42:637 (4) - why no clap on reversearrow? think it would fit since it maps the drums and they are the same on all 3 hits.
01:03:637 (4) - ^
01:58:012 (4) - again clap on 2nd hit
02:27:637 (4) - ^
03:32:137 (4) - ^ done all of them
but that's all i noticed here

kajiyatta wrote:

[Normal]
SV looks faster for Nomal, so you should consider CS5. i think you meant CS3 xD, the reason im not using CS3 is because it will introduce unecessary overlaps to my slider and note formations which will make the map horrible to look at ><
Placement
02:44:287(1) remove NC good catch
Hit Sonud
03:33:449(2) add finish or whistle at end whistle it is

Losertic wrote:

lfj's Normal

1. 01:19:387 (5) - Remove NC, 01:20:887 (1) - NC? like 'easy' diff~ ( and 02:44:887 (1) - like this ) done to maintain consistency with other sections
2. 02:20:887 (2) - NC.
3. 03:25:387 (2) - ^ instead of adding NCs i removed the NCs in the other section to retain consistency

-Bakari- wrote:

[lfj's Normal]

1. 00:23:512 (4) - I'd consider adding a new combo here. It'd fit with music and vocals here, but it's also okay to keep it as it is. It's up to you. sure
2. 00:53:324 (3,5) - it looks playable, but you'd better ask some not-so-pro players to confirm that it's readable for average players! THis stack may be a little bit confusing. will do, if anything i will just change it to a slider without overlaps
3. 01:52:387 (1,2,3) - Great pattern, love it! ♥ tyty
   
   Nothing else to say. I really like the diff, and it's really well-mapped! thanks

Nathien wrote:

Just suggestions, the maps are actually pretty fine already ^-^

[Easy]
i'd set the AR to 4 since there are confusingly many circles currently. But thats up to you i guess. AR4 is a bit too challenging for what i'm aiming for in terms of difficulty, but I will consider AR3
01:49:387 (1,2,3) - feels somehow strange. Mb shorten the longer sliders by one tick and put another one between them? To stay consistent having notes placed only on white ticks, i left this the same however I did remove the clap on (2) as this combo plays to the vocals and it did make it feel kind of strange

[Hard]
01:28:012 (7,8) - claps this sounds a bit noisy :S i think i'll leave it
01:28:199 (9,10) - drum-clap or drumclap/finish ^
01:31:012 (1,2) - claps
01:36:262 (3) - finish sound at sliderstart i prefer it at the sliderend since its a nice crash to lead out of the combo
02:00:637 (1) - well this one threw me a bit off, you can leave it there but i'd place it somewhere else since its only hard ^^ will change
01:55:387 (1,2,3) - think it would sound great to give them the drum hitfinish or clap on sliderstarts.
02:01:387 (1,2,3) - ^
02:02:887 (1,2) - ^ <-- there are probably more like that, but if you want to do it you'll find it yourself ^^ don't really hear any sounds in the music that warrant the use of these hitsounds
02:03:637 (3) - <-- clap on sliderend ok
02:28:012 (5,6) - claps
02:28:199 (7,8) - drum-clap or drumclap/finish again might be a little noisy
02:51:637 (2,3) - clap on first slider + clap on 2nd slider start sure

thats what i noticed. If its not usefull at all just ignore it! gl with the map =) Thanks!!

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
AR+1 is more common. sure, already had this in mind
Placement
01:20:887(2) nazi, make a blanket like this? straight looks a bit diffucult I suppose fixed

SPOILER

03:07:387(1,2,3,4,5) make beautiful star placement! looks nice!

196,288,187387,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,120,188137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,288,188887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,188,189637,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,188,190387,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Rhythm
01:22:387(2) shorten this slider, current sounds weird for me. e.g.) done

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:29:699(2) add finish
03:58:199(2)^
04:04:199(2)^ done for all

[Hard]
I don't follow the change of slider velocity for Hard, it looks difficult. or OD6 better.
Placement
01:13:387(1) maybe change like this? it would be nice flow

SPOILER

01:48:262(3) CTRL+G would be better since it looks more easy to hit
01:49:949(2)^
02:40:199(4,1) looks ugly since you put a jump from (1) to (4) before, so players will expect a same pattern here. but change is good!
03:55:574(2) this kind of spacing looks hard for Hard diff.
Rhythm
00:52:387(3,4,5) this triplet looks overmapped since there is no sound at 00:52:480.
02:29:512(3,4) this blank looks not good I suppose, maybe like this?

SPOILER

03:58:012(3) I don't suppose this awkward is neccesarry and timing is fast, maybe you should snap like this.

SPOILER

04:08:512 add a note here.
Hit Sonud
00:22:387(2) delete finish at end then add whistle. it sounds noisy
01:04:012(1) add finish at end
02:04:012(1)^
01:22:387(3) add finish at head
02:26:699(1)^ fixed all except the one I commented on

good luck and star. thanks!!

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

[box=Modding]

General

1. Move preview point - 01:09:637 ? i like my current one :3

Easy

1. 02:00:637 (1) - move (392,272) because 0.9x distance fixed
2. 02:11:699 (3,1) - it's too close. how about this? 02:12:637 (1) - move (456,144). if accept this mod, change this! (because 0.9x distance)
   1. 02:13:762 (2) - move (412,64)
   2. 02:14:887 (3) - move (276,268)
   3. 02:16:012 (4) - move (200,56)
   4. 02:16:387 (1) - move (112,76)
   5. 02:17:512 (2) - move (356,92) decided to just fix the previous combo to avoid this, also don't want to break any blankets
3. 02:19:387 (1) - NC? ( 03:25:387 (1) - like this )
4. 02:22:387 (1) - NC?
5. 02:25:387 (1) - NC?
6. 03:28:199 (3) - Remove NC. done for all
7. 04:04:762 (3) - remove 1 reverse, and 04:05:887 (1) - move spinner start at 04:05:512 ? i like how it is

Hard

1. Plz check "Letterbox during breaks" i actually meant to uncheck for all diffs, will fix
2. 00:16:949 (2,3) - how about this? only rythem! ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1014157 )
   ─ add slider 00:16:949 ~ 00:17:137 00:17:324 ~ 00:17:512 00:17:699 ~ 00:17:887 tried this and although it does play nice I want to keep what I already have for consistency with a similar rhythm earlier
3. 01:07:762 (1,2) - maybe it's too hard for hard diff player(ex. me...) yep will change this
4. 02:07:762 (1,2) - ^ (too far?)
5. 02:17:887 (4) - move (347,69) , 02:18:449 (5) - move (327,145) fixed
6. 02:22:012 (4) - NC done
   
   Nice hard diff! thanks!!

S.T.A.R thank you! i appreciate it

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey, as requested. Thank you for waiting and I hope that the mod worths it

[General]

1. Try to increase volume of your hitsounds a bit, it sounds like something that's really hard to hear if you play without headphones. raised a bit
2. Your colors are too bright. That'd be a great idea to fade them, or they may hurt player's eye! sure
   [box=Some colors for you? ]
   

   Combo1 : 210,198,153
   Combo2 : 186,199,99
   Combo3 : 186,148,185
   Combo4 : 207,109,112

3. Try to keep your kiais consistent. Kiai #4 and #5 are different on Easy and Hard. AS far as I know it's unrankable! oops, will fix this

[Easy]

1. I'd consider using OD2 since there's no any reason to keep it so low. Also, OD1 kinda breaks the balance, try OD2, please! done, feels a bit better too!
2. 00:18:637 (4,1) - well, tail of the slider is too close to the previous circle. Try to avoid such things, because players may mistakenly hit the tail! changed
3. 01:07:387 - well, try to start the spinner here. Long spinners are tiring, you know. What's more, tthe spinner doesn't really fits as it is now. Start it on 01:07:387 - and map the empty part! done
   Note: 02:07:387 - it's quite clear, that the same suggestion goes for all similar patterns.
4. 03:11:137 - the beat here shouldn't be ignored, I think. It breaks your rhythm and spacing. Place a circle. or if you feel like using 6 circles in a row is too hard, you can add some sliders. Here's an example for you, if you need it. i like this better!
5. 03:13:949 - here or 03:14:137 - here is a great place to put an object. This part feels empty and it may confuse beginners. A circle or a slider here will fit + it'll make your rhythm more consistent! done!
   
   Good job! That's a really good diff! thank you!

[Hard]

1. I can't see any reasons to use HP Drain 6, HP7 would work here better. C'mon, this is the hardest diff! ok
2. 01:07:762 (1,2) - it's kinda too boring to hold this slider for so long, + it's really hard to tell how many repeats does this slider have. Try to replace it with two sliders, as you did it with 00:42:637 (8,9,1) - it'll make this pattern more enjoyable! Need an example? done, this is really nice!
3. 01:15:449 (7,1) - it feels like a good place to use a jump. Why? It'll fit with vocals, and so many circles in a row are boring for players! i'm going to leave this how it is for now only cause I don't feel like making this diff any harder than it already is
4. 02:07:762 (1) - same mistake as 01:07:762 (1,2), so, you should apply or ignore this suggestion for every similar slider to keep consistency! done
5. 02:30:074 (4) - the DS here looks kinda wrong. It's just x0.2 different from the default spacing, can't you make it more understandable? (reduce or increasse the DS to make it a bit more understandable) fixed
6. 03:13:762 - just a circle here will fit. Try to avoid long empty spaces when it's possible to map them! ok
   
   Good job! I like the diff!

That's a really good job! I can't believe that it's really your first map! So, you deserve a Star! ~

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Best of luck! Thanks so much!! It was really helpful!

-Kirito wrote:

[lfj's Normal]
CS -1 i prefer CS4 for the non-overlaps
01:55:762 - clap add
01:56:512 - ^
01:57:262 - ^ there are no claps here in the music which is why i didnt use them
01:57:637 - finish change aite
02:01:762 - clap add
02:02:512 - ^
02:03:262 - ^ same as above, no clap sounds here
04:05:137 (2) - 1/1 sliderchange good idea

Asgard wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:387 (1,2,3,4) - i think this rhythm is hard in normal simplified
00:46:949 (2) - makr curve like this http://puu.sh/4T6sc.jpg ok
02:03:637 (4) - too high
03:47:887 (1) - too high.. it looks like touch HP bar you are probably using a custom skin with a wider hp bar, this looks fine on both the old and new default skin